IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5. Page 445

IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some people think that schools are too competitive and that this has a negative impact on children. Others believe the competitive environment encourages children to achieve. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Certain group argue that because of the heavy competition in the children’s educational institutions a negative impact is developing on the students . Whereas others believe that this helps to achieve them better in life . In my opinion a healthy competition among children is better for them , because it increases their potential for studies . This essay will discuss both the views

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Cars damage the environment and their use is increasing. Why? How can this be controlled?

It is generally admissible that cars play an important role in the contemporary era. Due to its convenient, the large numerous users damage the environment and their use is growing. From my perspective, the government can control and promulgate polices for this problems.

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There is too much noise in many public places in cities. What are the causes of this problem? What can be done to solve the problem?

In contemporary times, there is too much disturbance in a lot of community centres in metropolis.While the are many reasons for this, the condition can be solved in different ways.

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Some people who have been in prison are the best talk to school students about the danger of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree

Prisoners are the best example for school students to share their own experiences about commit of crime. Although their stories could motivate them committing the crime.

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People in all modern societies use drugs, but today’s youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasing early stage. Discuss the causes and some effects of the widespread drug use by young people. Give some recommendations that can be implemented.

In modern societies, there are many youths that using drugs, either legal or illegal and this issue increase from time to time. This has negative impacts for young generations because they are future of the nation. There are some reasons why this problem can happen, such as there is no an adequate education or socializing about the danger of drugs. Definitely, by consuming drugs, youth have potential to die.

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Technological development in earlier times brought more changes to the life of ordinary people then recent technological development have brought? Do you agree or disagree

Technological improvement in previous days brought significant changes to the life of common people then current technological evaluation have brought?In this essay i will explain both sides and give examples in the same idea.

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Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Children should be given a modest weekly allowance for doing household chores. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. Do not use memorized examples.

In this essay we’re going to discuss, if hosting the Olympic Games and football World Cup is a waste of money or not.

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Some people think people can exploit animals for any purpose they need, while others do not think so. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Firstly, I will discuss the two sides starting with the side that thinks it is okay to exploit animals for any purpose I really do not agree with them at all hence,I do believe it is okay to use animals for are good but to a point like food or actual human needs but hunting for fun or playing with animals for your own enjoyment really bugs me and I do not in anyway agree with exploiting animals.secondly I strongly agree with the other side the side that do not believe it is okay to exploit poor animals for fun one day god is going to take revenge for them because they are poor and weak souls and you as a human who can understand and have the guts you use it to abuse the animals that is totally wrong and unfair. Lastly I do believe that governments should put a punishment to animal abuse and for people who kill animals just to kill some time or for their own good that is not a human thing to do and studies have shown that criminals usually start their path by killing animals such as...

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Some people spend most of their lives living close to where they were born. What might be the reasons for this? What are the advantages and disadvantages?”

First of all,several people love to spend most of their lives living near where they were born.This comes either from bloodline or from the society where they used to live.Some prefer to spend the rest of their lives far from their townhouse or community.

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In many countries, the average life expectancy has been increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of aging populations

In many nations life expectancy growing . This essay will discuss some issues that associated with increasing of life expectency , and explore possible resolution to decrease the effect of this matter.

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Being a celebrity such a famous film star or sports personality brings problems as well as benefits Do you think that being a celebrity brings more benefits or more problems?

In many population, some girls and boys want to be a star or celebrity in their countries. A celebrity is a person ho is famous in different way such film or sports star. Then, some people suggest that Being a celebrity brings problems. For others people, it exist much benefits to become star in the country. In my opinion, to be a celebrity causes benefits and problems in the same time.

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Do you agree or disagree that we can learn more from people who are higher level than us like teachers than from people who are at same level as us?

This question mentioned a crucial topic.

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Some people think news has no connection to people’s lives, so it is a waste of time to read news in the newspaper and watch news programs on television . To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Reading and watching some arguments whether news or essays have always a positive impact on the people's developments intead of a negative impact . I strongly disagree with that and this essay will explain beneficial effects of news .

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences.

Technologies have changed from time to time;in current days technologies have taken a very advanced and fundamental place in the globe.The new generation especially children spend their leisure time earning new things or solutions to problems,and some of them use it to play games in their free time.Today I am going to explain and give examples,of why the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages. First of all,the advantages of obtaining new automation are very important in daily life.Furthermore, most nation use the new machinery to make life easier.For example,if you want to buy do grocery you can order them by clicking on one button only, it saves you plenty of time.In other words, you can do shopping online, while sitting at home. Second all, most people use technology for educational purposes, For instance, the government placed a new rules to avoid spending paper, and for this reason the authorities provide computers and laptops to government schools,colleges and univers...

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New technologies have changed the way children spend their free time. Do advantages of this outweigh disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experiences.

Technologies have changed from time to time; in curremt days technologies have taken very advanced and fundamental place in the globe. New generation specially children spend their leisure time on learning new things or to dicover solutions of problems, and some of them use it to play games on their free time. Today I am going explain and give examples, why the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages.

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It is unacceptable that people who work in certain professions,eg.finance,media, entertainment and sport,are paid such high salaries while others, who do more important jobs in society,are underpaid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Have you ever thought about why people get paid massive income in diffrent professions such as finance,media,entertainment and sport ? It is often argued that others wgo do more important jobs in comunity are underpaid.This essay will discuss both views and will provide a logical conclusion.

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Some people think that competitive sports have a positive effect on the child’s education, while others argue it is not so. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages, and your opinion.

In recent times, sports competition are among equipped in the high school curriculum. There is a growing belief that competitive sports enage in providing a profound impact on the child's education, while others are not support this idea. I would argue that sports contests have pros and cons. This essay will examine the argument.

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Some people argue that all experimentation on animals is bad and should be outlawed. However, others believe that important scientific discoveries can be made from animal experiments. Can experimentation on animals be justified? Are there any alternatives?

So far, science has been utilizing animals by means of examination, however, this situation is causing to violation of animal rights. This essay discusses alternative ways of experimentation without animals.

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Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

The utilization of smartphones by kids has been debatable nowadays. People have been contending which one is the right decision. Some of them think that it could increase children's intelligence, but others argue the contrary. This essay will explain why young people love to spend their time on their gadgets and the explanation why it habit is such a negative development for them.

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Nowadays many people aim to create a balance between their work and other aspects of their life, however, only a few achieve it. What are the problems in doing this and what solutions can you suggest?

These days many people target to equilibrium between their work and other spects of their life,however,only a few obtain it.

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