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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantages of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvangtages ?

Nowadays in the world a lot of people whom smartphone owners are become more popular. This writer will show you the outweigh of advantages besides the disadvantages.

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Some believe governments should spend more money on improving roads and highways, while some think money should be spent improving public transportation, such as buses, trains, and subways. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Some people think governments should invest more money on improving roads and highways. Whilst, others think it should be spent on improvement of public transportation. In this essay, I will discuss about both people' s view and give my own opinion for each.

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Some people feel that cities should allow for spaces for graffiti while others feel it should be banned. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In recent years, there has been a tremendous increase in the number of people questioning whether cities should legalize the graffiti art and open spaces for them. On the one hand, there are those who argue that this will serve a medium for self-representation and creativity. However, critics, including myself, strongly oppose this view and instead believe that this will significantly increase the vandalism of public properties.

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Some parents prefer to stay in care homes after their retirement instead of staying with their children. Why is this happening? What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development?

These days, the majority of parents decide to stay in care homes after their retirement rather than staying with their children. The reason why this happen is because of their own thoughts. Because of this, there are some benefits and drawbacks from this action.

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Millions of people every year move to English-speaking countries such as Australia, Britain or America, in order to study at school, college or university. Why do so many people want to study in English? Why is English such an important international language? Give reasons for your answer.

A growing number of people go to English-speaking countries, such as Australia, Britain or America, every year to pursue their education. In this essay, I will explain the reason why people want to study in English and why it is important as the international language.

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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a notion that the globalization of English language are giving more benefits than its drawbacks. I completely agree with the view and this essay will detailed discuss about it.

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Some people think that increasing business and cultural contacts worldwide have positive influences on development; others think that they have negative effects on national identities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

A group of people believe that the power of connection globally in both business and cultural prospects has advantages for countries’ improvement. While another group of people are against that idea. This essay explains the positive and negative impacts for the nationalities and also shows my strongly agree point of view.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

On account of the modern technological advancement, there has been a significant demand for subjects in relation to science and technology in higher education. Under the circumstances, there has been contention over whether students opt for either their favorite courses or some practical subjects which are often associated with science. Although taking those subjects may bolster students’ career prospects, I strongly argue that they should have the right to choose their preferred study, considering the current school curricula as well as their motivations.

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Some people prefer to work for a large company, Others prefer to work for a small company. Which would you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice.

These days, business sectors are developing tremendously around the world. While some individuals tend to work for large size enterprises, others prefer to work for small companies. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I would prefer large enterprises because it provide a high salary package, insurance and status.

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Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

People argue that the nation's authority should allocate more budget towards creating more railways instead of adding more highways. I couldn't agree more with the statement. Providing more routes for trains can solve traffic problems especially in big cities, while making more roads will only amplifies the traffic jam.

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Museums visited by tourist but local less interested. Why it is happened? Discuss and give the reason about it

In the current world, local people lack the willingness to visit many museums and historical sites but it is not for tourists that are more enthusiastic. It is a problem that we face right now.

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In the future , people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash . All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

In comming days , individuals may have to pay for their purchases by cards or smartphones , not in cash. It is crystall clear that this condition will happen all over the globe as soon as our views . Yet some people might not be glad with this issu and they will try to keep themselves in the old shape. I will try to extend my oppinion about this phenomenon in this essay.

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Ambition is a positive quality for people to have in society today. How important is it for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

Everyone has their own ambitions for what they want to achieve in life, thrive in various sectors to reach their goals. It should be aware of that excessive worries to fulfil the desire that might be harmful. This essay will shed light on both the benefits and drawbacks of this issue.

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The best way to plan a holiday is by not planning at all. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In today's times, unlike old times, people have become very spontaneous and they think it is the best to not plan anything and go with the flow, especially when it comes to travel or planning a vacation. I do believe that unplanned trips can sometimes lead to best memories, however it can also lead to a lot of problems.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's lives. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The crucial destination of the science is upgrading the condition of the humanity. To some extent I agree that science's role in the enhancement of daily lives of mankind is undeniable and it should functioning for the sake of us , however, I think that there is an exceptional situation where some special type of science fields for instance mathematics or astronomy should be explored without any dependence from external factors.

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An increasing number of children are overweight, which could result in many problems when they grow older, both in terms of their health and healthcare costs. Why do you think so many children are overweight? What could be done to solve this problem?

Nowadays, obesity is increasing in children at an alarming rate. Thus, many children are experiencing health issues and due to the high demand for healthcare services, the cost of it is exponentially rising. In the section underneath, this essay shall propagate the cause and the solutions to this problem.

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In today's world many people own a smartphone. Do you think the advantagees of owning a smartphone outweigh the disadvantages?

In today’s digital world, more and more people use smartphones on a daily basics. Although there are some concerns about smartphone addiction, I believe the benefits that smartphones brigh such as the conveniece and connection far outweigh the concerns.

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it is more important for schoolchildren to learn about local history than world history. to what extent do you agree or disagree?

it is more important for young students to study about the history of their own country or the other societies in the world. From my point of view, both of them are essential for those young students.

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Universities should accept equal numbers of males and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is often seen that there are educational inequalities. There is a debate that a number of sudents who are enrolled in different institutes should be same in amount regarding gender for all the subjects. I disagree with this notion and I believe that it is unfair.

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Many high school students take part time jobs. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Nowadays many a scholer takes part-time work to meet thier financial needs. Although financial independancy and work experience are advantages, distraction from study and time management are the downside. In this essay I will discuss details of the both sides.

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