IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar ,which causes many health problems .Sugary products shoud be mad more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar . do you agree or disagree ?

There are several products contain with high calories and sugers, and this in the long term will effect badly on their bodies. I totally agree that the government should do more process to make people avoid these foods and drinks. There are variety ressons to prefer products with huge levels of suger even if they know that will impact in pessimism way such as obisity, while others more muture and have good knowledge about that harmful products and work hardly to avoid it and replace it with anothers products.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing . What are the cause and solutions ?

The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. This is mainly because of, our lifestyle has become far too sedentary , and there are many people consuming more calories than they burn through physical activity. There are a number of solutions that should be implemented to deal with people who are at risk due to being overweight.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

After Covid-19 outbreak, the flexibility to work anywhere is concerned by most of people. Although, there are people who support theprofessionals, for example doctors and engineers, to work in the country where they raised their skill sets, others think that they are able to work anywhere they wish. However, in my opinion, I agree that people with professional careers should be allowed to work freely wherever countries they prefer.

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Some people believe that part time job can ensure better job opportunities in future. Others think job can easily distract students from study. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is commonly acknowledged that the rate of getting a full time job is decreasing in modern society. Some people assert that part time job provides better chances to individuals in the future. Otherwise, others believe that concerning about occupation cause several disadvatages to students when they study in their academic year. This essay will explore the both aspects deeply before a conclusion is drawn.

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These days, world leaders of all kinds are younger than in the past, What are the reasons? ls thisa negative or a positive trend?

It has been observed that global leaders of all types nowadays are younger than in the past. This essay will explore the various factors that contribute this trend, followed by some possible effects of this problem.

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Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with distruptive children in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

Undoubtedly there are some teachers who have the habit of putting children out of the classroom if they are disruptive, but is it the better way ? What is the solution for this case that is too common to happen or how to mitigate it?

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Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the time of watching television and playing digital games by children has been increasing dramatically. However, I believe that spending too much time on watching movies or playing video games has a detrimental effect on children mental and physical well being.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present situation, fewer small age individuals are willing to read the newspapers and watch the news on television. The main reason behind this is technology development.

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Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is no doubt that these days technology plays an important role in our life. In numerous aspects of our life, such as transport, communications, medicine and education systems all depend on computer technology. Although certain individuals believe that our reliance on computer technology and intellegent machines in these fields has created dangerous situation. Others, including myself, argue that there are a lot of positive sides of involving technology in our life. I think the major hazard that make opponents afraid of depending on computers, because of security problems. For instance, users personal information being leaked on the internet and hacking attacks. These attacks may lead to losing backup data that stored in virtual database on the internet.

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People in former times used to be more dependent on one another, whereas nowadays they lead a more independent life. Do you agree or disagree?

In the past times people were liked to live with another also helped to each other. Nowadays, due to the development of technology and literature most of them are willing to live a lonely life. Now, I fully agree with this statement by giving the below mentioned points.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As we can see, the development of science has greatly changed our lifestyle, bring us convenience, happiness and so so. Recently, science has became a significant topic, some people firmly insist that the most improtant target of science should be to improve people's live.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in oder to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion

In these days, the world is more open than before to learn more about all the others languages. The question is, is learning extra language only limited by the cause of visiting new places or working abroad? Some argue that there's no need to learn new languages as long as they won't use it for working or traveling, While others believe that there more reasons to learn them. This essay will discuss both perspectives and draw my personal conclusion at the end.

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is a debate about whether goverment need to increase the legal age to regulate individuals in driving a car or motorbike. Some people think it is a appropriate method while some people not support it. I think the disadvantages are more than advantages. This essay the reason about why I disagree will be discussed.

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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

These days, public debate has been going on over whether the increasing of sick people chose to go to the alternatives place rather than hospital. I tend to believe that a high number of people believe in unscientific treatments is a negative development for the following reasons.

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All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity, How could it be tackled?

Obesity has been a growing phenomenon in many societies across the world, and it negatively impacts on adults an kids. Since inactive behaviour is leading to overweight between youngesters, I believe it can be solved by governmental activities.

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Cycling is the healthier and more environmentally friendly form of transportation. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

In these present days, most people are not cyclist-friendly culture, and searching for their own comfortable transportation. but the cycling is getting less famous all around the world. Unfortunately due to many reasons .In this essay, we will discuss about some causes that made it less popular for the people in my point of view in detail.

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Some people think the the main purpose of schools is to turn children into good citizens and workers, instead of benefiting them as individuals. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Many individuals believe that must aim to teach students how to become nice citizens and workforces rather than improve them as human beings. I completely disagree with this statement and I will explain my position by analyzing how helping children as individuals will impact the community furthermore how disrespectful could be otherwise.

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Being a celebrity –such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

It is commonly acknowledged that being a famous person has some benefits. For example, sports stars recieve extremely high salaries and get benefits such as having dinner with their president. Otherwise, there are several demits to being a celebritity. This essay will elaborate the both aspects before a conclusion is drawn.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extend do the advantages of having an ageing population outweigh the disadvantages

Nowadays, a change of living is increasing. Because of that fact, governments should allocate more attention to maintain the old people but some people think having a lot of experienced society will bring so much benefits. In my opinion, a large number of older people brings more disadvantages rather than advantages.

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In conclusion, sometimes encouragements from adults affect to children in a negative way, however there are several advatages in their high achievement and mental development.

In some areas, younger genertaions are often given importance of dedication to achieve what they want. In the writer’s opinion, this advice allows children to acheive goals in their academics. This essay will discuss about the two aspects about the encouragements to childrens.

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