IELTS Writing Samples Band 2

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Nowadays,almost people is used to smartphone. Because smartphone is an essential human object for communication and work. But spending a large amount of time using smartphone can lead to health problem. This essay will discuss its advantages and this advangtages about this problem.
In digital’s area smartphone is used by a lot of people in the world. In this essay, the writer strongly thinks that owning a mobile phone will have more drawbacks than benefits.
this days, there are have been increase number of people with health issue are trying herbal medicines and treatments rather than go to hospital. in my prespective, it is negative development because it is means they unknowledge about health and danger for their health.
In this period of modernity many people are involed in the arts makes persons feel better.For many years, humans have been creatings and enjoying arts.In my opinion,I strongly agree with this nation and my opinion will be discussed in further paragraph with a suitable conclusion.
I am thrilled to talk about my recent vacation i went to a beautiful coastal island with my family
In the modern age.many people own a smartphone.This writer will discuss about the advantages of own a smartphone and disadvantages if people do not have their own one.
There are many negative impacts on countries from tourism. Tourists do many things that negatively affect local culture and the environment.
In my point of view, both of opinions have their own benefits and disadvanteges for its own students/teenagers. Firstly, with teenagers study all school subjects would provide foundation for their future learning, and also would help any of those teenagers who haven't figure out their specialization with try all subjects, this kind of learning will help them to become adaptable and increase their problem solving skill. But, this also have disadvantage, such as stress would easily happen.
some countries enhace foreign companies conducting business in their country. most people argue that government should consentrate to encourage local business than foreign businesses. in this essay I would like to state that I agree with the statement because it cause improve local income and improve human resource in the country.
The plans display the site of an airport present and whether it will look after development in next year.
Music is a universal language that transcends cultural barriers. It is undeniable that listening to music is one of the most psychological impact on human emotions and their moods in the western world. This essay, will explain how chords affects individual in daily lifestyle and the adaptation from it.
I had read your email last night. On that email you have been asking me suggestion about tried to find a new sport for us. I have one recommendation sport for us is a softball sport. Softball is a sport that came from Japan. I think it can suit us since we have a good skill like running with high speed. In thi conditions I know a place were we can learn this sports as a begginers. The location is in Gelora Bung Karno and the exact place is in Softball building near the Gate 5.
In the recent days several people argue that children's spare time, should be scheduled by their parents while others consider that children might have the liberty to pick their own activities along their free time. In my opinion, parents must be able to taught their kids about different routines and activities nevertheless, kids must choose their favorites.
In modren world, an expensives are growing day by day, during Covid19 situation emplyee feeling unemployeed due to their lack of jobs. I will discuss how to overcome this problem in upcoming paragraphs.
Many governments think, that economic progress is their most important goal, meanwhile some people think that other types of progress are equally important. I think that economic progress is one of the most important factor to become a sucessful country.
There are many films for children, some of them can be educational or just fun. I think that movies can have positive effect on children's education and teach them many thinks, but I don't think that it has only good influence. In this essay I will discuss why I think so.
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