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Some countries have laws that prohibit animals being used in circuses or in other form of entertainment because it is cruel to keep animals in an environment that can cause them stress.

In this world of flora and fauna there are some countries where using animals to entertain people are not allowed because it leads to stress them. It will be highly right position if all nations will instil such laws as protecting animals from involving them in funny events because they are in an uncomfortable conditions to live and get wrong behaviour toward them.
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Nowdays many people choose to be self employed, rather than to work for a company or organization. Why might this be the case? What could be the disadvantages of being self employed?

In our days many individuals prefer to be indipendent and they prefer to invest on themselves, instead of working for someone else. People are convinced that run a own business is the best thing to do, but without thinking how much can be hard.

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many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages ?

In this day and age, the development of technology on social media give opportunities for individuals to communicate with each other easily and get information about the changes around the world. This writer believes it helps individuals easier to communicate and this outweigh the disadvantages that social media make children get addicted.
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At present time the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults compared with the number of old people.

In the contemporary world some places's population includes a large number of youngs in comparison with the number of old people. A vast majority argues that it is much better to have more elders, while others contradict to this idea. In my opinion having more teenages is greater than having old ones, because there will be much more amount of workforce , in the meantime lack of ancestors can also cause loose of the connection with traditions.
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Some scientists believe that in the future computers will be more intelligent than human beings. While some see this as a positive development others worry about the negative consequences.

I think, The Artificial Intelligence right now is Boon because the people use to do all more easy but it is a little complicate to anyone that they know the technology however Many people try how to use.
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Technology has a positive effect on education. Do you agree or disagree?

It is also said that Artistic classes, including painting and drawing are vital for a child's development and should be valued as much as other subjects in high school. This writer certainly agrees with this statement and will write an essay to explain his opinion.
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Art classes, such as painting and drawing, are as important to child's development as other subjects, so it shoube compulsory in high schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, art is an essential subject as other subjects to growth children more advanced. It must be done in high schools. This essay agrees with this viewpoint and will now set out some examples of the benefits of art classes to support that reasoning.
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Some say that advertisements of toys and snacks have a huge impact on children and their parents, and therefore advertising to children should be banned. Do you agree or disagree with the statement? Give your own opinion.

Nowadays, watching advertisements of toys and snacks could be a big impact for children and their parents. Hence, people suggest that we should be banned it. This essay will explain about my point of views with this issues.
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some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society . others ,however,belive that school is the place tp learn this.

There is a discussion between people about who is responsible for teaching children to be good people. some parents believe it is their responsibility to do that while others think it is one of teachers duties. In my sight of view, this issue demands both sides affords.
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Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibilities of teachers, while other thinks this is role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

In today's globalised world some consider that discipline should be the duty of teachers, while others believe that this is the responsibility of parents. Personally, I think parents play more role in kids nurture. In this essay, I will explain my point of view.
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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays people claim that extinction of some species is crucial issue but other say we have many Important problems , in my perspective both of view is vital topic in your planet life and we should consider them.
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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

I totally agree with this statement. In order to this our resorbability to keep righ's people in the correct way, wealthy countries must assist all poorer countries according to natural disasters.
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These days many people leave their country to work abroad and take their family with them. Do you think benefits of this outweigh disadvantages in terms of family development?

Almost people who continue work overseas bring their family member. In my opinion, i do believe that take their spouse and children to go abroad has more advantages for their family development. There are several reason, better education system to create great design of thinking and learn language and culture which impact to their networking.
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Many people believe that it’s better to learn something in a group rather than individually. Do you agree or disagree?

Working as a team presents various advantages as humans can gain more knowledge from others. Two heads are better than one as all participants can contribute an idea and assist each other, saving time and nerves. Additionally, people will not increase their skills and take longer to do their assignments. For example, it is proved in research that learners who usually do their tasks in a team are socially active and are able to communicate effectively with others. That is why some universities encourage their students to work as a team. Therefore, learning with group will help people to increase people’s understanding and to do their job.
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It is said that travel broadens the mind. What can we learn by travelling to other countries? Should we first explore our own countries? What do you think?

I do agree that travelling is one of the best way of learning. By travelling, I can learn a new perspective from different group of people, new culture from the cities I visited, and perhaps build relationship with strangers I met a long the way. I personally prefer to start explore from my own city. It is an amusing experience to act like a tourist in your own city. We might just experience only small part of the city all this time. Who knows by exploring the new side of the city, we can find the new favorite dishes, or maybe a whole new cultures that align with our values. And I can say I'm lucky to be born in Indonesia, because Indonesia has a lot of beautiful city with amazing culture heritages. We have 5 big islands here, Sumatra, Java, Papua, Sulawesi, and Kalimantan. And my goals are to have opportunity to hike the mountains at each of island. The main issue regarding domestic travel in my country is airfare cost too high. The cost of flying from Java to Sulawesi, which spend...
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In this day and age,it is considered by a plethora of individuals that,adults had better follow the pattern of old people others consider that it is natural instinct for teenagers to challenge what older people say.This essay will outline both arguments,and then conclusion will be drawn.

In this day and age,it is considered by a plethora of individuals that,adults had better follow the pattern of old people others consider that it is natural instinct for teenagers to challenge what older people say.This essay will outline both arguments,and then conclusion will be drawn.
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In many countries crime rates among teenagers are higher among other age groups.What are causes of this problem and what can bevdone to solve it ?

There are widely differing views on the issue of whether illegal act rates among youngsters are higher than other age groups or not.In following essay,I aim to identify the source of this problem as well as some viable solution to it.
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Countries should produce enough food for their own population and import as little as possible. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Most countries send their products such as foods to another countries, but some argues that the government should transfer it as little as possible. Although producing enough food has own advantages, however, in my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement because I suppose it helps the government, and I will examine and explain it.
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The process gives information about how carbonated water is made.

The flow chart illustrates the process which carbonated drinks are made in either a bottle or a can.
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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with statment?

I believe that,repairing roads is more necessary than railways. I`m going to mention my reasons with example in this article.
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