IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 212

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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With the recent development in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazine will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that those form of media will never disappear. Discuss both views and give your opinion!

Some people believe that the present books, newspapers and journals will disappear, while others argue that the this kind of media will still exist. In this essay, I will give my idea about these two different types of media.

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now a days,more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. is this a positive or negative development?

The rise of social media has changed how people interact. Many now prefer online socializing over face-to-face meetings. In my opinion, this is a negative trend.

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in many countries today, the number of plants and animals are declining. why is happening. what can be done to sole this situation.give reasons for your answer and include any relevant example from your experience.

In recent years, there has been a significant debate over declining animals and plants. However, declining plants and animals has psarked considerable concern, but there are feasiable solutions for this situation. In this essay, I will exmaine reasons, situations and solutions.

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More and more people are becoming seriously overweight. Some people suggest that the solution to this problem is to increase the price of fattening foods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Recently, a vast majority of people have suffered overweight. Many individuals claim that to solve a problem is to elevate the price of fat-contained foods. However, this tendency has a detrimental impact on the economy, I mostly disagree that increasing prices can deter people from consuming unhealthy food.

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Nowadays young people know less about traditions and culture than in the past. What are the reasons for it? Is this a positive development or a negative development?

Culture and traditions are less recognize by young people nowadays. Huge digitalization create this phenomena, which make culture and traditions are seems very old mindset. Despite of the negative impact, actually digitalization is the tool to keep and introducing the traditions and culture. It's very concerning, people not prepared theirselves towards the development of digitalization.

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People have to spend more and more time to travel their homes for jobs and study. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

Nowadays people tend to spend increasingly more time to come home from work and institution and back. There are few reasons for this trend; however, the most primary one is the price increase in the transportation sector, and in order to diminish possible effects some measures like placement of free transport should be implemented.

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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effects on society?

In many nations these days, there is a decreasing number of students taking up science subject in their university. One of the probable causes is because of its difficulty, and as a result affecting the community as well.

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Some people think that competition at work, at school and in daily life is a good thing. Others believe that we should try to cooperate more, rather than competing against each other.

Some citizen believes, the best way is rivalry at school, at work and in the daily routine, but others said that we should accompany with each other, instead of looking at each other like a enemy.i agree with the second idea.

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Many people think that museums and galleries should only show work from local artists rather than work from other countries. Do you agree?

Nowadays, a lot of people opinions are foreign artists wouldn’t manifest their master piece in the museums, and galleries. They say “only come from specific realm artist can show their arts.” I completely disagree about it.

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In spite of the advances made in agriculture, many people around the world still go hungry. Why is this the case? What can be done about this problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Despite significant advancements in agricultural technology, many people around the world still suffer from hunger. This issue is often attributed to corruption and the unequal distribution of resources. This essay has explored the root causes of this problem and suggested feasible solutions to address it.

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Some feel governments should invest in preserving minority languages, while others feel this is not a good use of resources. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (Write 250 words.) __________________

It is argued by some that the governments should invest to preserve languages, others think that it takes a lot of resources and effort.

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Prision is a common way in most countries to solve the problem of crime. However, a more effective solution is to give people with a better education. Do you agree or disagree?

Prison is a common way that used all around the world in different countries, to punish the criminals that against the law, as a negative reinforcement way that take away certain amount of freedom of the prisoners, intended to stop the criminals from breaking the law again. However, there have plenty of cases that people against the law again even after they are released from the jail, which indicates that with only prison may not be the perfect way to solve the issue of crime. In my opinion, I do not think that we can solve the problem just my limiting their freedom and lock them up, the key point should be let the prisoners to have better education in order to empower them to makes choices to make a living without breaking the law.

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Studying the English language in an English-speaking country is the best but not the only way to learn language. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Learning english in countries where it is spoken is great but not limited to this is an ongoing debate.To an extent I support this.This essay will first focus on why it is best to improve your english from country were this language is said by people.

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Some people think that the main purposes of school is to turn children into good citizens and workers, rather to benefit them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Most of the people believe that schools play a significant role in terms of providing them to be a reasonable citizens or employee, instead of personal effects. In my opinion, if school’s follow the logical policy, it could be possible and I agree with that.

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Some people think that governments should ensure that their people stay healthy, others think it is the responsibility of the individuals. Discuss both sides of the argument and provide your opinion.

It is often thought that governments are responsible for their citizens' health; in contrast, others do not agree with this concept. In my opinion, it is the responsibility of both society and authorities in order to reach the well-being state.

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Recent scientific finding made human dreams of cloning come true, however, many people are afraid of cloning humans and animals. To what extent do you agree with cloning?

There is no denying the fact that if cloning became true there will be a lot of new thing are need to learn about it. While it is a commonly held belief that many people are afraid of cloning humans and animals. There is also an argument that opposes it in my opinion, I consider that cloning for humans are very dangres but i think for animals their are no problem. To begin with, cloning for human i think thier are some problems like if some one make a cram how we can find him. In other words, goverment will find a lot of problems like if some one of cloning want to travel or make a family. for example, if he got a child how we can no how is the father. Another point to consider, cloning for animals i think is a good think, becouse if some one pet are deed he can cloning it agin and we can decrease the animals extinction from cloning. It is also possible to say that it will help our envarment and we can make balance of wilfword for cloning. For instance, african cats it will became e...

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Many people argue that in order to improve educational quality, high school students should be encouraged to questionsvand offer criticism to their teachers. Other think this will lead to a loss of respect discipline in the classroom. Discuss both views and give your opinion

More and more individuals believe that high school students are allowed to questions and criticsm their instructors with the aim of flourishing schooling quality, while others say that it will bring about losing of respect to teachers and controling in the classroom. I would argue about that despite these negative impact, it can cite improving quality of education.

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Doctors in many countries are saying that people are not getting enough physical exercise. What are the causes of this? How it can be addressed?

Nowadays, medical doctors in many nations point out that people don’t have enough practice and exercise for their bodies. This essay will discuss about the main causes of this trend and examine some possible solutions.

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In many countries, young people are granted certain privileges, and responsibilities at the age of sixteen. Clearly parents have a responsibility to both care for and prepare their children as they approach this important milestone. To what degree should parents intervene in the lives of their 14-15 year-old children?

Many people try to involve their children to work when they grow up. At the age of sixteen, some of the children start to do tasks or responsibilities to help their family. Some families think that children should not be involved to work. However, some of them think that responsibilities must be learned at young age.

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In many countries, shops open for longer hours daily every week. What is the negative or positive effects of this on the shoppers and local community. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Shopping is necessary for people to live. The local market or supermarket should be all time open because all people do not leave daytime some people work in night shift , for example, nurses or doctors they hungry night shift and they go to the market.

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