IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people claim that public museums and art galleries will not be needed because people can see historical objects and work of arts by using a computer. Do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

In the contemporary epoch , there is heated argument over the issue that museums and art galleries will not be needed beacuse people can use computer for watch art and galleries . I disagree with this statement . I would highlight my perspective which will lead to a logical condition.

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One of the consequences of improved medical care is that people are living longer and life expectancy is increasing. Do you think advantages outweigh disadvantages?

Nowdays the midical care shows an improvement over last years. Some people think that this is a positive development , this essay will highlight the benefits of the improvement of the healthcare.

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Students are becoming more and more reliant on the internet. While the internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its use for educational purposes should be restricted. How far do you agree with this statement ?

In today's modern world, internet plays important role in human life that is an undeniable fact. Should we realize the advantages of using internet correctly in children future progress, we ponder over effects of using internet on children future much more scrupulously. but some parents think that using internet by students can have negative influence on children education and they believe that they must limit using of internet for their child. In their opinion their child can only use internet freely when reach certain age of adulthood.

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It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children?

Current time, majority of people argue that the young generation should know the distinction between good and bad behavior. This essay is agree that some kinds of punishments should allowed by trustee and I am going to ensure several explanations and examples for this statement.

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Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest time of most people lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, inspite of great responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion?

A group of idividuals present the view that teenager are more happy than adults, whereas other believe that people are more satisfied about their lives when they are adult. I strongly agree with the latter opiniopn.

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Maintaining public libraries is now a waste of money since computer technology is already replacing their function. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, i think people believe that keep alive of labraries in nowadays is the unuseless of money and wastage of time due to innovation of modern items like computer, laptop and smartphones. Which available everybooks and all the things which can be seen in the library. For my prespective, i partillay refere the technology in some situations. For instance during travelling.Some drawbacks of non availability of library is silence environment and peaceful time.

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Some people think that robots are very important to human's future development. Others think that they are dangerous and have negative effects on society. Discuss both opinions and give your personal view.

Now days we saw a significant improvement in artifical intellegant espically with rabots. Some people think that robots will play an certical roll to humans future development. While, others think that they are harmful and have negative impact on communties.This essay with discuss both opinions with the advantages and disadvantages.

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It is important to give children to act independently and make their own decisions from early age. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this idea

Some people believe that we should allows children to make their own decesion and be more independent at young age.Whereas others do not believe with the nation. In my opinion, I believe that children at young age needs adults obeservation and there are still unable to make a serious lives decisions.

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Climate change is the biggest threat to life on our planet. How accurate is this statement? Is there any other big threat to mankind?

The biggest threat to life on Earth are the changing climatic conditions. This essay finds the statement to be completely accurate because species are going extinct due to this. Another threat to humankind is manmade pollution.

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some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Nowadays technology has advanced across the globe, new gadgets are innovated yearly. Everyone including children, has at least one of these devices with them such as smartphone. In the modern life every thing including education and communications are done by the help of these devices. however, a number of them spend hour on smartphones for entertainment. I believe alongside the few advantages in smartphones the drawbackes are more.

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Many governments think that economics progress is there most important goal some people fieber think that other type of progress are equally important for a country discuss both views and give your opinion

The majority believes that the economical growth is the highest achivement of a country, while others still argue that, the development in other aspects play an equaly vital role. Economical development escalates the overall living standards of a country. However, similarly, the growth of other aspects such as cultural development is cruicial for long term quality of life. In my opinion, the economical and non economical growth are interconnected and both are important for a country.

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Some people believe that children’s leisure activities must be educational, otherwise they are a complete waste of time. Do you agree or disagree?

The line chart illustrates the figure of channel one viewers in millions daily during a year period.

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Lack of fresh water is becoming a global issue of increasing importance. What problems does the shortage of fresh water cause? What measures could be taken to overcome these problems?

The shortness of clean drinking water supply in our current world now, is tend to increase year by year. This issue is extremely important due to the key part, that the water play in human health in general .in this essay I am going to discuss the issues of lacking fresh water and what can be done to solve this problems .

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Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. What could be the reasons behind this? What measures can be taken to resolve this problem?

In todays modern era, the trend of living in cities and towns in decreasing day by day. Individuals are prefering to cite in rural or quite areas which are closer to nature. Where as, if we look at the trend of 5 years earlier, it was completly opposite, people were migrating from rural areas to urban areas to follow the fast and modern lifestyle. But now the tables has turned and people are not prefering the same choice.

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2/ Some people say that young people should be encouraged to leave home when they become adults while others claim it is better if they remain with their family. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

People argue that, younger generation should be advised to leave their parents home when the become an adults. While other believe , the best option for an adult is to stay with their family . in this essay I am going to discuss both views and which side I think it is more suitable for teenager to start his adulthood life.

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Being a celebrity– such as a film star or singer – brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

It is an undeniable fact that celebrities plays paramount role . Being a star or sport personality provides both sides of benefits as well as disadvantages . I intend to discuss both .

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‏Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In our world, there are a lot of good things, these things affect our life. Sport sponsors is of the these things. Some people think it is a positive development while others disagree and think it may lead to adverse ramifications, this essay will discuss both point of views and gives opinion

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Some people argue that it is the government’s responsibility to transport children to school, while others believe that parents should do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In our world there are a lot issues, this issues affect our life children transportation

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Some people argue that school should no longer be necessary because children can obtain all the information that they need form the internet. They can learn and be educated at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that school is no longer important because kids can take what they need to learn from the internet. While it is commonly held belief that some people are saying that children can learn from home, there is also an argument that oppoese it. In my opinion ,I consider that homeschooling is our way to the future.

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You work for a clothing company. Your company has a new style of coat. Write an email to a magazine in about 150–200 words. Tell the magazine about the new style of coat. Your email should do the following things: Provide information about your company. Provide information about the new style of coat. Suggest who might buy this coat and why. Invite the staff at the magazine to write about the coat.

I am writing to provide more details concerning the new coat style that is available in all our stores in Canada and ask for your feedback after you try it on.

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