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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some think increasing business and cultural contact between nations is positive. Others think it leads to the disappearance of the national identity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Some would argue that it is beneficial for countries to have business and cultural communication with other nations, while others believe in this process a state might lose its identity. Although there are some individuals who might mimic the stronger nation's culture, I personally think that diversity and financial freedom happen when trades, languages, foods are exchanged.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

In the last ,decade there had been a drastic change in the way we do shopping. These days more and more customers are attracted towards bigger malls as they get a variety of items under one roof. In the coming ,future this trend is expected to continue due to the busy lifestyles of the majority of the population resulting in the closing of small local stores. In my point of ,view it is a good development.

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Research shows that some people continue to eat unhealthy food even though they know it is bad for them. Why? What are the most efficient ways to improve their eating habits?

It is true that an increasing number of people consume insalubrious food despite knowing that have affected their health. This phenomenon can be attributed to some factors and some measures to help them change their food habits.

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Social media has replaced the traditional methods of communicating and people use more and more social media in communicating and to follow news and events. Some people think that the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your opinion with an example.

During the last decade, a considerable proportion of citizens prefer to exchange general information on internet platforms rather than to interact directly. According to my mindset, I believe that the conveniences of this trend surpass the demerits.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

These days, many persons tend to do their shopping in the market instead of small local shops ; as a result many of them have closed .Although I think that this tendency has some obvious advantages , I strongly believe that the disadvantages of this trend can outweigh its advantages.

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In some culture, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. what are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

Children's education has always been a hot topic of debate. In some cultures, children are often told that anything they want will come true on the condition that they try hard enough. However, this message receives a lot of conflicting opinions. In this essay, I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages of telling the children this message.

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In Some Countries More and More People Are Becoming Interested in Finding Out About the History of the House or Building They Live In

In many nations around the world, there is an ever-increasing number of people who desire to learn more about the history of their residences. This essay will argue that this is mainly because individuals have gained more historical awareness about their cultural heritage and then suggest that information can be found by simply asking local residents and researching in community libraries.

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Some people think that old buildings should be knocked down and give way to modern buildings. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the modern era, historical and ancient buildings are still considered to play an essential part in human life. However, some people believe that some old buildings should be demolished and replaced by modern constructions. Personally, I strongly disagree with this statement.

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Nowadays may families have both parents working. Some working parents believe other family members like grandparents can take care of their children, while others think childcare centres provide the best care. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

These days, both women and men have an opportunity as equal as men to take care of their offspring. However, there are 2 choices in order to aid them to raise their child, which is asking their grandparents or sending them to a childcare organization. Although, while taking offspring to babysitting service seems more convenient, I believed that letting the family members look after them is more significant.

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Some people think that one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuels for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

In the last few decades, there has been an increase in problems related to the environment. Although some people believe that the best way to limit the issues is to increase the cost of fuels for vehicles and promote environmental eco-friendly vehicles, while others believe that those who need vehicles will use them regardless of fuel prices. This essay will discuss in detail and explain why I think, increasing the price of fuel is not the only solution.

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Explain some of the ways in which humans are damaging the environment. What can governments do to address these problems? What can individual people do?

In recent times it has been observed that humans are damaging the environment. This essay will discuss the solutions that the government can address and what individuals can do to reduce the damage.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or reaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world,schools have a significant role in upbringing children ,and a lot of things should be taught at schools. It is argued that children have to learn some volunteer works in the high school,such as helping a charity, extending the place where you they live or promoting some sports among younger children. I will support this view with arguments in the following paragraphs.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is considered very important. Why might this be the case? Is this a positive or negative development?

Due to the current ever-growing of the modern world and a continuous change in everyone’s living concept, home ownership becomes an abstract tool to measure an individual’s success. Especially for oriental persons, the various types of valuable properties, namely, cars and houses are fundamental needs of most households. Therefore, as a classical Asian, I am convinced that home possession is vital and this is also a positive situation that can lead to numerous advantages and they will be discussed in the following paragraphs.

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Some people think that children should learn to read from traditional paper books, while others feel that it is fine to start the reading process on an e-reader (like a Kindle or iPad). Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some folk thinks that child should start to learn to read from famous traditional paper books while others believe that it is good to start the reading on an e-reader application like kindle or iPad. In this essay, both sides will be scrutinized followed by my own take on the matter.

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Some people feel that governments should take a large proportion of people's salaries to pay for necessary public services such as roads and schools. Others feel high taxes are a bad thing. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days public services are playing a very important role. While some people are of the view that individuals should pay a large proportion of their salary for public services such as roads and schools, others are of the view that it is not good to pay a high amount of taxes. In this essay, I will be discussing both the views and state my opinion that it is a bad thing to pay a higher rate of tax. There are two primary reasons for this.

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Some people think that young people should go to university to further their education while others think they should be encouraged to work as car mechanics or builders etc.to serve society. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial issue today is related to the continuation of education after graduating from high school. In this essay, I am going to carefully examine both points of view and then give my opinion on this matter.

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Some people think that strict punishments for driving offences are the key to reducing traffic accidents. Others, however, believe that other measures would be more effective in improving road safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Issues related to how to make our roads safer are frequently debated nowadays. Many people argue that driving offences should be punished strictly instead of using alternative measures to contribute to better driving habits. In the following , paragraphs I will discuss both of these viewpoints and state my view in detail.

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Some people think that children should learn to read from traditional paper books, while others feel that it is fine to start the reading process on an e-reader (like a Kindle or iPad). Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

A group of people suggested that pupils should learn to read in a conventional way rather than an updated way of reading like an e-reader. I believe that conventional methods are still supreme than current technology-based reading.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

Nowadays, technology is widespread all over the world. Although the use of the internet has tons of advantages, some believe that the disadvantages in terms of being safe, far exceed the advantages. Throughout this essay I will either agree or disagree with this statement. Firstly, I will discuss the positive sides related to the use of the Internet and , ,secondly I will explore the negative side, it can bring about.

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Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Past experiences are the foundation of our present as well as future. Some people think that learning about what happened in the past is merely just a waste of time. I completely disagree with the latter statement as analysis has shown that knowledge of history can guide us to a better world. Moreover, ancestors stories are the ladders for our motivation which I will be discussing more in the forthcoming paragraphs.

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