IELTS Writing Samples Band 2

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The bar chart shows the ratio of females who decided to continue their education in five countries (UK, USA, Australia, South Korea, and France), in 1980 and 2015.
First of all, increasing salary will certainly improve employees' loyalty to the company. Many workers complain that the limited disposable income is the primary reason for them to permanently leave their enterprises. Considering the significance of wages, it comes as no surprise that the retention rate in companies that provides more benefits to its staff is far higher than others. Welfare, such as increased paid leave and holiday pay, will also help companys attract talents. Ultimately, when it comes to fierce competition, businesses that treat their workers badly will suffer brain drain.
Given is one bar chart illustrating the average hours of working per week among eight jobs and a pie chart that describes the proportion of people suffering from stress related illness among eight jobs.
Well there many reasons that i could like to mention below why balancing work could be difficult with other parts of lives
Healthier lifestyle is important for everyone to be fit and to live longer life. In recent days, this has changed a lot due to unhealthy diet and not involving us in physical activities and this leads to a major health issues for a people. There are many reasons behind these changes like not eating on time and changes in work environment. But it is our responsibility to be fit by involving us in a social activity and doing physical activities.
In recent years, a growing concern has been evolving around the importance of exams. People have mixed views on such an issue as some believe that the formal examination is significant to evaluate one's academic performance whereas other argue that course projects are necessary becuase it provides an accurate assessment. Personally, I agree that course work is indispensable when it comes to evaluation student's academic results for the following reasons.
Some person have motivate for working in a international company, the primary reason is salary,I agree totally,because when every one have high income, he or she has power in company and quality life.
Ryemouth hamlet expansion, between 1995 and now.
The given table illustrates the individuals' average food consumption every week in a European country in three years such as 1992, 2002, and 2012.
In recent years,a growing concern has been evolving around the necessity of prison. Some people believe that prisons should be removed, considering it may undermine criminals' mental well-being, whereas others argue that prisons can effectively deter repeated criminals. Personally, I believe the prison is an appropriate way of punishment for the following reasons.
There are controversy that many manufactured food and beverage goods contain high percentage of sugars which lead to general health issues. Here,I would discuss about the either side of pros and cons of opinion that sugary goods ought to be produced more expensive to intend people to eat less sugar.
High sales of unnecessary production has always been showing power of advertising. While majority of folks disagree, some people, including me, agree. Both merits and demerits are ellaborated here, in my essey.
The pie chart illustrates the employment of anthropologies after finish their undergraduate modules, the table demonstrates the salary information of anthropologies after working 5 years.
Lately I am not visiting restorants so often, but there is one restorant in Barcelona I had dinner once with my boyfriend. That was a fish restorant near Marina Vela Barcelona. The atmosphere of the restaurant was cosy and warm. Near the enter of the restaurant street musicians were playing folk spanish music so charmingly  and cute that and passersby were gaving them coins.
Nowadays, there are more and more tv programs and movies with violence scene, some people believe that this causes violence activities, this essay agree with this statement.
In 1990 and 2010, the number of trips made by children in a country to and from school using different transportations means is shown in the chart.
Given is a line graph illustrating the rate of occupation in caravan parks and hotel during Jun 08 to Sep 09.
With the influence of technology in our daily lives and the level of our dependency on modern devices, it is difficult to escape technology today. While some people think that its existence has no positive impact on the users, I agree with those who believe that it has some valuable impact on our lives.
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