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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health is decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken?

in this time everything become easy to do without need to do any activete or at least to do reall activete this what make the average weight for one person is increasing and his level of health is decreasing.
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.What do you believe are your personal strengths ?

My greatest strengths are self-motivation, time management and organisation skills. I work well under pressure and enjoy helping co-workers get daily tasks completed. I gained these skills when I worked at the Gynecology/Obstetric department in a Municipal Hospital in Japan as a Midwife and Nurse, therefore I am confident and able to work efficiently and effectively.
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As most people spend a major part of their adult life at work, job satisfaction is an important element of individual wellbeing. Do you agree or disagree?

A large number of species are whipping out every year, and this has imperil Earth's ecosystem in a way that has never experienced before. Although the protection of animals may seem absurd, while many humans are in a delicate situation; however If the one delve into this issue, in a broad prospective, comes to the understanding, which all species are connected to each other in our ecosystem, similar to a chain, and extinction of some can endanger others. The wolves are hunted by lions, whereas they hunt sheep and If wolves extinct, there would be no food for lions, and sheep will clear all the grass exists, which can cause a dusty storm. So the protection of animals has a chain of benefits, not only in favor of humans but also other species.
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today, many people do not know their neighbours in large cities. What problems does this cause? What can be done about this?

With development of technology, people just spend almost time to use that instead of meeting face to face or making new friends, neighbours, so it is one of the major reasons that i want to write today, follow this essay to see more new information.
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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Language is a signifacnt for communicating each other. Nowadays, various languages diminishes and some argues trhat, this is better as life will not become difficult if less laqnguages in the world. I completely agree with this statement as it provides humans to interact with people from differnt country. I will be explaining my valuable points in the ensuing paragraphs.
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Media should show more educational programs than films. Do you agree ordisagree?

The first part of the process involves posting the job advertisement and collecting applications. To do this, the company creates a list of requirements for the job and then publishes these online. Those who want to apply for the job then need to download, complete, and submit the job application form, all of which are then assessed.
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some people believe that punishing the criminals helps to decrease the crime but criminals keeps on committing the crime even after they were punished . what may be the reason and what can be done to decrease such activities ?

The first part of the process involves posting the job advertisement and
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High school should allow students to study the courses that students want to study. Specify reasons and example to support your opinion.

Three pie charts illustrate the proportion percentages of sodium, saturated fat and added suger in four main meals such as breakfast, lunch, snacks, and dinner in the USA.
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Some people believe that children should receive compulsory education at public schools while others prefer private schools. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

For those citizen think that children must study in goverment schools rather than non public schools. However, I think the private schools is better than formal schools because there are so many advantages that you can obtain various knowledges, but in public schools that you can go to school for free.
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Some people think the media should not report details of crime to the public. What extent do you agree or disagree.

I agree that media should report details of crime. Media itself is power to inform citizen and spread awareness. Hopefully by exposing the perpetrator, people become aware that if you commit a crime that you will get the consequence including citizen will also remember you as a crime.
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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Nowadays there is a tendency to determine the value of an individual by the social and economical status of the person. I believe that it should be asessed based on the personal qualities and values. In this essay, I will explain my views with relevent examples.
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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays domestic waste productions are incresdng day by day due to the changed lifestyle and urbanisation. The government should make awareness to use sustainable and reusable product to reduce waste production. In this essay, I shall explain some resons and solutions for the issue with relevent examples.
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some people belive that people must work all chapter of their life. do you agree?

The supplied chart depicts data on comparison of household's expenditures during a week in one society in two different years, 1968 and 2018. Overall, the most expences of people were spent for food in 2018 and their leisure activities, while the least of their income allocated to fuel and power, houshold goods, and personal goods.
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Number of tourists visiting Caribbean island(2010-2017)

The graph depicted shares the data about number of tourists visiting caribbean island from period 2010 to 2017. The people are categorized into two groups that is, one who visit the island and others who stay on cruise.
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Your local municipality is thinking about two different projects for its local residents. An amusement park or a local theatre. Choose between options A and B. Why do you prefer your option? Explain the reasons for your choice, Option A: Amusement Park: The amusement park will be open for families, will have a playground and a water park. Option B: Local Theatre: The local

while I do see the benefit of constructing theatre.I opine that the constrution of amusement park has more benefits due to following reasons.
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with the pressures on today's young people to Succeed academically. Some people believe that non-academic subjects at school eg. physical education and cookery should be removed from the syllabus so that chicken can concentrate wholly on acadesoic subjects. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Indeed their are alot of pressure on todays youth interms of their academic so there are some concerns by students that schools muct provide more focous on majors rather than non academic programs such as physical education and so on. According to me both academic and non academic sujects are playing a crutial role in studies.
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You work for an international company and you need sometimes off to attend a family celebration Give details of the celebrations Explain the reason why you need time off Suggest a way to have your work done during that time

I am writing this letter in regarding vacations. I need one week holidays because I am going to my home to attend a family function.
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Some people say that school studies are not useful and most important things are learnt outside the school. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion and examples.

We live in technology age and have more diferent gadjets, with can help us.
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It is fact that the majority of people who are sent to prison commit further crime after their release. What causing this? What can be done to change this?

The studies shows that the a large number of prisoners are committing crime after they released from the Jail. In this eassay, I will discuss the cause of this and recommend few actions to prevent this.
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In some cities, governments have tried to reduce traffic. For instance, they imposed a congestion tax during rush hour. Do you think this development is positive or negative?

Nowadays, changes in car quantity in metropolis in the world, especially in crowded cities, emerge as a widely discussed issue and the current traffic conditions of many cities are affected by this indirectly. At this point, I think country governments are obliged to take the initiative and introduce some additional tax or measures to reduce traffic in the downtown. This article will demonstrate how to reduce traffic in crowded place and explore additional recommendations and precautions taken by various communities.
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