IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5. Page 46

IELTS Writing Samples Band 3.5

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Some people think that fittest and strongest individuals and the team can achieve success in sports, while others believe that success depends on mental attitude. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Both of these ideas can be debated widely.if you have fitteset and strongest body but mentally week,that might lead to failures,cause an individual might loose their confidence and have too much stress which this can change the results.on the other hand if a person mentally strong and stable but physically weak , that might lead towards imperfect results.besides this situation will changes in the sense that if it's a solo player or it's a team .I believe that when you're in a team the mental status is more important.a team player who has a better mindset and can focus and think fast work better in a team meanwhile this person isn't the fittest or strongest .it can be beneficial for the team in a certain ways which lead the team to victory .on the other hand this situation is different in a solo player.in fact there's more pressure both mentally and physically on a solo player .cause no one is there to cover his imperfections.

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Nowadays, more and more older people who need employment compete with the younger people for the same job. What problem this causes? What are solution?

In the contemporary era, it is seen that older people require to challenge youngsters to get the same level of employment. However, this essay will discuss the possible causes behind this trend and provide valid solutions to solve the overarching problem.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment.

there are two maps briefing about the present layout of a university's sports centre and the layout after redevelopment. Some parts will remain the same whereas some parts will be added. Both the outdoor courts have been replaced in the new map.

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Ielts Simon: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is thought by government that giving priority to economic growth is essential, whereas, some folks consider about other types of betterment should also take into consideration. I believe government should equally prioritize all types of progress wether its economic, environment or cultural growth.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? People learn things better from those at their own level—such as fellow students or co-workers—than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

In this competitive world, junior workers tend to look for a better mentor to learn from the best. It is debated that individuals should learn from the peers rather than the upper class. In my opinion, I disagree with the statement and people should learn from the experts.

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Some feel it is a waste of time to plan for the future and it is more important to focus on the present. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As some individuals believe and consider future planning a time-wasting and suggest to prioritize their thoughts on the present.What I fully agree and will explain this in this essay.

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Some people think that it is better to choose friends who always have same opinions as them, other people believe it’s good to have friend who disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

At present, numerous individuals consider that, there are two type of friendships, friends who ahways confirm each other, and critical friends. similarl this essay will examine the differences between this two views.

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Disruptive school children have negative influence on others. students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree with this view

school is where our children develop their personality and knowledge. dose disruptive children are of negative influence on others our can they help them improve. In my opinion a believe that some noise is a good thing.

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Inorder to solve traffic problem, governments should tax private car owners heavily and use their money to improve public transportation. what are the advantages and disadvantages of such solutions

Daily routines have been significantly affected by traffic problems. The rise in population has led to an increase in private transportation. The government's decision to increase taxes on car owners aims to fund improvements in public transportation but places a heavy burden on car owners

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How does the film Green Book illustrate the effects of racial segregation on personal relationships?

Green Book takes us back to the early 1960s. The plot begins with a New Yorker, Tony Lip, who finds himself unemployed while the nightclub where he works in is temporarily closed for renovations. To find a work to support his family, he is hired by Dr. Don Shirley, a renowned Jamaican-American pianist, to be his driver and bodyguard during an eight-week touring to the Deep South. The story sets background when racial segregation was highly forced, making the trips dangerous for a black man, especially Dr. Don Shirley.

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In many countries, fast food is becoming cheaper and more widely available. Do the disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages?

In contemporary times fast food is becoming an expensive and more widely available in many cities that's why more and more people are consuming it. From my point its disadvantages of this outweigh the advantages.

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Some children spend hourse everyday on their smartphones.why is this case? Do you think is a positive or negative ?

Nowadays,smartphones are the most impacting phenomena among children.This is happen because of electronic device becomes the most interesting and it reflects a positive side in there life .In this essay will shed lights about the pros of this using .

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In some developing countries, people prefer to invest their money in businesses outside their own country. What are the reasons for this? What can governments do to change this trend? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is well known that most of the citizens of developing nations choose to invest their money abroad and not in their own country. Meanwhile, it could be a wide range of explanations, most of them are well explained because of the revenues, and could be changed with the government help.

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An English-speakeng friend of yours has written to you to ask how your studies are going. Write an email to this friend. In your email, • tell you friend how you are preparing for the exam • tell him how you feel about it • tell him your expectations

Hi Julian, how are you? I hope you are doing great. Thank you to ask me and give me some details about yourself. I am so cheerful to know that you are doing well with your studies and works.

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Look at the graph showing worldwide rice consumption. Write sentences about the four projection.

The line graph illustrates expectations of rice consumption of the world since 1990 to 2040.

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Many crimes are often related to the consumption of alcohol. Some people think that the best way to reduce the crime rate is to ban alcohol. Do you think this is an effective measure against crime? What other solutions can you suggest?

It is well known that many violations are made by people who were under the influence of alcohol. It is believed that the most relevant way to quit this is to restrict alcohol at all. There are numerous reasons and there are certain measures to be taken to resolve the problem.

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Every year several languages die out. Some people think that this is not important because life will be easier if there are fewer languages in the world.

Language was created by humans to communicate with others in the same area, so there are various languages around the world to be used in different overseas. People take benefit from communication in several ways: marketing, socializing, or education. In my personal opinion, I agree that our life will easier if we have less language.

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SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT COUNTRIES SHOULD PRODUCE THE FOOD TO FIELD THEIR POPULATION THEMSELVES AND IMPORT AS LITTLE AS POSSIBLE. TO WHAT EXTENT DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE?

A certain number of people have an opinion that countries must generate the products for subsistence for their civilians. Moreover, governments should import products as little as possible. Based on my personal opinion, I disagree with this approach because it is pointless. Although, I admit that this point of view has several advantages. In this essay, I'll discuss about pros and cons of this idea.

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Discuss the impact of social media on creating opportunities and changing the nature of interactions among young people.

Social media has become a part of humans’ lives; specially for young people who spend a large amount of time browsing on their favorite celebrity, watching short videos, or chatting with people online. In this essay, I would discuss two possible points that how social media impact on creating opportunities and converting interactions.

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Some cities create extra housing by building tall buildings. Other cities do this by building on wide areas of land. Which do you think is the best solution to the problem of housing?

There are many cities which are making tall buildings to have more housing. But other cities make building on wide areas of land. I opine tall buildings are the best solution in terms of housing problem.

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