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Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time?

With the increasing competition in education, whether children should devote their free time also to academic activities has been a topic of widespread debate. There are strong arguments on both sides, which I hope to give a bipartisan view of in my following statements.
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Governments should spend funds on Elementary School while other people say that it a should be spent on high school. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this present scenario, it is a perpetual dilemma as to whether it is the elementary institution or the high school, which one should get more government funds, remains a source of controversy. Although elementary institutions create the base of a person, I believe that more funds should be spent on high schools. This disquisition will explicate both stances along with the reasons to agree with the latter opinion.
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Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this.

The relative importance of parents and teachers is a frequent topic of discussion when people try to understand how to educate children to be good members of society. In my opinion, both are critical, and we need to dig deeper into their roles to understand this.
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Although many people value their public parks, this space could be better used for other purposes such as residential areas for ever growing population or to develop business and boost economies. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that there is a growing demand for more land to be used for residential areas and economic development purposes. However, I totally disagree with the idea that abandoning public parks is the best way to solve this problem.
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Countries are becoming some and some People can buy Same World. positive or be cause products from anyoshers in the negative development.

In this present scenario, it is widely seen that due to globalization, populations can get any product from anywhere on this planet earth. There are both advantages and disadvantages associated with this trend, and therefore, this essay will explicate why it is neither a wholly positive nor negative development.
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‘It is important for foreigners to know something about the history and culture of the country they live in.’ Discuss.

It is common these days that people are shifting to other nations for myriad reasons. If they choose to live in a foreign it might be possible due to one or more of the three aspects, such as, if you work there or if you are studying there or if you are settled there. For all these reasons, It is mandatory to get some basic knowledge about the country's past as well as culture in order to live hassle-free life there.
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In the future, more people will choose to go holiday in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday. Do you agree or disagree?

Recent predictions state that many people will prefer to visit their home country on vacations instead of travelling to foreign countries. In my view, I totally agree with this statement because there are many reasons such as the coronavirus pandemic, economic downturns as well as global insecurity.
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The dangers of smoking are well known, yet many people continue with this habit. What are the causes of this? How can we reduce smoking in society?

It is the fact,that smoking is very harmful to organisms, but despite this, a lot of men still keep on with this bad addiction. This essay will discuss the causes of it and possible solutions.
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In many cities the use of video cameras in public places is being increased in order to reduce crime, but some people believe that these measures restrict our individual freedom. Do the benefits of increased security outweigh the drawbacks?

In this modern world the causes of crime are shooting up, and some cities already implemented cameras for safety reasons. But at the same ,time some are saying this restricts individual freedom. In my ,opinion this system definitely benefits and outweighs the drawbacks. The following paragraphs discuss its advantages and disadvantages.
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All education and healthcare should be funded by the government and free for everyone. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion ?

Equality among citizens should be guaranteed by a country, especially in the education and medical care area. There is no shortage of a debate on whether the government should spend money on all educational and healthcare-related services but I completely agree with the statement. I feel this way for two reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
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Some people say that e-boos and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspapers and magazines. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, technology equipment is quite famous in the world. Many people say that the traditional newspapers and magazines will be totally replaced with e-books and modern technology. I strongly agreed that the e-book and modern machinery will totally replace the traditional newspapers and magazines.
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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience. 250 words.

Over the last decade, obesity in children is one of the biggest concerns in urban areas across developed countries. There are many reasons for the overweight issue, which seen in kids, in the below paragraphs I will explore two causes that include they eat fast food & lack of physical activity, and also effects like health issues and cannot join desired employment.
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The film is a less important form of art and literature. To what extent do you agree?

Cinema was always in the corner of attention among the other sort of literature or art. However, some argue movies are less important than other fields. But I think the film industry has plenty of advantages which I will explain some of them in forthcoming paragraphs.
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Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that it is more advantageous to choose a job with a high wage, even if it does not appeal at all. I completely disagree with this opinion and I think that job satisfaction is much more crucial than salary as it gives a sense of fulfilment and keeps one motivated.
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Information technology enables many people to do their work outside their workplace (e.g. at home, when traveling, etc.). Do the benefits of this mobility outweigh the disadvantages?

The work from the remote is continuously rising. The employees can communicate over video calls and emails and complete their tasks. I believe there are more advantages than disadvantages. Employees can spend time with their families and also it will reduce environmental problems in metro cities.
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In many countries the number of people aged 15 and younger is increasing. What are the present effects of this trend? How will it affect the world in the future?

A substantial rise in the number of people aged 15 and below in many countries has significant positive impacts on societies, for example, growth in educational businesses and children related businesses. Also, it will generate a large number of workers for communities in the near future, in my opinion. A large number of children, however, might have negative effects as well.
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People nowadays tend to have children at older age. Do the advantages outweigh of the disadvantages?

These days, most married couples have a tendency to give birth to offspring at an older phase of life. This trend can avail little more time for the parents to make necessary arrangements for the newborn. Also, it might result in incapability to reproduce. This essay will discuss both the gains and losses of giving birth at a later age.
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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?

Nowadays, being overweight in all age groups is becoming a concerning issue throughout the world. Obesity has been caused by various factors like sedentary lifestyle, fast food and work-related stress. In this essay I am looking at these reasons and suggesting some solutions.
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Prison is the common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to provide people a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

Although sending someone to prison is the common way to control crime in many countries, enhancing education can be more effective to eliminate the problem from its root. In my opinion, I disagree with this statement because it is unreasonable to compare these two methods as each of them addresses the issue in different ways.
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Today children spend a lot of their free time watching TV. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages of this practice?

In contemporary settings of advanced media, children rather invest their leisure time in watching television. However, I considerably support the idea that its impact on juveniles, in terms of health and intelligence outweighs its advantages.
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