IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 327

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic: The idea of having a single career is becoming an old fashioned one. The new fashion will be to have several careers or ways of earning money and further education will be something that continues throughout life. Use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Recently, studying only one profesion is changing. Now we have to study more than one, and get more experience in our works.

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Global warming is one of the most serious issues that the world is facing today, what are the causes of global warming and what measures can governments and individuals take to tackle the issue?

One of the most major problem that the world is facing today is global warming. Government and special people trying to find what measures are need to tackle the issue.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? ive reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own nowledge or experience.

In many cultures, the children are raised with the saying (if you try hard enough every thing is achievable), I am going to discuss the pros and cons of planting this idea in the mindes of children and why I am opposed to it.

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Some people think that robots will replace many jobs, others think that technology will create new job opportunities. Discuss the both views and give your own opinion

Over the last years, the question whether about robots and technology have become one of the most conversial ones in maany parts of world. While some people strongly support the opinion that most of jobs will be lose to robots. There are other people who think that new professions are created because of technology. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and try to draw some conclusions.

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Some people think public library is necessary, however, others believe that the public library is useless. What is your opinion and provide with some relevant examples.

Some people claim that librart is essential , but another group think people dont use library for studying. I will explain my opinion with several examples in further paragraphs.

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Some people says that it is a waste of public money to spend on cultural events, others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

The government spend a million dollars per year to cultural events like forums, national days and holidays. One part of society think that this is a waste of fund, because we have more relevant fields, which our country can invest this money, like science, charity and education. But others believe that cultural events, which are organized by government, rally the nation and can be a way to fight globalization. In my opinion, culture is the main part of our lives that we need to protect and contribute money.

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In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message? ive reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own nowledge or experience.

It is argued among others , the way we encourge our children . there are different aspects regarding this subject , however in this essay, we will discuss the advantages and disadvantages in various levels , whether from a parent's point of view or the child itself .

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These days people succeed in their chosen profession because they are good communicators and not just experts in a particular field". Discuss the reasons and why this is the case. Give reasons to your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Elders see that life in the past was better than now regardless of the technological advancment we are in today . Since many people find it helpful to use technology although that kids today spend most of their day on these devices because of how addicting it can be. In my opinion i think that having electronic devices at an early age may or will damage the kid's brains. In this essay, i will discuss why i hold this point of view.

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Elders say that life was better in past compared to life today. Do you think they are right or wrong based on your knowledge or experience?

Elders see that the life in the past was better than now regardless of the technological advancment we are in today . Since any people found it helpful to use technology although that kids today spend most of there day on these devices because of how addicting it can be. In my openion i think that having electronic devices in an early age may or will damege the kids brain. In this essay i will disscuse why i hold this point of view.

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“Prevention is better than the cure.” Researching and treating disease is too costly and so it would be better to invest in preventative measures. To what extend do you agree?

Prohibiting is indeed better than treatment for lots of reasons. I definitely agree with the idea that the government should spend more on prevention than other items. In this essay, I will mention some reasons for this.

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Every year large number of people migrate from one country to another for different reasons. There are many advantages and /or disadvantages of migration for the individual and/or for society.What is your opinion?

This is a day and age when many individuals transfer to live in another country because variations causes such as economic and education every year. There are a large number of upside aspects for individuals and all of the community like increasing knowledge and improving health and economic system. However, there are lots of downside aspects which affect individuals and society as a whole such as missing families and friends and decreasing jobs. This essay will explain the benefits and drawbacks of migration for people and for all of the community.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The reason why crime is increasing in many countries is because some of people have their own needs, but they can't afford their needs because they have no money. So, they start to doing crimes in order to get the money instanly. Another reason, many of people don't want to work hard, they are lazy and want to achieve something big with minimum effort. I think this kind of character makes them think about something that can give them instant result such as robbing, stealing, or maybe being a hitman. But not every person have that characters, some people want to work but there are no job that accept them. Or maybe in some country, their labour rate is below the inflation rate so they still can't fulfill their needs eventhough they have an income. As an examples, in Indonesia we have labour rate around IDR 3.800.000 (for Bandung Area) in a month, but in comparison labour rate in another country such as Australia is around AUD 800 in a week. If we do convertion to IDR, labour rate in ...

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“Nowadays children are undisciplined because their parents are busy with their career.” To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What could parents do to build a sense of discipline among children?

As we have entered another new form of economic crisis under the current political-economy condition, the financial burden for working-class family is greater than ever. For those who have kids, this burden doubles, if not triples. Often times, this issue immediately translates to the increase of working hour the parents take in order to get a bigger take-home pay. Even when it's done for the advancement of their respective careers is no great matter, as the ultimate goal is in the end about the material gains such progress bring to the table.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages?

It is undeniable that nowadays people are experiencing a last longer life, comparing to the past. While some people believe that facing this phenomenon turns out various problems for governments, other argue that having more the older brings advantages to society. This essay will examined both views in the following paragraphs before the conclusion is reached.

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In some countries, online shopping is replacing shopping in stores. Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is obvious that as information technology growing really fast, more and more custumers choose online shopping instead of shopping in stores. That can cause a lot of questions. But it is true that online shopping cannot replacing shopping in stores, and so that the replacing process is a negative development.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

It is significant for children to teach them what is right and wrong since their early age. Punitive measures are mandatory to assist them determine this difference. Although there is an idea which is supporting the punishment the children, I firmly believe, that the negative results of punishing cannot be ignored.

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Although there is a lot of translation software available, learning a language is still advantageous. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that encroaching on a noble language despite of the appearance of various translator applicants is important, which derives a lot of benefits for people who learn it. From my perspective, I partially agree with the former notion and will elaborate on it in the following paragraphs.

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Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages?

Purchasing items, for example, books, air tickets, and groceries online is becoming common in society. Although, it may lack of delivery on time, I believe, it brings more positive impacts on people's lives because of convenience and variety types of certain product.

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There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the International music that is heard everywhere nowadays.

Music has always been a part of people’s lives, and it has been a crucial aspect for society and has evolved to a variety of genres and styles. However, most of them listen to modern music and start to forget the traditional one. Hence, in this essay, I will discuss the reason why music is needed in human lives and presenting my opinion and regarding the importance of traditional music compared to international music.

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Many people believe that reducing speed limits is the best option for road safety improvement. Do you think there are other measures that could be put in place? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this? 20:35

Nowadays, due to the high risk of road accidents, many people are concerned about road safety and possible options of its further improvement. Indeed, some individuals believe that reducing speed limit would considerably adjust the situation, while others would disagree and promote additional ways of relevant problem-solving.

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