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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many young people are leaving their home in rural area to study or work in cities.What are the reasons? Do the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

Due to the spread of internet, people in rural areas are being exposed to better opportunities available in the towns and cities, and employers are keen to tap these cheaply available and disciplined rural talents. Humans have been migrating from villages to cities since the days of the industrial revolution. Most rural youths are too poor to till lands or maintain livestock and hence, the lure of better education and secure jobs pull them to the cities. Is this migration beneficial? In my opinion, this is a necessary outcome of modern economy and we should adapt and adjust to it.

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Some people think that the best way to become successful in life is to get a university education, whereas others say this is no longer true. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

A university is a place where “pebbles are polished, diamonds are dimmed” itself signifies the importance of university education. Some segments of society reckon that a university qualification should mandatory to get success in life; however, counterparts of the society insist that it would not be long lasting benefits to succeed in life. Though both have their pros and cons as per everyone’s perspectives , both opinions would be discussed. I believe that the best way to get success in life is to give our best rather than taking admission to universities.

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despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

People have become accustomed to watching films in this modern era, one part of society think that watching a movie is an act of a stressbuster for individuals, while others believe that it is also providing an educational message towards the person. In this essay, I will present both sides of the argument, including why I believe cinema is good for educating the population.

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Some people believe that the government should take care of old people and provide financial support after they retire. Others say individuals should save during their working years to fund their own retirement. What is your opinion?

Since the past century, the workers have slowly asserted their rights and privileges, and successive governments have acknowledged that after a period of service, the workers need adequate remuneration in their twilight years. However, there are some right-wing economists who propound that, indeed, it is the responsibility of the worker to plan his retirement. In my opinion, both views have merit and need discussion. In the following paragraphs, I will examine and scrutinize the issue to the extent possible.

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Since science and technology are becoming more and more important in modern society, schools should spend more time on teaching these subjects rather than on arts and humanities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, science and technology have been developing in leaps and bounds. Therefore, the vast majority of the population deems that curriculums should concentrate on these areas, rather than on humanities such as history, literature or art. I tend to think that technologies embark to play a core part in contemporary society. Nevertheless, I believe if social media or scientific discoveries are employed for the right purposes, they can be very useful for communities. I advocate strongly with the statement of most and am going to reflect on this essay my own view of such a tendency and to provide strong arguments, which confirm my opinion.

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In many places new homes are needed but the only space available for building them is in the country side. Some people believe that it is more important to protect the country side and not build home there. What is your opinion?

It is true that housing is an important issue in many regions of the world but the land is only available at the outskirt of cities for construction. Although some hold the view that it is crucial to saving villages, I believe that it is also better for the villagers also.

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Today family members eat fewer meals together. Why is this? Is this a positive or negative trend?

In the present, with the advance of globalization and technology, people have become increasingly busy with plenty of activities and because of this, they tend to have fewer meals with their families in comparison with the past. Although some families strive to change this situation, this habit has become popular in our society.

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Some people think that illegal Internet downloads are having a negative effect on the music industry. Others feel that they have little or no impact on artists. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is argued whether or not music is being negatively impacted due to the downloading process over the computer without prior approval by the authorities. Some individuals speculate that it has a significant drawback to download songs illegally, whereas others believe that this situation has a small effect or does not even have any influence on singers. In my opinion, downloading tones in an illegal way does not have any detrimental effect on artists. Both ideas linked to the topic will be outlined in the following paragraphs.

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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life on other planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and that it could be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some scientists believe that communication between Earth and intelligent celestial should be imposed, however, others refute this idea as they find it hazardous. While it is a risk to contact unknown celestial creatures as these might have the intention to kill humans instead of establishing cooperation, it is of my opinion that communication with life on other planets will benefit both parts mutually, as knowledge can be shared and exploited.

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'Telecommuting' refers to workers doing their jobs from home for part of each week and communicating with their office using computer technology. Telecommuting is growing in many countries and is expected to be common for most office workers in the coming decades. How do you think society will be affected by the growth of telecommuting.

In the past years, working at home using your own computer was a trend for most working mums, which is also referred also refers as telecommunicating. Although this trend grew fast in today's generation and in fact most of the working people like this new system, I believe that some major impacts should be considered significant.

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many people believe that it is easier to have a healthy lifestyles in th countryside. other believe that there are health benefits of living in cities. discuss both view and give your opinion.

In modern times, due to the advancement of life, people have a tendency to take care of their health. Some people believe that the countryside is the ideal place to have a healthy lifestyle , however, others consider that cities are better. This is a controversial matter. Thus, this essay will explore information before reaching any conclusion.

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Happiness is considered very important in life. Why is it difficult to define? What factors are important in achieving happiness? You should give reasons for your answer using your own ideas and experience.

Happiness has always played an important role in our lives. Sometimes it is hard to give meaning to it, however, certain elements might be the key in order to bring joy to our existence. In this essay, I will discuss why it might be hard to define the word "happiness", as well as some factors that help up to feel content.

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Being a celebrity- such as famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

The life of a celebrity is no less than a live reality show. Celebrities such as renowned movie stars or athletes encounter both problems and benefits. Although some might argue that this kind of life welcomes constant threats and violates privacy, I considerably support the idea that its impact on an individual, in terms of luxury and unique exposures outweighs disadvantages.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

With the development of the medical industry, an increasing number of treatments have been invented to cure more and more diseases. Therefore, the elderly are living longer than the last generations did.

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Many people work long hours, leaving very little time for leisure activities. Does this situation have more advantages or disadvantages?

Employees tend to work overtime at their workplace because of which they fail to allocate desired time to their extracurricular activities. Although, working long hours have more drawbacks such as poor physical fitness and increased stress, as compared to advantages. This essay will discuss why having a balance between work and life is beneficial for long-term health.

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Smacking children is the best form of discipline. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, parents have a tendency to beat their children for the mistakes they do as part of teaching. Although smacking will be helpful in correcting the issue in that instant, the strategy would negatively impact the growth of the kids. This essay will further throw some light on the advantages and disadvantages of this particular issue.

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Many people have a close relationship with their pets. These people treat their birds, cats, or other animals as members of their family. In your opinion, are such relationships good? Why or why not?

A huge number of people nowadays, behave with their pets as well as their relatives,while some associated positive footprints are considered regarding that,to me, its dire consequences conquer.However, both sides are explained.

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Many supermarkets sell more and more imported food products than ones produced in their home country. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

Nowadays, supermarkets sell both local and international food products. However, imported products can be found more extensively in the markets compared to local ones. This essay will discuss the positive aspects of selling more imported food products, in addition to its probable drawbacks.

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern life style which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays,many diseases are common in our community.Lots of people are involved in health issues related to the new lifestyles that chemical remedies are not able to treat .Some individuals suggest using natural medicine should be encouraged.In my opinion,traditional remedies have limited effects ,unknown side effects and have curbed abilities for treatment.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people emphasize the importance of voluntary service among adolescents during their academic careers. Participating in charitable projects , developing the nearby environment and educating life skills and techniques are the prominent activities that are considered to be included for college students.

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