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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people think computers and internet are important in children's study, but others think students can learn effectively in schools and with teachers. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Digital technology is increasingly replacing conventional teaching methods. Many individuals argue that computers and the internet are a vital part of children's education these days however, some opine that pupils need teachers for effective learning. This essay will discuss why it is essential to have classrooms equipped with teachers for effective lessons.

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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members how to be good members of society. Others, however believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many believe that it is mandatory for parents to educate their children to be a member of society. However, many argued that this is the job of school staff members. In this essay, I will discuss both views but personally, I believe that parents should play a role in implementing good morals in order for their child to become a functional member of society.

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Many famous sports players advertise sports products. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, nations are influenced by famous populations, like athletes. Some people claim that there can motivate children to have a healthy lifestyle, while others argue that sports products which have presenters are unbelievable. From my point of view, I agree with the former one that advertising by sportspeople brings more beneficial issues that outweigh drawbacks. In the following paragraphs, the reason to support my advantages will be outlined in detail.

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Some people believe that to be successful at a sport you need natural ability and others think that hard work and practice can make you successful. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

Certain people think that to achieve in sports one should have natural ability whereas others are of the opinion that putting extra effort and practice may lead to success. I, however, think that hard work and practice can make one be successful. The essay below will discuss both views at length.

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Some people say that the government should not put money on building theatres and sports stadiums. Others argue that they should spend more money on medical care and education. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is believed by some that spending money on new theatres and sports facilities is unnecessary, while others say that the government should invest more in education and medicine. In my opinion, although medical care is important, spending money on culture and sports is no less valuable for society.

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Tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs. Smoking has not a single positive issue but lots of negative effects and therefore, it should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement.

Nowadays, a lot of people especially the youth smoke a lot and this has resulted in many tobacco-related illnesses such as lung cancer. For that matter, I totally agree to a greater extent than tobacco should be treated as illegal like other drugs because it causes a lot of harm than good to society. The essay below will delve into this issue at length.

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‏In many countries the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How Can we deal with those Cause?

Certain individuals believe that studying with different types of technologies is beneficial to young children,while others are of the stance that the other traditional methods of learning are more effective. In my opinion,teachers instil values and a school could serve as a social platform as well.

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The best curriculum is not one based on a static body of knowledge but one which teaches students to cope with change. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is extensively held that the most effective curriculum is the one that teaches pupils to handle changes, rather than based on fixed knowledge. In my opinion, I partly agree with this statement because while it is significant to learn to cope with unanticipated circumstances, a static course of knowledge is still in need in some career paths.

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In many countries, children spend longer hours on their homework. Some people think less homework can help to reduce the stress of the children and give them chance to develop their other skills. Do you agree or disagree.

There is no doubt that learners have to allocate a lot of post-school time to home assignments. Therefore, it is believed by some that assigning less schoolwork may help to make students stress-free and all-rounder. I am convinced with this viewpoint because playtime and hobbies equally play a role in the holistic development of pupils.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people would argue that knowledge of scientific findings, business and education should remain hidden and limited, others believe that sharing is caring, and as much as information is shared, the economy will be boosted. In my opinion, knowledge should be passed on to others without any cost. This essay will discuss both views of this argument.

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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them.what are some of the advantages and disadvantages of renting homes ?

In many countries, the majority of individuals choose to rent their residences rather than buy them. In this paper, I will explain the benefits and drawbacks of renting homes.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does this shortage cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

Water is an essential element of human life. However, in several countries, people do not have access to clean water. This issue generates some negative effects, which need to be resolved immediately, thence, the essay will discuss the issue thoroughly.

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Many parents encourage young people to leave home early when they become older,while others think they should stay at home with the family.discuss both views and give your opinions

In current progressive and modern society, we have myriad types of families. In many cases, the parents advise young adults to leave their family homes to explore the world by themselves. However, some parents insist that youngsters should live in the safety of their parenthood. Some causes of this dilemma are economics or personality growth. Although both sides have their merits, we need to discuss them before concluding.

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Many governments have laws that ban the sale and use of hard drugs such as heroin and cocaine, yet they allow people to buy drugs such as tobacco and alcohol. Laws that prohibit the sale and use of hard drugs should be applied to all drugs, including tobacco and alcohol. What is your opinion?

The government have laws that stop the sale and use of illegal medicine like heroin and cocaine, but there are drugs that people are still allowed to have such as tobacco and alcohol. In my opinion, similar laws to the former should be practised with the latter.

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People now have the freedom to work and live anywhere in the world due to the development of communication technology and transportation. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Everyone lives in national countries to gain the development work possibility; meanwhile, numerous office places decided their staffs can work from home for commonplace reasons. This essay will demonstrate a variety of government opportunities from transportation and technology of residents to concise virtual applications, external advantages and important travellings.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

It is not uncommon to see that products shown in advertisements nowadays always imply that they are new to some degree. In this essay, the reasons for this tendency will be discussed, followed by my explanation that why I view this as a positive trend.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

The environment keeps being ever-shifting in adverse ways due to the development of human activities. Most notorious, global warming is caused by urbanization. For instance, people have exploited diesel fuel for decades, and tons of carbon dioxide have been created. As a result of it, the average temperate climbs continuously. The worse is that deforestation seriously happens, which makes the carbon dioxide less absorbed, in a bid to maximize the usage of the land. In the end, the higher sea levels rise, the more wildlife extinct.

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Some people say that we no longer need printed newspaper, do you agree or disagree?

In the present era, newspapers have become less popular, so it is argued that they will disappear. I strongly agree with this opinion.

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All children should study a foreign language in school, starting in the earlist grades. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is often said that it should be compulsory for children to learn a foreign language as much as possible at an early age in school. I totally agree with this view and will give my reasons below.

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Nowadays many young people choose to work in farming industry. Why do you think that is? How could young people be encouraged to work in this industry?

It is true that nowadays, youngsters are more willing to choose the farming industry as their major. In my opinion, people who select to work in the farming industry have had a futurist perspective. It is thought by some members of society that an agriculture major will have a brighter future compared with other fields. In this essay, I will explain some main benefits of choosing this field.

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