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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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It is often said that the governments spend too much of money on the project to protect wildlife. While there are other problems thats more important? Do you agree or disagree?

It is often argued that spending a significant amount of money by the administration to shield wildlife is useless while there are other more important projects to consider like education.I strongly agree with the notion that spending too much money on wildlife is not beneficial.

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Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types pf progress are equally important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

These days, many ruling bodies all over the globe give great importance to economic prosperity. However, a group of people support this approach, whereas, some think that other areas must be given equal importance too. In my viewpoint, the former notion is more persuasive and reasons to support my stance are elaborated in the following paragraphs.

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Serious violent crimes among people who are under-18 are becoming more common. Some people think that children who commit serious crimes should be treated like adults, while others would say that they should be rehabilitated. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Violent crimes among teenagers are becoming more popular. Some people argue that children who commit dangerous crimes should be treated like adults. while others say the best way to treated them is by rehabilitated. This essay will discuss both of views.

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In the modern world, schools are no longer necessary because there is so much information available through the internet that children can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The world is being more and more modern, especially the internet. The internet has a huge of available information so that some people believe that children now do not need to go to school and can study well by themselves at home. For me, I partly disagree with this opinion and I will discuss my reason in this essay.

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Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that thia would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In the contemporary world as well as in the past, the topic of public health has constituted an important element of public debate. Nowadays, it is often said that in order to improve it an increase of the number of sport facilities is needed; however, others agrue that such an approach would not contribute to it overall improvement and that more complex steps are neccesary. Each of these views has both pros and cons.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at early age .punishment is necessary o help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? what short of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children ?give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own lnowledge and experiences.

there is no denying the fact that it's important kids learn the difference between correct and wrong from beginning, while is commonly held belief that punishment is significant role to grow up them correctly, there also an argument that opposes it .In my opinion I will consider the punishment is one of a methods used to guide a children to correct way in the life . To begin with, for every action is there reaction, in turn, when child make wrong should be punished, In other words he should now the responsibility of his behaviour and correct this mistake maybe avoid disaster in Future, for instance, I punish my son by restrict him access to internet and tablet on daily base ,as result I push him out to play with others children that will increase his society and reduce his aloneness ,As report released from Pew Research Center in USA finding that phone and tablet screen contribute in the ADHD issue for children around 80% . Another point to consider, reduce the purchasing sweets pro...

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People now spend more and more time at home than in the past. What are the reasons for this development and what its effects on people and society.

Spending more time in their home is not a rare matter nowadays; compared to the past, most of the people would prefer to stay at home currently. For this phenomena, it could be conculded as serveal reasons and also come with some of the effects.

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some working parents believe children centres can provide the best care for children while others think other family members like grandparents can do this job. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion.

It is irrefutable that nurishing a child from childhood is the most fundamental aspect for every human beings. Therefore, there is a group of thinkers who think putting a child in children centres is more appropriate way for their basic care. While others believe young one needs to be with family especially with grandparents during their childhood journey. That is why before devoting myself to any sides, both the views are discussed further.

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Some people believe that success is earning money. Others believe that success is defined by personal happiness. Discuss both sides and give your own opino

There is no denying that all people want to be successful in their lives and they try hard to achieve this target. Some people find the success in being grateful for what they have and some of them consider riching as a real happiness.

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some say that the most important thing about being rich is that one has the opportunity to hrlp others. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt, that being, wealthy has become a common thing among people nowadays. Everyone is running mad rat race behind money. Well, many could be get helped by the richest guys. I agree with the statement. I shall shed light upon it by covering a lot of ground in further paragraphs.

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With the rapid development of communication technology, such as smartphones, tablets, and other mobile devices, some people think the disadvantages outweigh its advantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this technology era, every individual is using the communication technology such as laptops, phones and tablets. Few people says that disadvantages outweigh its benefits. I agree to this but upto some extent and will discuss in the following essay.

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In many countries today, crime novels an TV crime dramas are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think that these books an Tv shows are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

Entertainment industry has taken the place in the list of most growing fields. Video on demand channels now are the most popular among yong generation. The algorithm they use for feedback of people are very strong and give clear ideas to producers and film makers that what type of content people want to see and what is most demanding. In response to these reviews they generate more similar content, same applies to the books and tv shows. Why people or people are inclinded to crime novels and TV crime dramas, we will discuss in proceeding paragraphs.

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These days many families move to other countries for work. Some people believe that the children in these families benefit from this move. However, others believe that it makes life more difficult for the children. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that there are advantages and disadvantages to moving to another area with your children. While it is a commonly held belief that it is beneficial to take your children to another cultural with you, there is also an argument that your children will not be happy with your move for many reasons. In this essay, I will discuss both points of view and express my opinion.

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Some people believe that teenagers should concentrate on all school subjects equally. Others believe that teenagers should focus on the subjects that they are best at or that they find the most interesting.

Adults are often encouraged to focus on all academic material. Some argue that students should concentrate the subject that they looking for there passion rather then focusing on what others subjects . In my opinion, both categories of subjects are equally important for teenagers development.

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It is important to involve punishment when educating children so that they can distinguish right and wrong. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this notion?

It is essential to give punishment to the children while educating them so that they can differentiate between right and wrong.This essay will discuss this point of view and give reasons as to why it is important to punish them in this regard.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and inciude any relevant examples from your own.

Nowadays world are facing several environmental issues that have a significant impact on people lives. Some people believe that the main reason of environmental problems is the loss some specific type of plants and animals.Whereas others believe that there are several factors contribute to environmental changes. In my opinion, I agree that both aspect plays a significant role on environment.

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Some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like Science and Technology are more important than History. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, a lot of students believe that History is the most important school subject. Others claim that in recent days, Science and Technology are more imprtant than History. However, this easy firmly support the idea that every subject is nessessory for our education.

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Many people believe that social network sites such as face book have had a huge negative on both individuals and society. To what extend do agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that social media have good and bad side. While it is a commonly held belief that people may have gotten damage because of social apps, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that everything in life even social media have good and bad side you are the one who decide it.

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•Nowadays, it is getting difficult for people to enjoy their lives in cities. Why do you think this is? What can the government do to make life in cities more enjoyable?

It is argued that these days existance of the public in the cities is getting wrost, which makes individual lives miserable. However it has also been discussed that only authorities can make things normal. I completely agree with the idea and will support my opinion in this essay.

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Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. 1. Why is this the case? What can be done solve this problem?

It is obvious that, criminals now after being released from jail tend to commit another crime again, even they have been given a chance to realize their mistakes. Although there could be seen some reasons why is this happening,in my way of thinking a number of sensible measures can be implemented to address this challenge.

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