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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local person when they visit the cultural and historical attractions in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Every countries have cultural and historical attractions that need to be preserved and is one of the significant source incomes to the local economy.Therefore, I totally agree with the statement above whereas the foreign visitors should be charged more than local people which I will explain in the following paragraph.

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Many people today, especially in the developed world, are choosing to have fewer children, or none at all. Why is this happening, and do you think it is a good trend? Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

In this modem era parents, especially in rich oountries, limit their children or do not have due to delay marriages and lifestyle. I think this is a negative phenomenon and this leads to extinction of mankind to in the future. This essay discusses it detaily for the following reasons.

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Many people say that smoking should be banded while others say it is not a good idea. What is your opinion about this?

There are a lot of opinions about the concept “smoking should be banned” while others say it is not a good idea. In my opinion, I agree with both statements.

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Planting trees is very important. Some people say that trees should be planted in the vacant areas of cities and towns, while others say that housing facilities should be built instead. Do you agree or disagree?

Plating trees and housing facilities both are vital for the human race to survive. Trees provide oxygen a basic need for humans, whereas, housing facilities give personal space to reduce stress. If I had to pick among these I would pick trees however, on the brighter side we can take them side to side.

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In many countries, governments spemd large amounts of money on the arts and this is supported by some taxpayers as worthwhile. Others, however think that this money would be better spent on health and education. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these opinions? Discuss, based on your knowledge and experience.

It is true that, the government's funds play a crucial role in every nations. In many nations, arts are received large funds from the government, and this money is collected from the tax payers while others say that education and health sectors are needed more money to improve and arts money would be spent on there Sectors. I strongly agree with this statement for the following reasons.

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Some people believe that it is best to accept a bad situation, such as an unsatisfactory job or shortage of money. Others argue that it is better to try and improve such situations

In this day and age, bad situation always appears such as unhappy job and a lack of money. Some people think that these Situations to be accepted while others say that improve this Situation is a better option. This essay discusses both viewpoints and I strongly agree with the latter opinion for the following

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

While some individuals question about the experimentation which are tested on animals should be prohibited, others assume that animal testing is vital for research for mankind. Animals are part of our ecosytem which forms a cycle to continue our livelihood as each component is dependent on others. I believe that experiments on wildlife creatures should be banned and governments should implement strict actions to overcome it.

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school uniform should be mandatory in all schools agree or disagree

Nowadays, students' attire is perpetual .I agree with this viewpoint because school uniform maintains unity and discipline among students.

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More and more people today are using computers and electronic devices to access information. Therefore there is no need to print books, magazines and newspapers. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays there are a lot of new technologies for reading, writing, and up-to-dating, so more and more people think that a printed books and a newspapers are unnecessary. For me an electronic device is the best way for daily life such as working, getting news, and spending lasure time, but I'm convinced that the humankind shouldn't refusal the printed sourses for several reason.

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The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of areas such as fashion and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?

I strongly agree with this opinion that people are copuing the treatments in some spesific areas such as fashion and using some products ant there are some reasons that related to this topic namely, human are keen on being like super models and using things that are trends in these days.

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Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Actually, technology is more and more important on our lives. Some people think that the range of technology currently available is increasing the gap between rich people and poor people. Others think that it is causing the opposite effect.

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Some believe that all individuals who break the law should be placed in prison as a form of punishment However, others hold the view that there are more effective alternatives to deal with lawbreakers. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

It is a heated argument around the world whether culprits stay behind the bars or not when they break on the law, Some believe that criminals should be jailed, to prison, where as, others say that there are more ways to handle them. This essay discusses both view pointe and I strongly agree with the latter opinion.

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Some countries achieve international sports by building specialised facilities to train top athletes, instead of providing sports facilities that everyone can use. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In the contemporary world, whether or not building specialised equipments to train high-skilled atheletes, instead of giving more common sports facilities that everybody can work.This essay will prove that the benefits of this development will outweigh the drawbacks due to the motherland's achievements and the increase of gym-registration rate.

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Some people claim that the media has a negative influence on contemporary society. They think that there is very little tolerance for new ideas because of its impact. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

As the media has exerted a significant influence on our modern life, several people have voiced that the media has diverted the society towards uniformity. However, I strongly believe that the media plays a pivotal role in making our society equip with deep understanding about different cultures and creative thinking skill.

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While many advocate for the necessity of obtaining a higher education, others argue that it is not essential for success in today’s diverse job market. Discuss both views regarding the necessity of higher education and give your opinion.

Recently, it is argued that pursues a higher education is crucial, while others believe that it relies in today's diverse career market not because of educational levels to success. I personally believe that a higher education will occur job opportunities, and high-salaries, however, it is also due to the limitation of job market.

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In some countries university students live at home with their family while they study, whereas in other countries students attend university in another city. Do you think the benefits of living away from home during university outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

In several countries, university students live with their families during they pursue their degree, while some students in other nations prefer to study in another city. This essay will examine the advantages and disadvantages of living away from home when they study at university.

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Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is loss of particular speices if plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both views and give you own opinion.

The environmental problem indeed is most crucial factors to around the world. However, a large number of the population believe that extinction of the particular species is the paramount importance of the environmental issues, where as, other people think that there are more vital environmental problems we have to address it. This essay will discuss both viewpoints and I consider there both issues should be considered equally,

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Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?

Since the fourth industrial revolution, mobile phones have become a dispenable part of humans’ life, which has resulted in the popularity of social networks. The evidence for that is anyone has at least one social account such as Facebook to use. However, many people think that social networks have had a pessimistic effect on both individuals and society. From my perspective, I totally agree with this opinion.

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Being a celebrity –such as a famous film star or sports personality- brings problems as well as benefits. Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

To become a celebrity every person requires to be the absolute best in their relevant field of work. The best performances attract people. People become followers of top performers. The performers with highest number of followers becomes a celebrity. Being a celebrity has its own advantages and disadvantages but the benefits are high.

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Some companies sponsor sport as a way to advertise themselves. Some people think it is good for the world of sports, while others think there are disadvantages. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

In this current generation, Sports have a greater influence among the young generation as well as other age groups. There is an exponential increase in the growth of sport's fields as evidenced by various growth charts stated by the economy.

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