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IELTS Writing Samples Band 4.5

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Some say that university students should be free to choose their subjects. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study courses of future benefits like science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion

It is often considered that a few individuals think that college students should be independent to select their course. Whereas, many population reckon that they should only be permitted to study subject of future benefits like science and technology. Thus, this essay will elaborate on both notions which further leads to a logical conclusion.

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the most important aim of science should be improve people's lives to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

the progress of education has increased so strangely in the last few decades, preventing many wrong behaviours be the effect of this progress in our lives. is it dangerous for a community who did not study or can not study in schools to deal with new learning progress? I would argue that, skill can help the vast majority of society in many aspects of their lives and in this essay, i will support my view.helping newborn babies who are born with incurable illnesses can be a success in information if scientists can figure out how to cure these babies before they are born. for instance, there are so many incurable diseases in an elderly community such as HIV and some types of cancers that doctors cannot help folk who tackle this problem too. Despite technique new features can be accessible by the ordinary public specifically in urban areas, in many cases poor population who live in rural areas and can not access even into a small clinic are dying due to the lack of treatment facilities....

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Many people use social media every day to get in touch with others and New events. Do you think the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages

"Social media is not a media. The key is to listen, engage, and build relationships" _Daivd Alston. However, today technology became integral portion of ours life. According, unfortunately, front line has been impacting in our life either pro or nor. In this article I will highlight the influence of fore front in our's social life specifically.

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More and more young people from wealthy countries are spending a short time doing unpaid work such as teaching or building houses for communities in poorer countries. Why do young people choose to do so? Who will benefit more: young people or the communities?

It is ubiquitous that youngsters from highly developed countries mostly like to visit underdeveloped countries as volunteers to do charity work nowadays. This essay will examine the positive impact of the donations by the youngster and company.

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In many countries,formal exams are used to assess students abilities and to judge the success of their education. What are the advantages and disadvantages of using formal exams to assess students' abilities? Do you think the benefits of using formal exams outweigh the drawbacks?

Present days most of the countries have conducted the formal exams mainly used to judge the pupil abilities and their rate of success in education.They believe that formal exams are play a vital role in learners skills and education.

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Some people believe that professional workers such as doctors should be paid more than sports and entertainment personalities. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Earning of the professionals are always part of the debate. Many think that higher educated employees should get more salary than any players or entertainers. This is because of doctors hard- work and life-saving work profile, I believe. Therefore, I completely agree with this notion.

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discuss advantages and disadvantages of strict laws to control the noise a person makes because of the disturbance it causes to people.

An increasing number of noises that disturb many people has les to a strict rule. People believe there are huge advantages of the law, while others as opposed. In this essay, both of them will be discussed, and I will consider my posisition.

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Some people think that robots are important for human's future development.other's think that robots have negative effects on society.discuss both views and give your opinion.

There is an ongoing debate regarding robots.A graph of individual believes that ,robots are necessary for human's future advancement. But, others argue that robots have bad effects on society. Therefore, both the views are articulated in the upcoming paragraphs with appropriate examples of explanations.

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Recent years, the number of crime committed by young people in major cities throughout the world is increasing. discuss this issues. give reasons and suggest some solutions.

In this modern era,the advancement is developing day-by-day which also cause the increasement of crime rates.Some individuals think that the crime committed by youngsters in large cities drastically arised in the recent few years.I will discuss the causes and solutions with the credible examples in the upcoming paragraphs.

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Nowdays, many people have to work long time, and they feel more stressful than before. What are the reasons? What employers can do to make their life easier?

Nowadays,many people have to work longer periods and this leads them to feel more stress than before.In the next paragraph,I will discuss the reason behind this and what employers can do to make their life easier.

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Nowadays, most children prefer to spend several hours playing with electronic devices over doing more traditional leisure activities. What problem does this cause? What do you think are possible solutions?

Play and enjoyment are an integral part of growing children. Nowadays, majority of the children spent their playing time on electronic devices more than local games. Many problems are resulting due to this trend. In this essay, we discuss the causes and some solutions to this problem.

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Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar; which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

In contemprary society, sugar addition has consistently aroused widespread interest and vigorous debate among the general populace. one prevailing view is that some sugary goods should be sold in high price to discourage people to purchase. despite its contentious nature, i am mpre inclined to endorse this viewpoint.

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Some people like to spend their leisure time with their colleagues, while others prefer to keep their private life separate from their work life. Is it a good thing to spend leisure time with colleagues?

In the present climate, due to inevitable alterations that have been occurred in the educational environment, many have a tendency to allocate their recreational activity time to their colleagues. While some individuals prefer to keep their personal life with their colleagues separately. In my opinion, possibly damaging the limitations between people in an educational environment results in a destructive way.

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As the internet becomes more popular, newspapers are becoming a thing of the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Globalisation made the world boundaries smaller and changed the way that people, companies and countries tackled decisions. Through these changes it is possible to face many positive aspects in our actual society, however, they brought drawbacks as well, which have to be criticised and debated from de society in a try to relieve the problems.

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Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think is the case? Is this a good or a bad thing?

Some individuals are attracted to something material, undoubtedly, we can see it through their preferences in what they wear, such as watches or other accessories from quite luxury brands. Additionally, fashion and his influence on its members of society became seen nowadays. This essay will discuss about their positive and negative impacts on earth and their environment.

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Many manufactured food and drink contain high sugar, which causes health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?

Food and drinks which are rich in sugar are increasing nowadays and has an negative impact on healthy life of peoople. Therefore, some individuals believe that the product contain high super should be discouraged through increasing prices of those products. However, as far as I am concerned, it is not an ideal way and I completely disagree with the view and will explain the reasons in this essay.

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in some countries owning a home rather than renting one is very important for people. why might this be the case? do you think this is a positive or negavite sitiation

It is an established fact that place of living is one of the basic needs of humans. From ancient times structure of the house has been evolved from stone caves to luxuary and sophisticated houses. In the developing world some people believe that thier place of living should be convinient to thier daily chores. On the other hand some people consider thier home as one of the factors which help them to demonstarte thier wealth.

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Computers are becoming an essential part of school lessons. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

The use of technology has stirred differences in opinions among people. While one group feels multimedia or the use of computers can be beneficial to the young learners, others point out the harmful effects of the use of technology in the classroom and at home. In this essay, both opinions will be discussed in order to get a comprehensive insight into the matter.

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Many people believe that family has the strongest influence on a child’s development, while others believe that external factors such as television, friends and music play a big role. Discuss both views

While a faction of people holds the notion that family has imperative role offspring development, others argue that external factores have more significant role. I agree with the latter viewpoint as ample reasons are present to substantiate it which will explain in this essay.

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The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last years. Discuss the causes and effect of this issue disturbing trend.

The survey that is taken last year had showed that the number of children who had an obesity had increased in western by almost 20%. At my point of view, the main caused of this problem was unhealthy lifestyle. Nowdays, most of children had a high interest on consuming a junk food that lead not only an overweight problem but also can create a serious diseases when they get older such as cancer.

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