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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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A country becomes more interesting and develops more quickly when its population includes a mixture of nationalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The majority of people believe that a nation turns up to be enjoyable and develops more faster if the population is mixed with different cultures and individualsfrom different countries. This essay will completely disagree because of over population and spread of diseases.

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In some countries, owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

The home is the best place whare the people feels that belong to him.Some different countries believe that owning home is thier good choice rather renting.During this essay I will explore the resones and my opinions .

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Overseas visitors to three different areas in European countries between 1987 and 2007

The line graph illustrates how many times three main tourism hotspots were travelled by tourists in a European country in a 20-year period.

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Some countries have introduced laws to limit working hours for employees. Why are these laws introduced? Do you think they are a positive or negative development?

In the last centuries, many laws have been approved to reduce the number of working hours for employees. These laws were mainly asked by the employees themselves who wanted to improve their life condition and, overall, they were a positive development.

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Far too little has been done to prevent animals and plants from dying out, although people have been aware of this problem for a long time. Why do people do so little about it? Give your suggestions on how to solve this problem.

One of the most important trends of today's world is the sudden upsurge in the statement that very little efforts has been made to the dying of plants and animals. There is a widespread worry that this will lead to syriad of concerns in the world. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of the above statement which relates to the preservation of species using a pragmatic approach.

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Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists and not local people. Why is this the case? What can be done to attract local people? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

There is no denying the fact that museums and historical sites need to be known globally. This essay will discuss why they have attracted tourists and a few local people feel interested.

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Before a lot of advantages, some people believe that the internet creates many problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree whit this statement?

NOWADAYS, MANY PEOPLE THINK THAT A LOT OF PROBLEMS STEM OUT FROM ADVENT OF INTERNET. WHILE IT MAY BE TRUE TO SOME EXTENT, I DISAGREE WITH THIS OPINION FOR SEVERAL REASONS.

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In the past, people used to go to museums to learn facts about culture and history. Nowadays people can find all this freely on the Internet so the museums are no longer important. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many years ago, people was interested in historical culture and often made a visit to one of those historical places and museums but today they prefer to cheak their website and see all the pictures online instead of having a personal visit.

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Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In my opinion,today when there is so little socialization between us volunteering is one of the best ways to make people more sociable and on the other hand it would be better to be

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Some people think spending money on space exploration is unnecessary and should be used to address issues on Earth. Others believe it is vital for scientific progress and the future of humanity. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is considered by some that important in their live. the space exploration helps the people anything develop in the space. while there others who argue that the space exploration is not important in their live.in my opinion, i believe that it is important in our live such. if there raining come they will call the people around the world.

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tudying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Studuing with learners in one group provide many benefits than online clases. In mostly cases i agree that studying in classrooms is more powerful. However, studying at home and at group includes different issues.

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do you think the advantages of this trend out weigh the advantages.

Nowadays, progress of technology lead to change our life style.We can sense this change in all layers of life particularly in childrens life.As we know these changes effect in to their free time and they spend more time with technology.However, there are both pros and cons to to spend more time with technology .In this essay I will discuss some of the reasons about this issue.

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People should be at least 21 years old before they are allowed to drive a car. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

Many countries follow up strict rules and regulations to keep their town's traffic-free movement inside the city areas. People are only allowed to drive a car after his/her 21st year of age. I fully support this statement that the traffic control department has to making strict rules and regulations against driving a car before the 21st year of age without a permit which will be elaborated in the looming paragraph

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Nowadays, people try to balance between works and other part of lives. However, not many is able to achieve this. What problems does this cause ? Can you suggest some solutions to this issue ?

In this era, there are a lot of people try to work and live become balance. However, just some people that can to achieve it. this is an interesting phenomenon on society. In this essay, I will discuss this issue and provide some solutions to this problem.

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The advance in air travel are focused only in first-class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?

The airline transportation system has undergone a significant transformation in this contemporary era. A wide range of individuals believe that flights are concentrating more on the high-class category, and as a result, low-class passengers will not gain any merit. I totally agree with this argument.

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In recent years sports stars have become increasingly famous and wealthy. For some this is a benefit, raising the profile of sports, but for others, it is a negative influence. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Sport is the main part of our life and nobody can argue this statement. Lots of people dream about a sporting career, but despite discipline only a few people achieve success. Although existing cases when people must stop their career because of issues that happened with their physical or psychological statements.

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Some young people are using smartphones? What are the causes? Is it a positive or negative statement?

Numbers of youngsters are regularly spending time on their mobile phones. I think such kinds of devices are being part of every generation is the worst habit if they use it dishonestly like wasting their time by playing online games for money and visiting illegal websites. Main reasons for this are the indifference of parents and the impact of peers of them .Kinds of technological stuff's design is increasing significantly and being on trend. Every students want to lead fashion. For example, THE UZBEK TIME newspapers announced that the number of teenagers are utilizing more phoned than old-aged ones.

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Some countries are struggling with an increase in the rate of crime. Many people think that having more police on the streets is the only way to reduce crime. To what extent do

A few countries suffer from a rise in the percentage of crime lot of people believe e that the police find and have been stopped on the streets leading to reduced Crime. I completely disagree with the stat A few countries suffer from a rise in the percentage of crime lot of people believe e that the police find and have been stopped on the streets leading to reduced Crime. I completely disagree with the statement. In this essay will examine the plausibility of the notion and I will discuss my opinion.

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Some people feel that the exploration of space justifies a large amount of government and private investment. Other people think that this field is of increasingly low relevance, and should not be a priority. Debate both sides of this discussion, and explain your own view. How important is it for us to explore space at the moment?

In this modern society , more and more money is spending towards the technology sectors especially to space explorations as it gives us better understanding of the universe and help to get benefit from those understandings . This trend bring up two different views, some people claims that space explorations are integral part of the society it should be priorities, others oppose it by saying, that there are some other sectors which are being overlooked but are important to take care such as health system , environmental issues, youth and education . In this fast phase world , although space explore is necessary for human development however it can not be priorties as compare to other necessary fields down here on the earth.

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It is suggested that some rich countries give money to poorer countries rather than financial aid.

Nowadays many poorer countries are being provided financially by developed countries in order to eliminate poverty. There isn't however effects and it is suggested that other types of help should be given to solve this issue. I am totally agree this view because of some significat reasons.

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