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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Despite many feeling that adaptingto a critical situation in life like low income or dissatisfaction with jobs could be beneficial for human being, however, I strongly support those who feel that people should be more conscious about improvement in their life.

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for childre. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is controversial whether children should read books, play computer games, or watch TV. In my opinion, I think reading book is better than the others, in physical and mental ways.

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Many countries have compulsory military service for young men after they leave school. It would be a good idea for all countries to adopt this system for men, and possibly for women too. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many countries oblige young men to serve in the military for a period of time, and some people suggest that such ‘national service’ should be extended to all countries and possibly for both genders. I would argue that although military service is beneficial to some it may not be suitable for everybody- and so should not be obligatory. However, I see no reason why anyone who wishes to serve should be prevented from doing so, regardless of whether man or woman.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages and give your own opinion

There have been immense advances in technology in most aspects of people’s lives,especially in the field of education. An increasing myriad of students relies on computers to research information and produce a perfect paper for school purposes. There are advantages and disadvantages to this matter and I completely agree with the benefits of using computers during school lessons because of the speed in the transmission of data.

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Some people believe advertisements have positive effect on people and business while others do not. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

There are those who believe that commercial broadcasts are convenient for people's lives and they have been improving business sales, while others say that, advertisements have a negative effect on people's life and business. But I strongly believe that commercial broadcasts have many positive trends.

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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think the education will not work. Disscuss both views and give your opinion.

Junk food has detrimental effects on human beings health according to the experts.Some people need to be educated about the benefits of not taking junk food,other feel no results can be accomplished, as compared to education about not having junk food.This essay will discuss both views according to different perspective.In my opinion, Education is necessary for the community about limiting junk food.

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Scientists agree that people are damaging their health by eating too much junk food. Some people think that the answer to this problem is to educate people. Others think the education will not work. Disscuss both views and give your opinion.

There are two types of human which think that eating education to quit intake much junk food is important and others it is no need for us. This essay aims to elaborate on the reason why the aforementioned is integral or not , and after, I describe my opinion.

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The government's investment in arts, music and theatre is a waste of money. Governments should invest these funds in public services instead. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

It is often argued that a government should finance public services, rather than invest unnecessarily in arts, music, and theatres. Although I agree that arts, music and theatres are important to bring cultural identity, I think that investments in public services are more important.

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Some people think it is no longer necessary for children to go to school because they can do all their learning online. Others believe learning in schools is essential. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The combination of reliable, high-speed internet and continual technological innovation means that children’s study options are no longer limited to old-style classrooms. These developments have led some to question whether children still need to attend school, arguing that learning online is possibly preferable. Not surprisingly, there are many who disagree. While there are reasons why learning online might be feasible, I believe there can be no substitute for the face-to-face contact afforded by school-based learning. Online learning offers an efficient and high-tech solution to education. Internet speeds have increased, and online video conferencing platforms now provide improved functionality. Studying in virtual classrooms thus seems a viable alternative to face-to-face learning. With online learning, children have immediate access to an almost infinite range of resources. Wider access to sources beyond the classroom is particularly beneficial for children in remote ...

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Some poeple say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say tha it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

People in society have been divided into two groups on one matter of thought which is : whether minors should be able to entertain themselves individually or they ought to participate in group activities in their leisure time.although,in my ,perspective it is a value to be able to go by alone, I am of the opinion that is far more beneficial to be engaged in activities formed conducted in group work.

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Biotechnology companies all over the world are developing different types of genetically modified (GM) crops. However, not enough is known about these crops on our health and the environment. Interfering with nature in this way should be prohibited. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that scientists in every era are giving their best in searching how to heal illnesses people. Today biotechnology companies are developing different types of genetically modified (GM) crops. These crops might have a positive effect on our health and environment. However, there might be some negative effects that are not completely clear. In this essay I am going to discuss do we have to prohibit these crops or not.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, as a result of numerous subjects which are being taught by ,teachers many people think the most important one is history while others are in contrast they believe other majors such as science and technology are important.

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The internet has a bigger impact on people’s lives because it is more popular than television. Do you agree or disagree?

The existence of television in the midst of the digital era is about to become extinct. The Internet has taken over all of the functions of television as the medium that delivers reliable information. I strongly agree that the Internet has had a big impact on people's lives. Here, I will give my explanation.

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Some people think that social networking sites have a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The advancements of the field of technology have not only improved the standard of living in the world, but also ignited various tensity globally. A substantial proportion of individuals claim that, social networking websites have a massive cons on the natives as well as community. I partially agree with the given statement.

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some people believe that teachers should be friendly and other people think that teacher should be very bad. do you agree or disagree

The development of the period has increased the disparity in some countries. It causes numerous amount of crimes because of the complexity of the issue we face.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to participate in organised group activities in their free time; others say that it is essential for them to learn how to occupy themselves independently. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Child development is a debatable subject area in the world. Some individuals believe that children need to develop team spirit by engaging them in different group activities because they do not want their child to be a selfish person. However, others think that children need to improve their life skills as independent people. In my opinion, both of the views are correct to a certain extent.

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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to younger children). To what extent do you agree or disagree

In modern times, the issue of unpaid community service has become highly controversial in high schools. There are those who believe that unpaid service like charity, redesigning neighbourhood or teaching sports should be mandatory in high school programmers ,however others believe that it should not be an unpaid service. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument.

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Improvement in health, education and freight are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poor nations in such areas to what extent do you agree or disagree?

Health education is a fundamental need for a person the authorities of developed countries to take the responsibility for helping developing countries. I personally, agree with this notion and in the upcoming ,paragraph I will discuss and give an appropriate conclusion to this essay.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In our digital world, some controversy exists over whether or not the government should have access to our personal communication. While it is argued by some that the state should automatically be able to obtain this information in the interests of national security, others believe it to be an unnecessary invasion of privacy which should not be allowed. I do not believe that the issue is so clear-cut.

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Some people say that the best way to improve roads safety would be to increase minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motobikes. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that raising the minimum legal age for driving cars or riding motorbikes is the most effective method of increasing road safety. While I consent to this approach, I am more convinced that it is far from the best solution.

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