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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. What are its causes, and what solutions can be offered?

In my opinion,The modren lifestyle is the main reason,We went from doing a physical daily activitys to rarely moving our bodyes,Also the food is completly changed from tha past few years,It is a normal thing to eat unhealthy foods for example like chips,sweets,junkfoods and suger,when a fewer amount of people try to be healther much more other live there lifes with out concedering health issues,How ever there are people give the blame to the gym prices due to the high costs of them there are less people could go the the gym,But is the gym the only way to be healthy?I do not think so
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In many countries children are engaged in some kind of paid work. Some people regard this as completely wrong, while others consider it as valuable work experience, important for learning and taking responsibility. What are your opinion on this?

I think in children age, they are not ready to make a family with age condition and menthality. Because they don't know yet about how to survive to themselves. After married and have a baby, make them another priority than themselves. They need to think about money, harmonization, health, education, food, and other things about their family. Build a family is not easy. Our prioritize will not be the same again as like we single. We need to seperate our time to each other. We need to think about "us", not about "me" again. And not only that, two family will join each other to be a big family and it's not easy. Because it may happen when one of our family member not match each other. Different if we focus of ourselves first to make our dreams come true, we can study a lot of thing about the world, we can make a lot of friends and so on.
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Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school, Do the advantages of this outweight disadvantages.

Some experts say that it is better for children to beginning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. However, there are both advantages and disadvantages of the thing. in this essay, I will look at both sides and try to draw some conclusions.
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Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food,clothes and entertainment)is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes.Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

I think children is individuals and clevers.There are two opinions some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters And other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. I think the two opinions no problems. The next are my opinions about above opinions .
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Acquiring new knowledge and skills doesn't always happen quickly. Do you think that patience is key when it comes to learning, or do you think it is possible to learn things quickly if you are motivated? Support your opinion with your personal experience and observation.

For Acquiring any new knowledge or skills requires alot of efforts and hardwork. During learning phase of any new skill the patience is key to success.Let me share the personal example.When I was in my second semester, I was struggling with programming course, I didnot understand anything in the class also I was not able to code.But I was determined enough to hit the ground running. I started solving programming questions daily ann I also started to read books for concepts. In this way for cope up the situation and at the end score 90 percent marks in the final example.To conclude this, During early stage I always fel like changing of my field but I was working with patient and at the end I get success.
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Out of a country’s health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The presented par expresses the average earnings in the republic of Ireland in five different years, with projections for the future, Earning are in US dollars. Overall, in 2018 had the highest percentage of earnings in the Republic of Ireland On the other hand, in 1968 had the lowest percentage of earnings in the Republic of Ireland In the year 1998, the average earnings in the Republic of Ireland had doubled since 1968 . But as we can see in 2008 it dropped down to a shortage of a quarter. In the year, 2018 the average earnings in the Republic of Ireland it had tripled since 1968. Between the year, 2008 to 2018 in had increased by a third.
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In many countries it is now illegal to smoke in public places. It is only fair that people who wish to smoke should have to leave the building. Do you agree or disagree?

Smoking is injuries to health. Smoking in the public area is strictly prohibited in most of the countries, but still some people are looking for smoke free zone to smoke. In my opinion I agree that an indivudual shoul not smoke in the common area. In this essay I will brefiely explain why I acecpt thr given statement.
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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Compare and contrast the advantages & disadvantages

Nowadays, a lot of contries in our world had launched new propaganda to encourge people giving birth because of the target that they want to expand the gross domestic productivity. Therefore, the number of childbirth has been increased resulting in a large number of young adults.
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Think about someone who has encouraged you in life. How have they encouraged you? Give specific examples.

Think about someone who has encouraged you in life. How have they encouraged you? Give specific examples.
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Some people think young people should be free to choose their job, but other people think they should be realistic and think more about their future. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Having a job is very important to build your future. In my openion being free in choosing your job is important. Also thinking about your future while choosing your job is important.
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Despite a large quantity of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays one of our mean problem is having large number of gyms but sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the world . And this result of people who don’t favor gym and people have problems with their mental health or just because they’re in depression.
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Many people today are worried about cybercrime chess hacking and identity theft. What problems does cybercrime cause, and what solutions can you suggest for ordinary people and business to take?

First of all, cybercrime comes from networks. The network provides other's identity for ourselves. This identity is different for our real identity. People think network identity is a protection which is others will not know their real identity. Therefore, people doing some unacceptable actions. For instance, lied other's money, lie people send sex photos and force them paying money to delete photos. The cause of cybercrime is autonomy.
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Some people think that newspapers are the best way to get news. However, others believe that other media are better sources of news. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

My opinion is media better than newspapers to get news.
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: Some people think that every human being can create art (e.g. music, paintings, poetry), while others believe that they need to have special skill. Discuss both views and give your opinion

At least a quarter of our current population have debated a creation of art being or not being available for everyone.While ones believe its pivoted into human nature others highly doubt it by refering to need of special skills and talent, but who is right?
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Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. Write atleast 250 words.

Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can indeed cause both social problems and practical problems. However, the extent to which these issues affect an individual can vary greatly depending on various factors.
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An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The better appearance , the more respectful you received. Nowadays, people judge others by thier appearance in only one second. Therefore , the number of plastic surgery is increasing. Makeup can make some of thier appearnaces different. However, it cannot change anatomical structures of the face.
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Some people feel that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy by taking pictures of them everywhere, while others believe this is just the price of fame. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Firstly i would like to discuss both sides and try to be fair with each side so I will begin taking about the first side which they claim that paparazzi should not follow celebrities and invade their privacy and I would totally agree because when you put yourself in their shoes and take the time to really think about it you will realize that it is actually very annoying and uncomfrtable it would be to have pictures of you when ever or where ever you go. Although the other side that thinks that believe this is just the price of fame i would also totally agree. For the simple fact that this is the price of fame, sadly fame isn't only about being loved and rich or so on it also has a very dark side to it that not many celebrities talk about such as paparazzi invadeing their privacy and taking photos of the all the time.
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The percentage of overweight children in western countries has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the possible causes and effects of this disturbing trend and offer a solution.

The percentage of burn weight rose by 20 percent by recently ten years who many majority of young people. The reason why, a lot of influence person demonstrate their thin body and has a bed healty.
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In some cities public parks and open space are being changed into gardens where local residents can grow their own fruits and vegetables. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays, The world much more need to be germinated because our natural resource will be jeoparsized therefore I strongly support this change and this essay will examine advantages of vegatitions.
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Group or team activities can teach more important skills for life than those activities which are done alone. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that activities are crucial to the health of people.While commonly held belief that the activities better to do it by yourself.In the essay, I will discuss all sides, and I will shed light on the advantages and disadvantages as a result, I will draw on my personal .
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