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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that e-library are good another believe that traditional libraries are better

As we all know, nowadays there are people who prefer electron libraries along with who believes the best choice is traditional ones. In this essay we will try to find the best.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to the advance development of our world, people nowadays often stay touch with each other or to catch up with the latest news by using social media. In my view, the advantages of using social media to stay tuned outweigh the disadvantages.

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Many people are changing their careers. what are the reasons for changing? and can there be any positive or negative impact by person or by society as whole.

Nowadays, people tend to switch jobs more commonly than before. Since, individuals are seeking personal fulfillment rather than stuck on societial stigma regarding career choices compared to the past. In my opinion, this development has more benefits than drawbacks to the society and people.

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More and more people are working from home rather than at the workplaces. Some people say this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others think it will bring stress to the home. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Working at the workplace or at home has some its advantages and disadvantages, it depends on the person and on the nature of the work, not all careers can be done at home, and lot of jobs have to be done in the workplace, like most of the medical field, the engenering field, etc; but a lot of jobs do not necessarily require the its empleoys to work at the workplace, take the teaching careers for example, you do not have to go to school or collage to teach, the world is evolving every day, technology helps us with a lot of things nowadays SO yes it depends on the job first then the person.

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A lot of money is spent nowadays searching for oil. As the world's oil resources will eventually run out, it would be more logical to spend some of this money on developing new sources of power, such as wind and solar. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any

Thesedays, a lot of money is being used for the search of oil . It would be the best option to spend this money on other sources also such as wind and solar as nation's oil resources would be depleted soon. I largely agree with this.

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Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now ''one big traffic jalm'' How true do you think this statement is? What measure can government take to discourage people from using their cars?

Nowadays, the rate of people who has cars have rised quickly among these three years ,which makes many cities become a place with abundant traffic jams. Some people suggest that governments should encourage people using public transportations instead of using their own cars. In my point of view, i think it depends on the size of the city, whereas some cities might have traffic conjunctions all the time while others might take cars as a necessary viechle to commute.

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Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of biodiversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, our society has a lot of environment problems caused for contamination. Some people believe that is our own fault, even, this situation will be the cause of a possible extinction of biodiversity as animals and trees. This essay discusses about causes and some solutions for these problems.

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Companies should provide sports and social facilities for local communities? To what extent do you agree?

There has been debate growing over whether companies should invest in sports and public facilities for social welfare. Some people believe ,it is social responsibility of companies to support public developments.Others think, the primary objective of businesses to generate profit. I believe , although companies should invest in social well-being, the extent of their involvement should be according to their capacity and nature of their business.

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Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should therefore be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. Argue both sides and give your opinion

Technologies such as computers and phones have become a part of people's life.Which is true, because nowadays we hardly ever see a person without a phone in their hand. Not only elderly but also little kids stick with their phones.Obviosly, such technologies have tons of benefits, but should they be added in a school programme?

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There is too much noise in many public places in cities.What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

Nowadays, while technological developments and people are living in urban areas, some cities are facing lot of issues, such as congested roads or even the parks are no longer a quiet place. However, the population is still increasing. Therefore, governments should deal with the problem by improving the countryside places.

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Children today are too dependent on computers and electronics entertainment it would be better to encourage them to spend more time outside playing sports and games. Do you agree or disagree?

Recent decades have witnessed tremendous growth in technoloty . For the entertainent purpose , children's are impose on computers nowdays. while dictractors , thought that engaging them in physical activity would be more beneficial . I personally reckon that ,outdoors games are considerable for human development . In this essay , i will elaborate both views and support my opinion.

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People should be encouraged to do leisure activities such as mountain climbing or sailing alone round the world, even though these activities may be dangerous, because this will help to develop their courage and confidence. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The leisure activities, such as, running, climbing, sailing, swimming, skiing, are good activities for body, some people think this is the most usefull things to do in your lifetime. While others are opposed to this and think, they do not need or do not care leisure activities.

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Some people believe school children should help to create rules their schools. Other say teacher alone should decide what the rules are. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, issues about schools rules has sparked a debate. Therefore, many people think that students should contribute in school rules formation, while others advocate that such laws should only be made by teachers. However, despite both perspectives having valid arguement, due to the fact that teachers might focus on discipline, whereas school children can suggest modern ideas, I believe that children should be involved, due to their ability to display motive. This essay will explore these views in details.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age .punishment is necessary o help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what short of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children ?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own Knowledge and experiences.

It is a hotly debated topic if children should be punished at an early age or not. I believe children should be punished on some extent by parents and teachers as it will allow them to learn discipline and it will lead in personal growth.

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In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some of the measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of the aging population.

There is no deny in the fact that life expectancy is increasing gradually worldwide. Many people think that it is a sign of positive development but in reality it does affects many individuals especially youngsters. In the following paragraphs I will be explaining some measures to reduce the impact.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays, a lot of people prefer live in big cities or towns and, for this reason, the number of citizen in countryside is decreasing. For instance, some of the causes of this migration could be jobs, diseases treatments and, even, for new activities in town. In contrast, a lot of new problems become when people left the countryside. In the next paragraphs of this essay I am going to discuss some problems about our new reality.

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Some people think that animal testing for medicine and cosmetics should be banned. Others think it is necessary to guarantee human safety. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There are pro and contra in using animal as a media for medicine and cosmetics product test. In my opinion, the testing can be assumed as animal abuse if the purpose is unclear.

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Some people believe that the advent of technology, like the mobile phone and internet, has brought families closer. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that the advancement of communication technology can make the relationship between families get closer. Basically, this essay agrees with that thought even though there are still some negative effects if the technology does not be used properly.

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Some children receive almost no encouragement from their parents regarding their performance at school, while other children receive too much pressure from their over enthusiastic parents which can have a negative impact on the child. Why do you think some parents put too much pressure on their children to perform well at school? What do you think the role of a parent should be in their child's education?

There are two different types of parents’ role in educating their children: By giving more push to their children or by giving more space to their kids in expressing their selves. Giving too much control to children can give some advantages or disadvantages. This writing will explain about whether this one of parenting methods is good or not.

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Some people argue higher taxes should be collected from industries causing higher than industrial pollution, whereas other argue there are better ways to deal it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of individuals question Solution of Industrial Pollution. On one hand , there are those argue that there are better ways to deal with increasing industrial pollution. However , critics including myself , strongly oppose the veiw and instead beleive that higher taxes should be collected from industries causing higher industrial pollution.

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