IELTS Writing Samples Band 2.5

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At the present, the population of young adults in some country has overtake the population of older people. The young adult has become the majority of population. I will discussing the advantages and disadvantages. In my opinion, the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.
According to many people, discipline is behaving properly and it is achieved only when punishment is given. Some people think that punishing children is the best form of discipline. However, I completely disagree to this opinion. Smacking children not only affect their mental growth but also impact their emotional wellbeing.
To begin with,some people think that a lot of wealth is the main path to being happy.Hence,they work hard for earning money.In my opinion,there are so many things to making happy excluding money.I would like to discuss what other things in life can make people happy.
The given bar chart illustrates data about the percentage of visiting activities such as zoo, library, theatre and cinemas by different groups of people such as born in Australia (1), new migrants born in English-speaking countries (2) and new migrants born in other countries (3). Overall, cinema is the most popular place for people almost from all categories while the less popular is theatre. Also, it can be seen that zoos and libraries have almost the same statistics.
In many countries, online shopping become more familiar with people. While other said that shopping in stores is better than online shopping, I would hold the belief that it has many benefits when online shopping.
This line table represents how much some kinds of fast food was consumed by adolescents a year in Australia from 1975 to2000.
A common social phenomenon fəˈnɒmɪnən. i approve that women have the free right to decide whether have a baby or not when they are unmarried.
Nowadays, lots of people are against abusing children no matter what the reason is, while others think that punishing is necessary when it comes to teaching right and bad actions to them. From my perspective, I agree that kids should learn the difference between right and wrong when they are underage for some specific reasons. However, I do not agree that punishment is significant for their learning skill.
In today’s world, farming has been playing significant role.Farmers have been produce lots of products and many people consume these.However, people around the world still go hungry because of rich people want to consume too much without thinking others.
The map shows the changes in the central hospital between 2007 and 2010. In the first map of central hospital in 2007, we can see that the first ring road and the hospital road are three forks, and the hospital road and the central road are the intersection. There is a public parking lot on the east side of Hospital Road and there are few buildings around. In the year of 2010, one of the most notable changes were changes to roads and public facilities. The junction of the ring road and the center road and the hospital road becomes a ring circle and is connected to the bus station. The west and north sides of Central Hospital remain unchanged. A public car park was constructed to the east of the central hospital. It is worth mentioning that the existing road adjustment has made transportation more convenient, and the construction of bus stops and parking lots has provided people with more transportation convenience
The above line graph represents some data about the propotion of ownership of three types of electical devices in homes. The below line chart depicts the average of hours which these appliances turned on in each household per week. All data is gathered just for an unknown country in a century from 1920 to 2019.
Getting pocket money is exciting for children and adolescent, however have we ever thought of advantages and dis advantages of this practice ? In Most of the parts of the world Parents or guardians will be the one who are obliged to provide these pocket monies.
Nature has a more considerable influence on adult intelligence than upbringing. It is agreed that that the development of intelligence depends on genes and brainpower is inherited from parents. Firstly , this essay will discuss the passing of thinking abilities to the child and secondly , relationship between IQ level and nurture.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of energy consumption in five categories in the UK in the year 2000 and 2010.
The bar graph illustrates the data of the students studying in the four English speaking countries and the table represents the percentage of foreign students among the total students. Making the relevant comparison between the year 2004 and 2012.
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