IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In the future, more people will choose to go on holidays in their own country and not travel abroad on holiday? Do you ageree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is a statement said that in the future many folks prefer going vacations in their own nation rather than traveling to another nation during the holiday. Thus, I still feel that people will go to the other countries on day-off in the future for two main reasons.

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Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their parent. Other believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

The children indeeed are the next genertation of our society. Some believe that toddlers should be with their parents when they have any free time while others say that this is irrevelant and brings more neagtive detrimental effects to children. This esaay discusses both viewpoint and I strongly agree with the formmer opinion for the following reasons.

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More and more adults are spending time playing computer games. Why are adults doing so? Is it good or bad?

Its true that the adult spending more time in play video games. But, there are a several reasons for this, and i think this is bad habit and they should leave it.

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In many countries,there is a growing gap between the technical skills of younger people and those over the age of fifty. What problems does this cause, and what solutions could minimise the problems?

It is true that the technical skill gap betewn adult people and older people it so difference. The are a variety of posible reasons for this, but steps can definitly be taken to tackle the problem.

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You have 20 minutes to plan and write your response. Your response will be judged on the basis of the quality of your writing and on how well your response presents the points in the lecture and their relationship to the reading passage. Typically, an effective response will be 150 to 225 words.

There are some arguments about dinosaurs being an endotherm. It is believed that they are reptiles and were not endotherms. However, there are shreds of evidence that consider them to be endotherms. The first evidence is that a dinosaur fossil had been found in the polar region, where only endotherm animals can survive. Nevertheless, the lecture tells us that the polar region was warm enough for ectothermy animals and when the polar region became cold, animals that were not endotherms migrated to warmer climates. The second piece of evidence is Endotherms allow animals to do physical activity such as running, and it is possible for the species who have a leg structure positioned underneath their body.

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In recent years, there has been a significant advancement in AI and automation technologies. Some argue that these technologies will lead to widespread job displacement. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement?

In past years there is a continuous increase in the use of artificial intelligence to complete various tasks in our daily life. According to some people this urge in increase of these technologies will cause lots of troubles to upcoming generations. I agree with this statement and in the upcoming paragraph I will describe some points to justify my opinion.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

While it is widely claimed that numerous manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar which leading to several health problems, others argue that those sugary products should be made more expensive aiming to encourage people to take less sugar. The reason why I disagree with the statement will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think that it is better to work for different organisations. Discuss both veiws and give your opinion?

Some individuals work for the same company for their whole working life . whereas, others believe that it is a good idea to work for different ortganisations . I will discuss both the views point in the upcoming paragraphs along with my opinion.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically. As a result, some believe that non-academic subjects such as physical, and cookery education should be removed from the school syllabus so that the children can concentrate on academic work.To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, students are under great pressure to secure good grades to achieve high positions. Consequently, few people say that vocational subjects like sports and cooking should be eliminated from their schedule. So, they can focus on their academic studies only. However, I am not in favor because such type of education is as important as academic education. Because it gives a break to kids and enjoy as well and at the meantime one can learn good skills that are useful in their future as well. I will discuss this in detail in the essay below.

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The number of people being sent to prison is increasing year by year. While some people believe prison is the best way to tackle crime, others suggest that community service is more successful Discuss both views.

Currently, the statistic says that a number of inmates has been growing every single year what illustrates the incarceration reality these days.

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With a growing population, many people believe that we should focus on producing more GM food. What are the advantages and disadvantages of doing this?

These days, a massive issue is the overpopulation that has an effect in the source of the food, so a group of people think we ought to focus on producing more GM foods. However, they are some benefites of use GM foods, I still believe that these cannot overshadow the drawbacks.

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The internet is probably the most significant invention of the last decades. Without it our lives would be completely different. What are the advantages and disadvantages?

One of the most myraid inventions isthe internet that makes our world as one Small village. The developmeut of internet considered as one of the most faster method to comminucate, learn, exchange Knowledge, and know about any exclusive news around the world. Besides that, the internet has both advantages and disadvantages which depends on the quantity and quality of using it. In this essay, different advantages and disadvantages of the using inter will disusse in this essay based on my perceptive.

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nowdays,growing number of people with health problems are trying to find alternative medicine or treatments instead of visiting a doctor. Do you think this is a positive or negative development. give reasons for your answer and inculed any relavent examples from your own knowledge or experience

There is no denying the fact that there is an increased figure of individules have health issues and people have thought about alternative way of treatments rather than visit a speciallist. this essay will discuss negative and positive of that improvment.

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More and more people decide to eat healthy food and exercise regularly. What are the reasons for this trend? What can be done to encourage more people to eat healthier and exercise?

Nowadays, people tend to choose nutritional food and do workout for their daily basis. This phenomenon becoming a trend because of many people now aware of the importance of their health. The awareness of the increasing healthier lifestyle also being boosted by social media influencers and being spread out around the world by the using of social media itself. Social media influencers show the importance of keeping body fit will extend life span and avoid us from deadly disease. They also showed us the longer we live, the longer time we will spend with our family and descendants, and when we live without any dangerous sick, we live happier and not trouble others. Thus what make many people aware of their body exercise and their healthy meals.

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In some cities, there are few controls over the design and construction of new homes and office buildings, so people can build in whatever style they like. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Recently, several city's landscape has few controls over the design and contruction of new houses and office buildings, it cause citizens can build in whtaever style they like. I believe that urban areas that develop without good plan will cause some problems. It will be some drawbacks due to tidiness, rather than the benefits.

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In the past, people usually stayed I one place thought their life. These days, people often move around. They often live in several different place their lifetime. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both?

Nowadays, moving to a different country is becoming more and more common. Most of the times, people decide to embark upon a new life to study or to find better job opportunities and thus, have a lifestyle upgrade. However, living abroud has many advantages and some drawbacks.

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Some people think that teenage years are the happiest time of most people’s lives. Other think adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The happiness play a crucial role in people lives. However, some people say that the happiest life is the teenager periods while others believe that adult life is of the utmost happiest life even has more responsibilities. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following reasons.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road transport safety is to let the driver test each year. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, myriad community suggest that many drivers have to driver's evolution to be safe when they are driving ride new roads. Hence, others disagree that it is not a necessary thing because it can be enough that drivers need culture, which is a change to improve roads. I strongly disagree about drivers having to approval each age. In this essay, I will propose this topic in terms of do not necessary.

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The advance in air travel are focused only in first-class and this seems to have left others with no benefits at all. Do you agree or disagree?

In the 20th century, broadly, it can be seen that flight fields are developed and extended and there are several catagories of classes such as, economy, business class and first-class. Most poeple travelled on economy class becuase it has a lower price. Other classes, they have higher prices and very less people can book for these catagories. In this essay, the discussion briefly about why some people thinking that the only benefits only for the first-class people. In my opinion, I disagree and I think all kinds of classes have benefits based on specific things

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Some people think that individuals are born to be leaders, others believe leadership can be learnt. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Despite the decent density of population who asserts captainship is as inherent component whereas the rest of mankind tend to hitch their wagon to a star via the desperate endeavors. Considering to be a splendid entrepreneur who takes a bull by the horns is more preferable to me upon various causes, nevertheless those who used to rely on luck and constantly rant of the aptitudes they are deprived of.

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