IELTS Writing Samples Band 7. Page 62

IELTS Writing Samples Band 7

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Most Countries allow 18 year olds to start driving a car. Some say it is good to allow it at this age, while others think that the age to start driving should be at least 25. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is a huge debate on whether when is an appropriate age for driving, while many support the generalized legal age of 18, some argue that it needs to be increased to at least 25. In my personal view, I support the former opinion to be recognized as the legal driving age, and I would discuss both viewpoints as follows.

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Walking is known to be beneficial for health but these days the number of people walking has reduced a lot. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this situation?

Nowadays, It has been observed that many people lead sedentary lifestyles, despite the fact that activities such as walking are essential for well-being and longevity. In this essay, I will explore what are the main reasons for this issue and secondly , I will explore some potential remedies to address it.

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated by modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicines should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree

It has obviously been observed that the population has considerably increased, which has affected many various sectors, particularly healthcare, it seeks out a modern holistic approach, is not enough to address all challenges. A portion of the population believes in traditional antibiotics as an alternative allopathic remedy and I believe that incorporating both new medicines and cultural antibiotics could be a potential solution .

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Despite the large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world.What problems are associated with that? What solutions can you suggest?

These days, individuals are becoming inactive and prefer a more sedentary lifestyle despite the numerous number of gyms available.There are some issues that have arisen from this and I believe there are some measures that can be taken to tackle these problems.

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The roads in major cities today are often difficult to travel on. What are the causes of this situation ? What is the solution ?

In recent years, traffic congestion has become a pressing concern as it significantly affects and requires immediate attention. This essay will explore the main reasons why it is difficult to travel on city roads and propose effective solutions to address it.

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Nowadays, people travel to other countries for a holidays. Why people do so? is this a positive or a negative development for the countries they travel to?

It is argued that individuals are travelling to other nations to enjoy their holidays with their friends and family. This essay will discuss the main reasons why people are spending their time in other countries and I opine, it is considered as a positive development as it leads to the economic development of the country.

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Despite the large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with that? What solution can you suggest?

There is a problem with why nowadays people do not go to any physical activity and this brings some kind of health problem and affects people from all walks of life. This issue arises due to various factors, including overworking and due to the lack of a daily routine. However, several measures can be taken to address this problem effectively.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on computers. What are some of the problems associated with reliance on computers, and what are the possible solution.

Learners are becoming more and more dependent on computers and technology. This essay will discuss problems associated with the same and give viable solutions for them.

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Prison is the common way most countries try to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide the public a better education. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

In many nations, prison is considered the most effective way to tackle crimes. Nevertheless, one may argue that developing education is a better alternative. This essay will explore why I believe that education cannot be as productive as prison.

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The roads in major cities today are often difficult to travel on. What are the causes of this situation ? What is the solution ?

In many major cities today, travelling on the roads has become a difficult and frustrating experience. This essay will explore the causes of this problem and suggest possible solutions.

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Why people are working longer hours in the office. Provide solutions.

It has been universally acknowledged that the problem of working longer hours in the offices is escalating at an alarming rate in the current scenario. This has been of depressing magnitude. Although a plethora of reasons are there, some possible measures are also available to cure this grave concern.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Many children today spend excessive time on smartphones. This is primarily due to parental influence and the increasing role of technology in daily life. While this trend has some advantages, it also has significant drawbacks.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem?

Despite advancements in agricultural technology, hunger remains a critical issue worldwide. This essay will discuss reasons for hunger such as low economic levels in certain countries and rapid population growth and then argue that a comprehensive approach to food distribution, targeted economic reforms and sustainable agricultural practices are the most efficient solutions.

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Some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime. Others think that the circumstances of a crime, and the reason for committing it should be always considered when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The debate around whether there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime or if the circumstances and motives behind a crime should always be considered is a thought-provoking one. Both perspectives offer compelling arguments, and striking the right balance between fairness and justice is essential.

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Due to high unemployment rate in some countries, pupils should be offered only primary education and not secondary education since there is no jobs. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, unemployment is a global concern. It is believed that individuals must be admitted for basic scholarship only and not for upper level of schooling as there are no jobs, the reason being the higher jobless rate in various countries. I personally disagree to a great extent. My opinion is justified in the ensuing paragraphs.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects. But others believe that teenagers should focus on the subject they are good at or find the most interesting. Discuss both sides and give more options.

There is an ongoing debate about whether students should study a wide range of subjects or focus on one key discipline. While some believe a broad education creates well-rounded individuals, others argue that specialization leads to expertise and career success. This essay will discuss both perspectives before presenting my own view.

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Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

It is argued that the growth of the economy and more profits are the forces behind innovation, while others opine that social and environmental concerns should be prioritized. This essay will discuss both perspectives, before concluding with a balanced view.

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The world has many towns and cities constructed in previous centuries that were more suitable and livable for people in those times than they are now. What problems will this cause? What can be done to solve these problems?

In recent years, old metro and urban areas have become a pressing concern as they significantly affect and require immediate attention. This essay will explore the main reasons behind the ancient cities and towns which were more comfortable to live in and propose effective solutions to address it.

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day our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation.

In the modern world, computer technology underpins critical sectors such as communication, medicine, and transport. While some argue that this heavy reliance creates risks, I disagree that it leads to a dangerous situation. Instead, I believe the benefits far outweigh any threats, provided adequate safeguards are in place.

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Successful sport professionals can earn a great deal more money than other people in other important professions. Some people think this is fully justified while others think it's unfair. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The influence of celebrities and athletes on today's society is significant. In this regard, many people claim that sportsmen often earn a decent revenue than others, which is completely justified due to their struggle and hard work, while others reject this notion. The substantial domination of this trend has sparked controversy among the crowd. In my opinion, high pay completely relies on an individual's ability and consistency. This essay will further elaborate on both perspectives and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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