IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 182

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook, Zalo,...) have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most of the interpersonal communication takes place online. More and more people decide to use social media rather than meet face-to-face with friends. I believe, that such an approach has a negative impact on individuals as well as society.

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Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think it has harmful ‎effects on lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.‎

In certain areas, fast food plays an important role in daily life. While it is argued that this may not have negative impacts on diet, I firmly agree with those who believe that fast food has dangerous effects on lifestyle in two areas.

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Young people prefer listening to music rather than listening to the news on the radio. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Provide reasons and examples for your opinion.

These days, global lifestyles are so varied from the prior time and we can see young generations have different behaviour from their parents such as they like to listen to music instead of new from Radio. In my opinion, this is a positive development while they do not know about the happened that is changing their world owing to the fact that when international citizens do not listen to or read the news that has a range of good and bad news, they won't have mental issues, and listen to music help people to do their work with high yield.

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some people say that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People held different views about whether the loss of certain species of fauna and flora is more important or whether other environmental problems are more urgent. Although there are serious arguments on both sides I believe there are more important problems such as global warming that influents humanity in several ways immediately, as well as, species of plants and animals. This essay demonstrates firstly the importance of natural diversity and the consequent results of the loss of this diversity followed by an analysis of global warming from other environmental problems and how it affects both humanity and other life forms.

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It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The topic of obesity has become a major debate in recent years. Some people argue that one of the main issues of obesity is fast food. And they believe that the government should place a tax to lower the amount of fast food consumed.

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Some people think that intelligence is innate while others believe that we can improve our intelligence through learning. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that the intelligence quotient depends on genes, while others think that you can develop it through doing work. Personally, I agree with the second statement and believe that everyone can improve their intelligence by being a hard worker.

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Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

To some people, the ones we meet at work are not only colleagues but also could be friends, therefore it is a good idea to socialise with them and the friendship made with our work partner could yield positive results. There is another point of view , however, a view that recognizes them as only the people we work with.

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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree? (phòng bệnh hơn chữa bệnh)

There are those who argue that prevention is more indispensable than cure, which implies that taking measures to avert health issues and diseases is significantly superior to treating them once they have occurred. This essay will explore the reasons why, in my opinion, treatment should be prioritized in government funding.

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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public outdoor places like squares and parks. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In recent years, many countries have developed public spaces in each city for people's activities. Personally, I completely agree that it is exceedingly important and support will be illustrated in the following paragraphs:

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child's development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is thought by some that having a fixed age of retirement at 65 years old for everyone in relationship with their occupations is not fair. They think that some kind of profession should deserve to retire and obtain a pension at an earlier stage of life. I totally agree with this statement and I will argue the reasons in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people believe that teaching children at home is best for a child’s development while others think that it is important for children to go to school. Discuss the advantages of both methods and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is thought by some that schools are the best place for kids to be taught and develop themselves, while others believe that the right place for this is at home. I will discuss the benefits of both cases and argue why I believe it is essential for kids to attend school.

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People living in the 21st century have a better life quality than those who lived in previous centuries. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

A lot of people believe that as time goes on the quality of life improves, however, other people disagree and claim that it was better living in the past. I believe that it is more convenient to live in the modern era rather than in the past centuries.

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The growing numbers of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with the health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical education lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The growing number of overweight people makes a health care system a more concerning issue to be tackled immediately. It is often believed that school education plays the most important role in encouraging exercise. I partially agree with this, for physical education at school encourages students to participate in different kinds of exercise regardless of the importance of food they eat at home to avoid obesity.

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Some people state arts courses such painting or drawing should not be made compulsory for high school students .To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art is an inseparable part of human existence; therefore, it is also a part of a high school programme. However, there is still a lack of consensus on whether it should be compulsory or not. While each of these views has both pros and cons, I believe that arts courses should be obligatory for all students.

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Air transport is increasingly used to export fruit and vegetables to countries where they cannot be grown or are out of season. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Fresh produce is more frequently being exported by air into countries where it is out of season or impossible to grow. The advantages of this are that consumers can enjoy a wider range of fresh fruit and vegetables all year and some countries rely on imported food to feed their people. However, this puts tremendous strain on the environment because of harmful farming methods and pollution produced by airplanes.

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In many countries, the government prioritises economic growth above all other concerns. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of this.

Governments in most countries consider economic growth as their top priority. The advantages to this are more job opportunities and foreign investments. The disadvantages to this are ignorance of humanitarian factors and environmental degradation.

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Many people are now opting to provide technology companies with their personal data in exchange for access to software. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, most people are willing to share their personal data with technology companies in order to use their software. Even though such behaviour has its advantages like reduced cost of purchase for users and low legal complications for the organizations, I believe the disadvantages like the risk of fraud and invasion of privacy outweigh its benefits.

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Some people think that universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, people's lifestyles are so varied from the prior owing to the fact that women like men can do a rage of the work, so a group of people believe that it is important that universities have the same figures for both genders in various fields. In my opinion, we have to think both sexes are the same as each other, and based on their exams accept them for every subject inasmuch as populations have different abilities; moreover, some works are better for one gender.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don't need and can't afford. What are the reasons of this behaviour? What action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Recently, irresponsible financial decisions are made by individuals. Moreover, it is a result of reckless spending. In this essay, it will be discussed how the educational system and consumerism play a significant role in this situation and how this problem could be solved.

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The first car appeared on British roads in 1888. By the year 2000 there may be as many as 29 million vehicles on British roads. Alternative forms of transport should be encouraged and international laws introduced to control car ownership and use. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

In recent times, the number of automobiles on British roads has increased. Some people believe that there will be approximately 29 million vehicles by the year 2000, which made them argue that there should be a replacement for cars and an international law to control car ownership and use. This essay agrees with the notion above because reducing the number of cars on roads will clear the air pollution and make the roads safer for cyclers.

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