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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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In some countries there are more young people choosing to enrol in work-based training instead of attending university. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

There are some nations where younger generations prefer to train while working after they graduate from high school instead of continuing their studies further to a higher institution level. However, there are some effects that need to be considered which will be discussed further in this essay.

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The US film industry has too much influence on the film industry around the world. Governments have a duty to invest money in their own film industries to protect and develop their cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

While it is widely claimed that American film industry greatly impact on the local film industry across the globe, others argue that the governments need to allocate their expenditures on their own film industries in order to protect and preserved their cultures. The reasons why I agree with the latter statement of the governments can benefit the local team production as well will be discussed further in this essay.

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More and more people are moving from rural areas to live in the cities What problems can this cause? How can these problems be solved?

Today society has a problem with migration humans from village to cities. It is a big problem for humanity, countries and economy. People selling his houses and territories, and for this they have reason – money. However, a lot of people work with this situation. They are using modern technology, psychology, laws and new ideas from change hand work.

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Many people today buy ready-made food rather than spending time cooking What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Nowadays we can see sunrise of fast food. Many people like it, because they didn’t need prepare breakfast and they can but meal for eating on the run. Firstly, its idea was perfect, because sold only quality meal with meat and green products. Now, objectively, a situation was changed to side of big corporation.

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The hart below gives information about the age of women in Australia when they gave birth to their first child in 1966,1986 and 2006.

The bar graph illustrates information about the age of female in Australia when they gave life to their first child in 1966, 1986 and 2006.

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Some people believe that the biggest problem facing cities is the increasing number of cars. Others say there more serious problems.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In recent years, the issue of urbanization has brought numerous problems to city life. While some believe that the increasing number of cars is the primary issue cities face today, others argue that there are more serious issues. 38 The increasing number of cars could lead to health problems. It is widely known that air is crucial to human’s lives. The increasing number of cars contribute to air pollution, which could cause environmental problem and deteriorate people’s health. The car emmision contains poisonous substances and elements which could directly harm people’s lung and other organs through breathing. Therefore, the emmision of cars could cause air pollution in the city which could lead to a series of physical problems. In addition, the problem of traffic jam in the city could be aggravated because of the increasing cars. Congestion gridlock is a common problem in most urban areas, especially during commuting hours and holidays. Thus, people’s life could be affected by the...

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The number of overweight children in developed countries is increasing. Some people think this is due to problems such as the growing number of fast food outlets. Others believe that parents are to blame for not looking after their children’s health. To what extent do you agree with these views?

Childhood obesity is rising in first world nations at an unprecedented rate in recent times. Certain people argue that this issue is mainly due to consumption of junk food while others argue that this problem solely depends on the parents supervision and guidance. In this essay, I will discuss both views and will state my opinion.

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Some people think city planners should create more green spaces and plant trees. Others believe that they should focus on building new homes. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

These days, cities are so varied from the past, so a group of people belive that vegetation is the main factor that mayer should to have a paln for it while the otehrs think that it is crucial that focusing on the new redidential areas. In my opinion, the most important item that help population who have clean air and good space for their free time is green districts.

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Young people moust be toute how to become a usfull indevduale in the society. Although some people beleive that parens should be the ones how teach them, others saied that school should teach them the moral to there society. In my opinion I beleive that both of them must work together in order to interduce a good members searving there society.

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Adults do very less exercise these days. Some people think that showing sporting events on the television such as Olympics and international tournaments can be the best way to encourage adults to do exercise. Others believe there are other effective ways to do so. Discuss both views and state your opinion. Support with relevant examples.

In contemporary society, grown-up individuals perform few physical activities in current days. Some individual consider that presenting physical occasions on the variety of media such as Olympics and international tournamets can be the ideal approach to influence adults to perform exercise. This essay will explore both perspective and provide my opinion on this matter.

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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree ir disagree with this statement?

In recent time, the issue of saving money has sparked considerable debate. This essay aims to discuss both sides of the arguments, it is an essential topic to discuss and analyze. On the other words, there is no denying that it is an important point. Otherwise, it is controversial. Its is important to speak about pros and cons of saving money for people.

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Some students take a year off between finishing school and going to university, in order to work or to travel. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

I guess that the impact of social media on society might be very different. Yes, social media really decrease the costs of connections between people from different countries but it also can be the platforms for spreading of terrorism and nacionalizm. In my opinion, we mustn’t forget about these risks especially nowadays. As we can see, in modern world the problem of terrorism is actual yet. Unfortently, a lot of terrorists today use different internet platforms to communicate and plan operations. In my opinion, governments all over the world should pay for attention to this problem and social media can’t be almostly uncontrollable.

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With recent developments in technology like e-books, some people feel that printed media like books, newspapers, and magazines will soon be a thing of the past. Others feel that these form of media will never disappear. What is your opinion?

Recently, with the improvement that occurred especially in the technology sector, some argue that people in the future will not use traditional resources such as printed books and magazines because development of technology tools, while others believe that people will still use them because it is very useful to improve your knowledge. This essay completely agrees that traditional tools like paper books will disappear because developments related to technology.

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Governments should spend more money on public transportation systems than on road infrastructure. Do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, public transportation is one of the essential things that we need in our daily life activities. Besides that, there is road infrastructure which also supports our movement by using private or public vehicles. Ultimately, I partially agree that the government should spend money on public transportation, but I also recognize that road infrastructure also takes a major portion of our transportation facilities.

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Some parents think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of preschool age. other working parents think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give ur opinion

Nowadays, some parents believe that childcare centre is the best place for their babies since some think family members would be a better carers. This shows the two-sides opinions on the childcare nows. Although these two view is diffierent apparently, their nucleus are same as the parents are care about which is the best childcare method.

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The best way to reduce traffic accidents is to raise the age limit for younger drivers and to lower the age limit for elderly ones. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and any relevant examples.

Nowadays, some of the people believes, most of the accidents has been done by the teenagers because of their age limit and others be like elder ones. In this essay, I strongly believe that elder people’s age limit to be reduced because of their lack of driving, less concentration to them.

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Today, more and more people are leaving rural areas to live in the city. Discuss some effects of rural recession and the cause of this

In present life many people are looking for job apportunities in urben cities where a lot of job chances are waiting for them to be hired as a result of that out skirt city are now almost empty

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The killing of Hassan Nasrallah and how the west legitimised its use of assassination

In fact, the reaction to Nasrallah’s assassination suggests that western governments have grown increasingly comfortable with the use of targeted killings, to the point that a brazen, acknowledged assassination failed to trigger meaningful condemnation.

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The amount of time spend on sport and exercise should be increased in school in order to tackle the problem of overweight children ? Do you think this the best way to deal the problem ? what other solutions can you suggest ?

In recent times obesity has become increased. Some believe that sports play an important role live there for, the school should increase of time spend on school in people's the amount to reduce the problem of overweight children. I think this would be beneficial for students and has many positive impacts. This essay will outline the main causes of increasing the number of hours in spending mone time on sports.

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Solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy? Give reason for your answers and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, natural resources really important. Solar energys has a several beneficial sides. First of all we aren't pay fee for energy. İt's really because people has difficulty about financial freedom. As a global starting to use everywhere. I really happy related mostly using solar energy because ı don't pay so much pay or my energy never interrupt. İt's like invisibility for government tax.

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