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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that schools should teach foreign languages for primary school children. Is this a positive or negative development?

There has been a growing trend toward tailoring foreign languages course for primary school children more frequently than observed in previous generations. While this has admittedly certain benefits, I would convinced that this is predominantly negative development.

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Some people feel a country can't be economically progressive and environmentally friendly at the same time. Others disagree with this view. Discuss both points of view and give your opinion.

Presently, some people consider to using green products which is friendly for environment and animals. In Australia, many customer bring their own cup to buy coffee or tea. Although, some folks think there is not benefit for country's economic and friendly environment at the same time, othes dont agee with. In this easay, both views will be discussed and given my opinion.

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Some people believe that non academic subjects should be removed from the syllabus so that children can concentrate only on academics. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Healthy body possess the healthy mind. Extracurricular activitues are also very important as the academic studies. According to few people non academic subjects should be removed so that children can focus more on their studies. In my view this is not a good idea to remove these activities. In the upcoming paragraphs, I will describe some points to justify my opinion.

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Nowadays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?

Freud said: "The work with love and love to what you do is the most importnat what the individual can be gifted with in life". The more we work, the more we archieve, another one popular quote. With the time change, nowadays are much more things are very expansive. But can we access to all of those goods, by overwork or feeling stressful? What role employers playing in that? In this essay I will discuss my opinion and will try to answer on those questions.Primarilly, work has always been in very high demand, however never as today work was not in that gigagntic ammount and easy

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Some people say the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money. How might having a lot of money make people happy? What other things in life can make people happy? (Give reasons for your answers and include any relewant examples from your own knowledge or experience.)

Nowadays, Every transaction needs money and become one of comodities that everyone needs worldwide. Some people believe that the important part of money will make them happy. Money can make them happy because it can help them to buy anything they want including travels, bags, and great foods. However, there other things that make a person happy such as family and time besides money. This essay will discuss on money and other factors that can create happiness.

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Many people who care for elderly do not have enough time to look after them. What are the problems related to this? What are some possible solutions?

Recently individuals become as busy as expected in taking care of old people. This writer believes that these days humans don't have sufficient time to look after their parents. The following essay will advocate the drawbacks and suitable solutions.

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the growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing.do u agree or disagree?

There is a controversial disagreement over the subject ‘will physical shops close down in future due to online shops or not’. In fact, there are two sides to discuss which we will illustrate in this article.

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Some people think that the main purpose of school and university education should be to prepare people for work. Others, however, think that the true role of education is to make us better citizens. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In today's society, perspective towards the true meaning of education is in divergence. Some people think that being a good person is the key of having education, while some argued that it is solely serves as a career preparation. Personally, i strongly believe that the purpose of education is to advanced our capabilities to be able to compete in job market. I will outline two viewpoints in regards of my opinion.

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There is a lot of pressure on young people today to succeed academically.As a result,some people believe that non academic subjects, such as physical education and cookery ,should be removed from the school syllabus so that children can concentrate on academic work . to what extent do you agree or disagree.

In modern days ,there is too much influence to succeed academically, therefore, other individuals consider that non academic modules for example physical education and cookery to be cancelled so that pupils can pay more attention to college.Nevertheless, there are some benefits that extracurricular comes with such as employment creation , increasing government GDP and improvenment in terms of health wise .In my opinion l disagree with the removal of the subjects from school syllabus as their welfare is what we require in our daily lives.

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Although the prices of fuels have greatly increased over the last decade or two, it is argued that further increases in fuel prices are the only way to reduce world consumption of fuel and lessen pressure on the world’s fuel resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

However,the cost of fuel have grown in one or two recently decade and ther are some discution that said increse the cost of fuel is the only way for using less than world`s fuel. I do not agree with this opinion and there are some more solution for this matter which are; firstly, using the vehichels that work by water or electricity. Secondly, considering fines for thoes who use more than the allowed amount of fuels.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages?

Unlike schools studying at university has two opptions, either to study in your city while living with your parents and siblings, or to have the chance to live your own live and move to other city in order to study , in this assay i will discusse both sides on each method, and i will mention my personal conclusion

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Nowadays, artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. Why is this happening? Is it a positive or negative development?

In the present, artificial intelligence is being used to drive cars. This is due to advancement of technology. It is a positive development as using artificial intelligence to drive cars will help people navigate maps, predict traffic conditions and prevent road accidents.

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These days, there is too much plastic in our oceans, which negatively affects marine life. What are the reasons for this, and how can this situation be improved?

Some people who are supportive with this claim may point out that advertisements may give exaggerated accounts of products and include luring words in order to attract the attention of customers. Hence, some people may trust those unreliable and even wrong ideas generated from ads. For example, if furniture ads lay more emphasis on how valuable the material is and how their products represent high social status, audience may purchase furniture with rarer wood as well as more luxury brands, neglecting its practicability. And ultimately this kind of ads will have adverse impacts on people for buying useless things. However, governments could enact stricter laws to forbid corporations putting up misleading ads, which can avoid such occasions happening.

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下面的平面图展示了 1920 年首次开放的公共公园和现在的公园。通过选择和报告主要特征来总结信息，并在相关的地方进行比较。

The plans illustrate the Grange park’s layout in 1920 and today. In general, some big changes were made during the period.

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In many countries, traditional dress and costumes are considered effective ways of maintaining links with the past. How effective can traditional costumes be, in this sense? What other ways exist to help citizens connect with a country’s past?

There is no denying the fact that traditional culture is one of our main life and reality.

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It is important for people to take risk, both in professional lives and their personal lives. Do you think the advantages of taking risks outweigh the disavantages?

Taking risk in both professional lives and personal lives are like a coin which have both sides which are advantages and disadvantages. This leading to a controversial issue debating on the topic of whether taking risk in both aspects of lives offers more benefits. However, after a thorough consideration, it is firmly believed that risk provide more positive effects compared to the negative one.

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One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people are smoke knowing that it is harmful to the lungs and other organs, but they keep doing it.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people are smoke knowing that it is harmful to the lungs and other organs, but they keep doing it. It is undeniable that smoking can lead to the negative affect and health become an essential part of our life. In this essay I will look at what is the main causes of people started to smoke, examine factors responsible for reek termination.

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Some people believe that limited access to water is a critical issue that governments must solve for their citizens. Others, however, think that it is a problem that individual people can solve with technology. Which perspective do you agree with, and why?

Some people argues that the authorities should find out the ways to solve the problem water accessible. On the contrary, someone says that individual people can solve this problem by using modern technology. Both argurements have true reasons, but in my opinion, I am on the side with later.

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More people put their personal information online (address, telephone number,…) for everyday activities such as socializing on social networks or banking purposes. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In the contemporary era, there are immense of private informations posted on the social medias, the shopping websites and the others. Nowaday, people too hard to having a rest of internet cause human had to work and connect with others by these devices. This essay will discuss about why I think it is not a positive process.

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Nowadays, distance-learning programs have gained in popularity, but some people argue that online courses can never be taken as good as those taken at a college or university in person. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that space-learning programs have gained in popularity. While it is a commonly held belief that some crowds argue that online courses are causing massive issues for universities or colleges , there is also an argument that opposes it. I consider that online courses can assist teenagers to study in a high flexibility .

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