IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that having sports in schools is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that sports in school are a vital part of education.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people think that having sports in schools is not effective, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is very important for education. In my view, I disagree with the first belief, because sport is very vast in our life. In this essay, I will explain why sports are very essential.

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Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Because of we are living in the era of Renaissance nowadays, the forest has become the main victim unfortunately, in this essay, I shall elaborate on also I shall reveal my point of view according to this topic.

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Some people get into debt by buying things they don’t need and can’t afford. What are the reasons for this behavior? what action can be taken to prevent people from having this problem?

Nowadays, the purchasing process is easier than in decades. It is expected that with the fast technology and developing systems. The people take monetary from each other to cover they needs even less can return money back or not. In my opinion this behavior is not suitable for me because the debt will let the person spend money without knowing the consequences.

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In many countries, women are now able to join the armed forces on an equal basis. However, some people think only men should be members of the army, navy or air force. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays one of the important questions all over the world is the question of equality between men and women. We can divide all the countries for 3 groups in this question. Some countries allow women to join the army on the equal basis, in other countries the army service is compalsory for both sexes, and the third are avoid the army service for women. I am convinensed that an army must be professional, with the equal rights for man and women, without compalsory military service at all, for several reason.

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Some people want governments to spend money looking for life on other planets. Others, however, think this is a waste of public money when there are so many problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

People wanting goverment to spend money on other planets is a useless idea because it will waste lots of money without any outcome. I will discuss both view in this essay.

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Some people think that family has the most powerful influence on a child’s development, while others think that other factors such as television, friend, music have the biggest effects. Discuss both views and give your opinion?

In society, families hold the biggest influence over their child’s education and enhancement. Otherwise, other factors such as friend, television, and child’s outside environment also play a huge part on their development. This essay will discuss both opinions.

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Some would argue that most of the employees who wear a uniform at the office gives good impression. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Several people have an opinion that generally a worker who dresses gives uniform at the office that is giving perspective outstanding impression. I totally agree with the statement, because wearing the same costume shows solid teamwork and branding company.

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The line chart details participants according to activity at a social center in the Australian city of Melbourne from 2000 to 2020

The line graph illustrates the participation trends at a social centre in Melbourne Australia, from the years 2000 and 2020. Overall, it is clear that a chart includes some types of activities such as film club, martial arts, amateur dramatics, table tennis and musical performances.

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Some people think colleges should provide knowledge and skills related to future career; others think the true function of colleges is to give access to knowledge for its own sake. Discuss both points of view about the functions of colleges.

Improving students' knowledge has been the most important function of a university degree, which gives them a foundation for their professional development. While some people believe that workplace skills should be acquired during the graduation process, others trust that graduates can only focus on the theoretical aspects of the courses. In my opinion, a university's main purpose must be teaching the theory; otherwise, students will be considered unprepared for their professional life.

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The line chart details participants according to activity at a social center in the Australian city of Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.

The given line graph illustrates data about the amount of members for various activities in Melbourne, Australia between 2000 and 2010 at one social center. Overall, according to the given information, there was a substantial difference among these activities. They ranged from 0 to 65 participants per activity.

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Overpopulation in many major urban centers around the world is a major problem. What are the causes of this? How can this problem be solved?

Major problem of the world is overpopulation in a major urban centers.One of the reason of overcrowding in downtown is migration and solution of this problem is diportation.

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Some people think that Zoo's are all cruel and should be closed down. Others, however believe that zoo can be useful in protecting wild animals. discuss both views and give your opinion.

The speaking about this topic is a controversial , some folks believe it is useful while other say not, in this essay, I shall elaborate on , also I shall reveal my point of view according this topic.

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Some people feel that it is always wrong to keep animals in captivity, for instance in zoos. Other people say that there are benefits for the animals and for humans. Discuss both sides of this debate, and give your personal view

Since some people argue that animals should be kept in captivity such as zoos to protect both animals and humans from any dangers, others think that it is generally incorrect to keep animals in captivity. In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of keeping creatures in prison and try to draw some conclusions.

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Many young children have unsupervised access to the internet and are using the internet to socialise with others. This can lead to a number of dangerous situations which can be threatening for children. What problems do children face when going online without parental supervision.

While we are living in the renaissance era nowadays and the internet becomes available in each home , thus it has led to some drawbacks which are reflecting on the children, in this essay, I shall elaborate on , also I shall reveal my point of view.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing Do you think this is a positive or a negative development

In last years, many people leaved their rural town and moved to cities. This phenomenon identified in many countries around the world. From my point of view, this phenomenon represent a positive development for some reasons.

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Some people think that the increasing use of computers and mobile phones for communication hurts young people's reading and writing skills. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that these days the digital devices are one of the most important communication method . The question is , dose the increasing usage of these devices like mobile phones and computers affect? in this essay I am going to explain many different reasons for how these devices can be an ineffective for young reading and writing skills for young age people .

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The debate on cash versus credit card has been going on for some time. Credit is still a fairly new concept within the history of finance; so many people would rather stick with paper money. According to you, which is a better payment method, cash or credit? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The argument on use of physical money over plastic cards has been happening for certain period. because, credit card is new mode of payment considering traditional payment methods. some individuals are under impression to continue use of paper money over card payments. In my opinion payment using card is easy and safe in current upgraded era over carrying hugh cash.

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All parent want the best opportunities for their children. There are some people who think that schools should teach children skills but others think having a range of subjects is better for a child’s future. Discuss both the sides and give your opinion

This dabate whether today's curriculum need to enrich real life skills or not have sereval serious arguments from opposite angles. Some people claim that children should lern more theoretic knowladge in school, while I believe to gain some skills is more facilitative for children future.

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Several discussions surround the opinion that gaining overweight has becomed negatively impacts for public areas, especially wealthy lands. However, while people continually conflict about this issue

Several discussions surround the opinion that gaining overweight has becomed negatively impacts for public areas, especially wealthy lands. However, while people continually conflict about this issue, this essay will shed light on the matter by showing both sides of the equation have their positives, albeit a stronger argument showing both reasons and measures for this risky situation, which will be presented in the next paragraphs.

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A person’s worth nowadays seems to be judged according to social status and material possessions. Old-fashioned values, such as honor, kindness and trust, no longer seem important. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In contemporary society, some argue that personal price tag is judged through social achievements and material possessions. While some believe that the worth of a person is priceless qualities like honor, kindness and trust are more necessary. Due to these statements, this essay below will illustrate my personal perspective about these problems.

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