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In some countries, a lot of children have health issues and are becoming overweight. Some people think that the government should be responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Yes it is bitter true, is just because of junk food and childrens do no take balanced diet. In this century there all childrens are eat tasty food . In the past the they were ate proper house food. They do not ate street food.
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Nowadays many people choose to be self-employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self-employed? Give reason to your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays some people want to do self-employed, rather than to work for company or organization. Some want to do for company and some don't want to do for company.
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some people believe that the fittest and strongest individuals and team always succeed in sports .others think that success in sports depends on mental attitudes.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

we did not have any plan to go out so my family were at home and spent time together. At 6:30 p.m we were cooking together. We were watching news when we were eating. Arfter that while my mother was doing washing up, i was cleaning the floor. Then my mother were going to bed when i went out to do exercise. My mother have a night shift job so she must sleep early. While she was sleeping, i was stuyding English in quiet room. I tried to keep the sound was not loud. Anyway, we had a good time together although we don't take much time to gather.
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Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In my opinion, the poverty of a country is not depend on the financial aids of other rich countries.It is only the responsibility of its own government.
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Today‘s children are living under more pressure from the society than children in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The line graph gives information about changes in different crime spheres in city center called Newport from 2003-2012.
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Some people say that students who achieve the highest scores in their exams should be awarded. Others say that those who show progress should be rewarded instead. Discuss both the views and give your opinion.

It has been argued since long time what the basis of rewarding the exam going students should be. Whether it ought to be final scores on card or the real progress depicted by students. Although we would discuss both the essays in following paragraphs, I personally believe that the growth and progression are the right indicators for rewards.
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Most of world’s problems are caused by over population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The line graph below gives data about changes in three various means of crime from 2003 till 2012 in Newport city centre.
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A persons worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor,kindness and trust, longer seem important. To what extent do you agreee or disagree with this option ?

We people have divided the human class on the basis of their socisal divisions and discriminating the the poor people from their physical appearence and not looking into the other factors to judge a particular person.I tend to agree that judging that judging a person form their outer looks doest seems to be a good practice despite having a bit of truth in it.
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The population of most cities is growing as people move cities to find work and new opportunities. What problems does overpopulation in cities cause ? How can these problems be solved?

Nowadays, major cities are filled with a large amount of population due to having many job placements and living in a better place. This population in the cities faces many issues. This essay will examine the cause of the issue and discuss about the possible solution as well.
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The leaders of most organizations tend to be older people. However, some argue that younger people make better bosses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most organization leaders are to be older. On the other hand other people that younger employees make better managers . I state my opinion on the following points .
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You and your friend have both been accepted to a study abroad programme in Paris France

I hope everything is well with you. I heard that you have been accepted to study in Paris. Today I got letter from Paris university programme. I write this letter because I have been accepted to same university as yours. Congratulation bestie.
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Tourism generates revenue therefore it should be promoted discuss the statement and give solutions .

By improving vacation spot and promote it, we can get many income from it. Nowadays there many method we can use to encourage audience like post in Instagram or Facebook, according to me it is the flexible and cheap way. Even if we pay for book ads on that platform also including the tax and the operation fee, the income will be greater than the outcome. But, it is only happen if we have good promote system. We need an approach that our promotion are effective and efficient so scrum will come to our destination. It is the bad news if we can not optimalization our promotion, not only money the we do not get, we also wasting our time and energy.
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The number of employed persons by job type and sex, Australia, last year

The bar illustrates the amount of work citizens in Australia by their job type and gender. The data is from last year.
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Some people think that girls should take husband’s name after marriage while others feel that they should not follow this age old tradition. What is your opinion?

Thanks a lot for your email I hope you doung fine.
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Some people believe that sport is an essential part of school life for students, while others feel it should be purely optional. Discuss these opposing views and give your own opinion..

Thank you for your letter. I am so glad to receive email from you and so happy to hear that you are going to visit Moscow.
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People nowdays send than talk on text messages more frequently the Phone What are the reasons for this trend? Do the advantages of texting outweigh the disadvantages?

The older technological developments had a lot of benefits and impact on people's lives than recent ones. I disagree because nowadays technology more development than in the past.
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Shopping is now one of the most popular forms of leisure activity in many countries for young adults. Why is this? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, shopping has become more prevalent among teenagers in many countries. This is due to the fact that we are living in the world of consumerism and a throw away culture. In my opinion, I believe that it has more advantages than the disadvantages, which I will discuss in this essay with relevant examples.
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Some people think that the young people should be free to choose their job, but other people think that they should be realist and think more about their future.Discuss the both views and give your opinion.

All over the world many people think they should be free to select their occupation. Some of the other people think they should be accept the situation more about their outlook. I totally agree with this. In this essay I will discuss both views and I give in my opinion.
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The plans below show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.

The plans show a public park when it first opened in 1920 and the same park today.
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Describe a writer you would like to meet. You should say: who the writer is what you know about this writer already what you would like to find out about him/her and explain why you would like to meet this writer.

To describe a a writter, he is a monk and a leader of 7 million Tibetan’s inside and outside of Tibet. He is non other than His Holliness the Dalai Lama. I am familiar with his writings on Buddhist psychology , where it reminds about the compassion, how it helps one's own mind to keep calam and non reactive towards harmful actions or faulty language spoken to oneself. It was stated in one his writting that the compassionate mind helped him to survive his spirit. The eagerness came from that statement in one of his books that I want to meet him in personel to ask him how does that helped him to stay spirited. It was in his biography that he did have had tough time in late 1950s where he lost his country’s Independence and had to flee his own country.
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