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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?

The table and pie chart provide the data about transportation and using of car in Edmonton in the entire period.
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Some people believe that it is fairer to assess a student’s ability based on their performance during the whole course rather than giving a formal examination at the end of the course. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Assessing a student’s ability based on his/ her activeness through the whole course is thought to be fairer than evaluating through exams. I agree with this view for certain reasons.
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Think about your response from yesterday. Where do you want to be 10 years from now. Go back and take a look at what your wrote if you have to. Now with that in mind, What kind of life do you want to have built in the time period?

Wow, a great question. I think, the most important think is clarity and peace. That's why even when I was a young boy, I chose the nickname Huzura for myself. Thinking of which, it's weird that I still couldn't achieve that inner-peace. I don't know what to do about it. Maybe I can Google it after writing this. Maybe I'll deter from this goal and accept it is what it is.
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the only way to improve road safety is to give much stricter punishments on driving offenses. To what extent do you agree or disagree

It is true that hard punishments can increase road safety. But, I believe it can not be the only way and we need more different solutions. I am not really agree to just stricter punishment.
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Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life.

In today's world many individual think that people could not know nothing from the last our life nowadays, while some people of the opinion that ancient times is a beneficial cause of data people's life.I personally go with the letter and in the following paragraphs I shall discuss both viewpoints and finally give my opinion.
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According to a recent study, the more time people use the Internet, the less time they spend with real human beings. Some people say that instead of seeing the Internet as a way of opening up new communication possibilities world wide, we should be concerned about the effect this is having on social interaction. How far do you agree with this opinion?

Ever since the advent of internet, a new era of communications began. Although internet has removed the communication bariers, it also deminished the time spent on interpersonal interactions. In my opinion, face to face communication is heavily impacted by the communication through the internet.
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spoken communication is always more powerful than written communication. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, with the improvement in online platforms and more affordable programmes, people are able to communicate in verbal way, compared to the past. Some people believe that oral communication is more effective than written communication. In my opinion, these two forms of communication are very important in our life.
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Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over recent years humans could nothing improve the nature.Just leadership and big organization.Some people believe that it is also good thing some poor family. I agree with the statement government should spent myriads of money on environment.in the following paragraphs. I shall put forth my arguments to support my opinion.
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Teenagers should follow elders .They should challenge the thinking of elders. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Teenage is a phrase of life in which children question almost everything around them and change their lives in any direction.We should advise them or let them do whatever they want.
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Computers are being used more and more in education and some people believe there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt, without computer life is in vain. As, education system has changed due to excessive use of computers. Some people believe that decrease the importance of teachers in education by the passing time. I disagree with statement because teachers our guides and nobody can replace them in education system.
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Some experts suggest a method to solve the environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuels and all vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When it comes to the issue about environmental protection, somebody illustrates that the cost of fuels and cars should be raised. In my point of view, I disagree this method.
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In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. There is a logic that they should share the housework equally with men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In addition, division family tasks can promote gender equality, environment with an emphasis on mutual support and respect. For example, if the housework is given equally between the parents, the efficiency of working in the home is better and make children understand that no one is exempt from family duties. Besides, sharing housework is a way to show our love and care for our dear family. This will help family affection become strong, sociable and close. It can be expressed through simple acts of interest like husbands washing dishes after meals instead of wives. Men will gradually understand the value of family tasks if they help women in housework.
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write an narrative paragraph about a challenge/ experience that you have faced

Last year, I had an unforgettable experience. It was in a sunny morning, and I went to the beach with my friend. We started going to the beach in the early morning, 5AM. When we arrived, the sunrise was so amazing and the weather was good. After took some beautiful photos, I and my friend went swimming. At first I did not dare to swim far because it was a deep one. While I was swimming and was enjoying the warm water, my foot was suddenly hurt. At that time, my mind was so scared, I tried to scream under the water but I could not. Everything was getting bad, I could not breath, I felt I was going to die. Right away, my friend ran to me and save me, she woke me up. She was totally shocked. Fortunately, I was safe. After that accident, I am being scared of the water. I try to be more careful when go to the beach and not to swim alone. It was an unforgettable memory in my life.
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Car owner ship have increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now’big traffic jam’ How true do you think the statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays everyone has a car,which causes jams.there are a couple of solutions that might help,which i will discuss in that essay.
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The most school offers some type of physical education program to their students .Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

Physical education has become the important subject in the curriculum of students.Physical fitness is must for everyone.Due to this, myraid schools provide physical education programm either as mandatory subject or as optional.
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Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

Some people argue that students should be able to choose to study mathematics and philosophy, and not be mandated to do so. of their own choice instead of compulsory. I agree that math should be compulsory in schools even if students find it difficult, but philosophy can be made optional.
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There is an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbor. What causes this situation? How to solve it? Give your own idea.

The diagrams illustrate the way in which cameras were developing from 1839 to 2000.
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Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

There are states in which people can make their own decisions such as some developed countries and states where government makes decisions about people's lifestyles and that's the example of some of the dictatorial states.
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Big salary is more important than job satisfaction?

After graduating from college, life pushes us have to find the job. Especially for the newbie who enter the workforce. Some people think that big salary is more important than job satisfaction. I have two reasons to against this issue.
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Taking a year of between finishing a school and starting university is a waste of time student’s time. To what extent do you agree?

Firstly, taking a break from education can allow students to gain valuable work experience in their choosen field, which gives them a real taste of employement. People without university diploma are unlikely to find high-powered jobs. To illustrate, students can possibly work in a restaurant as a waiter or waitress for a low wage. If they work hard much but earn little, they may understand the importance of high schools as a guarantee for the relatively easy life. As a result, this situation induces the aspiration to study hard among the potential students.
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