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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Many working people get little or no excercise either during the working days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise? What can be done about this problem.

Most officers have been recently seen overworking even at weekends or holidays. As a result, this affects their energy and becomes worse because they don’t have hours to do training. This essay will examine possible reasons and solutions to this situation.

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Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree?

Crimes, in many countries, have gone beyond a tolerable rate and the practice of putting convicted people in jail is becoming common. Irrespective of the type of crime criminals commit, they often face a certain term of imprisonment. A segment of society opines that not all offences are equal and particular cases should be tolerated from this kind of harsh punishment, and instead be obliged to take part in unrewarded social services. I personally believe methods of punishment should vary providing the severity of the crime as well as the number of times that crime is committed.

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It has been suggested that primary children should learn how to grow vegetables and keep animals. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people have an opinion that elementary school students should learn to grow vegetables and keep pets. In my opinion, the above actions will help the children have more advantages than disadvantages.

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Many people these days travel far for work or spend more hours working. Does this trend have more advantages or disadvantages? What do you think about work-life balance?

In this day and age, the major section of society is spending long hours working or travelling for business purposes. I think this type of working leads to work-life imbalance and therefore it has certain disadvantages. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss the negative consequences of this trend and the importance of work-life balance.

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In some countries, more peoplt the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this question?

In many nations, where people who buy built houses, are eager to know more about the evolution of these architectural creations since history repeats over time, and they find related information by involving elderly people in the neighbourhood and news articles.

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Many criminals resort back to crime as soon as they are released from prison. What do you think are the causes for this? What effects will this have on society.

It is observed that once the felons are discharged from jail, they resort back to felonies. Various factors could be responsible for this behaviour such as lack of monetary funds and unemployment due to notoriety. However, such conduct leads to various repercussions on the community like mental illness for the victim.

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Even though governments have worked hard to bring about improvements in the healthcare system, the overall standard of physical health in developed countries is decreasing. What are the potential reasons for this, and what are some of the long-term effects?

Physical fitness is important for the human body. High authorities have also left no stone unturned to improve the healthcare department. However, in some developed nations physical health of people is dropping down. Hence, in this essay, I will shed the light on the main causes of this problem and depicts how this issue will have an impact on upcoming lives.

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Some people think that children should begin their education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

The start of education is a really a very crucial part of life for the child. Some prefer that the child's education should start as early as possible while others oppose this trend.

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More and more people are opting for distance education these days. What are the benefits of this trend? According to you, is it a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, numerous students are choosing distance learning programs over on-campus courses. However, this change has a few advantages such as reduction in commuting costs and imparting education irrespective of location, in my opinion, it is a positive development.

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Buying things on the internet, such as books, air tickets, and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays people are becoming more relaxed, and they do not go outside shopping they ordered all accessories online and get these articles at their doorstep. This trend is increasing day by day. In this essay, both pros and cons will be discussed in the following subsequent paragraphs.

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Many people think that happiness relies upon the individuals, while others think it is affected by other factors. Discuss both views and state your opinion.

Nowadays, society give their maximum effort to be happy because the public mostly likes to have the happiest moments in their life. Many individuals opine that happiness is created by themselves. Whereas others think that it depends upon the other elements. This essay discusses both views and the reasons behind my opinion.

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Older people often choose to spend money on themselves (e.g. on holidays) rather than save money for their children after retirement. Is this a positive or negative development?

It is quite evident that adults play a significant role in their families. Therefore, adults should utilise savings for their essential requirements instead of setting aside cash for their offspring, when they retire. This essay will discuss why they should not save wealth for the next generation.

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With an increasing overweight population some people think universities should make sport a compulsory module on all degree courses. To what extent do you agree?

The unprecedented progress in the food sector brings along with some notable and negative notions which are incontrovertible. Among them, the high propensity for obesity has absorbed a vehement position. Owing to this downside trend, a bunch of personages opines that physical exercise ought to be added as a mandatory subject in all aspects of higher education curriculums. Nonetheless, I thoroughly discord with this proclivity because having a proneness to eat junk cuisine outside of the educational institution the learners and after completing education life, this activity may not be followed which transformed this step just in vain.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disadvantages?

Undoubtedly, it is essential for individuals to take risks from time to time because it helps them get out of their comfort zone which leads to advancements in terms of work, relationships and so on. However, from my perspective, risks should be carefully estimated before taking them. Thus, in certain cases, drawbacks may even exceed benefits. The points of view will be examined in the essay.

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some people like to try new things, for example, places to visit and types of food. Other people prefer to keep doing things they are familiar with. Discuss both these attitudes and give your opinion.

Change is welcomed by a few as it gives a feeling of adventure whereas some people prefer doing the same things and avoiding change. I agree with the first statement because change is the future. The following essay will discuss both points of view and substantiate my opinion.

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In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do u think advantages outweigh the disadvantages

With the advancement in technology, the driverless automobiles will become the future within a couple of decades. It became a debatable issue whether driverless transport is beneficial or on the opposing side has its drawbacks. In my opinion, this transportation bears more cons than pros and I will explain it along with suitable examples.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern life, many countries face the problem of overpopulation. There is no doubt that every age group is crucial to building a developed country. Many people argue that countries have several young adults who are more effective rather than older. I think that the advantages of this outweigh the opposite.

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How can one government stop smuggling illegal drugs?

Illegal drugs became a leading problem for every country. Ii became a debatable issue amongst authorities regarding steps needed to take against the smuggling of drugs. In this essay, I will outline the significant strategies that can be beneficial in preventing smuggling.

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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While remote learning becomes more and more popular among the masses nowadays, there are people who believe that it can not replace classic teaching in its quality. Since there is a vast list of arguments that support both these points of view, I would like to discuss a couple of the most common ones and explain my thoughts on this question.

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⁷Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience

choosing an appropriate stream while entering university is a crucial part of life. Some people prefer to be enrolled in their own interests however, it is a waste of time to go to any field without having a proper plan should follow the latest trend in the education field and market to others. Both points of view have been explained in more detail below.

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