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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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One way to solve problem of congestion in cities is to build sky trains which run overhead rather than on or under the ground. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using this solution to solve congestion?

It is undeniable that public transportation like railroads is the solution to congestion and traffic issues. However, it is still debatable which approach government should use when deciding to build railroads, sky trains, or underground railways. While both of these options have their own benefits and downsides, I personally believe that the underground railroad system is going to be a much better option, especially in city areas and I will elaborate more on this in the following paragraphs.

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TOPIC: some students tend to play computer games rather than do sports.Why is this?What can be done to tackle the problem?

In this generation, a few school children have the preference to engage in internet games instead of playing outdoor. The improvement of the intelligence- quotient by the use of soft wares such as game apps and the removal of physical activities from the school curriculum have contributed to the growing trend observed.Public awareness of the benefits of field games is important to curb the problem.This essay will discuss the common causes and possible ways to stop this occurrence.

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Some people think that outdoor activities are more beneficial for children's development playing computer games to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe open-air activities are more advantageous to children's growth than video games. I entirely agree with this view.

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Team activities can teach more skills for life than those activities which are played alone. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often believed that teamwork makes a person more skilled for life than working alone. Although being independent is an important skill, group work helps overcome social fear and inculcates qualities of cooperation and adjustment among people. I completely agree with the above statement and the following essay will substantiate my point of view.

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Some young people commit serious crimes, such as robbery or violent attacks, some people think they should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Juvenile offenders, regardless of their age, are just as culpable for their crimes as adult offenders and must take responsibility for their actions. However, I do believe the conviction should vary in each case according to age and serious extent.

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Nowadays the crime rate among young people is increasing. Why do you think this is happening? What can be done by parents, teacher & Govt to reduce it?

In the present circumstance, it is common that young adults to commit crimes earlier and more often compared to the past. In my opinion, there are numerous factors that contribute to this problem. The essay will discuss the reasons for this phenomenon and state some solutions for parents, lecturers and the authority.

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some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time .This can benefit teenageers and the community as well .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the current scenario, where most of the spare time is utilised on accessing mobile phones and playing video games, society believes that children must get involved in community work for free. However, some are in disagreement with it. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time . This can benefit teenageers and the community as well .to what extent do you agree or disagree?

I strongly believe that teenagers can help build a collaborative society by indulging in different kinds of public work in their leisure time. In this essay, we will discuss various benefits of youngsters doing unpaid community work in their free hours.

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience

The ultimate combination of social media and camera and smartphone technology leads to the creation of celebrity and influencer cultures of today. While a lot of people received fame and money from being popular on social media and the internet, It also brought negative effects on their lives. In my point of view, despite being public figures, they should not be obligated to share every detail of their private lives with the public.

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Are famous people treated unfairly by the media? Should they be given more privacy, or is the price of their fame an invasion into their private life? Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Many celebrities have gotten terrible problems from social media, such as social bullies, horrible comments, etc. In my opinion, although some people thought that it is the consequence of being famous, people are living under the law and human rights are significant, including privacy.

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Some people think it is a better way to leave their home country to improve their work and living opportunities, while others think staying in their own country is a better choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

Every individual craves a healthy lifestyle and work-life balance. The urge to fulfil this dream has inculcated a thought for many of us to leave our home countries and settle abroad for better opportunities. This essay will discuss both views, however, in my opinion, one should not stop looking for better opportunities whether in their home country or somewhere else.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or book because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the present circumstance, some individuals claim that published documents, books or newspapers will disappear in the future as information can be read freely via online networks. In my opinion, I agree with this statement, this essay will discuss why the printing industry is being replaced and the outweighing advantages of online media.

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Spending wisely and getting into the habit of saving from an early age is important. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position.

It is often believed that the habit of saving money and not spending it on unwanted things is crucial at younger age. In my perspective, I would agree that because there are a lot of benefits when youth expend theirs in the right ways.

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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on them? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages.

These days, children have been introduced to computers at an early age. While some people have claimed that it is better for them to familiarize it earlier because of the importance of digital literacy, some scientists have stated that this activity could bring about detrimental impacts to them, namely physical diseases and mental health problems. In this essay, i shall detail the benefits and drawbacks of the phenomenon.

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People think teenage years are the happiest time of their lives while others argue that adult life is the happiest despite greater responsibility. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Individuals have their own points in life when they were the happiest. While one may argue that teenage years are preferably more full of enjoyment, opponents argue that adult life is more jubilant despite greater responsibility. As for me, I suppose teenagers have better times in life due to the freedom that comes with their age, while adults are faced with an image of society made up of how their lives should be.

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People nowadays prefer to interact online (e.g. do shopping, chat with friends) rather than talking to other people face-to-face. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

It is pretty common that people to become more and more reliant on the internet instead of facing others in person. This essay will explain why this happens, and give my opinion.

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Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed by some that families who have their children receiving private education should not be made compulsory to support the public education system through taxation. From my perspective, I completely disagree with the statement.

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Doctors in many countries say that people do not do enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this trend? How can the situation be improved?

There is a growing concern shown by health professionals worldwide that the masses are not undergoing sufficient fitness activities. This essay will discuss the causes for this trend such as hectic work schedules and lack of motivation along with solutions for improvement including time management and staying inspired.

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Some people think that work is the most important thing of people's life. Without the success of a career, life becomes meaningless. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is undeniable that work and career became one of the most important aspects of people’s life. Not just it is the way people find the means to support themselves and their families but it is one of the crucial factors that most people will take into account when determining one’s success. Despite how essential it is, I do not believe that the success of a career is the only thing that matters in life and it certainly does not define who we are as a person. I will elaborate more on this in the next paragraph.

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Children should be controlled or should they be allowed to take their own decision. Discuss both view and give your Opinion.

It is debatable whether kids should be allowed to make their own decisions. Some believe that, By letting children think and make decisions of their own will benefit their development and help them mature more quickly while others think that until children reach their legal’s age, parents must make decisions for them. Whereas both opinions have their own merits and I partly agree with both of them to a certain extent. I will describe both views and express my opinion about this topic in the following paragraphs.

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