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IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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every year several languages die out.somepeople think that is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. to what extent do you agree or disagree whith this notion?

With each passing year, a few lingos vanish which is not a grave concern since it is good as a few dialects will make human lives easier. I completely agree with the given mandate because it brings many benefits: easy communication and more opportunities for study and work.

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In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

In today’s modern world, on various parts of the Earth native traditions and cultures are concealing as time passes. This phenomenon can ban people from tourists' money, however, the government of each country can have a positive role in this situation which this essay discussed it.

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Some people choose to eat no meat or fish. They believe that this is not only better for their own health but also benefits the world as a whole. Discuss this view and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

Few individuals prefer not to consume non-vegetarian foods such as fish and meat as they reckon that doing so has significant advantages to their own health as well as the entire ecosystem. I completely agree that animal slaughter and consumption must be banned because a myriad of viral and bacterial diseases in the world originate from the intake of these things.

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Some say that because many people are living much longer, the age at which people retire from work should be raised considerably.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is an indisputable fact that over the last few years, the lifespan of humans increases because of various reasons such as developed medicine machines or improving health services. Thus, some believe that the age of retirement should be raised. Personally, I do not concur with this idea. In the sentences that follow, I will underline my viewpoint and provide pertinent instances .nn

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It is impossible to help all the people in the world, so governments should only focus on people in their own countries. Do you agree or disagree?

No one can deny that All over the world individuals try to help poor people but it is not possible to help everyone, so authorities trying to provide good facilities for their own national citizens. I agree with this notion, Good to help for homeless is massive and it's a good effect on their new youths I discuss will in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Advertisements are becoming more and more common nowadays. Is it a positive or a negative development?

These days, advertisements have an irrefutable role in our life, and it is rising increasingly due to development in technology. Although it has some benefits, I think the drawbacks outweigh the advantages. This essay will mention some of them.

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In many countries, children today have more freedom than they used to. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Juveniles have fewer prohibitions as compared to the past in a few nations. While some people are struggling with this switch, I would argue that overall, it has been a positive development as it assists them to become independent and psychologically healthy.

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In many cities, there is little control on the design and construction of new houses. Some people think that people can choose to build houses in their own style as the old house style in local areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

There is the freedom to build new homes according to dwellers' favourite outlooks in a few urban areas. It is generally thought by folks that they can select their desired housing styles. Despite this scenario will distort the beauty of cities, I reckon that desirable structures of houses are more advantageous as they provide more comfort levels and the ability to make homes within budgets.

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Some parents allow their teenage children to live independently, away from home. Other parents don’t want their teenage children to live away from them. Which do you think is better and why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer

Nowadays more and more adolescents are becoming independent, living away from residence. While some people opine that this will enable them to learn all aspects of life, others argue that this might render more problems for them than benefits. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, while I support my view for the latter opinion.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The 21st century is a world of technology, and every person on the planet has a cell phone. Youths who have grown up in these circumstances are going to use smartphones. I believe that children should not spend their day on their handphones daily. The reasons are twofold.

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The increase in the amount of traffic is responsible for growing countries in many large cities and this has resulted in more traffic congestion particularly in rush hours. What changes could be taken to deal with this problem?

Many metropolitan cities of developing nations face huge traffic issues, especially in peak hours which further leads to more congested roads. To tackle this situation, Government should place traffic police and signals in those areas, charge huge fines to those who fail to abide by the rules, and also increase awareness among people on the alternate routes.

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Write about the following topic. People should choose their course of study not on the basis of their own interests, but based on the kinds of jobs they can get. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People's interests could be different for many reasons like the environment, the support etcetera. But not all attention could be useful in work life. Many people said studying is based on the kinds of careers they can get not on their own attention. This essay will analyse both views.

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Some people argue that companies and private individuals, rather than governments, should pay to clean up the pollution that they produced. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Pollution and its cost of removal have become one of the most international and arguable topics. Some people believe that manufacturers and individuals have to be responsible for the disposal expenses more than the government. I totally agree with this statement and I will discuss the reasons in this essay.

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Today, people can use the internet to learn about the culture and lifestyle of the people of other countries. So, there is no need to travel to other countries to learn their culture. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that people can get information about other nations' cultures online instead of visiting that country. I completely disagree with this statement, the impending essay will discuss the same with a logical conclusion.

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Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is considered that the government should use the national budget for improving the rail track system rather than for upgrading roads. I disagree that railways should be spent more money on than road surfaces. The essay will analyse how building and fixing roads can help to enhance goods and transport circulation as well as to reduce accident rates to support this thesis.

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Some people think that is a government should be responsible for improving public health. Others, however, believe that everyone in the community should take part in this issue. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A highly controversial topic today relates to whether community wellness should be in charge of the authority or each member of society. This essay will examine both viewpoints and then explain why I believe social well-being is a mutual responsibility of both sides.

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The increase in the production of consumer goods results in damage to the natural environment. What are the causes of this? What can be done to solve this problem?

Due to industrialization and advanced technologies, today's factories are able to produce a huge amount of goods. Therefore, producing myriad commodities also means that mankind is damaging the planet. The causes of this issue and feasible solutions will be explained in this essay.

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Nowadays, many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter?

While the COVID pandemic was a terrible tragedy, what emerged from it was a new way for companies to conduct their business. Working from home was very rare pre-covid, but now it's extremely common. In my opinion, the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages, for both the companies and workers. This essay will discuss both advantages and disadvantages.

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

the rapid evolution of technology created a new method of reading news. earlier, people used to buy newspapers to stay up to date however, nowadays they tend to access the internet to check what is going on around the world. I believe that the internet and social media platforms are capable of replacing the traditional method.

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Some feel that individuals should try to assimilate completely to the country where they live while others feel it is more important to preserve their native culture. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

On the one hand, few people believe that a person should attempt to inculcate the tradition and culture of the nation they currently reside in. On the other hand, other people reckon that it is paramount to conserve the rich cultural heritage of their place of your origin. In my opinion, it is important to understand foreign cultures, however, it is more predominant to look after our own roots.

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