IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 1244

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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In a number of countries, some people think it is necessary to spend large sums of money on construction new railway lines for very fast trians between cities. Others belive the money should be spent on improving exiting public transport.

It is always argued that governments should spend more money on some situations than others. Especially about transportation. Some people think it is necessary to spend a large proportion of the budget on constructing new railway lines between cities, while others believe that money should spend on improving our common public transport system.

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Media plays an important role in shaping the society. Should media be given moreliberty or not?

The importance of liberty in media which was always debatable that now become more controversial with many people claiming that is beneficial while others reject this notion.

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Many people think that libraries are essential for society. Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion."

Some groups of people believe in libraries are important for the public, though, some other groups believe is that libraries are a waste of money and the budget should be allocated to more important sources which I completely agree with.

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These day it is much easier for many people to travel to different countries for tourism than in the past. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

In modern times, globalization and advancement in technology have allowed tourists to travel to different countries much easier. As more opportunities for individuals to visit different countries for the purpose of tourism become easier, such a phenomenon can provide both benefits and drawbacks. This essay will outline both views and discuss whether the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages.

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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is a fact that many countries are still facing poverty as one of the major obstacles in their development. Even though wealthy nations support their counterparts to irradicate this state, still it doesn't bring major changes. Due to this, many economists around the world are thought that eradication of this particular condition not only depends on monetary help but also on other means such as science, technology and education. I completely agree with this argument as it would help to upbring the nation to an incredibly higher level rather than a support for time being.

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University education should be free to everyone, regardless of income To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The today's society a lot of children's issues are remarkable increase such as burglary by teenagers. The significant reason for aggressive action from youth is because they do not apply good teaching as their parents do not have an amount apply money for enrolling on the university. Some people support the opinion that university improvement should be free to all of the applied population and do not accept their parent's money. From my point of view, I agree with the university should be free with every program for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. In my essay, I discuss this point and its negatives and positives in the paragraphs below.

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SOme countries are considering imposing curfews in whicgh tenenagers will not be allowed outdoors at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this policy

Few nations are opined to implement new rules like curfew to limit the teenagers who tend to walk in streets at night . Although this could give some positive effects like the limitation of drug trafficking and sex offences , this will impact their future in a negative way because of the factors like a limitation of education and free-thinking . Hence , this writer completely disagrees with the given notion.

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In some countries young people are not only richer, but also safer and healtier than ever before. However, they are often less happy and more agitated in actions and behaviors. what do you think are the reasons for this and what can be done to help?

Happiness is something that can not be coupled with a luxurious lifestyle or sound well being. In some places youngsters are wealthier as well as securer and finer compare to the last time. Despite this, They are less content and have more aggressive attitudes. This essay will highlight the potential factors behind this phenomenon and also explain the preventive measures.

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Many believe that an effective public transport system is a key component of modern city. What are the advantages and disadvantages of public transport?

To begin with,there are a variety of public transportation systems all over the world such as, grab, taxi, train and bus. Meanwhile in certain cities, like Bangkok and Manila ,for instance, they have unique public transport namely " tut-tut" and "jeepney". Many believe that an effective public transport system is a key component of a civilised city. Below I will explain the advantages and disadvantages of public transport.

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Some people say that the main purpose of television should be education while others says it should be for entertainment only. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In the modern-day, broadcasting different programs are common. However, As it is claimed by a proportion, television should be embraced the educational program. While others have a contradictory viewpoint, they assert that the TV should be broadcasted entertainment. Nevertheless, I opine that television should be manifested all programs for all citizens it should be either education or entertainment.

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Some employers reward members of staff for their exceptional contribution to the company by giving them extra money. This practice can act as an incentive for some but may also have a negative impact on others. To what extent is this style of management effective? Are there better ways of encouraging employees to work hard?

In some workplaces, staff, who serve as a fulcrum of a certain achievement in companies, are usually awarded bonuses. In my view, this rewarding system not only is a stimulus for further developments in companies, but it is likely to build strong bonds between managers and employees.

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With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Whether individuals ever be solo due to digital advanced communication and still be able to form a friendship or not? To my mind, this way of thinking is not considering all the aspects of the issue. In this essay, we will weigh up the pros and cons of the effects that online connections have on people's lives.

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Many young people spend a lot of time on the internet without any parental supervison or control. What are some of the problems caused by unrestricted use of the internet?

Recently, the internet has rapidly developed leading to the growth of many aspects, such as social networks, video games and e-commerce exchanges. They attract strong attention from individuals, especially the youth who has a lot of time using the internet. If they do it without parents' control, it may cause many issues for social and children's health.

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In recent years, more and more people are choosing to read e-books rather than paper books. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

we can not deny that reading e-books online has increased in the past few decades due to the invention of many devices and platforms. However, others people suppose that reading paper books can never be replaced since it has plentiful benefits. I strongly believe that traditional books have a special charm. In this essay I will compare both the pros and the cons.

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Computers are being used more and more in education. Some people believe that learning online is a better way to learn than attending a class with a teacher. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

With the rapid advance of technology, electronic devices have been widely used in various fields nowadays, including education. Some people even consider online education a better choice in learning against traditional education. Digital learning has numerous advantages indeed, however, there are still several aspects of conventional learning that could not be replaced.

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many manufactured food and drink products contain high level of sugar, which causes many health problem. sugar products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. do u agree or disagree?

Although sugar is counted as one of the most dangerous ingredients for human overall health, it can be found in many foods and drink products. Bearing this fact in mind a controversial question which might arise is whether is increasing the price of these manufactured products is a good decision to reduce the amount of the consumption or not. I fundamentally disagree with the notion that raising the cost in order to reduce the dangers. This will be supported by various reasons in this essay.

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Some people believe governments should spend money on saving languages of few speakers from dying out. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some people claim that authorities should allocate more public funds to prevent some languages that few citizens use to fade away, while others argue that it is wasteful. In my opinion, there are more essential issues that need governments' financial support rather than minorities' languages, and I will give some valid arguments to support my view.

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Wealthy Nations should assists poorer countries with Humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or diagree?

In the modern ,world it is a common belief that wealthy countries such as Canada, the USA, the UK, Australia and many more countries have a vigorous economic balance. So these countries should be helped to other counties where there are fragile economic ,especially during the natural disasters. However, I fully agree with this statement, I opine that wealthy countries should have enough responsibility to look after other nations due to the lack of facilities and suffering things.

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Health experts claim that walking is the best exercise. However, people are walking less on a daily basis. What has made it happen and how to deal with this?

Despite it is being recommended by health experts to walk as the best exercise, some people tend to walk less in everyday life. I believe the development of automation in transportation and the personal preference in choosing an unphysical job are the reasons for this issue arising, whereas the solutions of this case will be explained further in the following paragraphs.

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