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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people believe that women should be treated as equal to men when applying for a job with the police or the military. Others think that women are less suitable for this kind of job. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

On one hand, we have the ones voting for equal treatment argue that job applications shouldn’t be decided on gender, but rather the ability of each individual. They believe that many women have the physical and mental capabilities to perform demanding tasks. Also, military and police work does not only rely on physical strength, but also improvisation, communication, decision making, and more. From this viewpoint, completely cutting women might mean missing out on talented and capable people suited for these careers. More than that, equal opportunities promote equality and fairness.

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Some people say that modern technology has made shopping today easier, while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Some would argue nowdays men and women they can shop easilly by using new technology, while other do not agree with that. I believe with first group because this improvment in technology let us choose different shops and get it fastlly.

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in many countries, owing a home rather than renting one is very important for people. do you think this is a positive or negative situation?

Many today assume that having a home is essential in today’s era. Basing on this statement, the writer of this essay believe this position is a positive situation due to the fact that it is not only decrease the rate of lacking of accommodation, but also increase human’s marry opportunities.

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Some people think that keeping pets is good for children while others think it is dangerous and unhealthy for them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

The importance of keeping pets for children which was always debatable has now become more controversial with many people claiming that it is beneficial while others reject this notion. The subsequent influence of this trend has sparked the controversy over the potential impact in recent years. In my opinion, the former proposition appears to be more rational. This essay will further elaborate both views of this trend and thus will lead to a logical conclusion.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar ,which causes many health problems .Sugary products shoud be mad more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar . do you agree or disagree ?

Sweet foods and beverages are becoming more and more popular every day and some people believe that increasing the price of these products can reduce people's consumption and prevent future health problems preemptively. By highering the cost of this junk food not only can't hold people's usage but also can have some negative effects adversely.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Many people argue that whether we should put a great deal of effort to improve our conditions, or accept bad things and situations as they are. This topic is a intense debate with both attractiong supports and critics. This essay aims to discuss both of the views, but argue in favour to the first statement.

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In many countries, people are now living longer than ever before. Some people say an ageing population creates problems for governments. Other people think there are benefits if society has more elderly people. To what extent do the advatanges of having an ageing population outweigh the disavantages?

It is argued whether older individuals are considered an issue for governments . But that might not be the case , people off all ages are equally important in order to form a society . In this essay I will further elaborate my views to reach a logical conclusion .

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation such as an unsatisfactiory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

The bad situations happens in our lifes. The two reactions exist against these problems. Some people believe that they should to accept this situation and to enjoy their lifes. Others believe that they cannot live happily with life difficults and should solve any problems. We discuss both approches.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar ,which causes many health problems .Sugary products shoud be mad more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar . do you agree or disagree ?

There are several products contain with high calories and sugers, and this in the long term will effect badly on their bodies. I totally agree that the government should do more process to make people avoid these foods and drinks. There are variety ressons to prefer products with huge levels of suger even if they know that will impact in pessimism way such as obisity, while others more muture and have good knowledge about that harmful products and work hardly to avoid it and replace it with anothers products.

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The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing . What are the cause and solutions ?

The number of people who are at risk of serious health problems due to being overweight is increasing. This is mainly because of, our lifestyle has become far too sedentary , and there are many people consuming more calories than they burn through physical activity. There are a number of solutions that should be implemented to deal with people who are at risk due to being overweight.

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Some people believe that professionals, such as doctors and engineers, should be required to work in the country where they did their training. Others believe they should be free to work in another country if they wish. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

After Covid-19 outbreak, the flexibility to work anywhere is concerned by most of people. Although, there are people who support theprofessionals, for example doctors and engineers, to work in the country where they raised their skill sets, others think that they are able to work anywhere they wish. However, in my opinion, I agree that people with professional careers should be allowed to work freely wherever countries they prefer.

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Some people believe that part time job can ensure better job opportunities in future. Others think job can easily distract students from study. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is commonly acknowledged that the rate of getting a full time job is decreasing in modern society. Some people assert that part time job provides better chances to individuals in the future. Otherwise, others believe that concerning about occupation cause several disadvatages to students when they study in their academic year. This essay will explore the both aspects deeply before a conclusion is drawn.

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These days, world leaders of all kinds are younger than in the past, What are the reasons? ls thisa negative or a positive trend?

It has been observed that global leaders of all types nowadays are younger than in the past. This essay will explore the various factors that contribute this trend, followed by some possible effects of this problem.

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Some people think that teachers should be able to ask disruptive children to leave the class. Do you think it is the best way to deal with distruptive children in the classroom? What other solutions are there?

Undoubtedly there are some teachers who have the habit of putting children out of the classroom if they are disruptive, but is it the better way ? What is the solution for this case that is too common to happen or how to mitigate it?

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Nowadays, children watch a lot of TV and play video games. However, some think that these activities are not beneficial for a child’s mental health. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years, the time of watching television and playing digital games by children has been increasing dramatically. However, I believe that spending too much time on watching movies or playing video games has a detrimental effect on children mental and physical well being.

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In many countries, very few young people read newspapers or follow the news on TV. What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In the present situation, fewer small age individuals are willing to read the newspapers and watch the news on television. The main reason behind this is technology development.

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Today our communications, medicine and transport systems all depend on computer technology. Our reliance on computer technology in these fields has created a dangerous situation. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

There is no doubt that these days technology plays an important role in our life. In numerous aspects of our life, such as transport, communications, medicine and education systems all depend on computer technology. Although certain individuals believe that our reliance on computer technology and intellegent machines in these fields has created dangerous situation. Others, including myself, argue that there are a lot of positive sides of involving technology in our life. I think the major hazard that make opponents afraid of depending on computers, because of security problems. For instance, users personal information being leaked on the internet and hacking attacks. These attacks may lead to losing backup data that stored in virtual database on the internet.

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People in former times used to be more dependent on one another, whereas nowadays they lead a more independent life. Do you agree or disagree?

In the past times people were liked to live with another also helped to each other. Nowadays, due to the development of technology and literature most of them are willing to live a lonely life. Now, I fully agree with this statement by giving the below mentioned points.

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The most important aim of science should be to improve people's live. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

As we can see, the development of science has greatly changed our lifestyle, bring us convenience, happiness and so so. Recently, science has became a significant topic, some people firmly insist that the most improtant target of science should be to improve people's live.

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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in oder to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both of these views and give your opinion

In these days, the world is more open than before to learn more about all the others languages. The question is, is learning extra language only limited by the cause of visiting new places or working abroad? Some argue that there's no need to learn new languages as long as they won't use it for working or traveling, While others believe that there more reasons to learn them. This essay will discuss both perspectives and draw my personal conclusion at the end.

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