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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Topic: Some people believe that it is good for a country to host a major sports competition. Others think it causes many problems for the country. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The indisputable meaning of athletics in general has long been believed related to human’s bonding and connectedness. However, a recent backlash about the polarization of whether the establishment of major sports competitions could provide any advantages, or they impact detrimentally to their host countries. In this essay, I will discuss both perspectives and emphasize on my personal interpretation.

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Some people think that children are having to much free time and this time should be use to study more. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Several people have opini that kids are must utilize their leisure time to study more,based on my perspective I strongly disagree with this argument. Therefore, along with this essay I am going to highlight few the disadvantages of that statement.

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Many supermarkets are selling more and more products that are imported from other countries instead of selling food that is locally sourced. What are the reasons for this? Is this a positive or negative development?

in the contemporary era, selling exotic goods are more comman than relying on local produced ones. this essay elaborates the reason behind this sentinment as wll as evaluating whether its beneficial or not.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The vast majority of population thinks that workforce of specific professions ,such as medical workers and engineers supposed to build their career in the exact place where they had training for this. While, the rest of the of the majority defends the idea of acess of freedom of work in other place can be choosen by the professionals as they wish.This essay agrees with the second statement. I believe that free choice of placement for workforce helps people to expand their practical skills and also proides benefit for countries to stabilise their target employability status.

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TOPIC: In recent years, the family structure and the role of its members are gradually changing. What kinds of changes can occur? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?

Nowadays, the individuals' spots in their families have dramatically changed. In this report, I will present examples of these changes, and then I will explain why I believe that it is a negative development.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Successful people try new things and take risks rather than only doing what they know how to do well. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer

Successful people tend to take more risks other than their counterparts without hesitating. In this essay, I will discuss on how successful minds are risk takers and don't settle for ordinary things.

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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, fashion and new trends can cost wealth to the humans. There are many citizens who look to the growth of the prices as something normal. It is useful to be aware of fashion and prices. In this essay, the two viewpoints will be argued.

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Some people argue that fashion items cost too much money. Others say that this is acceptable because fashion is an important part of life. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowdays, fashion and new trends can cost wealthy to the humens. There is many citizens look to the growth of the prices like some thing normal. It is useful to be awared about fashion and prices. In these essay, the two viewpoint will be argued.

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More and more families have computers in their homes. What advantages and disadvantages do home computers have for children? Should parents restrict the amount of time their children spend using the computer?

In today's era, every particular household has their own electronic item like computer. Having a computer carry lots of advantages like, a children can easily access the knowledge about world through Artificial Intelligence (AI). Besides that numerous teenager also misuse of computer by playing games and chatting. In this essay i will examine the benefits and drawbacks of using computer and provide a eligibal conclusion.

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In some societies, obesity is regarded as a major problem. Some people believe that junk food advertising is largely to blame for this problem and should be banned. However, others feel that junk food advertising does not contribute to the problem of obesity and should not be banned. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion. You should use your own ideas, knowledge, and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence.

Nowadays, people's consideration about healthiness is increasing and obesity is a notable problem that should be considered due to the possibility of health problems that might occur. There are individuals that opine the food advertisements have influenced people to consume junk food. However, there are still people that believe the rising number of obesity has nothing to do with the advertisements.

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Nowsaday, lots of businesses consider making money as the top priority, so they think they do not need to be responsible with the society. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?

Witnessing the contemporary context profit is utterly the prevalent purposes for each workers in any working settings; however, people believe that they are not relevant to the social obligations. As the writer of the essay, my take on the scenario is the disagreement because of the order features in the society as well as consolidating the wholesome settings taxing sphere.

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The best way to increase road safety is to make car drivers retake their driving test every year. Do you agree or disagree?

An idea states that the best way an enhancement in the safety of the roads can become beneficial is doing a retake of the driver's previous driving tests. I do not think this solution can solve any of the current problems regarding to road safety and I will discuss my opinion further more.

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Wealthy nations should assist poorer countries with humanitarian relief during natural disasters. Do you agree or disagree?

Developed nations are obliged to provide humanitarian aid to undeveloped countries when there is a catastrophe caused naturally. I agree with this opinion because these undeveloped countries do not have as far as developed countries advanced technologies and resources to deal with this emergency. It is the moral obligation of any human being to assist those who need immediate assistance.

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Everyone should stay in school until the age og eighteen. Evaluate the arguments both and against this before reaching an opinion.

There is a conversional debate that children under 18 need to live in educational institution for studying purposes. It is believed that there will be a confinement in curiousity of juveniles, while improving cognitive skills is invitably integral in future job. From the writer's perspective , individuals would become citizens without emotional feelings.

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When choosing a job, the salary is the most important thing to consider. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Financial stability is the key for everyone to be satisfied as they start to do their job or business. To provide a good lifestyle to the family and better quality education to children requires a great deal of money, so it is an essential point of concern for every employee. I believe it is completely right and in this essay, I will discuss the point in support of this statement.

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Today more and more people want things instantly (eg: goods, service, news). Why is this? Is it positive or negative development?

In the modern era, almost people want to have everything immediately such as goods, service and news. This writer believes that this is a positive development due to bringing a better life for people.

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There seems to be an increasing trend towards assessing students through exams rather than through continual assessment. What are the advantages and disadvantages of exams as a form of assessment?

Nowadays it seems more exams as a way to test and measure performance compared to step-by-step measuring performance. and this has its own positive and negative sides.

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Today more and more people want things instantly(e.g: goods, service, news) why is this? Is it positive or negative development ?

In recent times, the populace has a desire to get tasks completed swiftly with some amenities. Due to the demand of individuals immediately it may help this country develop comprehensively in any field and quickly. This writer will argue that is the positive way to improve the living quality in the countries which are increased in all respects.

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in many countries, goverment are interesting in new technology to deal with the public. Why is this happening? do you think this is an approriate use of goverment money?

In the age of technology, most the contemporary governments of nations perfect using technical types of equipment to improve the quality of level life, both their facilities and mental health. technology is becoming more all-pervasive in this modern world than ever before. It has a great impact on the government as well as the people. This writer will explain more following the essay. First and firmest,The pandemic has thrown a spotlight on diversity, equity, and inclusion. As governments moved services online during the pandemic, it became critical to improve digital access. Moreover, government leaders are reimagining social care programs to improve the delivery of services and drive greater impact in disadvantaged communities such as more and more apps are created for customers all over the world to reduce disadvantage during at COVID-19 disease. For example, 40% of the global population still lacks internet access. Governments are acutely aware that inadequate access to digital...

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Nowadays more and more people want to get things done instantly (services, information, tasks). Why is this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

In today’s era, there is an increase in the amount of community who require benefits immediately. This is because nation often don't want to wait and only think about themselves. This writer believes that this is a negative development and will explain why during the essay.

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