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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some People believe that Professinals, such as doctors and cagineers Should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country it they wish.

Unquestionably in every coin has two side and so are the People. society's people are divided into two groups and therefore , This question depends on various attitudes of people so the difference bitween working in the country where they did their training and having freedom for adapting your country for working consists of variety aspects has become a topic of debate among People.

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Chidren nowdays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly. why is this the case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

Over the recent decades watching TV has become an integral part of children's lives. According to research the number of time which children spend watching television has increase, another opinion is that the amount of time which children spend encouraging higher levels of activity things has decreased. In this essay I will show that discuss the causes of this phenomenon and also suggest some ways to encourage children to do more productive things instead of watching too much TV.

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Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them fully understand each other before deciding to get merried. Do you agree or disagree?

These days there has been an increasing number of people who claim that couples should have to live for a while, before marrying, as they would have a chance to keep in touch with each other deeply and personally. I partially agree with this statement and in this essay, I am going to duscuss both sides.

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In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes and effects of this problem?

In a few countries, elder people who are more the 50 years old, struggle with spotting fine vocation, although they have a lot of practical experiences. Reason why they have difficulty is that the companies and the governments concentrate on admitting youth, because of having too much energy, ambition and being determined, however, it will affect remarkably the ratio of suicide and unemployment or divorce.

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Some people believe that engaging in an active pastime does more to develop childrens’ life skills than time spent reading. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certain groups of people are of the opinion that, if youngsters spent leisure time on sports activity has better life skills than hours spent reading. However, I agree with the statement and in the following paragraphs I shall explain my reasons for this belief.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Easily I can say youth really perfect for our future. We need to fresh brain and fast progress brain. That's why youth indeed good key for us we can easily accept this thing.

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Some people think the government should spend more money on sport facilities for top athletes. Other people think the government should spend more money on sport facilities for everybody. Discuss both views

Certain number of people believe that more fund should be cosidered for providing sport equipments for top sportmans by authority. While some argue that states should more allocate money to sport equipment for all the people.

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Some schools are very strict about school uniforms and student appearance, while others have a more relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of students wearing school uniforms?

Some schools are very firm about school clothes and student look . School uniforms and student appearance can undoubtedly contribute to creates equality, reduces differences and keep student focused on studies , but there are also certain drawbacks that should be taken into account.

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Children are facing more pressures from academic, social and commercial sources. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce it?

It is true that nowadays young people experience more stress in schools and society and from commercials. This essay will discuss the major causes of pressurs that childrens have, including they study in competative environments, compare htemselves with others and they see deaily advertisments that encorage them to buy new products. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems such as schools focus on real underestanding instead of just acheave high scors, notice that comparing with others lead to stress and goverment should take actions regarding to limit advertisements that aims children.

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Some believe that politicians are the most influential people in the world, while others believe scientists are the most influential. Which side do you agree with and why? Provide specific reasoning for your answer.

Many people are certain that scientists have more influence, while others would argue that politicians are more impactful. In my opinion, there is more power in being a politician then an expert.

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Some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagre

There is not doubt that these days many people find that the government forced to spend money on teaching science rather that other different subjects, to encourage people to deep in of reaserch and different topics in science.In this essay, I am going to discuss the claim and draw my personal opinion.

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Government should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

The amount of public money which is spent on providing care or financial support for elderly people has been one of the problems that some societies have been facing. In response to this situation, some people say that we should stop taking such measures because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. And, I strongly disagree with this statement. This essay will discuss this topic and give the author's opinion.

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Fewer people are reading books these days.Therefore we should close all libraries and use the funds for something more urgent like healthcare Do you agree or disagree

It is suggested that fewer individuals are eager to read books nowadays. Thus we should use the funds for something more urgent like healthcare instead of going all public libraries. There are several flipsides to this point, l am personally support that policy makers had paid more attention to the role of libraries before making such decisions.

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Some people think that qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at universities or similar academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested that fewer individuals are eager to read books nowadays. Thus we should utelize the funds for something more urgent like healthcare instead of attend all public libraries. There are several flipsides to this point, l am personally support that policy makers had paid more attention to the role of libraries before making suv decisions.

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In some countries, government safety laws include things such as wearing a hard hat on a building site or wearing safety clothes in certain factories. To what extent are laws of this kind good idea? What sort of safety law would you introduce, if you were given a chance? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In certain number of governments safety regulations detrmain wearing particular hats an clothes for worker in certain factories. This will essay explore that how this action is effective due to protect workforce against any possible danger, as well as, allowing people to work easier in hard conditions and will introduces other possible safety laws such as using particular equipments and avoid using digital divices in some certain areas.

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Some people believe the purpose of education should be helping the individual to become useful for society, while others believe it should help individuals to achieve their ambitions. Discuss both sides and give your opinion?

In the modern world, some people think that education has to support to become a part of society, while other people contemplate that it should focus on helping individuals goals and ambitions. In my opinion, both view have their merits.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinino? What sort of punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is about learning a foreign languages. It is undeniable that learning foreign language has become an essential part of our life. However, there is no absolute agreement on whether learning foreign language for people should be only to work or travel.

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Many employees can now do their work from home using modern technology. However, this change may only benefit workers, not the employers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The rise of technology has been heralded as a way for workers to do their job effectively in present. While I agree that technology is beneficial to employees to some extent, I believe that there are certain situations where it is useful for bosses.

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Some people think that the environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally. discuss both these views and give your own opinion. nb

Some people prefer to solve environmental problems on a global scale but other people think that it is better to deal each country on their own. Of course, it is better for each country to solve its own problems, but if it is a peaceful and serious problem, it is unlikely that it will be solved by itself. I believe that solving environmental problems on a global scale is better, because problem can be easily solved and unity among countries increases.

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Some people suggest that a country should try to produce all the food for its population and import as little food as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Manufacturing greens,like fruits or vegetables for own citizens is important to the government,instead of importing from overseas. In my prespective,it has more advantages than drawbacks. Because,difficult though producing all types of the food to the local people, it will be cheaper and more reliable.

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