IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 513

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Studies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can get a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Many studies have shown that criminals are illiterate. Keeping this matters, some people think that gives training when criminals are in prison. Therefore, when they leave jail that they have the opportunity to get a job. I totally agree with this notion. Hence, I will explain the positive impact of this matter in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people think that children should learn world history. Others believe that it is more important to learn the history of their own country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been argued that students should prioritise learning the world's well-known past history while some believe that is it more crucial to learn their own local history. Despite the importance to learn more about our own nation's history, I agree that it is important to also have knowledge about past events in the world.

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It is important for people to take risks, but in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh its disadvantages?

To bear uncertainties is crucial either in a person's career or in day-to-day life.This essay will discuss both views and in my opinion, I believe that challenging brings a number of benefits that outweighs its disadvantages.

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Fewer students are studying science at school and university, favouring more computer based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development? What are the reasons for this?

Since the importance of digital literacy in workplaces has increased, it is a pressing concern in the present world. In connection with this, more students prefer more data classes not to mention only a few of them go to academic institutions towards studying science. I personally believe that it is detrimental impacts on our society and examine the reasons for this phenomenon.

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1. WHAT MODES OF TRANSPORTATION ARE COMMONLY USED IN YOUR CITY? 2. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE SOME OF THE ADVANTAGES OF BUS TRAVEL? 3. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE SOME DRAWBACKS OF BUS TRAVEL?

Public transportation is one of the most feasible solutions for protecting the environment. It reduces the number of private cars hence the decrease of air polluting gases. Considering this, many governments have implemented initiatives that will encourage citizens to use more buses, trams, metros, etc. In my city, Izmir, the metro is the most commonly used transportation. This is because it is faster than other forms of travelling. Although it has some disadvantages compared to the metro, buses are also used very often by individuals living in Izmir.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. Why? Effects on society?

In recent years, students are most likely not to choose science subject as their major in many countries. Numerous negative effects have arisen as a result of this. This essay elaborates on the reasons contributing to this problem and the impacts of this phenomenon.

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“Some people believe that exercise is the key to good health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important.” Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people have different approaches to adopting a healthy life: some believe that exercising is the key to good health and some favour a balanced diet to be more important. There are strong arguments on both sides of these two suggestions, which we will discuss here with a concluded opinion.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the contemporary world, the youngster population has far exceeded the elderly people in several places, it is highly common in particular countries which are developed, in this essay, I will detail why am I completely considering that the advantages outnumber the disadvantages.

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With the development of modern society is the loss of traditional ways of life Is it important to keep our traditional ways of life? How can this be achieved?

In the modern world, values of tradition and custom are being diminished and it has emerged as a pressing issue in contemporary society, with serious implications. This essay will analyse the underlying problems and propose feasible solutions to address the challenges posed by heritage.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problem as result. Why do many working People not get enough exceise? what can be done about this problem?

In the modern world, folk have plenty of tasks and they can not ignore their duty, therefore, they get some healthcare problems , such as heart disease, obesity, high blood pressure,…..etc. Also, it is undeniable that lack of healthcare through lesser spare time for working out is one of the most challenging issues in the Middle East .

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Some people think that it would be better for larger companies and industy to move to regional areas outside large urban centers. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The shift of major multinationals from metro cities to rural areas is thought by some people to be a good decision for companies. In my opinion, I think that moving from urban areas to regional areas can bring more problems for MNCs compared to any advantages it might bring.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing. Do you agree or disagree?

In recent years the trend of online shopping has increased its popularity exponentially. Many started to believe that this will lead to the disappearance of all stores in towns and cities. While this trend is valid and online shopping has many advantages, I wouldn’t necessarily agree with the opinion presented for several reasons. This essay will disclose the heftiest of them.

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Many children around us are obese and overweight. What according to you has led to this common problem amongst children? What measures can be taken to resolve this?

The majority of teenagers are facing obesity which can bring about several problems. I believe, there are many factors contributing to this issue, including unhealthy diet and wrong lifestyle.

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Some people believe that a country will benefit greatly by a high percentage of young people going to universities. Others argue that it only leads to a higher unemployment rate. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

The increasing enrollment for higher degrees is a pressing concern in the present world. In connection with this, the majority of individuals indicate that this phenomenon will bring beneficial to nations since lots of teenagers go to college. On the other hand, some figures that it forwards a high amount of jobless. This will examine both arguments and I contend that the latter is better than the former.

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Nowadays more people are traveling to other countries. Why is this happening? Is it a negative or positive development?

There is no doubt that travelling has become an essential part of human life. This essay will discuss the main reasons why the popularity of travelling is increasing and its positive effects.

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Nowadays, many people drive to work or school instead of walking, cycling or using public transport. Does this trend have more advantages or more disadvantages?

Cutting-edge technology has revolutionized the way we commute. Recently, people choose to drive to work or school rather than the public transportation system. This trend has brought both advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the disadvantages surpass the advantages brought by it which will be elaborated on in the subsequent paragraphs.

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These days, people are living into their 90s and beyond. As a result, there is an increasing concern about care for the elderly. Do you think it is the responsibility of the family to care for their elderly members of should the government be held responsible?

Nowadays, individuals are living into their 90’s and more. Consequently, there is rising concern about care for senior citizens. In my opinion, I believe that both family members and the government ought to take care of elderly members.

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Some people prefer living in a house while others feel that there are more advantages to living in an apartment. Are there more advantages than disadvantages of living in an apartment?

In this globalization era, property prices are getting higher and higher due to the increasing number of human beings. Some people prefer buying a house while others say they choose to live in an apartment. I will elaborate on why the advantages of owning properties outweigh its disadvantages, along with some supporting experiences from Indonesian lifestyle misalnya

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As countries develop, more and more people buy and use their own cars. Do the advantages for individuals outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

Nowadays, economic growth and environmental green are the goal of all nations. Some people believe that economic success can be hand in hand with the nature environment. Others argue it is extreme ends to achieve this harmony in life. In my opinion, I think it is possible to be economically success with sustainable green nature.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

The debate about whether experimentation on animals is illegal or inhumane has always been an issue. Some people believe that Animals should not be killed for the benefit of human beings, while others argue that people are more likely to be saved and that using animals is a must. In this essay, I will explore both arguments and draw a conclusion.

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