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Teenagers should follow elders .They should challenge the thinking of elders. Discuss both and give your opinion.

Teenage is a phrase of life in which children question almost everything around them and change their lives in any direction.We should advise them or let them do whatever they want.
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Computers are being used more and more in education and some people believe there will soon be no role for the teacher in education. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt, without computer life is in vain. As, education system has changed due to excessive use of computers. Some people believe that decrease the importance of teachers in education by the passing time. I disagree with statement because teachers our guides and nobody can replace them in education system.
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Some experts suggest a method to solve the environmental problem is to increase the cost of fuels and all vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When it comes to the issue about environmental protection, somebody illustrates that the cost of fuels and cars should be raised. In my point of view, I disagree this method.
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In many countries, more and more women have full-time jobs as men. There is a logic that they should share the housework equally with men. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In addition, division family tasks can promote gender equality, environment with an emphasis on mutual support and respect. For example, if the housework is given equally between the parents, the efficiency of working in the home is better and make children understand that no one is exempt from family duties. Besides, sharing housework is a way to show our love and care for our dear family. This will help family affection become strong, sociable and close. It can be expressed through simple acts of interest like husbands washing dishes after meals instead of wives. Men will gradually understand the value of family tasks if they help women in housework.
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write an narrative paragraph about a challenge/ experience that you have faced

Last year, I had an unforgettable experience. It was in a sunny morning, and I went to the beach with my friend. We started going to the beach in the early morning, 5AM. When we arrived, the sunrise was so amazing and the weather was good. After took some beautiful photos, I and my friend went swimming. At first I did not dare to swim far because it was a deep one. While I was swimming and was enjoying the warm water, my foot was suddenly hurt. At that time, my mind was so scared, I tried to scream under the water but I could not. Everything was getting bad, I could not breath, I felt I was going to die. Right away, my friend ran to me and save me, she woke me up. She was totally shocked. Fortunately, I was safe. After that accident, I am being scared of the water. I try to be more careful when go to the beach and not to swim alone. It was an unforgettable memory in my life.
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Car owner ship have increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now’big traffic jam’ How true do you think the statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays everyone has a car,which causes jams.there are a couple of solutions that might help,which i will discuss in that essay.
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The most school offers some type of physical education program to their students .Why is it important? Should physical education classes be required or optional?

Physical education has become the important subject in the curriculum of students.Physical fitness is must for everyone.Due to this, myraid schools provide physical education programm either as mandatory subject or as optional.
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Some people think that because some children find some subjects such as mathematics and philosophy difficult they ought to be optional instead of compulsory. To what extent do you agree?

Some people argue that students should be able to choose to study mathematics and philosophy, and not be mandated to do so. of their own choice instead of compulsory. I agree that math should be compulsory in schools even if students find it difficult, but philosophy can be made optional.
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There is an increasing number of people who do not know their neighbor. What causes this situation? How to solve it? Give your own idea.

The diagrams illustrate the way in which cameras were developing from 1839 to 2000.
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Should governments make decisions about people’s lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

There are states in which people can make their own decisions such as some developed countries and states where government makes decisions about people's lifestyles and that's the example of some of the dictatorial states.
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Big salary is more important than job satisfaction?

After graduating from college, life pushes us have to find the job. Especially for the newbie who enter the workforce. Some people think that big salary is more important than job satisfaction. I have two reasons to against this issue.
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Taking a year of between finishing a school and starting university is a waste of time student’s time. To what extent do you agree?

Firstly, taking a break from education can allow students to gain valuable work experience in their choosen field, which gives them a real taste of employement. People without university diploma are unlikely to find high-powered jobs. To illustrate, students can possibly work in a restaurant as a waiter or waitress for a low wage. If they work hard much but earn little, they may understand the importance of high schools as a guarantee for the relatively easy life. As a result, this situation induces the aspiration to study hard among the potential students.
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News editors decide what to broadcast on television and what to print in newspapers. What factors do you think influence these decisions? Do we become used to bad news, and would it be better if more good news was reported?

In today's world news are the crucial part of our lives.Certainly,there is no doubt that the news broadcasted on TV and printed on newspaper all are in the hands of news editors .In my opinion , there are plethora of reasons which influence their decisions.
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Many students work part-time while studying in University. Is this a good or bad idea?

During the past days, teenagers had been focusing only on studies, and part time jobs were not heard of. Today, teenage students, have been engaging in part time jobs, especially in the developed nations. Although there are different views on this topic, I would like to state that it is a good idea for teenagers to take up part time jobs while they are students.
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As computers translate quickly and accurately, learning foreign languages is a waste of time. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that computers are becoming wide use and considerably promoting the development of our life, particularly in the job of translation. Hence, many people argue that studying foreign languages is costing a large amount of time. Personally, I completely disagree with the point of view.
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Some developed countries have reduced the number of school hours. Is this a positive or negative development.

Some established nations lessened the academic duration due to manifold reasons. Some people argued that this is the pragmatic growth of any institution while others believe, this could be negative in some aspects.
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In many cities, there are areas of land that are used as parks. With increasing population levels, these areas would be better used to provide more housing. Do you agree or disagree?

I was riding my motorbike to the coffee shop. Actually, I was in a hurry; otherwise, I would be late. Unfortunately, there was heavy traffic congestion. In front of me there was just a long stream of cars and bikes. Therefore, I had no choice but to slow down and join the queue of vehicles. Suddenly, a scooter hit me from behind, which made me panic and fall off my bike. I suffered a few bruises and a minor elbow injury. A few seconds later, the rider on the scooter got off, came up to me and apologized for his carelessness. He also offered to take me to hospital for a checkup, but it was unnecessary as I was fine. To be honest, at first, I was very angry with him for crashing into my motorbike, but his sincere calmed me down and I decided to accept his apology. Then, I continued on my way to the meeting place.
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In many countries, the quality of life in large cities is becoming worse. What do you think are the causes of this issue? What measures could be taken to solve it?

The life quality in big cities in many countries is becoming worse. this is obviously caused by some factors and can be solved by taking some actions. this essay will give a detailed answer on what causes this and what action can be taken to solve this.
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With the increasing cost of living more and more people are looking at sustainable models. Discuss the benefits of this shift? Do you think the government must make it mandatory?

Growing in the price that one requires for survival is causing numerous humans to think of sustainable models. According to me, a sustainable method will be helpful because it will protect the environment. Firstly, the essay will discuss the advantages of sustainable procedures and secondly, would consider if the government should make such a thing mandatory. To begin with, adopting sustainable measures are very profitable for nature regardless of it being expensive, as doing this will prot...
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Now the machine is very complex, and a lot of difficult work is automated. Does this machine automation have more pros and cons?

Nowadays, the levels of violence in the media are rising and it has a big impact on society. One part of the population believes that it may have an influence on people’s behavior, but other people maintain that it does not have a damaging effect on humanity. In my opinion, the violent content which is shown on multimedia can affect some people’s being.
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