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Many working people get little or no excercise either during tge workinf days or in their free time, and have health problems as a result. Why do many working people not to get enough excerise? What can be done about this problem.

The Reason of people not getting a time for the excercise is because of their busy schedule. As The standard work timings require 8-9 hours after it people get very limited time for the other activites such as being with their familes, managing daily chores etc. therefore working people do not get enough time for the workout. additionally, doing excercise is also dependend on the culture as in Asia most of the people find it normal not to work out or taking care of their health, lack of awareness and proritising excercise over other work is not common.
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Your friend has been offered a palce on course at the university where you studied. She would like your advice about finding a place to live.

Dear Komal, I'm writing this email to you, advising what place should be the best for you to reside as you mentioned the same university where I used to study a few months back. Firstly, I would like to state about my accommodation, I used to reside on Nelson the street which is a street across the University, it was a detached house where all the faculties were included but my landlord would never let I use the kitchen though it was included within the rent. I was very disappointed as it was not a the quiet atmosphere for a student. In the end, I would suggest you do not make the the same mistake which I committed, for a ,student the best accommodation is a university hostel which is full of other students and you could ,actually get help for your assignments from the other students studying the same course. I hope everyone is doing well in your family. Yours sincerely, Karina.
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Your friend has been offered a palce on course at the university where you studied. She would like your advice about finding a place to live.

I'm writing this email to you, advicing what place should be the best for you to reside as you mentioned the same university where I used to study a few months back.
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In some countries, the proportion of elderly people will become higher than the proportion of younger people. Will this be a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, not many old people live with their family. In my opinion, this trend has both benefits and problems.
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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?.

The picture presents a comparison of the park map in 1980 with the present moment. At first look, a major change in park layout has been observed with significant changes to tree and flower sections on the east section of the park.
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WRITING TASK 2 Some parents buy their children whatever they ask for, and allow their children to do whatever they want. Is this a good way to raise children? What consequences could this style of parenting have for children as they get older? Write 250 words.

It is widely known that some parents would buy their children whatever they ask for and allow them to do whatever they want. In my personal opinion, this is not a good way in raising children because by applying that style of parenting, we unconciously have trained the children to become a spoiled and ignorant person. As the consequences, when they got older, they will act as they wish without knowing that there are some rules in every situation. All their wishes also must be obeyed without realizing whether it is good for them or not.
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People should look after their health because this is a duty to the society not just a personal benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a statement that community should responsibility about their well-being, cause community to have responsibility for association. I completely disagree with that point of view because all community have to choose to concern about their health or not. And there is not any responsibility to care about their health or not.
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A person's worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honour, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

the subject of judging people according to social status nad material possesion has become one of problem in this day and also loss of imnportant to see pepole by their values such as honour, kindness, and trust. i strongly disagree with the view, because it will underestimated people easily that dont have good social status and will make a bad hustle culture.
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Some people think that creativity is innate, while others think it is something that can be acquired. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Creativity is an act of turning imaginative things into material. So one part of people claim that this ability is something innate, while, another part contend that it's acquired. This essay argue with second one.
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People today can use the internet to learn about lives and cultures in other countries, so is not necessary to travel anymore? Do you agree?

Nowadays, the internet is very useful for everybody. It helps a lot with the communication with other people, regardless of where the person is , in addition, we can use the internet as a search palce and also learn about the other country's culture. But I completely disagree with this opinion because I think that human interaction is important in knowing people and its surrounding.
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Some parents think it is a good idea to give their children mobile phones, while others disagree. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In order to monitor their children, some parents believe that to give their kids mobile phones than rent a babysitter, moreover, it is simplify them to communicate while they are apart. However, many people claim that this idea could lead their kids to become phone-addict and affect their school life. This essay will fully discussed about this issues with the writer's point of view.
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Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve the growing traffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement? What other measures do you think might be effective?

Thanks a lot for putting me at your home and making my one week stay comfortable..
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Many people today find it difficult to balance the demands of their work and personal life. What are the causes of this situation, and what can individuals and employers do to reduce the problem?

Firstly people in our morden day life find it do hard to balance work and personal life because of competition among eachother and social media it has had people to forget that the two needs yo be separated and managed very well.
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CATERING STAFF WANTED Are you free weekends from 20th June to 5th September? We need staff to serve food at events including family celebrations & business dinners. Previous experience desirable but not essential. Apply at: [email protected] Write an email applying for the job (170-200 words).

Dear Sir / Madam, I am writing with regards to the advertisement for catering staff I would like to apply for this position . I am 19 years old i just graduated school that is exactly for catering, cooking, and studying as waitress . I had very good grades in the three subjects . Also i have two certificates for leval B2 in English and Spanish. So if the guests or the client speaks that language i can help . Over the past two years I‘ve been working as a waitress and do catering. I am very polite and have the ability to communicate well with the costumers and guests, I‘m not clumsy, and I‘m very organized.I find that work enjoyable and my boss was impressed of my work. I coosider myself to be hardworking, reliable and cheerful . I am also fluent in Spanish and English. I will be gratefully if you consider my application. I have attached a copy of my CV and reference from my previous employer. I look forward to hearing from you. Your faithfully, Silvia-Alexandra Andreeva
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Crime appears to be rising in most countries in the world, especially among young people. What the possible causes of this trend, and what solutions would be effective reducing crime.

Recently, crimes are increasing among the young people. There are many things are involved in this situation, but how to are we react it properly? There are a number of problems are more affected.Perhaps the major problem parents who aren’t planned to get a married and have a baby. A second issue is there is a lack of educational system and responsibilities to influence students. The social network is very loose in our country and there is no age limit. A further problem is the family divorces increased. Finally, a society is getting single mothers, insecure children and low regards moral. Turning to possible solutions, the biggest step would be to improve parents have a high responsibility to their children also listen more and discuss the issues together is important. Parents and teachers work together to teach interestingly social and ethic lessons…… create the right children. Secondly the government should pay attention to children’s access to social networks. Overal...
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Crime is increasing among youngsters. What is cause of this situation and what solutions?

According to research, it seems that teenagers are getting involved by criminal activities day by day in most countries within the world. The causes of this involvements to be focused on two areas and the number of solutions also appear to be possible. Perhaps a major factor here is bad environment grown up around negative parent who do not care their own child or childhood trauma like bullied by other children can affect their life, and cause to fall throughout life. Second factor is a lack of education which students study. Too much self-studies make children to slack off. Turning to possible solution, obvious step would be teach new parents to take more care of their children. Lastly, make primary school teacher to more educate and watch their students and make less self-study because self-study makes students more individual but not all students. Especially primary school, students need teachers more than anyone. In summary factor of bad environment is main problem.
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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of the most people's lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Part of individual think out adolescent periode of time are more pleasant.while other think that the adulthhoob bring up more joy in life. In my opinion, the happiest part of the life of every individual differs from person to person.
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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

It's true that the gap between the city and village dwellers standards in many regions of the world. Every countries to benefit cities than rural areas. In this essay discusses, what are reasons and how be solved in this problems.
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A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefit cities rather than rural areas. What problems can this cause? How might these problems be reduced?

The rise in living standards in the countries is developing day by day is growing. This is will not benefit only rural areas but also cities. This can cause any problem but there are many way to reduce it.
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With the development of tourism, more and more cheap and discount fights are made available to holidaymakers. Some environmental groups claim that governments should tax air traffic more because its growth has a tremendous impact on the environment.

As a member of Gen-Z I grew up in a fully developed world. I enjoy the convenience that the modern society have. I don't agree with government should tax higher on air traffic.
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