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nowadys a gruop of people believe that children should have some extra resposibilities such as helping at home , help at work and etc. meanwhile , some people believe that children must enjoy their lives and I want to discuss both view in this essay.
Some individuals suppose that parents should plan free time activities for children. However, others claimed that children can decide to choose their own activities. In my point of view, parents should manage time activities for children.
We rarely stop to think that there are other creatures, that live here in earth with us and that every little thing we do affects them, like for example artificial lighting on the night, commonly known as light pollution, can be very negative towards not only wildlife but also humans.
The way to improve public health is very difficult to define. Because it means so many different things to different people. While some people link increasing the number of sports facilities and attracting people to the gym, Others think it is relative to a balanced diet. Yet others think that a clean environment rather than either regular exercise or healthy food is the only way to improve public healthy. Because people interpret helthy lifestyles in so many different ways for themselves it is difficult to give any deffinition that is true for everyone.
Some people argue that is government official need to expose their personal lives and some people think that should not to displayed in public media. I believe that politicians behaviour and activities should be showed.
Keeping animals in captivity ia a problem for many reasons. On top of that it's not fair to the animals, because it stops them doing what they naturlly do. In this essay, I will give my point of view on that topic.
Some people believe that the significant envorionmental problrm is the loss of special species of plants and animals. Other people are of the opinion that some others factors are more important environmental problems. This essay will be provided both aspects from my personal view.
Weather advanced education leads to success in these days or not seems to be the subject of public debet. Both aspects of this opinion is of common ideas, however, I would argue that educated individuals are not the only successful people.
The development of social networking has influenced individual asociational the communcicate as a whole. This writer believe social media can help many individuals connect.
The diagrams illustrate the percentage of students that finish study in secondary school who got a job, are unemployed and continue learning in three time periods, 1980, 1990, 2000.
There are many campanies forced the problems with the new employess such esecially in releationships accept and intract with customers for some causes i will discuss in my essay and i will expose some solutions of it .
Nowadays, in modern society, many people believe that in order to get a good job, someone must graduate and have a degree from university. Meanwhile, others believe that besides completing and having a degree from a university, experience and soft skills are more needed to secure a good job. Both sides will be elaborated on in this essay, and i will present my point of view on this issue.
The reasons of why people work could differ from one and another. Besides working for money, some people might work to achieve authority. For example, a man who is dissapointed by how the government works might dive into politics so he could he have the power to change things. These people are mostly those who can't stood by and wait for someone else to take action. Other reason why people work is to get a sense of fulfillment in their lives. Take a housewife who has the same routine from day-to-day. At some point, she'll feel drained and decided to pursue something else. By working, she'll get some sense of achievement at some point and won't feel like her life is stagnant. Another reason of why people work could be to raise their social status. In our society, social status could be determined by what people's jobs are. The more impressive the job is, the higher the social status are. In conclusion, there are plenty reasons of why people work.
It is important to consider how people addicted to use modern technology and our reliance on computer-based technology has become more pronounced than ever before. This essay will explore how we will be dependent on it and how we can take benefit from using it more.
In the contemporary world it is a common belief that the plenty of teenagers compared with the number of older people while there a number of storng arguments for advantages of young adults on the contrary.I believe that at present time there are huge advantages of teenagers outweigh the disadvantages. How ever this essy will illustrate how this issue support to achieve.
A skill, I learned in my childhood was swimming, it was taught by my father, he trained me different strokes at the hometown pool because, early swiming builds children muscles and bones strong as well as developed self confidence. I remember, in the begning sections, I had fear from running water, but with the passage of time , regular practice develops confidence and gradually I become perfect, therefore I decided to teach swimming to young once in bigger and advance pool of down town, which have latest equipments for pool sterilization and pump machines to generate artificial waves with different pressures, it will be saver and easier for new learners. I was trained, when my age was 15 years old, but I realized the best age to start save swinning in pool is 5 years because in this age children musles motor and sensory responses are fully developed. Some times, in water there is to high chlorine concentration and no proper micobes maintance, which causes sever ear and throat in...
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