IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 16

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Homelessness is increasing in many major cities around the world. What do you think are the main causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it? #241

In recent years, homelessness has become a growing concern in many large cities worldwide. This issue is often the result of multiplex complex factors, including economy instability and a lack of affordable housing. This essay will discuss the primary causes of homelessness and suggest practical solutions to address this worsening problem.

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Social media is becoming increasingly popular amongst all age groups. However, sharing personal information on social media websites does have risks. Do you think that the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages? #186

In recent years, social media platforms have gained immense popularity among all age groups. While these platforms offer various benefits such as connectivity and information sharing, they also raise concerns regarding privacy and security. In my opinion, despite potential risks, the advantages of social media outweigh the disadvantages when used responsibly.

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Nowadays, experience is more valued in the workplace than knowledge in many countries. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? #229

In many modern workplaces, practical experience is often regarded as more important than knowledge or academic qualifications. While this trend offers some clear benefits, it may also lead to significant drawbacks. In my opinion, the advantages of prioritising experience over knowledge do not outweigh its disadvantages, especially in fields that require innovation and theoretical understanding.

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Prevention is better than cure – researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree?

There is no denying the fact that cure is worse than Prevention. It is a commonly held belief that treating a disease is expensive , so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. There is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, l totally agree that prevention is the right choice because it is easier to do a yearly checkup to treat early.

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It is unacceptable that people who work in certain professions,eg.finance,media, entertainment and sport,are paid such high salaries while others, who do more important jobs in society,are underpaid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that some jobs have higher salaries. While it is a commonly held belief that other people who have important professions have lower income, there is an argument that opposes this. In my opinion, l disagree that certain professions should be getting a higher salary, whereas people who get lower salaries should have their income increased so everyone has a fair income.

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Some people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to apply stricter punishments. Others, however, argue that there are more effective ways to reduce crime. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It's argued that the key to preventing crimes is to give longer prison sentences , while others think that there are different ways to alleviate the crime proportion . In my opinion ,while dangerous criminals should be kept behind bars , we should initiate awareness campaigns to address the root of the issue .

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situtation outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, most countries have a huge number of youngsters compared to the adult population. Albeit, there is a dichotomy of views on this concern. I harbour the belief that this concern about negative repercussions may outdo the positive benefits.

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In many countries, the number of people suffering from stress is increasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to tackle it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In many parts of the world, stress is becoming increasingly common among the population. This essay will explain the main causes of this phenomenon, such as increased work pressure and time spent on the roads, and will propose viable solutions, including implementing work-life balance and a policy to reduce the use of private vehicles.

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Some people think the qualities a person needs to become successful in today’s world cannot be learned at a university or similar academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It's thought that to become qualified and successful in our world currently cannot be reached by learning at a university or similar academic centres . I partly agree with this perspective because some skills , you can't gain while studying at a university; however , jobs like a doctor and engineer should be learned in an academic institution .

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IELTS 13 TEST 4 Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy,with everything organised and in the correct place. What is your opinion about this? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many people beileve that it is significant to maintain a clean houses and offices, with everything placed in allocated places. I stronly agree with this opinion as I strictly follow this approach in both my home and work, and there are many fundamental reasons why to coincide with this thought.

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Some people believe that money makes life easier and more comfortable. Others think that a large amount of wealth brings more trouble. Do the advantages of having a lot of money outweigh the disadvantages?

Some people hold the view that having a high financial balance brings ease and comfort to their lives, whereas others say that having too much money may cause various issues and even severe depression. This essay will discuss both views; however, I will support the first statement more.

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Some people say that advertising is extremely succssesful at persuading us to buy things.Other people thinks that adv ertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is a debate over how advertising affects our lives, some saying that advertising influences us to buy products, others saying that advertising is not an unusual thing. In my opinion, advertising has a significant impact on our preferences.

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Some people think that local authorities should control where buildings can be constructed. Others think that everyone should be free to build where they like without permission.

There is a view that some communities think that local government have to control Zoned-for-manufacture land, while some population believe that individuals should have the freedom to build anywhere without seeking approval. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own view that regulated development is essential for sustainable development.

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New household appliances have resulted in more free time for women and has enabled them to both work and run a home with dependent children. What are the advantages for a family when the mother works? Do you think advantage outweigh diadvantages?

In recent years, advances in household technology have given mothers more free time, helping them balance work and childcare responsibilities. This essay will discuss the advantages of having working mothers in a family and argue that the benefits outweigh the drawbacks.

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The education you receive from your family is more important than the education you receive from school. To what extent do you agree with this statement and why?

It is often argued that what your family teaches you is more essential than what school does to you. I partly agree with this viewpoint because while your family directly affects your behaviour from early childhood, school education also has an impact on your social skills.

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Public libraries provide a large collection of books to read. Some people argue that they should also provide other hi-tech facilities like computers, Internet, CDs and DVDs. Do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Public libraries offer a wide variety of books for individuals. There are some who argue that they could provide technological facilities such as network access, CDs, DVDs, and computers. I agree with this view, as offering a variety of services and resources can significantly improve user experience and satisfaction.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and environment around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring out a change. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often argued that human activities have caused significant harm to plants and the environment worldwide, leading some to believe that the situation is beyond repair. However, I believe that while the environmental crisis is indeed severe, it is still possible to mitigate its effects through coordinated global efforts. This essay will explore both perspectives and explain why collective action remains a viable solution.

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Essay Question: Artists need a certain amount of freedom to develop their creativity. Some people think that artists should have total freedom to express any thoughts and ideas. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

It is widely recognised that every human being has the right to express their thoughts and ideas. Some people even argue that artists, who have more influence, should have total freedom to do so. However, from where I stand, I strongly disagree with that because dangerous thoughts and controversial debates may be harmful for citizens.

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Living in s country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious problems, as well as practical problems.

There is a view that speaking in a foreign language can lead to a number of serious problems for individuals , as well as issues related to daily communication and urgent situations. While some believe it could be a supportive idea, I personally agree that to learn other languages can help, such as speaking directly and locals and understanding them.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinionp.

A section of society harbours the belief that learning a foreign language is only beneficial when travelling or working in a foreign country. But others argue that it's providing a vast range of benefits. Albeit there is a dichotomy of views on this concern. But my favouritism is mostly bound with the latter perception.

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