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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the sahara or the Antarctica. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places? (12GT-1; Vinoth M A) 11/01/21

In the present situation, tourism is flourishing, and therefore many tourists are exploring different places to acquire experience. Although visiting sites with harsh weather like desert and north pole, visitors can appreciate life; sometimes it could be dangerous for the non-expertise. This essay will draw the advantages and risk factors for those visitors who visit such difficult places.

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A lot of people are attributed to rapid increase in the number of private cars/traffic. Increasing in the price of petrol is the best way to solve the problem of growing traffic and population. To what extent do you agree or disagree? What other measures do you think should be effective?

Burgeoning traffic creates lots of problems that have detrimental effects on the environment. An array of society thinks, hike in prices of petrol could solve the issue to some extent however, I ponder it is a weak solution and in upcoming paragraphs will mention few other measures.

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We can get knowledge from news, but some people think we can't trut the journalist. Discuss, what do you think are the important qualities that a journalist should have ?

Considering the importance of knowledge acquired from news from various resources such as in the form of newspapers, magazines, articles on the internet and telecast on televisions, an array of society thinks that one can not entirely rely on the information provided by journalists as they are not trustworthy in few cases. Even I believe that a journalist should have some rudimentary qualities.

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The cost of flying has decreased significantly over the last decades. This has made oversea travel much more accessible. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this trend.

The expenses of travelling by air have been declining for the last 10 years which lead to commuting extremely easier in abroad. However, this declination trend has some merit and demerits, therefore, I believe that the pros definitely outweigh its drawback because undoubtedly, air travelling is not only a convenient way to travel but also risky.

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Children are experiencing increasing educational, social and commercial pressure. What are the causes? What measures do you think can be taken to reduce them?

In recent years, although contemporary children seem to live a rather worry-free material life, they are likely to be less happy simply due to enormous stress from various aspects. This essay will explore a multitude of possible reasons behind this situation in kids, and detail some of the solutions to be addressed.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however. Argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken to account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

Although solving crimes are debatable, there are several ways to do so. Many individuals may argue that a fixed punishment would be the best for any kind of corruption while others think various retribution should be considered depending on conditions and the reasons for committing them. This essay will discuss both views, and why penalizations should be based on criminalities.

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Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believe that museums should be a place for entertainment. In contrast, others think that museums are educational places and should learn information. In my opinion, museums are both educational and enjoyable places, and people can have valuable time in that places.

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Some people believe that teacher should be strict in order to best motivate students while others say that friendly teachers are more important. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

According to some views, friendly teachers can achieve better results in the educational process than strict teachers. In my perspective, a friendly teaching process can encourage students better. This essay will discuss both sides of views to the phenomenon.

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Some people think that having people from different nationalities and cultural backgrounds living together in the same country make the country develop faster. Do you agree?.

The controversial topic concerning diversity never fails to attract public attention. It is commonly thought that having folks from different backgrounds in the same country enhance the country's development. In my opinion, I completely agree with this statement because the more diverse population the country has the more new ideas the country will get. In addition, it could open more chances for multinational companies to operate on their land.

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Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?

In the present day, with the advance of globalization, the variety of information technology has become increasingly popular and present in our society. Although some traditional people strive to keep some habits, the influence of this new trade is unstoppable. As far as I am concerned, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages since it is much more convenient, comfortable and easier to use.

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Some people think that children who spend a lot of time reading children’s story books are wasting their time which could be better used doing other more useful activities. To what extend to you agree?

In today's world, fewer youngsters prefer reading books more than the internet. However, reading children's storybooks are considered losing time in an inappropriate way by some people, they believe that there are more practical activities. Personally, I completely disagree with their consideration.

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Nowadays many people complain that they have difficulties getting enough sleep. What problems can lack of sleep cause? What can be done about lack of sleep?

Decreased quality of sleep is the real modern problem of our society. every day, people feel anxiety about their a common condition due to lack of sleep. This essay will discuss issues that can become a reason for lack of sleep and give a possible the way of solution to improve the quality of sleep.

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There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher. What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Global warming is the next big disaster looming on our mother earth. Humans have achieved a lot of technological milestones. Ironically, we have now managed to reach the moon but have made our own planet inhabitable. Hence, there is no doubt that man-made activities are responsible for rising temperatures worldwide.This has further created problems such as excessive melting of glaciers and ever-increasing sea levels.

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The quality of computer language translation has improved significantly in recent years. Therefore, it is not necessary for children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, due to technological advancements more and more individuals believe that scholars are not required to learn new languages because of this development and also these computers translate each word properly into their own language. My viewpoint is that there are several reasons why children should be taught to learn new languages and this essay will be discussed about these facts.

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Environmental issues have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments againts offenders To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples

Preserving Mother Nature is an important problem rising among all nowadays . Certain people destroy the natural habitat and the government have less penalising against the lawbreakers. I completely agree with the above statement . This essay demonstrates how nature affects this kind of criminal activity and necessary steps should be taken by Government.

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Many people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The controversial topic concerning music never fails to attract public attention. It is commonly thought that music is an effective method to bring unity among people from different places and ages. This essay agrees with this statement because opera has been doing so for hundreds of years and music decreases stress and increases friendship among societies.

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Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that children should go to school until they are older. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that children should enroll in schools at a young age while others think that they had better start their academic journey when they get older. This essay discusses both views and states my agreement with the latter statement.

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Global warming is one of the biggest threats humans face in the 21st century and sea levels are continuing to rise at alarming rates. What problems are associated with this and what are some solutions

There are many threats that humans face in the 21st century and the biggest among them is global warming. This issue is critical to the survival of the human race, and by understanding the problem associated with it, only then we will be able to look for the solutions.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case ? Do you think this a positive or negative situation ?

In recent days, several individuals may consider it is more crucial to own a house than rent one in some countries. In my concern, there are several reasons for both situations and I will explain both standpoints.

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Smacking children to is the best method to discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Disciplining children is one of the important things to do as a guardian, without discipline children will be uncontrollable and difficult to deal with. One of the working methods is to smack them. Although, smacking method is working, i disagree to use it that way because it is not good for the child's behaviour. Kids will be violent to others when they got older and could also be afraid to make any mistakes or trust other people.

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