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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Over the decades the world has been changing significantly and individuals are concerned that their positions at work might shift into a situation that they do not like. Nowadays new machines and tools are invented in order to ease the tasks for people but besides these advancements, humans positions in work environment are being in danger. Although problems have arisen as a result of this, there are solutions.

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Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion

Some people think the death penalty is a good choice to handle and reduce the crime rate and make society safer. However, I think it is not a big deal solution because every person makes a mistake, and it is against human rights.

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Should private schools receive government funding? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 254 words.

Numorous of peoples says that goverment should spend budget for support private school. Due to, it will help development education system. In my opinion, they should not be fouded by public money, private school already have highly profitable from school tuition and private school are a bussiness created to seek profit like other bussiness.

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The world of work is changing rapidly and employees cannot depend on having the same job or the same working conditions for life. Discuss the possible causes for this rapid change, and suggest ways of preparing people for the world of work in the future. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is an inevitable fact that nowadays the environment of work is advancing significantly there are several reasons for such a change and also some circumstances which has been resulted due to this issue of worldwide change. Both the reasons and the influences are elaborated further.

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Many people go through life doing work that they hate or have no talent for. Why does this happen? What are the consequences of this situation?

There is so many people who are living doing work for which they have no passion or skills.

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Avarege minutes men and women spent on unpaid work and leisure activities

The provided table gives information on the typical amount of time that both gender counterparts spend on leisure activities, namely sports, reading and multimedia resources like TV,video and radio, while the bar chart represents household activities for females and males, which include cooking and washing, shopping,repair,clothes washing and ironing.The units are measured in numbers.

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Do you think it is important for children to be taught art?

Couldably, without a doubt, art has played a key role in developed society. While some believe that it is not necessary to teach art for children. I strongly think it is essential.

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Studying with a group of students in a classroom is more beneficial than learning online at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Studying togerther with friends in the school give more merits rather than demerits in comparison to studying at home. There are three reasons behind this position. First, studying in classroom with many students enhanced energy of the students. The blurting and vibrant vibes of classroom energenized the students. Me and my friends shared the same view that other student voice can revive its energy when experienced its boredom. In other words, learning online doesn't have some type of distraction that influence the students.

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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

The price and accessibility of technology prompted juveniles and adolesents to work from their homes. Despite its well-known benefits, I think it is a negative development. The more affordable technology makes people more stressed, distracted, and reduce their willingness of asking questions.

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What are the reasons behind rising crime rates in urban areas, and what solutions could reduce this trend

The issue of occuring more and more offenses in cities is rapidly escalating worldwide, raising alrm due to its wide range of negative impacts. The predominant factors contributing to this problem are poverty as well as peer presure and lack of parental guidance to young people and I am firmly convinced that increasing social benefits to aliviate poverty, coupld with teaching adults to shun criminal and anti-social behaviours, serve as effective strategies to tackle and alleviate this problem.

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In many countries, the amount of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, we can see all of the crimes happening in all around the world. When we watch the news, mostly it’s crime news that are broadcasted on TV.

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Some people believe that individuals today spend too much time following political news while others feel politics deserve greater attention. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Some youngsters are never been more interested in political affairs than both internal and external matters of countries Nowadays. Due to high demand in the technological field and deployment of advanced 5G networks significant youngsters do have access to all the political pieces of information via various social media applications such as YouTube, Meta, and Twitter.

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It is very important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is argued that everyone, including young people, must save money for their future. This essay totally agrees with that statement. I believe that it is very important because saving money is one of the good habits, and it is one of the significant things that people should do for their future.

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More and more people are becoming Seriously over weight) Some people think a solution can be to increase the price of fattening foods To what extent do you agree or disagre?

Nowadays, some people think that many people becoming overweight with fattening food and they think they have found the solution by increasing the price of fattening meals. I strongly disagree and agree at the same time.

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In many countries the number of animals and plants is declining: Why do you think this is happening? How can this isuue be solved?

it is true that in many countries, the amount of animal species or plants is becoming extinct. Although, there are many reasons why they are facing this problem, i firmly believe that steps definetely can be taken to solve this problem.

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In many countries plastic bags are the main source of rubbish causing pollutions in oceans and on land; therefore they should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Ban plastic bags is a controversial topic all over the world. I personally believe that banning the use plastic products is absolutely right for two very important reasons.

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The media pay too much attention to the lives and relationships of celebrities such as actors, singers or footballers. They should spend more time reporting the lives of ordinary people instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Media play very important role in reflecting the lives of people.There is no doubt that celebrities such as singers, actors or footballers gets more attention by the media in recent time. However, media should spend more time in reporting the common people lives. I completely agree with this statement that media give more attention to the lives of celebrities instead of common people.

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There are more and more older people who are looking for work and have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

Today, more older people who looking for work need to compete with the younger community .This problem could lead to increased numbers of unemployment. Also , physical limitations that older people and young people not have the same energy. And lack knowledge of technology skills .The solution of this issue, that governments and organisations can divide the workplace for these two generations, or some companies can create mentorship programs , to teach them new skills.

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There are more and more older people who are looking for work have to compete with younger people for the same jobs. What problems does this cause? What are some possible solutions?

There are the majority of people in the older generation who are looking for work with younger people and they have to compete with them despite their future health issues.

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In some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. Why might this be the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

It is believed by some people that owning a house is more essential than renting one. In my opinion, this should be perceived as a negative trend for two main reasons.

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