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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Causes of bullying in school are increasing and worsening. What do you think are the causes of this? How can we tackle this issue?

In modern society, it is commonly observed that in order to address the problem of student bullying, its causes such as too much focus on outstanding academic performance and competition among students must be clearly understood by society. In this essay, the main causes of the phenomenon and possible solutions will be examined in turn.

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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

Modern children have a huge interest in video games in which there is violence. Some people believe that this can be a trigger for violence in the future. I absolutely disagree with this opinion and suppose that the reason for the formation of crime is completely different factors. In my essay, I want to give my arguments that support my opinion.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Scientists carry out research for several reasons, I do agree with the statement that the most critical purpose is aiming for human life development.

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Some people think that the main influence on young people's diet is advertising rather than family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Social media advertising has influenced young targets on diet more than their own family and friends. From my perspective, though peers can alter some food habits, I agree that advertising indeed affects how young people make their dietary choices.

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More and more media attention is being paid to famous, successful people in sports and movies. Why do you think this is happening? Is this a positive or a negative development?

It has always been a matter of dispute why well-recognized people are entitled to have so much attention, which sometimes makes people question what they deserve. I think it is a negative development and it needs to be stopped right away. I believe the main cause is responsible press. I am going to explain what are the root causes of this phenomenon and what measures have to be taken.

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Advances in science and technology and other areas of society in the last 100 years have transformed the way we live as well as postponing the day we die. There is no better lime to be alive than now.

It is often said that development in science an integral part of our daily lives and rest areas of society in the last 100 years has changed drastically the way we live as well as delaying the day when we die. In this essay ,I will explain why I agree with the statement that there is no better time to be alive than now and provide examples to support my position.

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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken?

Now in the world, we can see a trend that the percentage of fat people grew very fast last year. Because of it, the level of health falls a lot. There can be many reasons causing these problems, and we will discover some in this essay.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that in many cities around the world there are constant traffic jams. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from owning cars?

Over last the thirty years, car ownership has become more common in human life. This situation is causing a lot of trouble for people, forcing them to deal with big traffic congestion and air pollution. How true is this statement and what can be done to reduce car ownership?

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In films and computer games violence has become more popular. Some people think this has negative effects on society, other think it is harmless relaxation. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In recent years, violence in films and video games has become increasingly widespread, igniting debate over its effects on society. Some individuals claim that exposure to violent content can provoke aggressive behaviour in real life and should be restricted, while others regard these forms of media as harmless relaxation and stress relief. From my perspective, though these concerns are understandable, rather than banning violent content, appropriate measures such as age restrictions and parental controls should be implemented.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why do people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food?

It is frequently asserted that the overwhelming majority of communities opt to acquire imported food rather than domestically produced food. There are two prominent factors to underpin this assertion and ways are needed to influence society to buy locally grown food.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the environment as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion.

A number of the population choose to adopt a vegan diet, believing that it benefits both health and the environment. This view has gained popularity in recent years, and there are compelling reasons supporting this choice.

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Some people think traffic and housing problems in large cities can be solved by moving companies and factories and their employees to the countryside. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Several individuals argue that to solve the difficulties with housing and traffic by relocating firms and plants further from the major metropolitan. In my opinion,the disadvantages outweigh the advantages, and this essay will strongly disagree with this statement. Because that change could cause a lot of problems, for instance, transportation difficulties, growth traffic jams,economic risks for the city centre and also business isolation. This text will discuss it.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As it is known, there are numerous amount of subjects we could take in university. Although some argue that undergraduates should take subjects that are seen to be beneficial for the future like technology and science, I believe that students should take majors they like and actually enjoy for which the reasons are stated below.

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Many people believe that mobile phones cause more harms than the benefits and that’s why mobile phones should be restricted? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In the contemporary era of globalization, technological advancements have undergone a substantial transformation. A wider range of individuals believe that mobile phone hazards outweigh the merits. Thus, it should be regulated and limited. I wholeheartedly agree with this statement.

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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

There is no denying the fact that many countries will face serious circumstances regarding the environment and luck education quality. This essay will discuss crucial challenges that could occur in my country and solutions that can be taken to mitigate its risks.

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some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to studying for a qualification. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some students have demanded the addition of other subjects to their main courses, while others contend that they have to prioritize their major-related subjects. Although I acknowledge the benefits of the former approach, I have an inclination toward the latter group.

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Some people think that young people should spend more of their free time at home with their families, and spend less time entertaining outside. Others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Many people believe that teenagers or young adults are obligated to spend more time with their parents and families when they have free time, and not entertain themselves outside the house, while some agree with the opposite opinion. I believe that they should be doing what they prefer to do and I will discuss the aforementioned opinions in this essay.

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While some people think that the problem with education in poor countries is the teaching methodology used, others believe it is the lack of resources that is the real issue. Discuss both sides.

In the contemporary era of globalization, the education system has undergone a significant transformation. A diverse range of individuals believes that the prime issue in teaching in impoverished localities is the primitive way, while others assume it is the scarcity of resources. In this essay, both statements will be elucidated.

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to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? in the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

There is a statement that in the future, nobody will buy printed books or newspapers because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. In my view, I disagree with this statement because many writers and newspaper companies still require funds, and some regions may not have stable internet connections to access online newspapers and books.

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In some cities public parks and open spaces are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruit and vegetables. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

In some towns, public zones, such as parks and open areas, are being transformed into gardens where citizens can produce their fruits and vegetables. This essay will illustrate that local agriculture influences the economy and outshines by improving people's interest in production, even though it has no such advantages as a private park can make, it increases social interaction in towns.

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