IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 229

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion about this?

These days a lot of people think about needed to building new homes because thier did not found place to leave thier So, some people think that to use the space available on the courtyside. While others believe that they should to protect ther coutryside. This essay will discuss both sides and draw my personal conclusion with opinion.

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Many people believe that a university education is necessary for a good career . Do you agree or disagree? What other factors can contribute to a good career?

A lot of people’s opinion is that the knoweledge that students recieve in university is important for their future job . In my opinion the knowledge that we recieve at university is not such neccesary for our employement . I think so because at all educational institutions gives us more information than we need and also because there are many cases when people don’t work according to the speciality .

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In some countries, the difference in age between parents and children is generally greater than it was in the past. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

owadays many household present with a huge difference in age between children and their parents in comparison with past years. However, it is a double-edge solar and as with any topic has the positive and negative views.In my opinion, I agree that the pros of this phenomenon outweigh the cons due to several reasons. This essay with give prospective reasons and explanation of why the advantages more than the disadvantages.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

•It is argued that in the future, people will not purchase printed materials such as newspapers or books since they will be able to read it through online platform for free. To certain extent, despite its potential, I disagree with the argument as free online reading materials may not be able to fully replace its paid printed relatives.

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The major cities in the world are growing fast, as well as their problems. What are the problems that young peopl living in cities are facing with? Give solutions to these problems

In most countries that are in the process of developing the number of struggles that citizens experience is increasing simultaneously with the country's enhancement.This essay will discuss the causes and provide solutions to solve this pattern.

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Earlier technological developments brought more benefits and changed the lives of ordinary people more than recent technological developments. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is true that whether in which century technology is vital to mankind development.From my perspective,I partly agree with the view of earlier technological developments can gave more advantages to people's live than nowadays technological development. On the one hand,in the earlier years technology to some extent make a big progress in mankind's progress.Firstly,we have computer in that period,which can allow us communicated without the distance difficult.Especially in commercial area,it make many companies broard their outsea business.Secondly,the mobile phone was invented by the scientist.This have a big influence for people's live,for example,they can communicate with their friends and relatives everytime and if they have something emergency that can quickly call the people they want.Finally,these technology products lead the people at that time can see the outside world and know more informations from other areas. On the other hands,we need to acknowledge that today's society ...

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Overall, the graph clearly demonstrates that the majority of young people had attend to private studios instead of the other facilities. In the other hand, most young people tend to prefer both types of ballet classes and modern classes.

The chart illustrates critical evidence about young people who attend various dance classes. in one of the cities in Australia. This untie is measured in numbers and percentages.

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In many countries, childhood obesity is a growing problem. What are the reasons for this and what can individuals and governments do to tackle the problem? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People need to eat. they need to eat to survive sometimes this stiuation can be exaggerated. we do not care this stiuation because we do not see future.

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Some people feel that boarding schools (where students or pupils live at the school during the term) are an excellent option for children, while other people disagree for a number of reasons. Consider both sides of this debate and reach a conclusion

Boarding institutions are supposed to be the superior choice for educators. However, this issue is not entirely straightforward, and arguments can also be made against it. This essay will elaborate on the debate and give a concluding view in upcoming paragraphs.

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More and more people want to buy famous bands with clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

Nowadays there is an increasing trend around the people to buy luxurious clothings, bags and other things. Surely, this tendency has both advantages and disadvantages, however I firmly believe that purchasing items from luxury brands is not considered as a positive development.

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Mobile phones and the internet could have many benefits for older adults. However, this age group uses technology the least. What are the benefits for older adults of using mobile phones and the internet? How can we encourage them to use this new technology?

people of mid aged group have been using cellphones and internet to least of its capabilities. i belive older people can be benefited in many ways by using gadjets with internet although some of us need to boost them to use this new technology devices.

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With the help of technology, students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.

With the advent of technology, every quarter of life has now become way more convenient. This extends to the spreading of information, and the efficiency of how it is being spread. There is two main reasons for this. The first is the speed at which information is spread ,while the second is the organization of its presentation.

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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps beneath provide the venue of Southwest airport at present and how it will appear after renovations the following year.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve peoples' lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The crucial approach of science is to make human lives more convenient

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More children in developed countries are becoming overweight. This is a serious problem for wealthy countries. Discuss some causes and effects of this problem. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this day and age, the average overweight is significantly increasing; especially, in the rich nations there are several factors leading to this issue. However, the only main reason is wealthy countries become with fast-paced life work affects the country's wealth , therefore, numerous parents don't have too much time to take care of their child because there are many responsibilities in their job.then give them a convince.

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More and more qualified people are moving from poor to rich countries to fill vacancies in specialist areas like engineering, computing and medicine. Some people believe that by encouraging the movement of such people, rich countries are stealing from poor countries. Others feel that this is only part of the natural movement of workers around the world. Do you agree or disagree? You should write at least 254 words.

Nowaday many knowledge people are going to develop city from their poor village . Go to hire some technicial work such as doctor and lawers.

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Some people believe that hard work and determination are the main requirements for success, while others say other factors lead to success. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give a reason for your example and include relevant examples from your knowledge and experience.

These days many of people think that the hard work it is benefit and without it we can not get in our point. So some people think that good idea and their work abou it and did not give up. While, some people shown maybe they will get their point with anothers methods to be more easily without feel in a hard. This essay will discuss both sides ind draw my personal opinion.

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Parents and teachers make many rules for children to encourage good behavior and protect them from danger. However, children would benefit from fewer rules and greater freedom. To what extend do you agree?

Child liberty and behaviors go hand in hand.It has become most debated issue in the recent years.A few parents impose few disciplinary rules in order develop good habits while others assert that liberty of children can make them good human being.I absolutely agree with the second idea and in the following paragraphs i will discuss that providing a child liberty would help them improve their behaviors.

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In many countries, paying for things using mobile phone (cellphone) apps is becoming increasingly common. Does this development have more advantages or more disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and includes relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In every country on the earth, there is disagreement around the topic of mobile phone. With regard to this topic, few consider there is nothing wrong to pay for mobile apps; while others illustrate paying for mobile app is waste of money. According to my perspective it has more prons than cons and provide some relevant grounds for this advantages.

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It is thought by some that it is better to live in a city while other believes that life is better in the countryside. Discuss both these views and give your opinion

Some people believe that living in urban areas are more preferable, whereas other part of population are of the view that rural areas is better to inhabit. In my opinion, life in city center is more superior as there is plenty of opportunities for growth. This essay will discuss both points of view.

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