IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5. Page 272

IELTS Writing Samples Band 8.5

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many opine that it is a suitable way to share information that is related to scientific research ,trade and the academic world as much as possible. However ,some people claim that these should be available for all the population. From my point of view , this kind of information should be kept in a safe place instead of shared freely.

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress and how can we reduce it?

These days, in modern society, people are becoming more and more stressed out due to a wide range of different reasons. Such mental turbulence could even lead to demise in many cases. This essay would set out some causing elements and conceivable solutions to eliminate such a phenomenon.

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Today, wordly corona virus widespread become every nation problem, including education sector and it make many educational officers and experts suggest the government to spent more budget for free internet access. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In our new era, nations have been gripped by many issues, especially the education part of the government, and lots of authorities advocate that it is better to pour more money on accessing the internet for the purpose of free usage. I believe it would consider as one of the notions, and I totally agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that using animals to test the safety of human medicines is cruel and unwarranted, whereas others feel it is a medical necessity. Discuss both views and state your own opinion.

Every life is precious and should be treated as such. However, when a new disease appears on the scene, finding the right medication might mean experimenting with animal life as a means for testing. There are arguments for and against this idea of using animals for this purpose with many suggesting that it is unnatural to do so while others concur with it. Personally, I agree with the use of animals as laboratory rats. This essay will discuss both of these views and reflect my opinion.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Subjects that should be taught in educational institutes is contentious topic these days.As one section of the society believe that learners must be given the freedom to choose their favourite subjects at the college.While others assert that the universities must teach them the subjects that are useful for them in future and their course may relate to the IT sector.As far as my views are concerned,I profoundly assert that pupils must be given an independent choice to select their subjects.However,I would like to cast light on both views in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Today more people are travelling than ever before. Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveller?

Nowadays, we have more opportunities to travel and it's the best way to spend holidays. It's very hard to think about the past time when one person could live a whole life in one country even one city because he couldn't travel out.

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Now a days, we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can government do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

In our new world, the number of trashes that the human race produced increased significantly. I assume that it could arise from numerous issues, Namely growing in population and industries. This issue could not be solved readily by either governments or people.

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Online shopping is replacing the conventional shopping stores. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, there are a lot of online shopping platforms that can be accessed by consumers. Most buyers choose to shop online because it is easy and practical. Online shopping habits will generate positive impacts on national development. in this essay, I am going to explain the positive impacts of online shopping.

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More and more companies are allowing employees to work at home.

These days, many companies tend to give opportunities to their employees to work at home rather than working at the office. This idea can be both advantageous and disadvantageous for all companies and workers. In the following paragraphs, the benefits and drawbacks of this issue will be discussed.

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The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinges upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The opinion is divided as to whether or not social media is impacting society positively. Although some persons argue that online platforms are causing limitations to private life, however, others believe that it has made communication easier which I completely agree with. This essay will discuss both views in detail followed by a reasoned conclusion thereafter.

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Some people think the main purpose of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather than to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many are of the opinion that the primary role of schools is to create good citizens, instead of simply working towards individual betterment. In my opinion, schools should aim to elevate the individual, not impose conformity.

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Many young people today leave school with a negative attitude towards learning. What is the reason, and what can be done to encourage a positive attitude to learning.

Recent studies have shown that adolescents tend to be less motivated to learn and are more likely to leave school in many countries. This essay will explain the reason behind the situation and highlight my opinion on what can be done in order to encourage young people to involve in learning.

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More and more people are suffering from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine should be encouraged. To what extent do you agree?

"A healthy people leads to a healthy nation" so goes the old adage. Every country needs to keep its citizens healthy if it is to remain productive for many years to come. The use of modern medicines, however, has come under attack with many suggesting that we should return to traditional medicine use. In my opinion, I strongly agree with this notion based on the benefits that can be derived from it. This essay will tackle reasons why a return to traditional medicine use is vital in order to sustain good health.

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Some people feel paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers with relevant examples from your knowledge of experience.

It's a debate among people that it's not good to follow celebrities for photos during their leisure time other says it is a new trend for a frame . I would like to explain my point of view on both sides. This essay will demonstrate the advantages as well as disadvantages of such behaviour.

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In many countries plastic shopping bags are the main source of rubbish. They cause water and land pollution, and so they should be banned. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Plastic wastes are extremely injurious to people as well as to the ecosystem. In most countries, the primary source of pollution is due to polythene bags which are provided in shopping centres. They are contributing a major role in contaminating the land as well as the water bodies. In my opinion, I agree that the usage of them must be banned.

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Some people think that it is necessary to travel abroad to learn about other countries, while other people think that it is not necessary to travel abroad because all the information can be seen on TV and the Internet. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

It is thought by some public that it is vital to move to other lands to know regarding other places, Whilst,on the other hand some individuals feel that it is unnecessary to go foreign nations as total info can be watched on television and cyberspace. This essay discusses both sides of the argument and then in the end I will make my own perception about the topic.

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Some people think that the best way to solve environmental problems is to increase the price of fuel for cars and other vehicles. Do you agree or disagree?

Over the last few decades, our cities faced unprecedented growth of traffic congestion, and as a result of this, we encounter a litany of environmental pollution. Some experts believe that the rising of petrol is the best way to resolve this problem. In my opinion, it may help to some extent; however, this is not the only solution.

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the factors in modern society that cause this stress and how can we reduce it?

These days, in modern society, people are becoming more and more stressed out due to a wide range of different reasons, typically working. To get rid of such mental turbulence, many of them choose therapy, others even decide to demise. This essay would set out some factors and potential solutions to eliminate such a phenomenon.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that can be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations.

In today's world, as technology was developing, the life expectancy of each people is rapid growth. Even though this issue seems to benefit the family industry, it appears to me that the problems of higher tax within individuals and more risk of crime were caused followingly. However, there are solutions for this sort of problem which we will describe now.

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Many people get little or no exercise either during the working day or their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not get enough exercise? What can be done about this problem?

There are numerous problems which are the absence of physical activities in countless workers, especially in today's technology-focused world, which can lead to affliction.The causes of this appear to be focused on several areas, and the number of solutions also appear to be possible.

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