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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some coutries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them.

The number of individuals are suffering from the weight gain issue that’s why their health’s grade is affected detrimentally . The main reason behind this is the increase of sedentary nature and preference of junk food. However, the solution would be conduction of sports education for younger and by raising awareness in community.

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Individuals can do nothing to change society. New developments can be only brought about by governments and large institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argued that only governments and big organizations can have an impact on the public while individuals could not change society. Personally, I completely disagree with the statement, and the reasons will be discussed in this essay.

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Nowadays, youths are facing problems either in the home or school due to various reasons. This essay will discuss the problems they are facing currently and possible solutions to overcome them.

The main issues faced in the home could be a lack of parenting, and love, not supporting the ideas or decisions made by them, abusing them, and unhealthy arguments between the parents. These problems can lead to hating their parents, mental disturbance, and might even end up being bad figures in society like social psychopaths or cold-hearted behaviours.

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You have had a class discussion on space exploration. Now your teacher has asked you to write a composition answering the following question: Should governments spend so much money on space exploration when there are problems on Earth that need to be solved? Write your composition.

There is no denying the fact that telling us the essentials of space exploration. although the enviromental foster affecting our planet still government has to pay for this risk. While it is commonly held belief that it is very costly and and dangerous . There is also arguments that the opposite. In my oppinion, i consider that space exploration provides us knowledge about how to deal with this issue.

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some people think that the best way to solve global environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The earth is faced with many environmental challenges every year. Due to this dilemma, humans trying to find the best solution. Increasing the cost of fuel is thought the best way by some people. I completely do not assume this action could be the best resolution to this global dilemma which was mentioned before.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor.

In recent times, there has been a significant rise in the number of individuals opting for alternative medicines and treatments instead of consulting their regular doctors.

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In many countries, people live longer and longer. Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?

It has been seen that in some countries people started living longer as expected than they used to . Although this trend comes with significant merits such as spending quality time and fostering relation with grand parents, it would have certain drawbacks associated to it such as surge in population growth. I believe that this would get easily controlled by implementing banning laws.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? “When people succeed, it is entirely because of hard work. Luck has nothing to do with their success.” Use specific reasons and examples to explain your position.

Hard working is one of the most crucial factors that leads us to the success. There are people who believe that the success of a person is entirely because of hard work, not totally depends on fortunate. In my point of view, I agree with this statement.

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Some people think scientific research should focus on solving world health problems. Others think that there are more important issues. Discuss both views and give your opinion.[233]

In this day and age, science is deemed to be the greatest collective endeavor in light of the advantages it has brought forth for the humanity. For some people, scientific research should only focus on solving world health problems, while others hold the opinion that there are more important issues. From my perspective, I accord to the latter opinion.

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Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience or knowledge.

In this contemporary epoch, a larger number of societies consist of numerous religions living together. There are various advantages and disadvanatges of such societies, however, I believe it is more beneficial to opt for a multicultural society rather then a single religion one. This essay will further elaborate these viewpoints and will lead to a logical conclusion.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays most people find jopes out side thier cities, which couse them to stay away from there family and friends. Some people may argue that moving away from family and friends has a postive effects on your future. Others may believe that this development has more side effects . In my opinion, moving away from family has more advantages rather than disadvantages to a persone future.

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Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic. What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such place?

In this contemporary epoch, the tourisim industry plays a vital role in the economy around the world. Nevertheless, nowadays, tourists would love to spend their vacation in palces with harsh conditions, namely deserts, north and south pole. In this essay, I will elaborate on the pros and cons for the tourists.

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Some people think that government is wasting money on the arts and this money could be better spent elswhere. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Art is considered valueable get used for different means and government spends a fortune of money to maintain and safeguard such treasures. However, many believe that it is just a waste of money which can be spent on something else. I somewhat disagree with this statement, this essay will discuss and try to identify why this is the case with suitable examples.

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Some believe that the government should provide free education for all levels (primary, secondary, and university). Others believe that students should pay for the university by themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Education is one of milestones in human lives in the modern world. This is both a set of skills necessary for live in society, and a training high-qualified experts for all levels. The different implementation approaches exist, the main of them are public and private education. Some people believe that private schools, colleges, and universities more effective, while others believe that education have to be absolutely free for everyone. This social issue will be discussed further.

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If a product is good and meet customer needs,then people will buy it. So advertising it is unneccessary. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

In the context of marketing era, advert plays a crucial role to increase the sale of product. Some people ,however , think that if customer is satissfied with the product then adds are not much needed. I firmly, disagree with this , in order to launch a new product in market and increase the existed product sale advertisement is neccessary.

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It is important for all the cities and towns to have large outdoor public spaces, such as parks or squares. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Having parks and squares is vital for the individuals who live in cities and towns. I totally agree with this view on the grounds that as such places provide green areas, they are perfect for getting rid of the noisy and stressful city life. Besides, they allow public to do numerous activities.

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In many countries around the world, rural people are moving to cities, so the population in the countryside is decreasing. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people argue that it is great that people living in rural migrate to urban city and the number of people living in the countryside decrease.

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The population of major cities around the world is increasing very fastly. Why is this the case and what measures could be taken to solve this issue.

There are big and interesting citys in the world. Their polulation is incerasing every day. What is rason? How to slowe this problem.

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We have been living in the nuclear age now for over a half century. To what extent is nuclear technology a danger to life on earth ? What are the benefits and risk associated with its use?

The human specie have been searching for different answers related to his environment, trying to advance in every aspect than can help to make easier his life in the earth.

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In many countries today, if people want to find work, they have to move away from their friends and their families. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

Many people have to leave their house and family in orded to get a jod.In my opinion, advantages of moving away in aims at finding work outweights disadvantages , because it stands the chance of having higher lifelihood and upgrading life.

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