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Many people believe that educational standards have declined in recent times, particularly in the areas of literacy and numeracy. Discuss the causes of this problem and offer some possible solutions to it.

Many individuals says that in recent times education levels have decreased, mainly in two areas, literacy and numeracy. Excessive use of social media and online education system are two main causes behind fall of educations level, although, switching to physical classes and strict regulation by government required to tackle these issues.
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More and more citizens depending on private cars as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problem overreliances on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

In our contemporary era ,it became necessity for families to have at least one private car, however the fact that we more and more rely on vehicles has its own drawbacks such as progressive contamination of environment and negative effect on peoples’ way of living
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There are some governments think economic development is the main key for the nation. But from the people’s view few more developments also very important.

There are some governments think economic development is the main key for the nation. But from the people’s view few more developments also very important. In this essay will discuss both the views.
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Some believe that in many nations, it is necessary to spend a lot of money to build new railway infrastructure for fast trains between cities. Others feel that the government should spend money to improve existing public transportation. Discuss both of these perspectives and give your opinion.

Transportation is an important avenue in most countries as man cannot live without moving from one place to the other. Whether a sizeable amount should be spent on railways or on improving public transportation is an area of interest. This essay will discuss both views and my opinion is balanced spending on both will be okay.
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Nowadays, a growing number of people with health problems are trying medicines and treatments upon themselves instead of visiting their usual doctors. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

Today, self-treatment has become very popular. The population of those individuals who tend to self-treatment instead of visiting doctor have shown escalating rising trend. In this essay, I will examine both the positive and negative aspects of this issue. Also, some reasons will provide to explain my disagreement with this growing trend.
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Air transport is increasingly use to exported fruits and vegetables to countries where they can not be grown or out of seasons . What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

Although aeroplanes are very fast when flying and it delivers fresh fruits, on the other hand, it is also very expensive.Therefore, it is important to transport vegetables as well as fruits to other countries or even abroad, but it demands more money. Thus, I am going urge both drawbacks and benefits of using flights as a transportation in the forthcoming essay.
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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

It is believed that people should safeguard their wealth for their future regardless of their age. From my perspective, young generation should be taught to save money however it is also important to learn how to use it wisely. In this essay, the reasons of saving and better utilization of cash will be discussed.
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Some people think technology development decreases crime, while others believe it actually encourages crime. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Some people believe that development in technology helps in decreasing the crime rate, while others think it would increase. In my opinion, technology is helping in committing more crimes such as cyber-crimes, identity theft and fraud. In this essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument and support my opinion.
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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books they will be able to read everything they want online without them paying. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Some people believe that no one will have the intention to buy newspapers and books in the new future because online websites provide all the information they need without having to pay. I agree with this statement as online articles are easily accessible and more convenient to use.
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Young people learn more about good behaviour from books or films/ movies than they learn from real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Young people learn more from books or films/ movies about good behaviour rather than they learn from some real-life experiences. In my opinion I partially agree because both of ways have different impacts.
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Advertising are becoming more and more common in everyday life. Is it a positive or negative development ?

In the modern era, when the adverts become popular in daily life. It's the good evolution at all and bring many benefits for population
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Young people learn more about good behaviour from books or films/ movies than they learn from real-life experiences. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Immigration has always been very important in Europe. That is why a lot of attention is focused on people moving to different countries on the continent.
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In some counties young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Education is a high investment people can do it for themselves. decides between travel or study the university straight forward is a big decision and there are a lot of optimistic and pessimistic in this resolution. From my point of view, The biggest advantage of traveling a year before the university is to get life experience and enhance responsibility and communication skills, while the most fear about this decision is not wanting to complete studying for many reasons.
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Most modern families have both parents working and as a result children spend less time with their parents. What is the reason? What problems can this cause?

Nowadays, children have more often their parents working, resulting in a significant drop of time together. The reasons are multiple, to begin with, jobs become more exigent in terms of hours and schedules. On top of that, the economy has become harder, therefore, in order to maintain a nice lifestyle, parents prefer to work. Finally, currently, the world is more equitable, and as a result, both parents want to build a professional career. This change is generating negative impacts on the children's growth. For example, as the parents are not as present as they used to be, children have no control over their diet and the consumption of video games.
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It is important for everyone, including young people, to save money for their future. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

On these days, parents try to teach their kids saving money for their future independence. I partly agree with this statement.
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some people say History is one of the most important school subjects. other people think that, in today's world, subjects like Science and technology are more important than History. discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Nowaday, many people agree that History is one of the most essential subjects in school. Others agree that subjects like Science and Technology are more necessary than History. This essay will analy two of views and also provide my opinion.
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Some people think that it is more effective for students to study in groups while others believe that it is better for them to study alone. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

In contemporary era, education has become a broad issue in the general public. A large number of population argues that it is more efficent for pupils to work in groups. However, it seems to me that learning lonely is more supervior. The following essay will shed light on this view.
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More and more people are relying on the private car as their major means of transportation. Describe some of the problems over-reliance on cars can cause, and suggest at least one possible solution.

Nowadays, the amount of cars increase among with growing of human population. In fact, people that alive in city especially already over-reliance on own cars. The gist cause is giving bad impact for the environment. Then, increasing the payment of tax for private car is one of the possible solution.
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The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram illustrates Southwest Airport’s plan after redevelopment next year. The main difference that will be prominent in the new plan is the number of gates. Furthermore, new features had been added such as cafes, ATM machines, shops and car hire services.
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In some cultures, children’s are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?

In the some countires, parents and teachers provide the opportunities to the kids and young poeple because parents believe that their children can complete the any tasks if they are hard work to do it. In my opinion, it brings some benefits and weaks for children. In the following eassy, I will discuss a pro and a con about this statment.
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