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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that universities should only accept the young students with the highest marks. However, others think that universities should accept people of all ages that may not do well at school. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education is most important for people some induviduals are asy universities are accept only young studens with best marks. others are say universities are not accept all ages and not follow school students. In this two points are want to argue statment. I will explain both point forth paragraph.

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Plagiarism in academia has become a major issue in many countries today. What are the causes and solutions.

Copying and losing author's duty in department has been a main problem in many parts of the world .

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Many governments in the world spend large amounts of money on art, which helps to improve the quality of people’s lives. However, governments should spend money on other things rather than art. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion

A lot of government in the globle expenditure huge money on sculputers, which assist to enhance the quality of nations lifes, while other court must expenses income on other activities. Personally, l strongly advocate the former view. In this essay, l will discuss both views using examples from the Sultan Qaboos University to demonstrate the sides, and, then, l will share my personal view.

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We live in a world of technology these days. While the internet brings with it clear advantages, the problems in terms of control and security of information outweighs the advantages. To what extent do you agree?

Recent decade has changed our daily routines turbulently due to internet development and its prominency. While there are immense number of advantages like permanent connection with family or friend, doing job digitally and searching any information still, some people believe that because of lack of security its benefits have been outweighed with disadvantages. I strongly disagree with them for two reasons: cybersecurity now is on the highest level and you can secure your information safely and there are some protected applications where you can keep your details confidently.

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"Prevention is better than cure". Researching and treating diseases is too costly so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extent do you agree

It is often argued that examining and curing illnesses is extremely expensive; thus, it would be better to put money into inhibitory courses of action. This essay completely agrees with this view, because it makes population experience a smaller number of diseases and reduces healthcare costs for them.

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As mass communication and transport continue to grow, societies are becoming more and more alike leading to a phenomenon known as globalization. Some people fear that globalization will inevitably lead to the total loss of cultural identity. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement؟

Advance technology and transport leading a revolution of societies, these phenomenon call gobalization. Someone worried about this change may leading disapper of the cultural identity, but in my perceptipn the terrible situation would not accur.

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Some people believe that climate has the greatest effect on people's way of life. Other believe that the economy of the region has the greatest effect. Discuss both view and give your opinion.

It is a contentious issue which of two phenomenons has the most tremendous impact on people. Some believe that the climate has the most significant influence on people's way of living. However, others think the economy of their surrounding area is of greater importance. In this essay, I will elaborate on both points of view.

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Some people believe that a gap year between school and university is a good idea, while others disagree strongly. Consider both sides of this debate and present your own opinion. You should give reasons for your answer and include ideas and examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Currently, public places in many cities of different countries has much more noise pollution. While, effect to environment of this trouble is biggest, there are several reasons for protecting it.

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Percentages of mobile phone owners using various mobile phone features between 2006 and 2010.

The table illustrates cellular phone utility per various kinds of mobile device qualities in three years: 2006, 2008 and 2010. Overall, mobile phones offer a wide range of increasingly popular features over the years. The features analyzed including calling, photography, text massaging, gaming, internet browsing, music playbac and video recording. Calling was the most widely used feature in 2006 and 2008 with nearly universal usage. Taking the photo was popular by 2010. The use text of massaging reachied its highest level in 2010. Gaming was at its peak usage in 2008. Internet browsing became more popular by 2010, showing significant growth. Listening to music gained popularity, particularly in 2010. Video recording was primarly used in 2010. Overall, the popularitu of most features grew over the years, with the exception of making calls, which slightly declined.

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Nowadays many people wear western clothes rather than their traditional clothes. What are the reasons for it? Is it a positive or negative development?

Traditional clothes only wear a traditional people likely western clothes but they do not understand all countries have a traditional clothes.

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Environmental issues such as climate change have always been an international problem because governments are not imposing harsh punishments against offenders. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Support your answer with specific reasons and examples.

It is true that envrionmental problems have always been excist for years worldwide. Some people argue that this issue caused due to governmental’s policies regarding proctecting the environment. However, I don’t agree this view and I do believe individuals are responsible for their behaviours and root cause is their unconcious habbits against laws.

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Some people believe studying literature is essential for individual character building, while others think it wastes time. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answear and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Groups of people assume that education of literature is important for personal building, on the onther side, rest of people reckon it unnecessary spend of time. After discussing both points of view, i will my open my personal opinion on this topic and explain why people should learn the literature at least in school or library.

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Young people are often influenced by their peers. Do the advantages of pressure outweigh the disadvantages?

Adults and teenagers are frequently effected by their friends.Pros of pressure does not overlap the cons.

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Some people think that the government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects for the progress of the country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Technology is advancing rapidly these days. Many people believe that government should focus and provide more learning opportunities in this field as compared to others for the betterment of state.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It has been observed that, many companies use more sugar in their products such as food and drink tend to cause many health issues. It is claimed that people will influence buying less products which have more sugar, when the sugar products reach expensive. I firmly disagree with the given statement and this essay will elaborate and advise why this happened to support my viewpoint.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, certain individuals who have health issues and using other options of medicines and treatments are growing. Before, they usually visited their doctor. I think this is a negative development and I elaborate on the following essay.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In an advanced technology generation,people acquire information from everywhere costs less time nowadays,but they are not allowed to use these,I still think it is not free in our society and not belong everyone.

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Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer countries. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Health, education and trade are crucial for countries development. Some people argue that the governments of richest countries should help to mitigate poorer nations health, education and trade related problems. In my opinion, I concur with this viewpoint because a country development plays important role for global economic balance and evironment issues reduction.

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Some parents buy their kids a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a child having a large number of toys?

In order to entertain with, a lot of toys are bought for children by their mother and father. By having numerous toys, children can enhance their cognitive skills; yet, owning an excessive number of toys might be distractive to youngsters.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, people's information about their health matters are more than prior populations, so when they become ill, they surching to find their treatment and drugs instead of go to doctor. In my opinion, this happening is a negative development owing to the fact that doctor have more information and experience for treating instaed of publics and some medicines impact on our health.

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