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In many societies, there is a growing emphasis on individualism, with people prioritizing their personal goals and desires over collective interests. Is this a positive or negative development?

In many years people has lived with collectivism, but last centuries have been advertising with individualism. And I think it is succesfully step for next human revolution, but other people did not think so this situation, why?
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Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case?

In development life have criminals and they do own error again. This problem through support government and society find solve. Cause solution is problem such as unemployeement, lack of promotion worthy of competence, recognition of personality and, at result fulfillment of life needs through it.
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Some people believe that after the child begins his/her schooling their teachers will have more influence than their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays,this topic is always disputable that after starting kindergarten children have more inspired by their teacher rather than guardians.I have completely agree with this statement and write some words related to this belief.
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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

many countries the amount of crime is increasing, I believe the factor of that is about the education and weak law enforcement so there is many people not afraid to the rules and because of lack of education that makes many people doesn't think twice to commit a crime such as stealing goods, kidnapping and even murder.
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Many people today spend most of their free time at home watching TV series or movies instead of going out. Do You think this is right or wrong ?

In today's world , most of the individuals spend their leisure time by watching television or films in the home rather than going outside . This is not right, because these activities become the reason of obesity as well as less social intraction . I will discuss the reasons along with the solution in the upcoming paragraphs .
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You have bought some clothing online and are not satisfied with your purchase. Write an email to the company that you bought the clothing from. In your email, • give details of the purchase • describe the problem • explain why you need a replacement urgently

I am writing this to inform you that I bought a few costumes from your company at amazon, and am discontented with the purchase I made.
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Cooking food is a waste of time in today’s hectic life. Fast food restaurants are helpful in modern living and it is less stressful. Do you agree or disagree?

Intro: food is essenital part for a human being to survive. there was a time when people cook food twice in a day in ever home but now time has changed and people willing to ear outside food or fast food.
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Many people in poor countries die from diseases that are curable because they cannot afford the medication required. Do you believe that drug companies should make their products available at reduced prices in these countries? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There are many people in countries that deal with poverty who die from curable illnesses because of money shortage countries like Africa and India
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Governments in many countries have recently introduced special taxes on foods and beverages with high levels of sugar. Some think these taxes are a good idea while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is no denying the fact that athuoritaes put taxes in food that have a high level of sugar. While it is commonly held belief that government in some countries has specific taxes on food.There is no orgument that opposes it, in my opinion , I consider that taxes is perfect idea otherwise in food or other things. To begin with , I think that taxes a good way to handel our income. In other words, taxes make is buy less and that will help us to maintain the
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In some countries, people prefer to rent a house for accommodation, while in other countries people prefer to buy their own house. Does renting a house have more advantages or disadvantages than buying a house? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People living in different regions tend to rent a house, while some beleive buying it is the best way. The writer strongly claims that despite the advantage of not caring about the renting fees when purchasing a house, the demerits of potential future fees as well as the responsible pay for preserving the house outweigh the merit.
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In the past, people used to travel abroad to look for many differences from their country. Nowadays, cities throughout the world are becoming more and more similar. What are the reason? Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

The last time, many people used to travel foreign country to look for many differences from their country. However, cities on over the world are becoming more and more similar. The writer argues the main reason is global and to avoid burnout outweigh the drawback of laziness.
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in some countries, it is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age . is this a positive or negative development?

it is often said that in many nations around the world , there is illegal for companies to reject job applicants for their age .it is positive for them to get early and they will gain more opportunities for their growth.
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extinction of animals cause by habitat destruction and pollutants

Nevertheless, this problem can be tackled by the authority having strict laws towards industrial activities in enterprises.More specifically, the state can set a limit in the extraction of greenland and besides, frequently examine the wastewater treatment in factories. For this reason, if there were any shortcomings in radically treating sewage before releasing it into the environment coupled with the overuse of exploting green spaces, those must receive a monetary fine and a ban from continuing to go in work for a time period. Vietnamese authority is a revelant example, which without informing, found some factories skipping the waste purification, afterwards, forces it to totally be closed down three years later and compensate for nearly five hundred millions vietnam dong for once violation.
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living in a country where you have to speak a foreigen language can cause seriouse social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As far as I`m concern, having some problems such as communication issue and some partical ones I believe that happens when you are living in another countries and you have to speak another language. I will list these problems that might to happend.
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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

In the beginning the internet its more important things in the life ,you can not do anything with out internet ,you can not know what happen in the another country and you can’t read news in the internet ,in the past you can read newspapers but now you have it in your phone ,its sad to lose thing like papers but this is the future ,in my opinion i agree what future need and what technology want ,if you imagine if they no internet how acn you call your friends or your family ,its so hard to imagine things like this ,some times i dont agree because i spent too much time in the internet and do nothing in my real life , i spend more 8 hours in the week and in the weekend i spent more than 9 hours ,sometimes you should take break from internet and read some book or walk few hours ,and actually everything come or becoming into the past ,just take a prith
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Ques: Being a celebrity- such as a famous film star or sports personality – brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

Becoming a person with a great fame can eventually cause more disadvantages than advantages. Hence, the problems are the privacy exploitation and the public's expectations, which are extremely annoying.
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Nowadays a few people take their family with them abroad whenever they go on a business trip. Is it a positive or negative development in your opinion? To what extent do you support this development?

There are trend which is live for join family doing meet go to foreign. I believe that is develop a negative and organisation must careful in that situation. This essai would decribe how to household help in get balance among work and life such as anyway mistake a infomation include relevan example for appreciate point that.
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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or diagree with this statment

Some argue that the most crucial improvement of the last century is computing. I fully agree with the former view and will demonstrate why I chose this view in the following paragraphs.
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Some exploration is too expensive and money should be spent on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, many people spend money on space exploration rather than spend on important things. In my opinion, I disagree with this idea and think that it is one of important parts for our life.
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Diagram showing the structure and use of a simple solar panel.

Contained in the diagram is information pertaining to change sun rays into energy through a solar panel. Overall, it is a simple process, commencing with the structure of solar panel and the transform cool air, water into hot.
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