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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

One of the most controversial issues today relates to the best way to punish criminals. In this essay, I am going to examine this question from both points of view and then give my own opinion on the matter.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The way of punishing criminals is written in the laws and regulations to warn citizens what should not be done. Some people believe that these rules should be applied to everyone fixedly, while others argue that the condition and motivation of criminals should be considered before judging them. This essay will discuss both sides of this argument and then I will give my perspective.

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Some people believe that it is best situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, in this face-paced life people get many ups and downs in their life. Some believe that detrimental circumstances such as low bank balance and unpleasant work-life are the great condition in life. However, there are many who argue that it is profound to give a try to thrive under such circumstances. This essay will discuss both views and I will outline my perspective on why I feel that working on these hard times is best to get outstanding results in life.

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Some people say that music is a good way of bringing people of different cultures and ages together To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Many people believe that music can connect people from diverse cultures and generations together. I totally agree because people can feel closer through enjoying music and it is a medium that helps people understand each other better.

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Some people think that the best way to get the news is through newspapers while others think it is through online media. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The debate about a better form of news is never-ending. The two leading means for this debate are newspapers and online media. Let's examine the pros and cons of the aforementioned sources of information in the present times and evaluate which one is the most preferred.

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Some people say that the advertisements extremely successful at persuading us to buy things, others think advertisements is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It is undeniable that people in this modern era living amidst a variety of commercials. It is a controversial issue that whether such adverts have a prime role in evergrowing consumerism in society or individuals merely notice them. Both these sides would be discussed in detail and an appropriate opinion would be given.

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People buy a product if it fulfills their needs; there is no need for advertisement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with it?

The majority of people have not taken seriously the effect of commercial advertisement when they considered purchasing things. In this topic, I will either agree or disagree with the public opinion as it is not completely true. In the forthcoming paragraphs, the discussion will have two main sections, which is an advertisement as powerful tools and sceptic belief of the advertisement.

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In many countries the widespread use of internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. Do the advantages outweigh disadvantages?

The consumption of the internet has been increased over the last decade at an extraordinary level. Because of this trend, the remort working and learning has been growing at a faster pace. There are both positive and negative implications on the rising of mentioned trend. In my opinion, there are more benefits that are capable of outcompeting the adverse impacts.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

In this day and age, technology seems to intrude every facet of our life. Thus, online shopping is thriving in popularity speedier than ever before which can be attributed to the many conveniences it brings to the users. However, like a double-edged sword, e-commerce, when being decorticated, is proven to have many flaws. In this answer, I believe that the drawbacks of e-trading can surpass its advantages to a certain extent.

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Life was better when technology was simpler. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

When the evolution of technology first introduced us, it promised us a better life and make our life easier than ever before. Some people believe that cutting edge technology made our everyday routine simpler, while others think the opposite way. In this essay, I will discuss how it affected our lives and draw my conclusion based on the facts.

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Q: stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress,and how can we reduce it?

Stress is one of the most prevalent issues faced by the entire world. There are numerous factors responsible for the same and to eliminate this trouble, various measures can be taken which I will elaborate on in the subsequent paragraphs.

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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be spent elsewhere. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this?

Nowadays, a great deal of attention has been paid to the arts. A certain proportion of people opine that the government should cut budgets that are used for the arts, and use them for other purposes. I strongly agree with the idea because the arts not worth investment, and there are more important areas such as education.

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Many small businesses are being forced to close because they are unable to compete with multinational corporations. What problems does this cause and how can those problems be solved?

In this contemporary era, it is irrefutable that globalisation is affecting many domains, business is one of them. A plethora of low-income businesses is being compelled to shut down due to the incapability of competing with international organisations. This results in the closure of small regional shops and the government should not only promote local businesses but also create local markets. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on these in details.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do so many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

In this contemporary era, being healthy is a predominant challenge for everyone. A big demographics of working folks struggles in doing exercise in not their weekdays but also on weekends which may lead to health-related issues. Sedentary and passive lifestyle are two key reasons. However, this can be tackled by the actions of the governments and individuals. The upcoming paragraphs will shed light on these in details.

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7. In cities, space for housing should be created by knocking down historic buildings. What is your opinion?

In today's world of globalisation, the issue regarding demolishing the historical buildings for constructing houses in a city has become a major cause of concern in our society. According to my perspective, I believe that destroying historical places for the house space is not a good idea, In this essay, I will explain my attribute with strong examples and give a manifold justification.

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Universities should accept same numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, due to hectic,schedule people do not even take time to ask themselves whether universities should ensure that there are equal numbers of men and women in each and every subject? I agree with the given statement that there must be equal students from both genders in a particular course.

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Some people say that parents should decide on what kind of medical care their children should receive, while others believe that this is the state’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been tremendous growth in the field of paediatric medical science. While few believe that the government should be responsible for children healthcare, however, I would like to agree with people who advocate that a family must determine the type of hospitalization their children benefit from.

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In the modern world, it is no longer necessary to use animals for food, clothing, or medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

For centuries, animals have been an integral part of the life of humans, providing everything needed for our survival ranging from food and medicine to clothing. For instance, around 70% of the population is said to consume some or the other form of meat. I disagree that animals will no longer be necessary for our consumption in the modern world. This is because a majority of the accessories and clothing used by people are animal-based. In addition, most of the remedies widely used today contain some sort of animal hormone which has been proved to be highly beneficial to humans.

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People who live in busy cities are in many ways at a disadvantage to those who live in rural areas. To what extent to you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many people who live in bustling towns and urban areas are at a disadvantage to those who live in small villages and countryside areas. In this essay, I will either agree or disagree with this statement. Firstly, I will discuss the benefits of finding work and healthcare whilst living in a city and secondly, I will explore the positives of the social aspects of living in an urban area.

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The fact that enormous sums are paid for pieces of art is not acceptable at a time when many people around the world live in poverty. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

In this modern world. Government of any particular nation spend a large amount on artistry work instead to fulfil the minimum requirements of those people who are living in unprivileged condition. Is it necessary to put more efforts to uplift the artistic work?There are those who claim that government funds expenditure on fine arts is beneficial to show their particular country traditions and culture. However, opponents disagree with the above statement and opine that authorities should take major steps for destitution. So their provincial will fully develop. In this ,essay we will discuss whether authorities disburse the huge amount of artistry work is adequate instead of thinking about unprivileged persons.

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