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IELTS Opinion Writing Samples Band 6.5

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Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co operate rather than compete become more useful adults Discuss both these views and give your opinions.

Children's behaviour is usually related to the values and principles that their parents taught, whereas some people encourage them to compete, others believe that cooperation is a better option for children to learn. In my opinion, although cooperation is essential, however children can succeed better through competition.

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Today, the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Advertising helps people to understand the importance of the product and its use cases. Sometimes these advertisements can deviate the audience and force them to buy a product which they don't need.

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Some people believe that we have too many choices these days. To what extent to you agree or disagree? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In today’s world, with the ignited of technology people have a number of benefits. Even, some of them believe that they have a large number of varities to select. With the improvement of transportation and communication, I completely stand with this view.

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More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent years, the trend of working from home has gained enormous popularity whereas many feel apathetic towards going to the workplace. It is argued by many that job holders and their families are being beneficial to this change while others believe that strain rises in the home because of this tendency to work from home. In my opinion, the opportunities are strong enough to outweigh the issues that are being developed because of the trend.

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Many people are afraid to leave their home because of their fear of crime. Some people believe that more action should be taken to prevent crime, but others feel that little can be dome. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Society is divided by different views on leaving their residency for safety reasons. There is a section that believes that we can curb the crime by taking a few steps, while the other thinks that there is little which can be done to improve the situation. This essay will discuss both views.

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Some people believe that natural ability is necessary to be successful at sports. Others believe that hardwork and practice is more important. Discuss both the sides and add your own opinion.

Nowadays sports have become an indispensable part of people's lives. That is why some people are certain that natural talents are essential to succeed in sports meanwhile others think that diligence and practice are more significant to achieve results. Personally, I agree with the second statement.

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Some people believe that car-free days are effective ways to reduce air pollution. However, others argue that there are other ways that are more effective. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Automobiles are one of the major sources of air pollution which some people think if we do not use them the weather will be better while another group believes it is not helpful and to reduce air pollution other ways can be more useful. In my opinion, car-free days are a good notion to fight against pollution but it is not enough to keep the air clean.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write at least 25 words

In recent years, misconceptions and false news are so widely spread, thanks to the internet. There has been a rise in the number of people choosing to experiment with alternate ways of medicine due to various rumours about the effectiveness of medications that are backed by science. In this essay, I will share why I think this is a disadvantage to humanity and share my personal experience.

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Some people say that parents should encourage their children to take part in organised group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own. Discuss these both views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals argued that parents should stimulate their offspring in order to participate in team activities in their spare time while others say that it is crucial for children to learn how to do anything themselves.I would argue that attending organised group activities is much better.

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In some countries, students pay their college or university fees, while in some others, the government pay for them. Do you think the advantages that government pays the money outweigh the disadvantages?

In some countries, tuition fees are paid by the students themselves, whereas in some other nations university fees are covered by the government. In the first case, students and their families experience a lower financial pressure and can devote their money to developing their future. However, this may reduce students' motivation for studying and building their lives. My personal view is that the merits of government-sponsored university education outweigh its demerits.

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Students in a school should learn academic subjects and pass exams. Other skills such as cookery, dressmaking, and woodwork can be learned from family and friends. Do you agree or disagree?

Many people believe that schools should be responsible to teach academic curriculums only whereas, other extra-curricular skills such as cooking, stitching, and mechanical work should be taught by family and friends. This essay does not agree with the above-mentioned statement.

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Students should choose a University major that prepares them for high- paying careers. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

University degrees are stepping stones for a bright professional career for many students. Nowadays students select educational institutions for their professional degrees based on their lucrative job placements after their studies. I strongly agree with the statement and will give my explanation with valid reasons such as companies go in search of good employees to reputed universities and these institutes also teach the skills to students which are important to possess a bright future.

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Some people say that the characteristic we are born will have many much more influence on our personality and development than any experiences we may have in life. To what extent do you agree with this?

I couldn't agree more with the given statement that inherits qualities have more impact on an infant's own perspective and growth than any memories that he made while he's growing up, because that toddler's natural instincts make him hard-wired to stick with that decision in life, all of this will happen before he started his own life. I will provide my analysis below.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this can be the case? Do you think this is positive or negative situation?

Some people argue that having his own house instead of being a tenant is essential. In my view, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. In this essay I will first, discuss why owning a house is positive and secondly, I will explain the cons of this situation.

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The children now tend to ignore their social responsibility compared to the past children. Some people think of this as a positive change, however, others think of it as a negative thing. What do you think about this change?

Opinions are divergent regarding the apathetic attitude of today’s youth toward their social responsibility. Personally, I believe that this change has both positive and negative outcomes.

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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

In the most recent years, the world has shown an important increase in combustible prices. However, some people claim that rising fuel prices remain the most effective solution to decrease its high demand and massive exploitation. In my opinion, I completely disagree with this view and believe that this approach can be ineffective to solve this issue.

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More and more people are using computers and electronic devices to access information; therefore, there is no need for printed books, magazines, and newspapers anymore. To what extent do you agree or disagree

In contemporary society, the technology and electronic devices industry are growing rapidly, and that makes people can access to information more accessible than in the past. Some individuals think there is no reason to print the media on paper because we can use electronic devices instead. I extremely disagree with this idea and this essay will show the point that why I do not agree.

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Some people think that job satisfaction is more important than job security while some people think that they cannot always expect job satisfaction,a permanent job is more important. Discuss both views and give opinion.

Whether to choose a satisfying job or a stable one is invariably a debatable issue for most people. From my perspective, I deem that the content you gain from your work overweighs the stable income and I will give my reasons as follows.

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It is important for people to take risks, both in their professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risk outweigh the disadvantages?

No one can deny that accepting risks in people's professional and personal lives is a significant issue. It has both positive and negative aspects. While there are certain demerits points, in my view, the main merits are greater.

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Some people say that in all levels of education, from primary schools to universities, too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning skills. Do you agree or disagree?

The prompt recommends that people think the curriculums are designed to teach the facts rather than enhance practical skills most of the time, at all levels of education. In my opinion, I mostly agree with the suggestion and would like to argue on behalf of it. Although, the total amount of time students get to learn according to the syllabuses is barely sufficient to cover the vast ocean of knowledge and skills they should have at their disposal in order to shine in future.

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