IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 239

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that governments should have access to people’s mobile phone call records and messages for safety reasons. Others believe that this information is private and should not be available without permission. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

While it is widely debated that the governments have the right to access personal phone calls and messages of their citizens due to safety, others argue that such data must not disclose to the authorities along with retrieving it without consent. Both points of view and reasons why I believe that the compliance between security concerns from the government and permission from the owner can this claim will be discussed further in this essay.

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Modern technology has made it easier for individuals to download copyrighted music and book from the internet for no charge. To what extent is this a positive or a negative development?

The development of the technoogy has a great effect, lead to people can download the music and book from the internet. People no need to pay any money to download their flavour music and book , it complete a positive development.

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The growing number of overweight people is putting a strain on the health care system in an effort to deal with health issues involved. Some people think that the best way to deal with this problem is to introduce more physical lessons in the school curriculum. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

In this rapidly evolving world, marked by numerous changes and advancements, there is a prevailing belief that schools should introduce physical education in the curriculum to deal with a concern of increasing obesity among people which has become a strain on medical care centres. I strongly support this notion and an ensuing paragraphs will scrutinize my viewpoints.

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Some people say that music has no practical value and should not be taught to school children. Instead, they should spend school time on useful subjects such as computing or science. Do you agree or disagree?

Musical subject should not be though in school instead of academic subjects namely computer or science. In my opinion, I strongly disagree with this statement, and the following examples will be provided in order to support my point of view.

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The diagram details the process of making smoked fish

The provided picture gives information about how smoked fish is made.

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Some people believe that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age to drive cars and motorcycles. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Many divergent views exist on how best to enhance highway safety. A great number of people, including myself are of the opinion that the ultimate way is by raising the minimum age required to get a driving license. In the following paragraphs I will explain the rationale for my viewpoint on the matter.

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After leaving school or university, young people should choose a job or career that they love, rather than one that pays the best salary. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Some regarded that after finishing education, young people should go to work on job they love, others believe that they must work on job that pays a lot of monye.However, this essay will discuss both perspectives and provide my own opinine.

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In many countries people have to pay for madical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people think madical care should be a free by the government but in many countries people also have to pay for madical payment. Although medical care should be provided from gavernment and also people have to use their buget for medican. Becouse: countries have to focus for other part of our country such as millatry, education.

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Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable.

Education in the internet becoming on the top. Number of people argue that online education has so many pluses that it will change face-to-face but others say that offline education is better

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are some nations where younger generations prefer to train while working after they graduate from high school instead of continuing their studies further to a higher institution level. However, there are some effects that need to be considered which will be discussed further in this essay.

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The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

While it is widely claimed that American film industry greatly impact on the local film industry across the globe, others argue that the governments need to allocate their expenditures on their own film industries in order to protect and preserved their cultures. The reasons why I agree with the latter statement of the governments can benefit the local team production as well will be discussed further in this essay.

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More and more people are moving from rural areas to live in the cities What problems can this cause? How can these problems be solved?

Today society has a problem with migration humans from village to cities. It is a big problem for humanity, countries and economy. People selling his houses and territories, and for this they have reason – money. However, a lot of people work with this situation. They are using modern technology, psychology, laws and new ideas from change hand work.

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Many people today buy ready-made food rather than spending time cooking What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays we can see sunrise of fast food. Many people like it, because they didn’t need prepare breakfast and they can but meal for eating on the run. Firstly, its idea was perfect, because sold only quality meal with meat and green products. Now, objectively, a situation was changed to side of big corporation.

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The hart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966,1986 and 2006.

The bar graph illustrates information about the age of female in Australia when they gave life to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.

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Some people believe that the biggest problem facing cities is the increasing number of cars. Others say there more serious problems.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the issue of urbanization has brought numerous problems to city life. While some believe that the increasing number of cars is the primary issue cities face today, others argue that there are more serious issues. 38 The increasing number of cars could lead to health problems. It is widely known that air is crucial to human’s lives. The increasing number of cars contribute to air pollution, which could cause environmental problem and deteriorate people’s health. The car emmision contains poisonous substances and elements which could directly harm people’s lung and other organs through breathing. Therefore, the emmision of cars could cause air pollution in the city which could lead to a series of physical problems. In addition, the problem of traffic jam in the city could be aggravated because of the increasing cars. Congestion gridlock is a common problem in most urban areas, especially during commuting hours and holidays. Thus, people’s life could be affected by the...

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The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what extent do you agree with these views?

Childhood obesity is rising in first world nations at an unprecedented rate in recent times. Certain people argue that this issue is mainly due to consumption of junk food while others argue that this problem solely depends on the parents supervision and guidance. In this essay, I will discuss both views and will state my opinion.

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Some people think city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Others believe that they should focus on building new homes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, cities are so varied from the past, so a group of people belive that vegetation is the main factor that mayer should to have a paln for it while the otehrs think that it is crucial that focusing on the new redidential areas. In my opinion, the most important item that help population who have clean air and good space for their free time is green districts.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Young people moust be toute how to become a usfull indevduale in the society. Although some people beleive that parens should be the ones how teach them, others saied that school should teach them the moral to there society. In my opinion I beleive that both of them must work together in order to interduce a good members searving there society.

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Adults do very less exercise these days. Some people think that showing sporting events on the television such as Olympics and international tournaments can be the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Others believe there are other effective ways to do so. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Support with relevant examples.

In contemporary society, grown-up individuals perform few physical activities in current days. Some individual consider that presenting physical occasions on the variety of media such as Olympics and international tournamets can be the ideal approach to influence adults to perform exercise. This essay will explore both perspective and provide my opinion on this matter.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree ir disagree with this statement?

In recent time, the issue of saving money has sparked considerable debate. This essay aims to discuss both sides of the arguments, it is an essential topic to discuss and analyze. On the other words, there is no denying that it is an important point. Otherwise, it is controversial. Its is important to speak about pros and cons of saving money for people.

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