IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

4.5

band

Children are now less active in their free time than in the past. Therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in schools. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people opinion is nowadays kids are less active than in the past. Due to this opinion elder people believe that sports lessons must be forced in schools. In overall I agree with this subject and I will explain my point of view in the following essay.

4.5

band

Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivating of committing it should always be taken account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion.

Every crime must have a punishment. Some people argues regarding the punishment for a crime. Should circumstances in which crime has taken place be considered or fixed punishment be given for each crime. In my opinion, situation should be considered before taking any decision.

4.5

band

Anyone can use a mobile phone to answer the work call and home call at any place, or 7 days a week. Do you think there are more negative or positive effects on both individuals and society?

there is no doubt that everyone can use a mobile phone to respond to the work call and home call at any place,and time .Hence ,there is for sure a negative or positive effects on both individuals and society.

4.5

band

Some people think it is better for children to grow up in the city, while others think that life in the coutrysidecis more suitable. What are the advantages and disadvantages of both places?

Urbanised or farm driven country. This is the most discussed theme among people. One group suggest bringing up kids in a city is more convinient and affordable while others argue about this stance and claim villages are the place where life takes origin. In my essay, those opinions will be explaned thoroughly and given discussion.

4.5

band

Some people believe that children should not be given homework everyday, while others believe that they must get homework everyday in order to be successful at school. discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Homework is a subject for discussion among people. One group state this is mandatory part of student`s education to gain success while others claim such overload program drain the pupil performance. In this essay i let some evidence about this discussion and give my opinion of those arguments.

4.5

band

Some people believe that if people are allowed to buy guns, they will be able to protect themselves and the crime rate can be lower. To what extent do you agree or disagree？

In this era, buying guns is a controversial topic. A lot of people think that if they have the authority to buy guns they can protect themselves, also it will help to decrease the crime rate. I totally oppose this statement. In this essay, I will discuss this more.

4.5

band

Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that the sports facilities should be increasing in number to improve individual health, while others believe that would have negative results on public health and there are many other ways to improve it.However, I firmly support the idea that building more sports facilites would help people to improve their general health but also need to take care of other effects that may happen.

4.5

band

Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools. Others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some would argue that it’s better for boys and girls to study in different school, while others claim that more benefical for children to get an education in mixed school. I believe that it’s good for girls and boys to be in mixed school as it’s help them to be more social, although in separate schools it’s may make them be more focus in their studies.

4.5

band

Some people think parents should teach their children how to be a good members of society. however, believe that school is the best place to learn. Discus

[1:49 pm, 07/07/2024] Dalia: Some would argue that parents must learn their kids how to be a good individual while others claim that school is the best place to teach this for children. Despite the fact that school is an important place for children, I believe that parents play a big role in their children life.

4.5

band

Some people believe that individuals who earn a lot of money are the most successful. Others say that the individuals who contribute to the society (such as scientists or teachers) are the most successful. 🔸Discuss both views and give your own opinion. Write at least 250 word

Nowadays, there are people who guess that success can be count by the money. Others believe that the people who are working for the humankind like tutors and researchers are more successful. In this essay, I want to discuss both points of view and try to achieve a logical conclusion.

4.5

band

Detailed describtion of crimes on newspaper and TV can have bad consequences on society, so this kind of information should be banned in the media. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that nowadays social media share details of crimes. While it is a commonly held believe tha sharing details describe what happened in crimes on the TV or in newspaper can have harmful outcomes for communities, there is also an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that this kind of news must be barred by news organizations.

4.5

band

Many developed counties now have large numbers of people over the age 65 . What problems might this cause ? . How can the problems be solved

Nowadays, many developed countries are facing a serious problem. Most of its populations is people above the age 65. It will cause several problems, such as unproductive citizens and the total number of productive citizens at there is very low. However, there are some solutions that can be considerations like giving presents or rewards to people to marry and birth children also encourage people from outside country to live at that country.

4.5

band

The internet has transformed lives and economies but it is turning the world into a global village. Soon everybody will think and behave in the same way. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

The 21st century has been marked as an epoch of developing technologies with breakthrough transformations in every part of life starting from personal lifestyle to economies of countries, however, this formidable rise of global web popularity turn the Earth into collective farms. I would agree with this point of view and discuss both sides of the problem.

4.5

band

Nowadays more and more older people who need employment have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause?What are the solutions?

The number of full-time employment older people have been escalating at an increasing rate in today's community, and this situasion lead to a significant competition with young generations. This essay demonstrates fistly the metters of this social-economic issue such as ageing population and inflation by following an analysis of some suggestions like work divition of labor to mitigate the certain problem.

4.5

band

In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is worsening. What possibly can cause this problem? What measures can be taken to resolve it?

Countries are facing major challanges in their metro cities. There are several factors which are causing it to deteriorate their healthy lifestyle one of the major factors are living cost. This essay will discuss the reasons and several possible solution for this issue.

4.5

band

Some people think that planting trees in open space cities and towns is more important than building houses. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this contemporary era, some individuals believe that planting flora in open areas is more crucial than constructed of housing. I strongly disagree with this thinking of human beings because we know plants is important for fresh environments but also development of housing direct impacts of economic growth.

4.5

band

The statistics show different types of staff in the Shore Hotel from 1975 to 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table depicts the percentage of how many crew have experience, specific skills, or qualifications between 1975 and 2010.

4.5

band

In a public-funded healthcare system, people who are willing to pay for the best and fast treatment should be able to do so. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Most of the countries have public-funded healthcare system to help their people can access good doctors and medicals.This organization helps poor or medium class family financially as the cost of medicine and medical care are very expensive but some people who has money want faster and better treatment.I'm not agree with this statement because this system was created for every person.

4.5

band

Some people think that instead of preventing climate change, we need to find a way to live with it. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In this globalized era, climate changes are booming day by day. Some people contend that we should try to ajust are self in this environmental change, rather than looking for some feasible solutions. I am totally disagree with this argument and in this essay, I am going to provide the reasons why I am opine that we should save our environment.

4.5

band

Some people think that having a set retirement age (e.g. 65 years) for everybody, regardless of occupation, is unfair. They believe that certain workers deserve to retire and receive a pension at an earlier age. Do you agree or disagree? Which types of workers do you think should benefit from early retirement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Certain people intend that having a set pension age for everyone,irrespectively of carrer,is unfair. They trust that some workers deserve to retire and obtaine a pension at an earlier age.This essay is disagree with this statment as people are able to earn more to avoid the dependency on their kids if they have sufficient cash flow and they can earn more and save more for healthy retirement life.

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 & Task 2 checks
Practice with essays, charts, and letters.
Personalized suggestions & mistake analysis
Spot every mistake and boost your score.
Topic ideas & vocabulary helpers
Expand your ideas and use the right words.
Progress tracking
Watch your writing improve with every practice.