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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Children find it difficult to concentrate on or pay attention to their studies in school. What are the reasons? How can we solve this problem?

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some students can to concentrate on the lesson, thinking about something less. It is undeniable that a new knowledge has become an essential part of our life. However, personally I tend to think that student should be thinking about his lesson and head on the lesson.

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Competitiveness is a positive quality for people in most societies. How does competitiveness aﬀect individuals? Is it a positive or negative trend?

Many people consider competitiveness as one of the most precious personality among humans. I believe competitiveness can provide benefit to individuals by encouraging them obtain more knowledge and overcome weakness

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

I would say there is more benefits when you have to find work and move away from your friends and families.

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It is important for people to take risk, both in professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disavantages?

Generally, it is one of the most necessary decision for once to take risks, both in professional lives and their personal lives.

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Buying tickets on the internet such as books, air tickets, and groceries is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this outweigh the disadvantage

Purchasing tickets by online like books, air tickets, and groceries is gaining more popularity. I think this thing will give many benefits to people.

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Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tooL Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh tne benefits?

on this advancement of technology era, more and more video games have been created and covered all parts of the globe. Therefore, It is debated among the public whether the video games as harmless or opposite effect on the people who is playing on them. From my perspective, the drawbacks of video games outweigh the upsides which I will explain in the following paragraph.

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Plastic bags, plastic bottles and plastic packaging are bad for the environment. What damage does the plastic do the environment? what can be done by government and individuals to solve this problem?

Plastic items such as bottles, bags and packaging is considered to be bad for a healthy environment. Due to the major damges caused by plastics, people arugue it is not environement friendly. Further, the process of disposin these products are not convinient as others. However, many counries collect plasctics seperately with the purpose of recycling. This essay highlights the major factors such as drawbacks of plastics and actions that the Government and people can be taken to minimize the usage.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities.

A number of members of the public have the opinion that the time when you are young the most enjoyable period of life. Another view that older people are happier although they have more work to do. I will examine both opinion and give my own point of view.

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Many people now undertake extreme activities, from hang-gliding to mountain climbing. Why do people risk their lives in this way, and do you think this is a good trend?

In today's world, people tend to be adventurous and want to involve themselves in extreme activities such as hand gliding and mountain climbing. This essay will discuss the reason to why do people risk their life by indulging in such activities and also provide my opinion with profounding evidence.

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Governments should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Some people belive that governments should do more investment railways than other roads. I think, it is related to using of roads. In 21th century, many people does not use trains for transportation. In my opinion, politicians spend country's money more effectily if they does not invest on railways.

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Children nowadays watch significantly more television than those in the past, which reduces their activities levels accordingly. Why is this case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children?

It is argued that kids spend time watching TV shows much more in the past. I believe that addiction on TV programs is the main cause behind this problem. And parents should set rules regarding this issue.

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In some societies the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. What are the reasons for this trend? And what possible solutions could reduce this issue?

According to data, the number of crimes committed by teenagers is growing. there are many countries having problems with crimes and violence around teenagers. in my opinion, in the digital era, teenagers can access many resources about violent content. they can see on many platforms social media and games. those could have a negative impact if they were always consumed about that. For example, there was a case in my city. A teenager commits violence against his friends, who have watched on tik tok about bullying practice in other school. He inspired after watched that content.

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Many students choose to take a gap year before starting university, to travel or gain work experience. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Do you think that take a gap before starting university is a good thing? Gap year means taking break from school before start studying at the university. In this essay, I will talk about the important of take a gap year before university starts.

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Many people around the world use social media everyday to keep in touch with other people and get news events. Do you think the advantages otweigh the disadvantages?

Do you think that social media is important to our life ? Social media is a thing in internet that you can talk to your friend's or to get the latest news and to have some fun. In this essay I will talk about the advantages and the disadvantages of the social media and going to discuss both of the point view.

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Many rare species are being poached. What are the reasons behind this? What can be done about this problem/?

Without out doubt,nowadays, species which are rare being hunted illegally, and those species are numerous.There are several causes of this alarming trend, but mesaures could certainly be taken to solve this problem.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years. Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.

The range of obese children in the western community has risen nearly 20% in the last decade. In this essay, I will try to bring light to the main three reasons and three effects of such a usual tendency.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shoppings centres or malls to do their shoping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

These days, consumer's behaviour has been changing brastically more than ever before. Not very long ago, shopping malls are dominated to the small-scale sectors due to a lack of customer flow. I think this is a positive improvement because it reduces people's time and effort. This essay discusses it briefly for the following reasons.

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The charts below the most popular films by genre for men and women and general ticket sales for different types of film in the USA in 2010.

The bar chart compares males and females in terms of the proportion of their favourite film types, and pie chart highlights the percentages of income from general ticket.

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In many families nowadays, both parents work and pay people to look after their children. Some people believe this is not good for families. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There is no doubts, that some families choose to find employees who stay with their children. I believe, that the phenomenon has positive development and in the essay I will explain the reasons of my opinion.

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Some people think person happiness is directly related to economic success, while others believe this depends on other factors. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Happiness indeed play a crucial role in people's lives. Some believe that economic success

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