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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people say that the main environment on problem for our time is to loss of particulare species of plans an animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

People believed that the major issue related to the environment is the extinction of the rare animals but the others argued that there are many problems more urgent than. The writer of this essay agreed that the disappearance of uncommon animals is not the most instant problem.

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The world has been an enormous increase in flight for leisure, business and commercial purposes around the world over recent years. What do you think are the main advantages and disadvantages of such flights?. Do you think flights should be taxed more?

Whether there is a rapid growth in the number of international flights for lieusure, business and cmmercial purpose, which the advantages outweight the disadvantages. Moreover, his writer strongly believes that flights should not be taxed more.

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Friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. To what extent do you agree or disagree ?

There is a controversial perspective heating a debate over the fact friendships that take place online are not as meaningful as those where people meet each other face to face. While this statement is valid to some extent, I consider myself as an advocate of this idea.

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympic is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Whether being interested in events which can improve other countries relationships or a waste of money, the main purpose of Olympic games is still an argued problem. However, from prior experience, it is more beneficial to admit that the Olympics is an exciting event due to their benefit that it could bring about and the improvement of companionship among countries around the world despite those who believe that this global event is invested in meaninglessly.

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An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their better halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good?

As technology development advanced, people meet new friends and their partner on dating softwares or apps. There lots upsides be seen but must have some danger behind the screen. In this essay, I will discuss why people addicted to those dating apps and what danger is coming.

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In many countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people buy imported food? What could be done to encourage people to buy local food.

n some nations, an increasing number of people decide to buy imported food rather than local food because of varieties of food and better costs. However, this can be tackled by developing local products about quality and varity.

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Over-reliance on modern technology means that people are failing to learn, or are forgetting many basic skills. To what extent is this true? Are people becoming so reliant on modern technology that they are no longer able to do some things without it? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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In the countries, more and more people choose to buy imported food rather than food produced locally. Why people by imported food?What could be done to encourage people to buy local food.

In some nations, an increasing number of people who decide to buy imported food rather than local food because of varities of food and better costs. However, thí canbe tackled by developing local products about quality and varity.

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The process of producing drinking water by solar powered bump and filter.

The given graphic illustrates the process of producing filtered water by using solar power. Looking from an overall perspective, this method consists of six steps and is divided into two main periods, using sunlight strength throughout the procedure.

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Some people think that students should learn a range of practical skills at school (such as car maintenance or accountancy) alongside traditional subjects like maths and physics. Do you agree or disagree with this view?

School is the best place for students to obtain knowledge.Although there are already quite a lot subjects in it, some people strongly convinced that there are range of skills like time and money managing or car driving that they should also learn.From my perspective, its a good point, but i would also like to tell about downsides of this idea.

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Many museums charge for addmissions while others are free.Do ou think that the advantages of charging people for admissions to museums outweight the disadvantages?

Mostly museums charge people for entering whereas some museums dont.In this essay lets see hoe collecting fee for entering museums is an advantage which overweight the disadvantage.

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Fast food is becoming a part of live everywhere , negatively affecting our lifestyles and diets . To what extend do you agree or disagree ?

Consuming junk food is becoming all-pervasive in this modern world than ever previously . However , there remains a discrepancy as to whether the total impacts of their lifestyles and diets have been advantageous and disadvantageous to the sustainable growth of civilized society . Whereas many put forward the opposite proposition , I hold the belief that the imperfectness of these junk products is far outweighed by the practical benefits .

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In ancient times, major population thrived in a small communities where everyone knew each other. In these days, most of the people live in urban areas such as capital cities and are not much aware of other people around them. What were the advantages and disadvantages of living in a small communities?

Nowadays, people prefered to live in city in a small community than a country side with knowing everyone in village, therefore, population in capital city always more than other country side. After less connections with others and not aware of other people will have some impacts and some downsides in this situation. In this essay, I will discuss about what upside is in this phenomenon and what problem will increase.

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Some people believe that hosting an international sporting event is beneficial for the country, while others disagree. Do the benefits of hosting a major sporting event outweight the drawbacks?

Some people feel that broadcasting international games benefits to the country's sport. Others argue that hosting international games gave a detrimental effect. In this essay, I will argue that hosting international games should be given benefit to children and local players who can get international experience watching these games.

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Q. In some parts of the world traditional festivals and celebrations have disappeared or are disappearing. What problems is this causing? What measures could be taken to counter this situation?

There are various kinds of traditional culture in the world. People usually use festivals and celebrations to keep and spread the culture. However, some of them cannot be seen or show up rarely these years, which could be replaced by new culture or be only known by eldly people.

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Traffic and accommodation problems are increasing and government should encourage some businesses to move from cities to rural areas. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages.

In this modern era, cities are much crowded because in rece years people move to countryside from small villages for better facilities and good employment opportunities. Due to which authorities should make efforts to start workplaces in rural areas to minimise this situation. I will describe my views on the issue in following paragraphs.

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The plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now, and how it will look after redevelopment. summerize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisions where relevant.

Contained in the plans is information pertaining to the modification which is predicted to be improved in the future. Overall it can be seen that numerous amusement and commercial facilities are expected to be expanded significantly such as a leisure pool, sports shop, cafe and other amenities, while the central gadgets will be stably maintained.

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Some people think that governments should spend money on railways. Others believe that there should be more investment into new roads. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

In some concerns of the world, there is an opinion that it is essential to spend country's budget on building modern railway roads in order to allow innovative trains to travel between urban areas. However, there is an opposite opinion claiming that instead railway construction, it should be provided to enhancing public transport. This essay will discuss both views and argue in favour of the second one.

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Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.

It is undeniable that some people believe that there should be fixed punishments for each type of crime, however there is no absolute agreement on whether the circumstances of a crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment.

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Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion.

It is often argued whether modern technology can help us interact or it limits this. in this essay I will be talking about both two sides and share my view on this matter.

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