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IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are spending more and more of their time indoors. What do you think are the causes of this problem? What measures could best be taken to solve it?

Nowadays, teens and preteens all over the world are more likely to spend time doing indoor activities rather than doing outdoor activities. I believe that it is because of the advanced technologies. Youngsters can play video games all day long or watch a marathon of cinema. In my view, the most effective way to quit this habit is to do more exercise. I will explain my point of view in the following paragraphs.
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Some people believe that young people should choose the jobs that they want, but often people think they should be more realistic, and think more about their future. Discuss both views a give own opinion.

Choosing a job is the main part of our lives; it is also hard for everyone. There are two opinions on choosing a profession . First, students must choose their future jobs based on their interests. Second, people should choose their profession more realistically.
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In some countries, it is possible to buy a wide variety of foods, which have been transported from all over the world. Do the benefits of this development outweigh its drawbacks?

Nowadays, it has been quite common that citizens in some countries can buy a wide range of foods transported from all over the world in their daily life, due to the advance of economy and transportation. In my view, this phenomenon has more positive effects.
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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

A lot of countries are seeing their population become an ageing population, many think this generates problems for the government while others believe it is beneficial if society has more senior citizens. Even though it may result in an increase in public spending, I believe the benefits of having a good reputation for the government outweigh the drawbacks it may have.
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Million of dollars are spent on space research every year. Some people argue that the money should be spent on improving living standards on Earth. Do you agree or disagree?

Improving living standards on the Earth is a priority, but improving space exploration can establish technological advancements and innovations that benefit the world. Contrary to my opinion, I firmly disagree with this notion. My explanation is justified further.
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as well as making money, business should also have social responsibilities, to what extend do you agree or disagree

In contemporary society, some people believe that the firm must discharge its public responsibility to return benefits to society. In contrast, others think there is no obligation for the company to take on civic responsibilities, and the company’s primary goal is to generate profits. However, I completely agree with the idea that corporations should spend some time addressing social issues.
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People are consuming more and more sugar-based drinks. Why? What can be done to reduce sugary drink consumption.

Presently, the consumption of sugar-based drinks such as Coca-Cola, Pepsi, and Sprite has drastically increased worldwide. There are several reasons for this trend, and some solutions to reduce the consumption of these drinks, which will be outlined below.
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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this hyper-competitive academic landscape, the relentless pursuit of academic excellence has led many students to be at war during exams; fighting to be the best of the best in their respective schools. This has recently caused a stir in the parent community, as they worry about their children's mental well-being. Undeniably, the harmless competition encourages young minds to thrive to be better, but at what cost? Some students are left burnt out as a result of cognitive overload. Therefore, is this healthy competition absolutely necessary? Or will it bring more harm than good? In this essay, I will discuss both views on the topic.
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All large companies should provide sports and community facilities to the local community. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that building sports and community facilities in the local community should be from all successful corporations. I completely agree with this statement because it can promote the company and is for the betterment of the locals.
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Some people have the opinion that big shopping malls are expensive places as they offer high costs for the products which can be bought at much cheaper prices from local shops. On the other hand, some people think that such malls are absolutely the best places to visit for shopping. Discuss both the opinions and give your own opinion.

It is generally believed that the big shopping malls often give higher cost for some products rather than local shops. However, some people say that shopping centres always become the best places for purchasing goods. In this essay, I will discuss both these views and try to draw a conclusion.
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Some people think that homework is unnecessary and should be banned in schools. Do you agree or disagree?

There is a debate about the relative importance of homework which is being given in schools, with some arguing that it is unimportant and should be forbidden. Although giving homework has significant positive effects on enhancing overall comprehension, In my view, there are a number of destructive influences that can lead to lethargy and a lack of time to do other leisure activities.
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In many countries, it is common for people to consume fast food. However, some people believe that fast food has too much influence on our lifestyle and die. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays, fast food restaurants are seemingly increasing day by day. A group of individuals adhere to the view that consuming fast food leads to urgent health issues. I partially agree with this viewpoint and I will elaborate my arguments in the following paragraphs.
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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook, Zalo,...) have a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most of the interpersonal communication takes place online. More and more people decide to use social media rather than meet face-to-face with friends. I believe, that such an approach has a negative impact on individuals as well as society.
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Fast food is a part of life in many places. Some people think it has harmful ‎effects on lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.‎

In certain areas, fast food plays an important role in daily life. While it is argued that this may not have negative impacts on diet, I firmly agree with those who believe that fast food has dangerous effects on lifestyle in two areas.
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Young people prefer listening to music rather than listening to the news on the radio. Is this a positive or a negative trend? Provide reasons and examples for your opinion.

These days, global lifestyles are so varied from the prior time and we can see young generations have different behaviour from their parents such as they like to listen to music instead of new from Radio. In my opinion, this is a positive development while they do not know about the happened that is changing their world owing to the fact that when international citizens do not listen to or read the news that has a range of good and bad news, they won't have mental issues, and listen to music help people to do their work with high yield.
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some people say that the environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People held different views about whether the loss of certain species of fauna and flora is more important or whether other environmental problems are more urgent. Although there are serious arguments on both sides I believe there are more important problems such as global warming that influents humanity in several ways immediately, as well as, species of plants and animals. This essay demonstrates firstly the importance of natural diversity and the consequent results of the loss of this diversity followed by an analysis of global warming from other environmental problems and how it affects both humanity and other life forms.
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It seems clear that obesity in today’s society is to some extent due to the availability of fast food. Should governments place a tax on fast food to reduce the amount of fast food consumed? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

The topic of obesity has become a major debate in recent years. Some people argue that one of the main issues of obesity is fast food. And they believe that the government should place a tax to lower the amount of fast food consumed.
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Some people think that intelligence is innate while others believe that we can improve our intelligence through learning. discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Some would argue that the intelligence quotient depends on genes, while others think that you can develop it through doing work. Personally, I agree with the second statement and believe that everyone can improve their intelligence by being a hard worker.
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Some people think that it's a good idea to socialise with work colleagues during evenings and weekends. Other people think it’s important to keep working life completely separate from social life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

To some people, the ones we meet at work are not only colleagues but also could be friends, therefore it is a good idea to socialise with them and the friendship made with our work partner could yield positive results. There is another point of view , however, a view that recognizes them as only the people we work with.
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The prevention of health problems and illness is more important than treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this. To what extent do you agree? (phòng bệnh hơn chữa bệnh)

There are those who argue that prevention is more indispensable than cure, which implies that taking measures to avert health issues and diseases is significantly superior to treating them once they have occurred. This essay will explore the reasons why, in my opinion, treatment should be prioritized in government funding.
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