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Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The graph below demonstrates that a country’s GDP cost on three areas, such as health , education , roads and railways, proportion during 2000 to 2025. To begin with, it is obvious that the proportion of the money on heath people cost steadily increasing while the roads and railways take up less and less proportion of GDP during the 20 years from 2000 to 2025 and become the lowest percentage of GDP in 2025 though it takes the highest proportion at the beginning, and both of the health and roads and railways occupied the same percentage which are approximately 4 percentage of GDP around 2006, and they finally take up the proportion of GDP are 7.5 and 2.6 respectively. As for the education, it begins with the lowest percentage of GPD and punctual during the 2000 to 2025 and finally become higher as 4.2 percentage than the beginning around less than 3 percentage and be the midst proportion of GPD compare to health and road and railways.
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The number of multicultural cities is increasing due to globalisation. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

The upgradation of cities is happening in the world due to hype in globalization. I Agree that there are more advantages compared to disadvantages.
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Some students take a year off either to work or travel. What is better - traveling or working?

Some students take a year off either to work or travel. What is better - traveling or working? I want to discuss both options. From my point of view both variants good. Some students take a year off either to work because maybe they must to make money in order to provide for yourself or your family, maybe they can get pleasure from work or that time almost most quantity people buy an IPHONE, naturally and thus students prefer working to buy an IPHONE. For instance my classmate Kamron, recently went to Russia to earn money and buy an IPHONE for himself, since all this friends use an IPHONE or maybe they prefer to work in order to in the future they have a affordable travel.
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Consider a situation where you are asked by your supervisor to participate in a group project at work. Your supervisor wants you to work with someone who has opinions that are very different than yours. Moreover, they feel very strongly about these opinions. Do you think that working with this person is a good idea?

Working with someone with different opinions as yours is challenging but good,below i will explain why i think working with such a person is a good idea.
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People who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch TV. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the people who read for pleasure in their free time have a better imagination than those who prefer to watch TV. In my opinion, this statement is somehow reasonable.
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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students.

In the modern world the computer has become essence for everyone and classroom should have computer which helps both teacher and student in learning process.It is often argued that this development is crucial for society, whilst others disagree and thinks this should increase numerous risk to student.This essay will discuss both view points.
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The government should ban smoking in public places , even though this would restrict some other people's freedom . Do you agree or disagree.

Smoking is injurious to health. Many scientists have proved that it is the main cause of deadly diseases like cancer, kidney issues and many more. The authorities should banned smoking in public locations as it also effects on other individuals. I strongly agree with the aforementioned notion and this essay will put forth supporting arguments with relevant examples.
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Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others,however,believe that boys and girls benefit more attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, educatinal problem between boys and girls is always hard explaining around the wordl. Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in a separate schools but in my opinion, I don't agree that. I think boys and girls can develope more from attending mixed school.
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University only requires to apply digital media rather than continuously upgrading textbook. Agree or disagree.

Nowadays, an increasing number of people use their phones or computers for educational purposes instead of traditional textbooks and upgrading information frequently in books has some problems. That's why it is often considered that universities must require only digital media instead of the conventional system. This essay will explain why I agree with this view on the basis of its benefits such as less damage to the nature and development of new learning methods.
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the percentage of Australian men and women in different age group who did regular physical activity in 2010

The bar chart illustrates the proportion of different ages male and female who do exercises regularly in Australia in 2010.
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Some people think money is one of the most essential factors in promoting hapinness. Do you think people can be happy without much money? What other factors contribute towards happiness?

Randomization was not observed and the intervention was not blinded between participant and researcher due to the nature of the intervention. No post-intervention follow-up was made, which made it infeasible to assess the long-term effect on behavioral change. Measurement bias may occur as the IG were required to self-monitor their BW, WC and BP at home without any standardized methods. Sample may not represent to the community as the recruitment was carried out only among patients at the hospital, which may lead to the potential selection bias. In general, this intervention shows prominence in significantly reducing WC, BW, BP and serum lipid except FPG after 12 weeks. Diet and exercise result were not reported in this study, which makes it impossible to evaluate the behavioral change in diet and physical habits. Long-term effect on behavioral change cannot be assessed properly and the sample size is quite modest and may not be representative to the community. A standardized method...
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solar panels can be used to provide electricity for domestic use. There are 2 main fuels for that: air and water. Give your oppinion what is the best way to receive the energy and make comparisons where relevant.

The scheme shows the way of how solar panels work in order to provide an electricity to household.
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One of the consequences of the improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expentancy is increasing. Do yo think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

When people get more medical care, people will have more maximum age and life expentancy will grow up. For disadvantages of this development, population will grow up too that need more source from our environment. The world are possibly damaged by more human. This advantages will not outweigh the disadvantages.
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Nowadays, there is a growing trend of private car ownership. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages or environmental problems associated with this?

In this recent years, our country seeing an increase in the ownership of private cars particularly in terms of convenient transport options. I believe this has a greater number of negatives than positives and both will be covered in coming paragraphs.
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People think that the best way to reduce crime is to give longer prison sentences. Others believe that there are other alternative solutions for reducing crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion on this topic.

This day, the number of crimes are increasing from a generation ago so the number of criminals are increasing too. Some people said that, giving a longer prison sentences can reduce the criminals. This essay will analyse both views.
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The gap between education in richer countries and education in poorer countries is a growing concern. What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

In many country all over the world today, they are many people who are extreamly slipped away from the education. This is because a huge difference between wealthy countries and poorer countries and this gap also increasing dramatically in this recent year. This is due to the fact that richer countries can approach to the education easier than poorer countries.
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The death penalty is the best way to control and reduce serious crime. To what extent do you agree?

Some people believe that capital punishment is extremely useful for reducing serious crime, while others think that it is unacceptable. However, both points of view are worth of discussion.
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Scientists tell us that some activities are good for health and others are bad. Despite knowing that, millions of people still continue doing unhealthy activities. What are the causes and what are the solutions for this?

Unhealthy lifestyle has become a common phenomena with the generation today. Although a wide section of the population is aware about the illeffects of unhealthy habits they continue to indulge in similiar behaviour. In this essay, I will discuss a few causes and solutions that could help deal with this issue.
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The climograph below shows average monthly temperatures and rainfall in the city of Kolkata. What do you thing about the situation with weather in the world?

The graph shows us a climate changing tendency of Kolkata. It use the numbers of average monthly temperatures and rainfall for description.
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one of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. "Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

The following bar chart collates the percentage of people in different fields of academic faculties. The contrast is presented between men and women in a period of year in 2008.
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