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Some people think that leaving their home country provides better opportunities for work or study while others think that is better to stay in their home country discuss both points of view and give your own opinion

In recent years, many people living their country because they think that working and study abroad is easy while others think that it’s hard to leave your motherland. This essay discuss both perspectives and give my own opinion
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There is a considerable amount of evidence that increasing car use is contributing to global warming and having othe undesirrable effects on people's health and well-being. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

I am agree with this ideas, but i'm not totally agree. Because It's right a car can gave effects to human and contributing to global warming, meanwhile if we still use many coal power plant for our electric suplies it's also give contributing towards global warming and people's healt. Therefore we must reduce to use coal power plat. beside that we must have a policy to reduce a convensional car. Because if we still use a convensional car and coal power plant to our electric suplies it's make an effect to our healt and contributing more pollution to our planet, and make global warming worse. We must have a collaboration between us to make our planet healthy and cleaner. Like I said before, I'm agree with that statement but if we only reduce car and have a policy fo that it's not make our planet healty and cleaner. We must have a collaboration and make this planet healthy and clean again.
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The plans below show a harbour in 2000 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The map compares the structure of the harbour in 2000 and how it is built today.
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There is a debate over who should teach children to follow a healthy eating routine to children. Some argue that teachers ought to teach the students to choose more beneficial foods, others argue that parents play a crucial role in this process.

As we know, children spend the majority of their time in school. Such as their educators can give enough information about foods , which types of it useful and harmful. For example, how impact to their health all that they eat. Thus, perhaps they start to consume just low-calorie foods then any potato snacks or fast food.
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In some countries it is illegal to stop people applying for a job because of their age. Is this a positive or a negative development?

it is a possitive development.The rule makes hiring fair by not using age,it will benefit to economy and society,and sometimes it will bings some problem that we should solve it and make the world better.
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The plan below shows the village of Pebbleton 20 years ago and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the main changes which have taken in the Pebbleton between 20 years ago and today.
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Some people today prefer to get advice for medical problems and do not want to visit a doctor. Why is this? Is this a positive or a negative development?

There is no denying the fact that visit a doctor is crucial when you fell sick. While it is a commonly held belief that advice for medical problems is working, There is also an argument that mus by visit a doctor when you feel sick. This essay will analyse this topic from both points of view and express my opinion.
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(Self-owned vs. Rented houses in England and Wales)”

The given chart illustrates the proportion of households in self-owned and tenanted residences in England and Wales in the year between 1918 and in 2011. It is noticeable that some clear trends and patterns can be observed. Overall, the main purpose of given information is to highlight the ratio of self-possessed and hired lodging in two different years (1918, 2011).
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The plans below show a harbour in 2005 and how it looks today. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The two maps illustrate the William Harbour's important change experienced from 2005 to the presentOverall, the harbour has been more different facility from 2005 to the present. Furthermore, it also increases business and entertainment places. Whereas, at the same time, some of the facilities have been recreated, illustrating how the Harbord form business has turned into more tourist.
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In many countries, people wear more western-style clothes (suits and jeans) than their traditional clothes. What is the reason for this? Is it a positive or negative development?

In many countries, people like to wear other traditional clothes such as jeans or suits. Some people argue that, it is negative development for countries, but other believe that, it is positive outcome for countries. I will explain both points before reaching conclusion.
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The plans below show the layout of a university's spot centre now and what it will look after redevelopment. write at least 150 word.

The given maps below illustrate the appearance of the university sports center before and after the development from currently to future.
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advnces technology and automation have reduce the need for manual labour To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I whole-heartedly agree with the benefits of technology and automation to the advancement of man-kind. It increases productivity, cost-efficiency and time-allottment for other activities. From as early as the industrial revolution, we see a massive growth in the global economy, stemming from the invention of machines. Modern planes and ships make global trading possible in a matter of days, whereas a hundred years ago, this may have taken months. A more recent invention like Google, has eradicated the need to travel all the way to your local library and skim through the books just to find one simple answer. The evolution of technology is the key to providing the world with the freedom to grow further.
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Education for young people is important in many countries. However, some people think that the government should spend more money on education for the adult population who cannot read and write. Do you agree or disagree?

It is common known that youngsters are the base of the society, and they are the future of the nation. However, there are a educational gap between the population, especailly in the adult people. This leads to having a number of them not having the ability to read or write. Consequently, this put pressure on governement to decide whether putting the larger spending on youngers or adults. It is necessity that youngers have the big budget.
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It is important for all towns and cities to have large public spaces such as squares and parks. Do you agree or disagree?

In modern era, there is a lot of parks and squares in towns or cities. In my opinion, the parks have impact for both mental and physical health . Therefore, many of teenagers and young people become open minded how important to do exercise. and also squares and parks helpful to walking or running . However, people how interested about exercise . will know how important to have places you can do sports there . at the same time parks giving the city more benefits , such as reduce using cars or train. Moreover, most of people will have a healthy lifestyle to walking around the streets. Which is helping the stoes and economy to develop. and many people will start using public transport . Additionally, I once read article shows 70% of people are fit because they don't walk . To conclude, parks and squares improve the health lifestyle . And give the city Beautiful views.
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Studies show that crime rates are lower among those with educational degrees. Therefore, the best way to reuce the crime rate is to educate criminals while they are still in prison. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

The educational degrees, I agree crime rates is up to educational degrees, because, the humen know many thinking can know what can i do. For ex, human maybe educational law, you can know what can't do, you know doing this will be crime. If you no educational degrees, you maybe doing you think you this, but this maybe can't do. So educational degrees but also know book know, and hlep the human lower crime rates. In Hong Kong DSE china, can educational how to do life, how to do human. For ex, china educational you how to life your ded and mum, this can educational many human to doing good. If you is educational degrees maybe lower crime rates, like to young kids, kids maybe do many think, kids thinking what to do what, because kids no deep thinking, no deep thinking doing this is good or not good. so educational degrees is are mine point, is lowercrime rates mine point.
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Some people believe that children should do sports so that they will grow up as healthy adults, but others feel sports are just about enjoying yourself. Discuss these both views and give your own opinion.

There are diffrenet opinoins regarding children sports. Some people think that sports helps children to become helthier because its improve their life stayle and enhanse their bodies. On the other hand other people believe that sports is only for those who have over weghit or medical issues. In my opinion I agree that sports is good for children.
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In next centuries, people will not tend to buy both paper books and newspapers to read or learn. We will satisfy with reading e-books which will not require any money from us in these days. I believe that this type of reading that has got more advantages is more convenient to understand fast.

people alwes find defrend ways to make life easy. they readig and explore. also the tecnolagy help us to do it . for example people in past used to read books and news paper but now all this being on ai way .
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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters hat affect them. Discuss both and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, children thend to rely on their parents or others rather than stand alone. This leads them to be unable to think individually after being an adult in the future. However, setting the mindset by their own selves is quite important to them, which can be developed only in teenage. Even if problems so smail or not, the way gives them a wisdom foward to a life. Therefore, I think importance of decisions made by themselves is closely connected with the first option. Both of them are required similar skills from children.
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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now,and how it will look after redevelopment.

The maps depict the layout of a university’s sports center now and the future plan about how to rearrangement it.
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People nowadavs are trving to slow down and reverse the aging process. What are the benefits and drawbacks of postponing the aging process?

It is undeniable that with the aging, people tend to do lot of high-costing surgeries or implants to look younger, and putting themselves in a situation that will cost them high demand of money to look like their youngerself. While, some people believes that aging is a normal process of human, lot of disagress with that statement.
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