IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Nowadays, sports is a big business with high earnings for professional sports people and companies involved both financially and other ways. Is this a positive or negative development for sports? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

It is undeniably that sports provide many benefits in both ways its not only advantages to players but also to the company who is sponsoring the games. In my opinion, its a positive development because it offers number of opportunities to sponsors and players. Such as recognition to both players and companies on national and international levels .secondly, offers health , education and other facilities to players.

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Do the benefits of artificial intelligence outweigh the potential risks?

These days AI which is stand for artificial intelligence help human kind to do a lot of things faster and accurate. Many students find the solutions easier now. But every thing in this world has advantages and disadvantages such as foods, cars, …. But about AI we have many different opinion that some of them thinks benefits are more and outweigh the risk and some people thinks in the different way.in my opinion benefits of AI outweigh the potential risks.

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Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient . Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful . What is your opinion ? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer .

There is a wide ideology that computers have become a double-edged sword.Some people believe that it has a bunch of advantages for the users.However,others assert that it has various disadvantages for the users behind it.Upon research,this issue is highly debatable issue with contrasting views.

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In some countries, the number of police officers in active service is decreasing. What do you think may be the reason for this? What effects might have on society?

Police officers play a crucial in the well-being of society by helping to prevent crimes. There is a stark controversial in few countries that there is a decrease in police service day by day .In this essay I will discuss about the consequences and the reason for this subject of matter.

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It is observed that in many countries not enough students are choosing to study science as a subject. What are the causes? And what will be the effects on society? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from own knowledge or experience.

As per the observation in many countries that, students are not willing to learn about science as a subject in their academic programs. In my opinion, young people need to know about the science behind the environment to prevent from the cause for the future.

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Some people think that the goverment is responsible for crime prevention. Others think that it is individuals responsibility to pretocet themselves. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Due to increase rate of inflation and population , which promoting the crime rate .There is a debate between netizens that government needs to decrease the unemployment rate and giving the free education or loan facilities for students while others arguing that individual needs to learn some self defence techniques to tackle the crisis.This essay will discuss why its neccessary for government to reduce the crime rate.

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Many people no longer read newspapers or watch TV news programmes. Instead they get news about the world from the Internet. Is this a positive or negative development?

The is no denying the fact that many people replaced the news, from newspapers or watch Tv news programs to take the information of news from the internet.

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In many countries large amounts of foods are wasted. Why do you think people waste food in this way? What can be done to reduce the amount of food thrown away?

While it is widely claimed that large amounts of foods are wasted across the globe these days as a result of the abundunce of food supplies to match demand of the skyrocketing number of populations, others argue that the keys to tackle with this concern is to emphasis on the detrimental impact of this issue. The aforementioned posible contributors and solutions to this concerning development about food waste will be elaborated on in this essay.

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Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree?

Some individuals often argue that a person's culture and character can be found out by their selection of clothes. I believe this is true because of the fact that people usually purchase garments according to their tradition and also according to their religion. Besides, clothes also helps to understand the nature of the humankind. This essay will discuss how human life is affected by the selection of clothing.

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Some people believe that annual exams are best way of assessment while others believe that regular appraisals are better. Discuss advantage and disadvantage of both.

Some individuals believe that conducting annually assessment system is better to examine the students performance, while others think that exams should be introduced twice in a year. Although former method measures the in-depth strengths but long term time span also causes stress, latter group have several chances of getting the high score still they have to compete with inadequacy of time.

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Some people think public library is necessary, however, others believe that the public library is useless. What is your opinion and provide with some relevant examples.

There no denying the facts that people are not on the same mind when it comes to library.while it is commonly held belief that local library is must there is also an argument that local libabry is not significant. In this essay I will analyse this topic from both point of view and express my opinion .

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Human activity has had a negative effect on plants and animal all over the world. Some people think that it too late to do something about it. other think that there is still time to take effective action. discuss both sides and give your opinion. give reasons for your answer and include any relevent examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Modern civilisation has been influence damonstrably negative on habitats of a number of animals and plant, in resent decades. It is undeniable that some damages are in giant size, albeit I believe there are some measures to mitigate this current danger situation, will now be discussed.

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In some countries, people these days spend little time with their children. What are the causes of this? Whome does this affect more, parents or children?

Nowadays, people has limited time to spend with their children in several countries. There are two key of reasons such as busy and lazy. This habbit will have more negative effect for children rather than parents.

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ome people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at least 7 years old. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

It is often said that kids should begin studying when they are really small such as at the age of 5. Despite the fact that others argued that children should start studying formal education more than 7 years. This essay will discuss both views in detail and explain why i reckon that little ones should begin studying when they are 5 years old

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In many countries, the widespread use of the internet has given people more freedom to work or study at home instead of traveling to work or college. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Speaking a second or other languages rather a mother tongue in a foreign country makes speaker to face a lot of serious social problems, besides practical problems. I totally agree with this idea because immigrants may find it difficult to make communications with others also they become overwhelmed as a result of searching for social credibility among natural speakers.

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The promoters of social media claim that they are connecting people and enabling people to share like never before. While critics claim that social media site often impinge upon one’s privacy. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

I am JOSUÉ BALMES AGUDELO PATIÑO, identified officially with a citizenship card from Ibagué, Colombia No. 14.230.923. The aim of this statement is to openly express my desire to sponsor my daughter, who is called MARIA LUCIA AGUDELO MOTTA, identified with a Colombian citizenship card 1.000.713.456 and passport No. AS407908. I will explain the personal and professional reasons to support my daughter to carry out her studies.

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Some people think governments should spend money in looking for life on other planet, while others think that there are many unsolved problems on earth. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

It is widely believed that the governments should spend money looking for life on other planets, while the others argue that they should concentrate on solving problems on earth and I also support this opinion.

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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe/regard it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Nowadays, the advancement of technology is regarded can be increasing crime by some people. Whereas, in my point of view the crime can reduce through technology.

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Some people argue that it is the government's responsibility to transport children to school while others belive that parents should do that. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

There are baised opinion on transportation service for children to school where some people states that government is responsibe for transit. However, on other hand some people believe that parents should personally drop off and pick up their children. prior giving my opinion both the views would be discussed further.

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Nowadays technology in increasingly being used to monitor what people are saying and doing (for example, through cellphone tracking and security cameras) .in many cases, the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

It is believed that the technology has become a main part of our lives. in other words, the gradually updates of development has discovered by the scientist in the modern days. However, the service works harmfully on the people live within monitoring the persons movement and daily life requirements. In this essay, I will explain the merits and demerits in my view.

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