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In many countries, the widespread use of the internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Speaking a second or other languages rather a mother tongue in a foreign country makes speaker to face a lot of serious social problems, besides practical problems. I totally agree with this idea because immigrants may find it difficult to make communications with others also they become overwhelmed as a result of searching for social credibility among natural speakers.
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The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinge upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I am JOSUÉ BALMES AGUDELO PATIÑO, identified officially with a citizenship card from Ibagué, Colombia No. 14.230.923. The aim of this statement is to openly express my desire to sponsor my daughter, who is called MARIA LUCIA AGUDELO MOTTA, identified with a Colombian citizenship card 1.000.713.456 and passport No. AS407908. I will explain the personal and professional reasons to support my daughter to carry out her studies.
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Some people think governments should spend money in looking for life on other planet, while others think that there are many unsolved problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is widely believed that the governments should spend money looking for life on other planets, while the others argue that they should concentrate on solving problems on earth and I also support this opinion.
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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe/regard it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, the advancement of technology is regarded can be increasing crime by some people. Whereas, in my point of view the crime can reduce through technology.
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Some people argue that it is the government's responsibility to transport children to school while others belive that parents should do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are baised opinion on transportation service for children to school where some people states that government is responsibe for transit. However, on other hand some people believe that parents should personally drop off and pick up their children. prior giving my opinion both the views would be discussed further.
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Nowadays technology in increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras) .in many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that the technology has become a main part of our lives. in other words, the gradually updates of development has discovered by the scientist in the modern days. However, the service works harmfully on the people live within monitoring the persons movement and daily life requirements. In this essay, I will explain the merits and demerits in my view.
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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional food and traditional ways of food preparation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The theme of this essay, if the family still use more the convenience foods or more prevail preparation food.
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the most important aim of science be improve people lives to what extend agree or disagree

The in no denying the fact about the important of the science and the grow of technology make the lives of people better.
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Some people say history is one of the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today's worl, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

People have different views about whether pupils should be learn history or science a lot. While history provides variety of advantages to our world, I believe that science and technology subjects are more important in schools.
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The best way to solve traffic and transportation problems is to encourage people to live in cities rather than suburbs or countryside. What extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argue that encouraging people to live in cities rather than countryside is the solution for the traffic and transportation. This essay is totally agree with that motivating indiveduals to live in the countryside is much better for the transportation. I believe that decreasing the number of people who lives in cities and staing under the minimum number of the capacity are the main solutions for the traffic.
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Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Others think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion

It is widely argued that to sell products, tools and various things, people should be influenced by advertisements which is hugely beneficial. While others say that this method is become out of fashion and don’t give that much attention to it. In my view, I firmly believe that the former view is much more significant that the latter.
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Some students choose to work or travel after leaving school and before going to university. Many people, however, say that working experience is more useful in adult life than travel. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?

These days, pupils who graduated from callage have various plane from time which they have it until university , so a group of them desighnete working, while another ones choose traveling to other areas or countries; however, some people believe it is important that they working instead of traveling owing to the fact that they obtain a lot of experience that help them in adult life. In my opinion, working is the good things and is the best things for people who have money problem, but other ones can improve their knowldege about their world by traveling.
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Some people believe that children should be allowed to go out for outdoor activities. While others believe that children should stay at home most of the time. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Self medication, the practice of individuals treating their ailments and disease without provisional supervision, is increasingly common due to a widespread availability of over the counter drugs and the abundant of the information online. While the practice offer convenience, it also has significant risk that necessitate
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A person's worth seems to be judge by appearance and social status more than traditional values of kindness, trust and honour. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Over recent decades, many people have been trying to having a large amount of money and they judge by others only regard to their invests, not their personality. I am agreed strongly with this statement and I will explain in this essay.
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Despite a large number of gyms, a sedentary lifestyle is gaining popularity in the contemporary world. What problems are associated with this? What solutions can you suggest?

Nowadays, most people spend their free time with a sedentary lifestyle. In contrast with, new business about gyms has been opened a lot increased. I believe, a minimum wage of populations and gyms member fee is a main problem associate with point. However, it can be improved by the government and the entrepreneur.
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Nowadays group of people believe that newspapre i the best way to get news,However, other people think social media is better. This essay discuss both of this veaws and explain why I think media is better than newspaper,

There is no denying on that several individual's thinking of reading newspapers are the best option while other's  opinion are that media is better. Thus we are going to write some advantages of both views and at the end I will give my own opinion.
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Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.

The map illustrates the city of Brandfield, including the golf course, park, city centre, and industrial estate. To begin, the area of S1 and S2 have been suggested to be used as a new shopping mall.
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The illustrations show how chocolate is produced. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The given picture provides information about how they manufacture chocolate.
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In many parts of the world, shopping is no longer a way that people buy things that they need, and it has been developed into a form of entertainment. What are the reasons for this development? Is this a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In plenty part of the world, the function of shopping from buy necessary things change over a form of entertainment. It happens since several reasons such as consumer culture and technology. In my opinion, it is negative development because affect psychological of people.
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Some university students want to learn about other subjects in addition to their main subjects.Others believe it is more important to give all their time and attention to study for a qualification. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The disputes about choosing specific subject or exploring other subjects have been becoming a topic of discussion in the education field, particularly in the University. Some students want to specialized with the main subject only, and some are excited to explore by dedicating their time and focus to another courses.
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