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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Beauty is in the eyes of the beholder. What do you think this means? Do you agree with this statement?

Anything, which is beautiful will obviously attract the attention of people in many different ways, such as the beautiful colours in the paintings, the beauty of nature in different seasons, beauty in a person's character and many more. I totally agree with the statement and a famous proverb that, beauty lies in the eyes of the beholder. I think this way for two reasons, which I will discuss in this essay.

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Some people believe that eventually all jobs will be done by artificially intelligent robots. What is your opinion?

The future of artificially intelligent is highly controversial. Some people assume more and more employees might be replaced by artificially intelligent ones in the future. While it is possible that unskilled jobs might be done by robots, it is highly unlikely that certain occupations, which require human contact will be substituted by machines. This essay will discuss why some specific jobs will rely on humans.

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Some people say the Olympic Games do not have a role to play in the 21st century. To extent your agree or disagree?

Based on some people's views, it could not be supposed a role to play for Olympic games in the current century. In my opinion, for many reasons, these events have an important role in our life. Namely, it causes sports improvement, and governments dedicate specefic budget to sports. On the other hand, some people disagree.

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Social networking sites, for ,instance Facebook, are thought by some to have had a detrimental effect on individual people as well as society and local associations. However, while I believe that such grounds are mainly beneficial to the individual, I agree that they have had a damaging effect on local communities.

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Museums and art galleries should show local history and culture instead of work from different countries. Discuss both views and give your opinion

In this contemporary epoch, whilst some governments hold the view that they should exhibit their national paintings and monuments in the museums, opponents have a diverse viem. However, I am a staunch believer that our artwork should have the higher priority. Both views, as well as my contention will be further explained.

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Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper book will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Globalization of the internet through the continents is allowing the majority to have access to lots of information including e-books. There is an idea being claimed by a number of people that paper books are about to get lost due to e-books, while others believe that paper-based books will never vanish. In my opinion, due to the availability of different types along with time-saving of the reader, electronic books will continue to increase in need, meanwhile paper books also have their importance and they will keep being a part of the reader’s life.

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Multicultural societies, where people of different ethnic groups live together can bring more benefits than drawbacks to a society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued, nowadays, that it is preferable for people to live in a multicultural society. On the other hand, the opposite opinion is held by others. I agree because it enables others to learn about variate cultures and enables the citizen to acquire another language.

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Some people think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others, however, believe there are better alternative ways of reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In some countries, it is believed that young people should take a gap year after finishing school and before the start of higher education. This trend would create certain benefits, but there will also be some drawbacks. In this essay, I would like to discuss both the merits and demerits of the phenomenon.

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Some people believe that sports competition are a source of emotional stress for young people. Therefore youth should be banned from participating in sports competition. Do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that sports competition causes stress in the youth thus they must not be allowed to take part in sports matches. In my opinion, there are some reasons why I disagree with this idea. Namely, it is a good way to release excitement positively, young people need the amount of competition. However, some individuals have a different point of view that will be discussed in the following essay.

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Some people think that Government should take measures to improve the health of its citizens. Others think it must be managed by individuals. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some people believe that official organizations have to prevent citizens from health problems because citizens have the right to be taken properly healthcare by the government. Others say that health conditions should be regarded as their individuals not government matters. I discuss both views on this issue.

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1.Having police officer patrolling the street is often considered as essential way to reduce crime. How effective do you think police street patrols are? What way reducing crime can you propose?

Nowadays, the public is more concerned about the crime rate due to the community is suffering from high inflation, a high unemployment rate and a recession might possibly occur. Considering police officers patrol the street often could reduce the crime cases. Let me illustrate my perspective in the below paragraph.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is commonly believed that the availability of sports clubs has an indispensable impact on people`s health. While some think that this is the superior to any way to improve a healthy lifestyle, others of the belief that other considerations are equally important. I am convinced by the second notion, and both arguments will be elucidated in the following essay.

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Some people think that all teenagers should be required to do unpaid work in their free time to help the local community. They believe this would benefit both the individual teenager and society as a whole. Do you agree or disagree?

Social work is always an essential factor for society. In recent days, there are arguments that young people must involve them to do social activities without salary and it will enhance both environment and the people who involve in it. I strongly accept that involvement in such activities helps them to understand the view of society and more individuals involve them to take part in the activities.

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Some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

For many decades now, protecting animals and birds has been very important for humans. It is certainly right that sufficient resources and attention are focused on this, but ,obviously there are other priorities as well that need consideration.

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Discipling a child is the responsibility either father or teachers.Do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, all children like to follow their parent's actions and their parents are their first teachers they learn many things from them also the other are teachers are responsible for children misbehave and all naughty things . However, I completely agree with this statement because discipline is the most important thing for children.

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Some people think that public health is a responsibility of the government, while others believe that individuals should be responsible for their own health. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

In this contemporary era, people are tempted toward their health and some individuals think that it is the government's responsibility to control health problems. However,some other people that all citizens are responsible for their health situation. In this essay, I would explain both the points deeply and also in the end give my opinion on this matter.

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Education, from preschool through university, should be paid for by the government and therefore free to students. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that education, should be economically financed by the government, guaranteeing it throughout the whole education journey, from preschool to university. I personally agree with this solution and in this essay, I will give examples to sustain arguments on how governments should properly intervene in order to sustain citizens' education over time.

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Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed by some people that being wealthy and having less time is better than having more time and being less wealthy. From my perspective, I partly agree with this as I argue that having time and money are equally important.

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For all children,the ability to play a musical instrument is just as important as the ability to read and write.How far do you agree with this suggestion?How important it is for a child to learn to play a musical instrument in your view?

Children are becoming interested in musing and playing musical instruments day by day.It is believed by some people that students should get an opportunity to learn and play ,similarly read and write.In my opinion, I feel that literacy is a distinguished opportunity for future endeavours rather than entertainment.

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Bullying is a big problem in many schools. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Bullying is a big problem in many schools. This issue is detrimental to a kid's well-being. Bullying is mainly done by kids who feel insecure about themselves and they project it onto others besides this it is not the only reason bullying happens various other factors play a role in this. There are multiple solutions to tackle this problem.

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