IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 511

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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1. In your own opinion, what do you think are the factors that contribute to longevity (living a long time? List some examples and reasons to support your answer.

In contemporary society, people are using a variety of methods in order to live longer. I will discuss some of the approaches that may increase human lifespan.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Today high sugar-level products are contained in many sources of food and drink, especially mass-produced goods. The more people can easily access those sugary products, the worse their health is going to be. I completely agree with the concept of increasing the price of products including sugar to adjust their habit of using less sugar and for themselves to replace the chemical sugar with the natural or non-sugar ones.

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Young people who commit serious crimes should be punished in the same way as adults. To what extent do you agree of disagree?

With the increasing youth crime rate worldwide, it fuels a debate about whether young criminals committing serious crimes should be punished in the same way as that of their adult counterparts. From my perspective, it is better to offer more alternatives for them to reintegrate into the community.

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The spread of urban areas has led to deforestation and has caused many animal species to become endangered. Environmental groups are urging governments to protect these animals. What are the benefits of protecting animals? What can governments do to protect animals?

Over the years, the Earth has seen many changes and with the continuing urbanization facing a critical issue of deforestation. In many places, cutting off large numbers of trees has resulted in the loss of the natural habitat of some animals and birds, and subsequently led to their extinction. In order to protect such endangered animals, many environmentalists are demanding laws and actions from the authorities against deforestation and also to create awareness in society. This essay will discuss the advantages of saving these species and also what measures can be taken by the government to do so.

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“Learning to manage money is one of the key aspects of adult life. How in your view can individuals best learn to manage their money?

Knowing how to control the money train has been undeniably a great functional ability, particularly for adults since money was widespread. Financial management is not a skill that can be taken for granted as it is a way of achieving goals in the long term, and it provides self-esteem to those who have it. It can be viewed that there are two main methods of absorbing how to use payment: formal training and practical experience.

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Some people think that children should only read academic books. Others believe that reading books for pleasure is equally important. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Education during school years is pivotal in shaping an individual's future. While some argue that this period should solely be dedicated to academic pursuits, others emphasize the significance of exploring non-educational books. In this essay, I will explore both perspectives and argue that children should engage in a broader range of reading materials, including non-academic ones.

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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects. Others believe it is more important to give all the time and attention to studying for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

As some students get into universities, they are interested in studying and learning various subjects in addition to their field study. Nevertheless, it is believed by a number of students spending all their time being qualified in the main subjects. In my opinion, being multi-tasked is more effective and profitable these days.

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Some people think that newspaper will provide more information than some people think media will provide more information. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

At the present age, it is argued that traditional methods are more preferable, while others prefer materials shared in media. This essay will agree with the latter statement because the transmission of information by sources such as TV and the Internet is being more accessible.

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Some people say that outdoor activities bring benefits to children's development rather than computer games, To what extent do you agree/disagree?

Many people believe that children should be encouraged to spend time on outdoor activities' engagement instead of playing video games. From my perspective, I partially agree with this opinion.

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Some people believe that education is the key to tackling hunger worldwide while others feel that the answer is in food aid. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Many people believe that enlighting people with an advanced schooling system is the answer to the problem of hunger around the world. Others argue that sending food and other commodities as a form of aid is the solution. While in some countries food aid is the sole way of alleviating the problem of hunger, I will argue that empowering education can be the key to accomplishing this problem worldwide.

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Studies show that many criminals have a low level of education. For this reason, people believe that the best way to reduce crime is to educate people in prison so they can get a job when leave prison. Do you agree or disagree?

Many studies have shown that criminals are illiterate. Keeping this matters, some people think that gives training when criminals are in prison. Therefore, when they leave jail that they have the opportunity to get a job. I totally agree with this notion. Hence, I will explain the positive impact of this matter in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people think that children should learn world history. Others believe that it is more important to learn the history of their own country. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It has been argued that students should prioritise learning the world's well-known past history while some believe that is it more crucial to learn their own local history. Despite the importance to learn more about our own nation's history, I agree that it is important to also have knowledge about past events in the world.

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It is important for people to take risks, but in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh its disadvantages?

To bear uncertainties is crucial either in a person's career or in day-to-day life.This essay will discuss both views and in my opinion, I believe that challenging brings a number of benefits that outweighs its disadvantages.

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Fewer students are studying science at school and university, favouring more computer based subjects instead. Is this a positive or negative development? What are the reasons for this?

Since the importance of digital literacy in workplaces has increased, it is a pressing concern in the present world. In connection with this, more students prefer more data classes not to mention only a few of them go to academic institutions towards studying science. I personally believe that it is detrimental impacts on our society and examine the reasons for this phenomenon.

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1. WHAT MODES OF TRANSPORTATION ARE COMMONLY USED IN YOUR CITY? 2. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE SOME OF THE ADVANTAGES OF BUS TRAVEL? 3. WHAT DO YOU THINK ARE SOME DRAWBACKS OF BUS TRAVEL?

Public transportation is one of the most feasible solutions for protecting the environment. It reduces the number of private cars hence the decrease of air polluting gases. Considering this, many governments have implemented initiatives that will encourage citizens to use more buses, trams, metros, etc. In my city, Izmir, the metro is the most commonly used transportation. This is because it is faster than other forms of travelling. Although it has some disadvantages compared to the metro, buses are also used very often by individuals living in Izmir.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. Why? Effects on society?

In recent years, students are most likely not to choose science subject as their major in many countries. Numerous negative effects have arisen as a result of this. This essay elaborates on the reasons contributing to this problem and the impacts of this phenomenon.

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“Some people believe that exercise is the key to good health while others feel that having a balanced diet is more important.” Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Many people have different approaches to adopting a healthy life: some believe that exercising is the key to good health and some favour a balanced diet to be more important. There are strong arguments on both sides of these two suggestions, which we will discuss here with a concluded opinion.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

In the contemporary world, the youngster population has far exceeded the elderly people in several places, it is highly common in particular countries which are developed, in this essay, I will detail why am I completely considering that the advantages outnumber the disadvantages.

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With the development of modern society is the loss of traditional ways of life Is it important to keep our traditional ways of life? How can this be achieved?

In the modern world, values of tradition and custom are being diminished and it has emerged as a pressing issue in contemporary society, with serious implications. This essay will analyse the underlying problems and propose feasible solutions to address the challenges posed by heritage.

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Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time, and have health problem as result. Why do many working People not get enough exceise? what can be done about this problem?

In the modern world, folk have plenty of tasks and they can not ignore their duty, therefore, they get some healthcare problems , such as heart disease, obesity, high blood pressure,…..etc. Also, it is undeniable that lack of healthcare through lesser spare time for working out is one of the most challenging issues in the Middle East .

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