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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7.5

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Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Happiness in human beings is a part of life. Some people believe it comes after getting economic success, but others say that it can be achieved in different ways. In my opinion, I believe economic success as well as other criteria in a person's life brings happiness.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? It is better for children to grow up in the countryside than in a large city. Use specific reasons and examples to develop your essay.

There are many more benefits for children to grow up in the surroundings than in a large metropolis. In my opinion, I completely concur with the growing up of offspring in the countryside. It is because of the following two reasons that I feel the way I do; the clean atmosphere, and the less distraction, which I will examine in this essay.

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Some countries import a large amount of food from other parts of the world. To what extent is this a positive or negative trend?

All countries plan the number of imports and exports according to their several purposes. So some of them prefer to bring several foodstuff products from abroad in order to increase other industrial sectors. I agree with this statement, however, some people think it has some bad sides.

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Rich people are getting richer, and poor people are getting poorer. The gap between rich and poor people is widening. What problems can the situation cause? What can be done to reduce this gap?

It has been universally acknowledged that the problem of imbalance between wealthy and poor folks of a nation is escalating at an alarming rate in the current age.This problem has been a depressing magnitude because wealthy people become more wealthy whereas the poor getting down day by day .Although a plethora of reasons are there yet some sensible solutions are available to curb this grave concern.

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Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by many that nowadays popular products are being sold in high volume with the help of advertisements and not because of the society really needs. I completely agree with this statement and I will state the reasons for my view.

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Creative artists should always have the freedom to express their ideas in any way they wish. The government should not restrict what they do. To what extent do you agree with this opinion.

Over the last few years , it has become an increasingly worrying issue through the fact that artists have no freedom to do whatever they want and the government may restrict them not doing certain activities .the best way is for the government to allow them to have a voice by doing different kinds of arts . I am strongly in favour of this notion and in this essay, I will support my idea with examples and propose a conclusion.

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Some people think that personal happiness is directly related to economic success. Others argue that happiness depends on different factors. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Happiness in human beings is a part of life. Some believe it comes after getting economic success, but others say that it can be achieved in different ways. In my opinion, I believe economic success as well as other criteria in a person's life brings happiness.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

With the popularity of advertising, people can see different advertisements everywhere and every time. However, some argue that advertising is a good method for saling, whereas others believe that it is too common to raise people's interests. In this essay, I will consider both ideas and explain why advertising can be persuasive and appealing at the same time.

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Some people believe celebrities' support towards international aid organizations draws attention to problems, while others think celebrities make the problems less important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Charitable institutions are a way for the people to contribute to society. One part of the people are of the view that famous public figures, making and endorsing a few NGOs are beneficial for its success. Alternatively, others think that it's ruining the importance of the cause. This essay will delve into both perspectives, I , however, side with the former view.

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In some countries,owing a home than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Owning a home is becoming popular in some countries more than hiring one.Some people believe that having your own home is far better.In my opinion,I think it is more advantageous than disadvantageous to purchase your own house.

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Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (250 words).

Nowadays, there are a large number of songs created by artists. Some people argue that melody is just a kind of entertaining tool, while others believe that melodies have a greater significance to their heart. I hold the opinion that the functionality of singing totally depends on individuals’ preferences.

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Should long-term job seekers in receipt of government benefits be made to do voluntary work so that they give something back to the community? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Permanent government employees are entitled to many perquisites during and a post-service period. I think they should pay back to the community by sharing their knowledge and time.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In these modern days, processed foods and fizzy drinks are quite popular and they contain a high level of sugar which can cause multiple health issues. It is argued that their prices should be higher in order to reduce sugar consumption. I totally agree with that as it would help decrease causing multiple diseases as well as make the population pick up better choices for their health.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion.

Nowadays more and more families are deciding to homeschool their offspring. some argue that it is the best method for schooling, while others disagree and believe that it is instrumental for children to go to educational institutions. In this essay I will be discussing the pros of each approach.

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Some people think it is better to have many short holidays during the year. Other believe it would be beneficial to have fewer, longer vacations. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

While some individuals are in favour of giving several short vacations, others opine that long holiday are much better. In my opinion, pupils will get more benefits if they have several short break during the year. I will be discussed both views in further paragraphs.

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Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays,surging traffic congestion is a most crucial problem faced in almost all countries. The public has different opinions to reduce this issue.Some suggest that the authorities should provide money for constructing trains and subway lines whilst others opine that this problem can be reduced by building more and wider roads.In my thought, I am with the formal view and this essay will discuss both sides and the reasons for my opinion.

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It is seen that older adults are not given enough respect and facilities in many countries. What could be reason for this? What are the effects of this?

It is widely known that many people do not regard to elderly, then they are not provided with enough public facilities to support their life. Overall, I would say that the weakness of elder people is the main reason whereas the high risk of physical and mental regression could be the effects of the phenomenon.

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Many people believe that music is just a form of entertainment, whilst others believe that music has a much larger impact on society today. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Music is one of the best enjoyment in our daily activity and it raises someone's mood, and get them excited. In my opinion, the melody does not only entertain us it is one of the best career choices also. some nation thinks that the soul is only refreshment and other citizen says opera is a large impact on the association. In this essay, I will discuss both sides and I will give my opinion.

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In some countries it is illegal to reject someone applying for a job because of his or her age. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

One of the progressive thoughts of social life brought about by globalisation is recognition and respect given to the elderly. Few nations have even made it illegal if job applications are refused on account of the age of the job seeker. This is the fact, is a positive development because taking care of older people is one of the prime responsibilities of society.

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Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in team, while other people think that take part in individual sports is better. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Sports play a pivotal role in everyone's life by maintaining physical health. There has been an ongoing debate among people about whether team sports are important or individual sports for the overall development of a human being. In this ,essay we will take into consideration both sides of the coin while giving the main verdict on the issue.

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