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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people think that governments should give financial support to creative such as painters and musicians. Others believe that creative artists should be funded by alternative sources. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.

In the modern day, musicians and painters require a lot of money to create art. Some say the government should step in and help fund them while others believe this job to be for alternative sources. In my opinion, the government should only help with funding for artwork that promotes their culture since they have to use the budget for other more important aspects such as healthcare or education. Then the budget for artists would fall for art-related companies.

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Write about the following topic: More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Young Juveniles living in developed countries are experiencing obesity problems. Although many reasons can be behind this phenomenon, In this essay i will discuss about main causes and the number of various health factors that can affect a child's life.

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A large number of young people cannot find a job when they leave university. What problems will youth unemployment cause for individuals and for society? What measures should take to reduce unemployment?

A substantial number of fresh graduates cannot land a job upon graduation. Although such a trend contributes to numerous obstacles both for individuals and society, a plethora of actions can be implemented to alleviate these problems. This essay will examine what are the issues that arise from youth unemployment and how to cope with them.

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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In today’s society, having a good appearance is essential for every gender. Hence, people are willing to do everything to obtain their best looks. Some people agree that having cosmetic surgery is the best way to boost their confidence, while others oppose that. In this essay, I will explain the reason why people do surgery, and in my personal arguments, I believe this trend is a negative improvement.

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some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it

Opinions differ regarding the effect of advertising on people’s intention to buy products. While some people claim that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things, I side with those who urge advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while other think that good working atmosphere is more important, Discuss both views and state your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that getting a lot of money and not having a lot of free time is greater than earning less money and getting more free time. While it is a commonly held belief that a high salary is very essential these days, there is also an argument that other people think the workspace is more important than anything else. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.

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It is often argued that it is difficult to get children to read. Why do you think this is? What measures could be taken to encourage children to read more?

Reading is one of the most beneficial ways to fill our spare time, yet many parents find encouraging their kids to read challenging. This essay will explore the reasons behind this issue and put forward some potential solutions.

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The rising crime rates in major cities are posing significant challenges for society. What are the causes of this increase in crime? What solutions can be implemented to reduce it?

In recent years, many major cities have witnessed a troubling rise in crime rates, which poses serious challenges for communities and law enforcement. This increase can be attributed to various factors, including socioeconomic disparities and the breakdown of community structures. This essay will discuss these causes and suggest effective solutions.

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Writing Task 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: ‘It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In the contemporary world of globalization, people are migrating to new destinations for better lifestyles but do they need to learn about the heritage of a country? This essay will discuss why it is important for such people to know about the country where they live.

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In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. There is a logic that they should share the housework equally with men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary world, the number of females who have full-time work has increased like males. It is argued that the former should distribute the household chores equally. I completely agree with this idea since women as men are tired at work, thus, they can not do all home tasks without any help and males can do these tasks and assist their wives.

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Some people believe that police force carries guns, this encourage higher level of violence in that society. To what extend do yo agree or disagree?

In some societies, they agree that a weapon carried by police will make the increasing of criminals in that society. I wholeheartedly disagree with this argument. It is because the police are equipped with a gun for unexpected events such as robbing and they are trained to use the weapon so it is safe for them to carry it.

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These days people prefer to watch live performances (Shows, concerts) through tv or computer, online rather than go to the place of event. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays , live shows like concerts are watched on TV or computers by people instead of going to the place of the event. I agree with this statement that we can save more time while watching comfortable places although live performances add more joy to our lives.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for goverments to make It a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Recycling is an eco-friendly activity that significantly benefits the environment. Homes are major sources of waste production. Recently, it has been a controversial issue whether the government should impose a law to make recycling mandatory. This essay will discuss the necessity of such a law and support it with practical reasons.

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Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for goverments to make It a legal requirement. To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?

Nowadays there has been a heated debate about recycling, someone suggests the only way citizens are doing that on a daily basis is by regulating it. Therefore, politicians should take action to reduce the amount of unrecycled trash from our households and making new laws is the only path possible.

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Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, the same products are available to purchase in the world, resulting in similarities among countries. I feel that this should be seen as a positive trend for the entire world.

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In Many Countries, Children do not do physical exercises as much as before and the tend to become more and more overweight. What are the reasons and solutions of this?

The influence of technology has encouraged children to stay inside and play on their gadgets, rather than go outside and perform physical exercises. This may lead to obesity and unhealthy daily routines. This essay will discuss some of the reasons and possible solutions.

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Causes of bullying in school are increasing and worsening. What do you think are the causes of this? How can we tackle this issue?

In modern society, it is commonly observed that in order to address the problem of student bullying, its causes such as too much focus on outstanding academic performance and competition among students must be clearly understood by society. In this essay, the main causes of the phenomenon and possible solutions will be examined in turn.

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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

Modern children have a huge interest in video games in which there is violence. Some people believe that this can be a trigger for violence in the future. I absolutely disagree with this opinion and suppose that the reason for the formation of crime is completely different factors. In my essay, I want to give my arguments that support my opinion.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people’s lives. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Scientists carry out research for several reasons, I do agree with the statement that the most critical purpose is aiming for human life development.

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Some people think that the main influence on young people's diet is advertising rather than family and friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Social media advertising has influenced young targets on diet more than their own family and friends. From my perspective, though peers can alter some food habits, I agree that advertising indeed affects how young people make their dietary choices.

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