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EVERY YEAR SEVERAL LANGUAGE DIE OUT . SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT IS NOT IMPORTAN

We all knew that there are several languages around the world. But the question is why? why we do not just have one paticulr language?, the simple answer is because every language represent a different culture. And that what humans are not capable of understand, people believe if we have a fewer language life is going to be easier and i am totally disagree with that.
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Students should pay the full cost of university studies,rather than have free higher education provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

i belive that education is a human right because of that goverment must ensure every residents of the country. Education must acesseble for everyone even if you are poor and don't have money to pay tution. to do that the regulation must be make to guaranting every residen can acsess education from primary school until higher level education.
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Many people lose their income due to CoVid19 pandemic. What solution that can do by government or individual to overcome this problem.

CoVid19 was a enormous disaster for human life. It affected our life standart. Many people died, many people lose their job, we have taken many healt precautions.
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You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year.

My name is Zuhra. I am 18 years old. At present, I am studying at university.
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Some people prefer to take a job working for a small company. Others might choose a large company. Which would you prefer and why? Use specific ideas and examples to support your opinion.

I think watching television has both effect, poitive and negative.
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Some people say in order to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus on reducing environmental pollution and housing problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

While a faction of people holds the notion that authorities should invest on controlling pollution and providing houses to protect public health, others argue that more measures are necessary to prevent illness. I totally agree with the latter view as ample reasons are present to substantiate it. This essay wiill explain my view points with relevant illustrations.
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Nowadays more people are choosing to live with their friends or alone rather than with their families, this trend is likely to have a negative impact on community. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

Nowadays many poeple pefare to live with thier friends or alone anstad of liveing with thier families. There for some poeple think that will give a negative impact on community. I disagree with this statement and in this essay i will explian why.
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Nowadays, many kids have become obese, and that causes a lot of health issues .This is why I strongly agree that physical classes must be mandatory in elementary and high schools, as this will lead to improving kids’ well-being and helps them have a better shape.

Ehen the kid is in a good health this means that he can live in a better way with good health and power and he will be good at most of sports because sports need a good body
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign languge can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Currently, multi-language speakers are reducing due to practicing common foreign language which has negative impact on physical and social life. I completely agree with this view and will explain the reasons in this essay.
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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home now means that you must change the dates of the visit Explain the important event Apologise for the situation Suggest a new arrengement

I am writing this letter is about our measure.I am apologizing from you due to this day will be holiday in my home, my relationship visit to my home. If you want you may visit to this holiday, however you want will be only you and me in this measure
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Describe a school subject that you did not like in the past, but you like now.

I enjoyed most of my school subjects, but I did not enjoy mathematics. The reason I did not like it was just because of the complexity of numbers. Besides that, my teacher was a boring person in her teaching method. One day, I wanted to study programming. Programming skills require very good mathematical logic. Since then, I have resolved to like mathematics and study earnestly.
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Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Theses days most of the world wide challenges are related mainly the public services due to the increase in population, therefor we can see there is a lot of countries facing an education issues as a result of the increase on the number of people. However in this essay will discuss the expected problems which might be on coming years.
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You arranged to visit a friend in Canada but an important event at home, now means that you must change the date of the visit -explain the important event -apologise for the sitution -suggest a new arragment.

The reason why I'm addressing to apologise from you .I don't want to late ,however, I didn't attain to airport.
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Influence of human beings on the world&#39;s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio- diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of bio- diversity? What solutions can you suggest?

knife; coulde you pass me the knife plate ; this plate is diffrent from the last one bee ; the bee is balonated the new flower ant ; ants have six legs snake ; the ratel snake is koild and ready to strike
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Some parents think that advertisements are misleading for children, while advertisers claim that they provide knowledge. Give your opinion.

Advertisements have become a major concern recent year.Parents beleive that children.This essay will discuss advertisement can be children.And why they can information.On the one hand it is though advertisement.Today young children are more likely to beleive easily.They are see and hear compared other.For example tv fast food advertisement who especially children.Moreover the expensive fast food leads to child obesity.Therefore advertisement which help advertise much money is young.The other hand advert may educational for children.Some advertisement give knowledge and information children about healthy life.Thus advertisement can be informative and educational for children.In conlusion children are surround daily life.In my opinion which promote unhealthy foods.However some children hygiene and healthy issue
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Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarket in some countries, many small and local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of local business will bring about the death of local countries. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays, many small and local enterprises are bankrupt because of supermarkets' advancement and swift growth. There are several views that the decreasing of hometown businesses brought about a decline in the country's economy. In this essay, I will delve into my reasons why I totally agree with this given statement.
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The problem of homelessness is on the rise in several significant urban centers globally. What is the main cause of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve it by communities and governments?

The main cause of homelessness is jobless, having no job you will stay no where in place that dream of, because of that jobless is the problem for big city to be resolved. By any chance, jobless will effect not only to one person to whom have no job but also to his or her family such as husband or wife and kids they own. Many countries have strategy to take control the increasing of jobless, but somehow the impact of natural disaster like covid-19 affected to the economy growth. The rapid infection to the poeple effected to stop people for working, finally people do not have job then they can not rent house. The measure to solve homelessness is the state must have policy to provide job opportunity t the people, and also endorse if job opportunity will not asked many requirements.
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Water is a natural source that should always be free. Government should ban the sale of bottled water. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

There is no secret that water is the main ingredient of human body. It is a widely held view that water as an natural material should be free and authorities should forbid the sale of packaged water, a theory which I fully subsribe.
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There is an argument that women should work in force.Others think that they can work other area. Write both views and your opinion

Thank you for your email. I always glad to receive messages from you.
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Some experts suggest people a method to solve the environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuels and all vehicles. To what extent do you agree with this point? and make comparisons where relevant.

Environmental pollution has been a viral topic in contemporary society. One of the biggest contributors to air pollution goes to carbon dioxide emission. It is disagreed that the solution to solve this problem is to charge more for fuels and all vehicles. Finding substitutions for oil which is more environmentally friendly and issuing policies to impose high penalties on using extra cars would be more effective measures.
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