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The population of most cities is growing as people move cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause ? How can these problems be solved?

Nowadays, major cities are filled with a large amount of population due to having many job placements and living in a better place. This population in the cities faces many issues. This essay will examine the cause of the issue and discuss about the possible solution as well.
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The leaders of most organizations tend to be older people. However, some argue that younger people make better bosses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most organization leaders are to be older. On the other hand other people that younger employees make better managers . I state my opinion on the following points .
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You and your friend have both been accepted to a study abroad programme in Paris France

I hope everything is well with you. I heard that you have been accepted to study in Paris. Today I got letter from Paris university programme. I write this letter because I have been accepted to same university as yours. Congratulation bestie.
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Tourism generates revenue therefore it should be promoted discuss the statement and give solutions .

By improving vacation spot and promote it, we can get many income from it. Nowadays there many method we can use to encourage audience like post in Instagram or Facebook, according to me it is the flexible and cheap way. Even if we pay for book ads on that platform also including the tax and the operation fee, the income will be greater than the outcome. But, it is only happen if we have good promote system. We need an approach that our promotion are effective and efficient so scrum will come to our destination. It is the bad news if we can not optimalization our promotion, not only money the we do not get, we also wasting our time and energy.
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The number of employed persons by job type and sex, Australia, last year

The bar illustrates the amount of work citizens in Australia by their job type and gender. The data is from last year.
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Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?

Thanks a lot for your email I hope you doung fine.
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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for students, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion..

Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to receive email from you and so happy to hear that you are going to visit Moscow.
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People nowdays send than talk on text messages more frequently the Phone What are the reasons for this trend? Do the advantages of texting outweigh the disadvantages?

The older technological developments had a lot of benefits and impact on people's lives than recent ones. I disagree because nowadays technology more development than in the past.
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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, shopping has become more prevalent among teenagers in many countries. This is due to the fact that we are living in the world of consumerism and a throw away culture. In my opinion, I believe that it has more advantages than the disadvantages, which I will discuss in this essay with relevant examples.
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Some people think that the young people should be free to choose their job, but other people think that they should be realist and think more about their future.Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

All over the world many people think they should be free to select their occupation. Some of the other people think they should be accept the situation more about their outlook. I totally agree with this. In this essay I will discuss both views and I give in my opinion.
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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
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Describe a writer you would like to meet. You should say: who the writer is what you know about this writer already what you would like to find out about him/her and explain why you would like to meet this writer.

To describe a a writter, he is a monk and a leader of 7 million Tibetan’s inside and outside of Tibet. He is non other than His Holliness the Dalai Lama. I am familiar with his writings on Buddhist psychology , where it reminds about the compassion, how it helps one's own mind to keep calam and non reactive towards harmful actions or faulty language spoken to oneself. It was stated in one his writting that the compassionate mind helped him to survive his spirit. The eagerness came from that statement in one of his books that I want to meet him in personel to ask him how does that helped him to stay spirited. It was in his biography that he did have had tough time in late 1950s where he lost his country’s Independence and had to flee his own country.
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Large companies should pay higher salaries to CEOs and executives compared to other workers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The huge gap between CEO and regular employees’ income is often discussed in society. While some people insist it is not fair, others , however, claim it is essential. I totally agree that higher payments for CEOs and executives are necessary because of the responsibility and strict competence requirements they have in comparison with other workers.
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Some people believe it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

Certain individuals think that it is much better not to fight with bad circumstances such as poverty or unattractive jobs. Opponents, however, believe that it is important to pursue better living conditions. In my opinion, I consider, persistence in creating a satisfactory style of life is much more profitable in terms of happiness and success.
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Nowadays children spend lots of time watching television and playing conputers games. However, it does not help in improving children's mental abilities do you agree or disagree.

In this era, watching tv and playing computer are the most activity that young people spend more time, but it could not support in increasing children's mental abilities. I am totally agree with this statement. There are more negative impacts because children could not focus to study on school and these activities could make children lacks on friendships.
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Doctor, nurse and teachers make a great contribution to the society and should be paid more than entertainment and sports celebrities. Do you agree or disagree?

IN THE DEVELPING WORLD, THE MEDICAL FIELDS STAFFS AND PROFFESSORS ARE PLAYING A CRUCIAL ROLE IN THE DEVELOMENT OF THE COMMUNITY. HOWEVER, THEY ARE ALWAYS PAID LOWER SALARY AND THEREFORE IT IS ARGUED THAT THEY SHOUD GET MORE FINANCIAL BENEFITS THAN THE PEPOPLE WORK IN THE ENTERTAINMENT FIELD. I COMPLETELY AGREE WITH THIS STATEMENT AS THEY ARE BEING A SAFEGAURD TO THE WHOLE SOCIETY.
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YOU HAVE TO RECIEVE THIS EMAIL FROM WHO YOU WENT TO COLLEGE WITH. Do you know it will be five years since we finished college ? i think we should contact our friends and arrange to meet again.Have you got any ideas about what we could do to celebrat e and when? write and tell me jan write an email to jan : suggest a good way to celebrate with your old college friends explain when would be the best time for the celebrate offer to help organise the celebrate

How are you ? I hope yyou are doing fine. Time flies , can you imagine that ! this is five years since we parting to gether.
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Art is considered as an important part of society as well as an expression of its culture. Do you think it is important to teach art to children? Do you think adolescent should be encouraged to focus on art rather than other subjects?

With the implementation of feedback received from professors and determination, I was able to make consistent progress through the remaining phase of the academic journey. My grades, which had hovered around 70% during the COVID-19 pandemic, soared to an impressive 90% in my final semester. This experience taught me the power of resilience and the importance of perseverance under proper guidance. It also instilled in me a deep-rooted belief in my ability to overcome obstacles and achieve my goals.
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Every one of us should become a vegetarian because eating meat can cause serious health problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

I believe that, many health problems are caused not by eating meat. Our health and problems with it are related with environment and climate. Many disorders are caused by poluted environment and natural disorders.
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It is a fact that people nowadays are under a lot of pressure, and their life is becoming increasingly stressful. What could be the possible reasons for this? What are some solutions to address this problem?

Life of people in this world is getting pressurized day by day and stress also increased in the lives of people. There might be numerous possible reasons to this problem and the essay will explore some plausible solution of it.
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