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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It has been observed that, many companies use more sugar in their products such as food and drink tend to cause many health issues. It is claimed that people will influence buying less products which have more sugar, when the sugar products reach expensive. I firmly disagree with the given statement and this essay will elaborate and advise why this happened to support my viewpoint.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

In recent years, certain individuals who have health issues and using other options of medicines and treatments are growing. Before, they usually visited their doctor. I think this is a negative development and I elaborate on the following essay.

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Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In an advanced technology generation,people acquire information from everywhere costs less time nowadays,but they are not allowed to use these,I still think it is not free in our society and not belong everyone.

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Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer countries. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nations in such areas. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Health, education and trade are crucial for countries development. Some people argue that the governments of richest countries should help to mitigate poorer nations health, education and trade related problems. In my opinion, I concur with this viewpoint because a country development plays important role for global economic balance and evironment issues reduction.

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Some parents buy their kids a large number of toys to play with. What are the advantages and disadvantages of a child having a large number of toys?

In order to entertain with, a lot of toys are bought for children by their mother and father. By having numerous toys, children can enhance their cognitive skills; yet, owning an excessive number of toys might be distractive to youngsters.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, people's information about their health matters are more than prior populations, so when they become ill, they surching to find their treatment and drugs instead of go to doctor. In my opinion, this happening is a negative development owing to the fact that doctor have more information and experience for treating instaed of publics and some medicines impact on our health.

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Some People believe that Professinals, such as doctors and cagineers Should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country it they wish.

Unquestionably in every coin has two side and so are the People. society's people are divided into two groups and therefore , This question depends on various attitudes of people so the difference bitween working in the country where they did their training and having freedom for adapting your country for working consists of variety aspects has become a topic of debate among People.

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Chidren nowdays watch significantly more television than in the past, which reduces their activity levels accordingly. why is this the case? What measures can you suggest to encourage higher levels of activity among children? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own experience.

Over the recent decades watching TV has become an integral part of children's lives. According to research the number of time which children spend watching television has increase, another opinion is that the amount of time which children spend encouraging higher levels of activity things has decreased. In this essay I will show that discuss the causes of this phenomenon and also suggest some ways to encourage children to do more productive things instead of watching too much TV.

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Cohabitation is believed to bring huge advantages for young people since it enables them fully understand each other before deciding to get merried. Do you agree or disagree?

These days there has been an increasing number of people who claim that couples should have to live for a while, before marrying, as they would have a chance to keep in touch with each other deeply and personally. I partially agree with this statement and in this essay, I am going to duscuss both sides.

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In some countries, it can be difficult for people over the age of 50 to get good jobs, despite their experience. What do you think are the causes and effects of this problem?

In a few countries, elder people who are more the 50 years old, struggle with spotting fine vocation, although they have a lot of practical experiences. Reason why they have difficulty is that the companies and the governments concentrate on admitting youth, because of having too much energy, ambition and being determined, however, it will affect remarkably the ratio of suicide and unemployment or divorce.

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Some people believe that engaging in an active pastime does more to develop childrens’ life skills than time spent reading. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Certain groups of people are of the opinion that, if youngsters spent leisure time on sports activity has better life skills than hours spent reading. However, I agree with the statement and in the following paragraphs I shall explain my reasons for this belief.

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At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?

Easily I can say youth really perfect for our future. We need to fresh brain and fast progress brain. That's why youth indeed good key for us we can easily accept this thing.

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Some people think the government should spend more money on sport facilities for top athletes. Other people think the government should spend more money on sport facilities for everybody. Discuss both views

Certain number of people believe that more fund should be cosidered for providing sport equipments for top sportmans by authority. While some argue that states should more allocate money to sport equipment for all the people.

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Some schools are very strict about school uniforms and student appearance, while others have a more relaxed dress code. What are the advantages and disadvantages of students wearing school uniforms?

Some schools are very firm about school clothes and student look . School uniforms and student appearance can undoubtedly contribute to creates equality, reduces differences and keep student focused on studies , but there are also certain drawbacks that should be taken into account.

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Children are facing more pressures from academic, social and commercial sources. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce it?

It is true that nowadays young people experience more stress in schools and society and from commercials. This essay will discuss the major causes of pressurs that childrens have, including they study in competative environments, compare htemselves with others and they see deaily advertisments that encorage them to buy new products. This essay will also suggest solutions to these problems such as schools focus on real underestanding instead of just acheave high scors, notice that comparing with others lead to stress and goverment should take actions regarding to limit advertisements that aims children.

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Some believe that politicians are the most influential people in the world, while others believe scientists are the most influential. Which side do you agree with and why? Provide specific reasoning for your answer.

Many people are certain that scientists have more influence, while others would argue that politicians are more impactful. In my opinion, there is more power in being a politician then an expert.

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Some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extent do you agree or disagre

There is not doubt that these days many people find that the government forced to spend money on teaching science rather that other different subjects, to encourage people to deep in of reaserch and different topics in science.In this essay, I am going to discuss the claim and draw my personal opinion.

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Government should not have to provide care or financial support for elderly people because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

The amount of public money which is spent on providing care or financial support for elderly people has been one of the problems that some societies have been facing. In response to this situation, some people say that we should stop taking such measures because it is the responsibility of each person to prepare for retirement and support him or herself. And, I strongly disagree with this statement. This essay will discuss this topic and give the author's opinion.

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Fewer people are reading books these days.Therefore we should close all libraries and use the funds for something more urgent like healthcare Do you agree or disagree

It is suggested that fewer individuals are eager to read books nowadays. Thus we should use the funds for something more urgent like healthcare instead of going all public libraries. There are several flipsides to this point, l am personally support that policy makers had paid more attention to the role of libraries before making such decisions.

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Some people think that qualities a person needs to become successful in today's world cannot be learned at universities or similar academic institutions. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is suggested that fewer individuals are eager to read books nowadays. Thus we should utelize the funds for something more urgent like healthcare instead of attend all public libraries. There are several flipsides to this point, l am personally support that policy makers had paid more attention to the role of libraries before making suv decisions.

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