IELTS Writing Samples Band 2

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Social media is a tool that brings many benefits to people. Study, work and play are all through social networks. However, nowadays, with the development of social networks, people are becoming more and more lazy. We are being too dependent on social networks, people are communicating less and less with each other, which leads to a younger generation becoming insensitive. Although social networks bring a lot of benefits, if we use them without control, we will abuse and become dependent on it. If I had a wish, I would like to return to the life of 10 years ago, I really want to part with social networks, but because now a lot of important and necessary information is used on social networks, I cannot give it up. Instead, I will know how to manage my time and use it in the most reasonable and effective way.
Social media is getting worse day by day. We use it as a program to relieve stress from all day but in nowadays, social media affect to much to our live. My opinion is about to reduce time using social media in a day.
Nowadays people are consuming more sweetened drinks.This could be attributed to extensive advertisement. One would wonder what government can do to discourage this trend. I think that by levying a high tax to companies that manufacture sugar based drinks,this would be reduced.
The line graph details how many Australian using four different languages as their mother tongue over the period 25 years.
In this days many youngsters are making a lot of criminals. It is very sad that number of criminal young people are increasing every time.
University education gives students more opportunities to have an experience studying abroad. I think this practice contribute more benefits than drawbacks.
The bar chart illustrates, analysis report conducted by using the Australian people who lives in 5 different cities (Sydney, Melbourne, Brisbane, Adelaide and Hobart) that use fresh coffee, instant coffee and having tea or coffee at a café’s in last 4 weeks. Percentages are based on the each city population.
In recent years, technology has been playing an indispensable role in any kinds of activities. It also became an essential part of educational process. However, some parents are against using gadgets while studying, meanwhile students are in love with such methods.
The pie charts illustrates a comparison on household expenditure between Japan and Malaysia in the year 2010. The concerned sectors including Housing, Transport, Food, Health care as well as Other goods and services. Overall, the highest participation rate belonged to Other goods and services in Japan with 29% in 2010. Meanwhile, the majority expense in Malaysia was Housing in total of 34% in the same year. The lowest expenditure for both Japan and Malaysia was in Health care region, 6% and 3% respectively. Moving forward with the rest of description, the second highest spent in Japan was in Housing category for 21%. On the other hand, Food sector was the secondary for Malaysia with 27%. Moreover, In food category, 24% was spent in total in Japan which considered to be 3% less than Malaysia. Consecutively, Japan spent 10% more than Malaysia in Transport aspect with retrospect of 20% and 10% respectively.
The graph above illustrates the amount of consumption of margarine, low fat and reduced spreads, butter in 6 years from 1981 to 2007. Unites are measured in grams.
children must complete all kinds of immunization to stay healthy otherwise any kind of disease can be harmful. these people claim that it's hazardous and not quite essential to vaccinate childrens. This essay will argue why vaccinating children against several diseases is entirely necessary eventhough its dangerous.
well there is alot of arguments behind the retirement of older people nowadays because they can do work all time in my view senior citizens has to take rest after thier retirement or they do not take any work after 50 because they need to take rest and take care health
I would hazard a gess, both statements are reasonable . Investigation to arts such as music, theatre and so on it's important, and effect of this investment we can feel just after several time. But culture and mental ability it's very important for people even they don't think about it. ,Furthermore some cultural activities can investigate by themselves. For,example very popular singers concert bring a huge amount of profits, even they not subsidized by government money. But other cultural activities can't be alive without government money, such as a social move which necessary for keeping social mental health, and make people behaviour better or at least keep at the same level.
The below process illustrates us instant noodles manufacturing process that use in a factory until it reached to customers with a bucket of noodles.
I have saw your advertisment about a voluntary work by a local newspaper, I always eagarly to do unpaid work because since my college I have been doing so many works related to service. Hence, I would like to do a job at museum. This kind of job gives a lot of happiness and satisfaction to me that's why I would like to do some job at a museum.
The map shows how a village called Ryemouth has developed over the last twenty-five years. There have been several changes taken place, the most noticeable being the increases in accommodation, the elimination of the fishing industry, and the introduction of sports facilities.
This graph illustrates the percentage of people who did not have jobs in each year from 2004 to 2008 comparing 3 countries, A, B and C.
The first line graph illustrates household electrical equipment usage percentage in a specific country between 1920 and 2019. Second graph gives us the information about human hours that spend for above specific gadgets during the same period. (Washing machine, fridge, vacuum cleaner)
The chart illustrates proportion of men and women of different age group doing exercise in the year 2010 in Australia.
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