IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Due to poorer countries experiecing a 'brain drain' they are seeing many professionals, such as doctors and teachers, leaving to work in more developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can be suggested to deal with these situations?

It is claimed that, in recentntime, a 'brain drain' event is also occur in my country, especially scientist. In my oppion, many people not only professionals they need good quality of life. Please, do not blame them if they leaving to work in more cilvilize countries. This problem can cause by many factors.

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Competition for university is becoming increasingly strong. Why are universities becoming more competitive? Is this a positive or negative development?

In the modern time, more universities become more and more competitive thus leading to the scholarship. This writer believes that this is a positive development due to improvement of quality.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, it is a noticeable phenomenon that businesses are more likely to highlight the innovation of their product. Such modern trend, in my point of view, does more good than harm.

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Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?

In recent decades witnessed an increase in the proportion of foreign settlement, raisingmanyquestionsofsafetyandintegration. Althoughtheideasofpotential drawbacks appear to be reasonable, I think living abroad will pay dividends.

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Although abuse of the system is inevitable, social welfare payments are essential to protect the rights that citizens have to a guaranteed minimum income in a democratic society. Do you agree or disagree?

In some countries, government has provided welfare payment for people who are unemployed especially those who got laid off. Some people believe that, welfare companies should make unemployed people to work for them in exchange for the money they receive. In my opinion, paying people for doing nothing is not rational, except for those who have disabilities or suffer from a health problem. In this essay, I am going to discuss this issue and give give my personal point of view.

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Housing is essential for people. Some argue that the government should offer free housing for people who cannot afford it. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? #people #argue #government #offer

Due to the rapid growth of technology , the world has come a long way therefore the lifestyle has changed a lot in the past few years . As the population is increasing at an alarming rate it is a big deal to have a roof on one's head . Having a house is very crucial in the current scenario as it provides safety and mental peace . In the midst of change , it's very difficult to find a suitable place to live as the population rate is increasing rapidly . There are some citizens who Agree with the notion that the government should provide free houses to the poor people of the nation . There is a range of conflicting arguments related to the assertion but somewhere I vehemently Agree with the statement . In the succeeding monograph , I intend to delve into the matter as well as proffer examples to justify my point of view.

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Some people believe that violent media directly results in violent behavior. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The severity of violence has been highlighted over the past decades. From this aspect, questions about whether violent media directly results in violent behavior are raised. In my opinion, violent behavior is caused by the channels to some extent.

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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying.

The emergence of the digital era has revolutionized the way we consume information. People argue it widespread leading to the obsolete of printed newspapers and books. Some others believe that with the increasing accessibility of free content online, there will be no to pay for physical copies of newspapers or books. However, i strongly disagree with this view.

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Some people believe the purpose of education is to prepare individuals to be beneficial to society. Other say the purpose of education is to achieve personal ambitions. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Education is one of the fundamental factors when it comes to forming an individual’s personality. It is stated that it aims to succeed in a person's career, but other people think that the studying process limits people by making them comfortable with the crowd. I, personally, think, study system only provides range of knowledges and answers for basic questions to educate human beings to understand essential processes.

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Unhealthy eating has a negative effect on both individuals and the society in which they live. Some people think that the government should tax unhealthy foods while others believe that a ‘fat tax’ is unfair and unnecessary. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, it is considered that it has negative impact for people and their society to eat unhealthy food. Some argue that a ‘fat tax’ should be determined by government, while others think the task is not necessary because it will be unfair. In this essay, I will discuss both views and give my opinion for this unhealthy food tax matter.

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In their advertising, businesses nowadays usually emphasise that their products are new in some way. What is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the modern era numerous business always show that their latest and new products are some what new and better than any other products in ther advertisement . There are many reasons behind this trend and in my opinion I believe it is a positive development and this essay will cover both the aspects with appropriate examples and explanations.

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The pictures show information about average income and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a city in the UK

The pictures give data regarding average earnings and spending on food and clothes by an average family in a town in the UK.

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Some employees want to be able to contact their staff at all times, even on holidays. Does this development have more advantages than disadvantages?

In this era of modernisation, numerous employers are contacting their staff at all time for work related purposes and the employes are even getting calls on a day off. This trend is becoming more and more common nowadays and it has benefits as well as drawbacks at equivalent level.

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It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this? #‘travel #mind’

It is sometimes said that ‘travel broadens the mind’. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this?

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Convenience foods will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and preparatory methods. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Comfortable meals will become more and more common and eventually relieve traditional food as well as methods of readiness

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Some people believe zoos are good places for people to learn about animals. Other people believe animals belong in nature and it is wrong to keep them in zoos. What do you think? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.

Zoos are a great place to enjoy and learn about our wildlife animals. However, people still debate to this day whether or not that zoos are a place that kept animal away from their life, like a prison and to be honest they're not wrong.

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Smart phones and other similar electronic gadgets have reduced the contact between friends. Discuss how far you agree with this statement. #phones #gadgets #contact #friends

Due to the rapid growth of technology , the world has come a long way therefore the lifestyle of people has changed a lot in the past few years . In the midst of change , people come with new modern gadgets to make our lives easier and comfortable . Smartphones play an integral role in our lives . There are so many people who believe that smart gadgets have decreased face-to-face meetings between friends . Society has been divided by the distinct mindsets of people. A colossal number of folks believe modern technology is a blessing to human society while on the contrary , some citizens claim that it has a negative impact on society . In the succeeding monograph, I intend to delve into the statement as well as proffer examples to justify my point of view.

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In recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or mall to do their shopping. Is this a positive or negative development?

Nowadays, people tend to do shopping in the huge mall rather than in local shops. It sparked a lot of debate since small shops affected by this phenomenon as they can be stop operating their businesses. This essay will mention both of pros and cons, subsequently I will prove that this issue is a negative development.

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More and more people claim that modern work patterns are a source of stress. What do you think are the causes of this? Can you suggest some possible solutions?

Most people believe that modern work causes stress. I tend to agree with this idea and I think it is stressful, especially at work.

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Some People say that music is a good way of bringing people of different culture and age together. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

as much as to, on one hand, music relaxes us and makes us feel blissful. it's not resigned to age. In my opinion, music, on the contrary, unites all people, of all ages, different nations, races and religions. For example, I can cite Dimash Kudaibergen, who was able to unite people all over the world and admire his singing. As well as great eminent composers like Mozart, and Beethoven, whose creations have been appreciated by the world. I think that melody makes us happier. It's a whole art form. I am immersed in my world when I listen to my favorite pieces from Ludovico Einaudi. To summarise, I agree that music unites everything and everyone.

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