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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Is it good for children to start using computers from an early age and spend long hours on it? Discuss the advantages and disadvantages. Explain your choice by using specific reasons and details.

Children use computers from an early age and spend long hours both disadvantaged and advantage. The topic has become an integral part of the rising debate in the present world, including Vietnam. In the following essay, i will discuss more some of the disadvantages and advantages.

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In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount that people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the drive to produce a better world, there are conflicting regarding whether the authorities should let the people be paid higher wages or restrict them. I believe that individuals should be received a good amount of payment.

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more and more business meetings are being conducted online rather tha to person.what are the advantages and disadvantages

In recent years the trend of conducting business meetings online rather than to person has grown significantly.Through by the advancement of technology made it easier to arrange meetings on online by different kind of applications as; zoom meeting,google meet e.t.c.While there are clear advatages to this trend and also has some notable disadvantages.

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Stress is now a major problem in many countries around the world. What are some of the reasons that cause stress, and effects

It is an irrefutable fact that, in the contemporary world, stress become the main barrier to. the growth of different countries. Such a trend comes with alot of problems, which demand immediate consideration. This essay will analyze the reasons like the competition level and the high inflation and the impact of these problems on human beings such as mental health issues in the upcoming paragraphs along with examples.

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The line chart details participants according to activity at a social center in the Australian city of Melbourne from 2000 to 2020.

The line chart illustrates the number of participants in various activities at a social center in Melbourne, Australia, from 2000 to 2020.

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Some people think that Olympic games are exciting events that bring other nations together. Others say Olympic is a waste of money and the money could be better spent on other things. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

The majority of people argue that Olympic games are captivating events that bring country together. Others have opinion a waste of cost and the money can be acceptable spending on other things. There are same benefits making tournament Olympic games not only it can cooperate different countries with the competition. And It also got a relationship by joined the events. However, it requires much money to develop sport facilities.

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In many countries, the level of crime is increasing. What do you think are the main causes of crime? How can we deal with those causes?

The increase in crime in certain society has been changing during the last century on different scales. Every nation has a specific socio-economic system which is the main cause of inequality worldwide ending in a vast number of crimes due to the poverty nowadays. This essay will discuss the different causes of crime and how individuals can manage them to reduce their consequences.

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Modern children are suffering from the diseases that were once considered to only be meant for adults. Obesity is a major disease prevalent among children. Whatare its causes, and what solutions can solution

It is an irrefutable fact that in the contemporary world, children are facing some health problem such as obesity which is usually find in adult individuals. Such a trend could bring about various problems,which demand immediate consideration. This essay will examine the reasons like use of mobile phones and eating processed food and solutions for this trend like more physical moments and healthy diet by using examples in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change.

Human activity has a damage to different plants and animals. Some people strongly support that is cannot be changed, whereas there others believe that, with persistent working to improve this situation to better side can be taken a change to positive side.

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Some cultures think old people are of higher value than the youth, while other cultures value the youth more. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

We live in the world that has a various cultural difference. Cultures have been occurred due to maintaining the habits and routines of people who lives each other in society. On the other hand, culture is affected by religions, wars, circumstances et cetera. Cultures influence the values of different ages. Every person has a great value and that is not discussible. However, according to some cultures, old people have a higher value than youth. On the contrary, other cultures value the youth more. As a result, we have a two sort of cultures to giving value on different ages.

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living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can couse serious social problems, as well as practical problems. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Nowadays the rate of emigration has increased significantly and knowing a foreign language plays an important role in that. Moreover, speaking in other languages can be so hard and cause serious problems which depend on that. Honestly, I believe the differences between main languages are so important and maybe can cause many huge problems and put migrators in bad troubles.

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Some people think that childcare centres provide the best services for children of pre school age. Other working people think that family members such as grandparents will be better carers for their kids. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Childrencare is a controversial issue nowadays, so some folks prefer centres for nursing their children, while others dislike the idea of centres also they encourge the notion of keeping kids under supervision of a family members like grandparents. In this essay, I shall elaborate on also I reveal my point of view according to this topic.

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Some people believe that charities should help people in need no matter where those people are in the world,Others feel that these organizations should only serve the people living in the country where they are based Discuss both sides and give your own view.

These days, people's lifestyles have been changing from the past and most people have a good situation, while some people are really poor; as a result, both governments and people found different kinds of charities to help these populations and people have various ideas about the charities work. a group of people believe that thes oragnizations ought to aid global population, but another one prefers to help people who live in their countries. In my opinion, when we have poor people in their country it is important that help them; moreover, the second choice must be other people.

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Some people think it’s better to choose friend s who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it’s good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some individuals think it is prefer to select firend's who constantly have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it is righteous to have friends who time to time disagree with them. this essay will dicuss and articulate both the aspects, along with my opinion and relevant examples and a logical conlusion.

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In some countries, more and more people are becoming interested in finding out about the history of the house or building they live in. What are the reasons for this? How can people research this?

In some nations, people have become significantly interested in the background of the place in which they live. In this essay, I will discuss the reasons for this behaviour, likewise the way in which they can do the research about.

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The continued rise in the world`s population is the greatest problem faced by humanity at the present time. What are causes of this continued rise? Do you agree that is the greatest problem faced by humanity?

Some people think that there are no greater problems than rising population density . Although, there are bunch of different problems that I write down below. I particularly agree with this statement.

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Some people believe that children of all ages should have extra responsibilities (for example, helping at home or at work). Others believe that, outside of school, children should be free to enjoy their lives. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In recent time students have burden of studies. Therefore, some people feel that after school, children should spend time with their favourite activities and enjoy their lives. Some humankind think totally opposite. They think students have to do extra curricular things apart from their studies. In this matter I would like to discuss both views and give my opinion in upcoming paragraphs.

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In some countries older people are being encouraged to work longer and not to retire. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working beyond retirement age.

In some countries lacking young human resources, the elderly will be encouraged to work longer and not retire.In the following passages,I will show the advantages and disadvantages of working beyond retirement.

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Some people believe that having sports in schools is a waste of time and resources, while others believe that sports in school are a vital part of education.

One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is that some people think that having sports in schools is not effective, whilst other people believe that sport in schools is very important for education. In my view, I disagree with the first belief, because sport is very vast in our life. In this essay, I will explain why sports are very essential.

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Forests are the lungs of the earth. Destruction of the world’s forests amounts to death of the world we currently know. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Because of we are living in the era of Renaissance nowadays, the forest has become the main victim unfortunately, in this essay, I shall elaborate on also I shall reveal my point of view according to this topic.

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