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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people think that a person improves intellectual skills better when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? Use specific details and examples to explain your view.

Performing tasks in a group is considered to be one of the best methods to enhance the intellectual development of an individual. I completely agree with this view because of its numerous benefits.

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Teenagers face a lot of problems in school and at home. What is the cause of this? How can parents solve this problem?

These days, juveniles have to overcome numerous issues at school as well as at home. These problems stem from a lot of factors, and they could be tackled by several solutions from guardians and teachers.

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Today, people in many countries can live and work anywhere they choose, because of improved cospommunication technology and tranrt. Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

Some people agree that technological advancements bring many benefits to their lives while some think that the drawbacks that come with the advancements in technology are too numerous in comparison. In my opinion, while there are disadvantages, I strongly believe that the benefits are much more significant and that they outweigh the drawbacks.

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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Online medium of education is becoming increasingly popular in recent past years and has gained much more scholarly attention. Although, studying online using the internet does more harm than good or vice-versa is a debatable topic. This essay will discuss the benefits and drawbacks associated with both and provide evidence as to why such a system of education has several strong elements that deserve attention.

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Because of the busy pace of modern life, many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world. How important is it for children to learn to understand and appreciate nature?

Due to today's hectic lifestyle, a great many children are mostly staying at home and unfortunately, have less opportunity to explore nature. Exploring and valuing nature is extremely beneficial for young children, as it prevents cruelty towards living species and further all kinds of pollution of nature by them in the future.

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“Prevention is better than cure”. Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?

It is argued that funding several research projects on the topic of disease treatment requires a lot of money and as such a better route to meet health care objectives is to invest more funds into precautionary measures. This essay completely agrees with this statement. I personally believe that the more effective methods put in place at the workplace, in particular, will safeguard people’s health as well as save governmental funds as less is spent on copious amounts of studies.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theater is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

The governments invest in many different social activities such as music, arts and theatre. Some people believe that these funds should be invested in public services by politicians. One of the biggest reasons is to grow up their citizens as a cultural individuals. On the other hand, public services are really important to improve citizens' quality of life; therefore I partly agree with this statement because there are both advantages and disadvantages. Both of these viewpoints will be outlined in detail before concluding.

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Some feel that cities shold be designed to be beautiful while others feel their functionality is more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is considered by some people that visual attractions in a city are more important, while there are others who believe that it is more desirable to pay attention to its functionality. There are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious topic which will be discussed in detail, followed by my own take on this.

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Some people think that wild animals should not be kept in zoos. Others believe that there are good reasons for having zoos. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

While it is believed that keeping undomesticated animals in the zoo goes against morals, others argue that having zoos is an excellent way to discover the wildlife and a fantastic tool to attract curious people from different areas of the world. In my view, wild animals should be treated better rather than keeping them in cages for human satisfaction.

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When cars and cyclists use the same roads, there are often problems. Why is this the case? What are the solutions?

Nowadays different ways of transportation are expanding, while the roads remained the same. As a result, various kinds of vehicles use the same road simultaneously which would be to some extent problematic. Although there are specific root causes behind this concern, effective policies such as expanding roads and considering cycling culture can be adapted to remedy the situation.

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Some industry leaders believe that children should learn computer programming in primary school. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the contemporary era, technology has advanced insignificantly. It is thought by some industry leaders that primary institutions should enrol in computer programming so that they can obtain this knowledge. I completely agree with this view and the following paragraph will demonstrate the reasons why this is pivotal.

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Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

While some individuals underscore the importance of the preschool experiences in the adulthood stage, others advocate that attention should be put on their life as teenagers. Having said that, there are rational arguments on both sides of this contentious which will be discussed in detail, followed by my own take on this.

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In recent times, many people are making the decision to live alone. What are the causes of this? Does it have positive or negatives effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In our modern world, more and more people decide not to get married. In this essay, I will explore the reasons for this trend and discuss whether it is positive or negative. Firstly, I will write about the causes and circumstances associated with this issue and secondly, I will discuss the negatives about this.

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Animals are in danger of extinctions. Some people say we should protect only those animal which are useful to humans. Do you agree or disagree ?

In this modern era, the beast is almost entered an alarming retain the world of risk of disappearance from the earth. The main reason for humans irrefutably. However, a fair amount of people say we should save these animals which are helpful to the population. I strongly disagree with this statement because every creature has the right to live on the earth.

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These days, scientists can tell whether a child will become criminal or not by examining the child at an age of three. Do you agree that crime is a product of human nature? Do you think we can stop children from becoming criminals?

Nowadays, some scientific researchers are introducing new ways which determine whether a kid could commit a crime or not in the future. So, this is arguable that being a criminal is part of people's inherent. I totally disagree with that statement, and this essay will argue that nurture is more important than any other factor and there is a wide range of various solutions for tackling offensive activities in teenagers.

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Competition and cooperation seem to be two opposite ways of relating to others. Some people believe that children should be encouraged to be competitive, while others believe that learning how to teamwork is much more crucial. Even though I can see the benefit of learning to compete, especially for girls, I do think cooperation requires advanced and well-rounded skills that need to be stressed more than the competition.

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Some think the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them based on how much they produce and sell. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

A highly controversial issue today relates to whether to have a salary based on performance or not. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then explain why I believe that remuneration should be calculated on the hard work and performance.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them. Which viewpoint do you agree with?

Keeping pets is very trending nowadays. Some people expound that it is unhygienic and harmful for children. However, I think that it is beneficial to keep pets. In the paragraphs to follow, I will further put forth my points on this.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

In some countries, buying a property is valued far higher than renting one. A feeling of stability, comfort and security comes with owning a home. In my opinion, many factors influence a circumstance, positive or negative.

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Some people say that government should control the amount of violation in films and on television to control crimes in society How far do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The move is one of the best motives and influence factors in society. Therefore, a fair amount of experts believe that pictures must be present entertainment to the public but not any kind of hard and violation thing. Hence, I would like to agree with this statement with a few relevant examples.

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