IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Too much emphasis is placed on going university for academic education. People should be encouraged to do vocational training, because there is a lack of qualified tradespeople such as electricians or plumbers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

it cannot be neglected that nowadays, people going to universities are more, to get their academics rather than who are interested in vocational training. I do agree that skill trade jobs should be more targated as compared to academic studies. these going to be beneficial for all.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects thatwill be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Some folks believe that all university students can choose and study what they want, while others think that need to learn lessons that will come in handy in the future, just like science and technology. I think these 2 aspects hold good points of view.

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Some people think government should not spend money on supporting artists and money should be spend on more important things. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is argue that states should spend money on other necessary things rather than helping artists. This essay agrees with the statement because other most important things that government needs to focus on is health services and education awareness in the rural schools.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

Doing experimentation on animals is a widely debated topic by humanity nowadays. Some people believe that it must be prohibited, meanwhile others think it has various benefits.

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Some people think it is better to live in the city while others say the countryside is better. Discuss both attributes and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The environment of human is really important. Some residents prefer to live in subrubs, while living in town's area might be a more appropriate option for other people. I believe there are some reasons can provide a better condition for citizens instead of living outside of the city. This essay will provide reasons of this statement.

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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

In contemporary times, learning a language early in schools nowadays has become debated issues. Some people claim that it is necessary for students while others believe that it should be taught lately. This essay will first look at the arguments for this before turning to those against. In spite of the arguments against, it is my firm opinion that learning languages early is a necessity for children.

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Some students work while studying. This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Students sometimest need to work while studying which leads to missing time for learning and regularly studying under pressure. In my openinon, the main reasons included financial necessity as tuition and living costs could be very expensive for some students to afford without making additional income and have a poor planning and time management. Another reason may be the desire to gain work experience and develop their skills which help some students with their career after graduation.

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Some students work while studying.This often results in lacking time for education and constantly feeling under pressure. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?

Students some time need to work during studing which lead to missing time for learning and regularly study under pressure. In my openinon the main reasons included Finanical necesscity as tuition and living cost could be very expensive for some students to afford withhout making addional income and have a poor planning and time managment. The another reason maybe the desire to gain work experinces and develop thier skills which help some of student with thier career after graudation.

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In many countries schools have severe problems with student behaviour. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you sug?

The behaviour of the students in a lot of schools from different countries is considered a very big issue to deal with. In my opinion, there are several causes for this problem such as getting bored. Besides, different solutions have been provided for dealing with this tough issue will be discussed in this essay.

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Nowadays many celebrities receive higher salaries than senior politicians. Why is this? Do you think it is a positive development or negatively?

In this contemporary era, the well-known people generate enormous revenue compared to the leaders who are running the government. There are two main reasons for celebrities earn high salaries than politicians namely fame and multi works in one time. However, I think this is a negative breakthrough. In this essay, we will further elaborate for the following reasons.

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Young people are often the first to suffer when job opportunities are scarce. In which ways does age affect employment opportunities ? how might employers deal with the issue fairly ? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

It is evident that the scarcity of working opprtunities resulting youths suffering from those problems. This essay will discuss how it has a detrimental implication on them along with the solution to overcome the given issues.

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Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In modern days, education is related to people's future. Some people believe that all university students should study subject which they want but, at the same time, others believe that they should be accepted to subjects which will be helpful in the future. This essay, I will discuss both these sides and give my own point.

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The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in town and cites closing. Do you agree or disagree?

The online shopping platform is the most easiest and convinient way to purchase some products and we can get that on our door steps, they provide some kind of offfers and we also get that pay later options that should be a very big deal for people's apart that we also have a local shop's on our town and cites in that shop also we can get a latest products with an convinient way and a easy refund etc..

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Some people think that the best way to improve road safety is to increase the minimum legal age for driving a car or motorbike. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals believe that the method of minimizing risk on traffic accident is changing the age that is allowed for owning driving license of vehicles and motorbikes. I do not agree with this perspective because the age that is allowed currently is enough for acquiring skills for driving. Instead of that training courses, providing driving license, should be qualified.

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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is no denying the fact that learning new languages for pupils are crucial to improve life skills and gain new knowledge and they can help them in various aspects in their life.While a commonly held belief teaching childrens new language in first schools year are significant to imporve their skils in many aspects,There is also an argument that learning new langauge in elemntery school can become more difficult for kids.

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Many people believe that family has the strongest influence on a child's development, while others believe that external factors such as televisions, friends and music play a big role. discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the realm of a child's development many stimulus play an integral role. Many individuals reckon that the bloodline is more influencial as compared to the outside factors such as friends, television etc. in shaping a kid. While, opponents of this view are in the favour of external factors. This essay intends to analyse both views and explain why I am in favour of former idea that family is more important in the development of a child.

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Some believe that students should begin learning a language very early in school while others think these subjects should be taught later. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that children should first learn language as soon as they join in a primary school. However, others say that this can be learn in later stage of education. This essay will argue that although, lessons such as Maths and Science would be interesting for children, learning language is easy and can help them to communicate with others.

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Many people around the world use social media every day to keep in touch other people and get new events. Do you think the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

Social media have used to keep in touch with other people around the world by many individuals. In my personal view, the positive aspects that using social media provided for the human is more outweigh than the pessimistic aspect.

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Many parents believe that children should read strict educational books and not any other entertainment books as it is were of time. Do you agree or disagree.

Books are an important source of knowledge for people, which have many impacts on children's learning way. While many parents suggests, children should read only from educational books. I strongly disagree with this ideas because in every kind of books have hidden knowledge.

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More people decided to have children in their later age than in the past. Why? Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

People nowdays definitely get married later than the past. Currently, new word 'Dink' showed up, which means people who chose not to have the children. Siblings were common when I was young, but nowdays, I can come across only child more often. In my opinion, having a baby have more disadvantages than advantages. We will illustrate the reason why people chose not to having a baby in this essay.

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